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Unit 1 大单元话题与写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.压力
2.管理；完成（困难的事）
3.在业余时间
4.开心做某事
5.参加
6.对……感兴趣
7.从事
8.不仅……而且……
二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】His latest app allows people around the world to find study partners
for learning Italian.(allow sb to do sth)
→ 仿写：徒步旅行让我们全家能在周末一起享受大自然。
10.【教材原句】It gives me such a sense of achievement to see people using the
app… (a sense of)
→ 仿写：我对绘画有一种强烈情感，并且我总是沉浸于创作美丽的艺术作品中。
第2阶 经典范文模板
Good morning, everyone!
We all know that different people have different hobbies.Today, I want to share one
of my hobbies—playing the guitar（点明爱好）with you.I practise for 30 minutes every
evening（介绍具体活动）and my favourite song to play is Yesterday by The Beatles.
This hobby brings me joy（介绍第一个好处）.It helps me relax after busy school
days.Besides（用 Besides 介绍第二个好处）, playing the guitar is a good way to make
friends with those who have the same hobby as me.Through this hobby, I’ve learnt
not only patience but also the importance of persistence（使用 “not only … but
also…” 介绍别的好处）.Music connects people, and I hope to perform for our classsomeday!
That’s all.Thanks for listening.（表示感谢）
第3阶 高分范文赏析
【2025广东惠州期末】假如你是李明，三天后你将要在班级的英语课上进行演讲，题
目是“My Hobby”，请根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文。
提示：
(1) What is the hobby and how long it lasts;
(2) Parental attitude (support/oppose) and reasons (1—2 points);
(3) What you get from the hobby;
(4) What you’ll do for the hobby.
注意：
(1) 根据内容提示适当拓展信息；
(2) 不得在文中出现真实校名、地名和人名；
(3) 语句连贯，词数80左右（标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
My Hobby
Hello, everyone.It’s my honour to share something about my hobby with you.
（学生自行书写正文内容）
That’s all for my sharing.Thank you for listening.
第一步审
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
人称：以第一人称为主
内容要点：爱好及持续时间、父母的态度及原因、自己的收获和后续做法
写作结构：总一分一总
第二步列
开头：开门见山，点明自己的爱好。
My hobby is...
中间：详细介绍父母的态度及原因。
My parents are...to know that...Whenever I ask them to...they always...They think...
结尾：表明自己的立场。
...is more than a hobby, so I’ll...高分范文
My Hobby
Hello, everyone.It’s my honour to share something about my hobby with you.My hobby is
reading books and I started to read books when I was a second-grade student.
My parents are very pleased to know that I have a hobby of reading books.Whenever I ask
them to buy books for me, they always take me to the bookshops to pay for all the books I
choose.They think reading books is very helpful for my growth and studying.Thanks to the
support from my parents, I keep this hobby for six years.Reading helps me relax after a day’s hard
work and it allows me to know more about the world.
Reading books is more than a hobby, so I’ll keep this hobby all my life.
That’s all for my sharing.Thank you for listening.
名师点评
① 并列句和时间状语从句同时使用，句型多样化。
② 定语从句的使用展现了作者深厚的写作功底。
③ Thanks to 引出对父母的感激，简洁有力。
④ more than 强调阅读的意义超越普通爱好，简洁却有分量。
这篇习作采用“总一分一总”结构，层次清晰。首段点明主题；中间段落分述父母的
态度以及阅读带来的收获；结尾升华。作者通过 I started to read books when I was a
second-grade student 点明爱好起点，再用 Whenever 等词语细节刻画父母的全力支持，
并传递感恩之情，接着以 it allows me to know more about the world 体现阅读的成长
价值，最后用 more than a hobby 深化主题，情感层层递进。
第4阶 实战演练
【2025辽宁大连调研】体育运动使我们健康向上。假如你是李华，你的笔友 Tom 想
选择一项体育运动作为爱好，并改善他的健康状况，但是他在选择运动方面拿不定主意。
请你给他写一封信，向他推荐一项体育运动，并提出一些建议。
内容要点：
(1) Recommended sport;
(2) Reasons for recommendation;
(3) Do’s and don’ts（注意事项）for doing this sport.
注意事项：
(1) 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；(2) 可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you want to choose a kind of sport as your hobby.
（学生自行书写正文内容）
Yours,
Li Hua
---参考答案---
第1阶 高分词句储备
1.stress
2.manage
3.in/during free/spare time
4.have fun doing sth
5.take part in
6.be interested in
7.take up
8.not only…but also…
9.Going hiking allows our family to enjoy nature together at weekends.
10.I have a sense of passion for drawing/painting, and I always lose myself in creating
beautiful artworks.
第4阶 实战演练
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you want to choose a kind of sport as your hobby.I am going to share
my favourite sport with you, and hope you will take an interest in it.
My favourite sport is running.I am really keen on it because running can not only make me
healthier, but also help me reduce my pressure.So why don’t you have a try?
Before running, you’d better take a warm-up exercise to avoid any injury.And there's no
need to run as fast as you can.In addition, it's necessary to wear a pair of comfortable shoes.
Wish you enjoy running!Yours,
Li Hua
