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Unit 3 大单元话题与写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 消极的
2. 孤独的
3. 生气；愤怒
4. 对……过于苛刻
5. 感到忧郁
6. 在某些方面
7. 充满
8. 解决问题
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】Writing things down can also make you feel better.（动名词作主语）
→ 仿写：穿颜色鲜艳的衣服能让人更快乐。
10. 【教材原句】How do we deal with our emotions?（deal with）
→ 仿写：我们肯定会处理好所有的问题。
11. 【教材原句】… we should always try our best to control our anger instead of
expressing it in bad ways.（instead of）
→ 仿写：我们应该谈论我们的问题，而不是把问题都藏在心里。
12. 【教材原句】It’s more important to learn from your mistakes so that you don’t
repeat them in future.（so that）
→ 仿写：我们可以做运动，以便减轻压力。
第2阶 经典范文模板
Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to talk about “Don’t Worry. Be Happy”.（点
明演讲主题）
Last month, I failed a maths test. I was so worried that I even lost interest in studying.
（介绍自己的经历）However, I decided to face it bravely. I asked my teacher for help
and made a new study plan.（介绍做法）Day by day, I improved my grades.
Life is full of trouble. But worrying about it doesn’t solve the problems.（总结心得）
As the saying goes, “Every cloud has a silver lining!” Let’s be happy and work hard.
We’ll surely deal with all the problems well.（鼓励）
第3阶 高分范文赏析
好的心情对我们的生活和学习都十分重要，假如你们学校的英语俱乐部组织了一次征文大
赛，主题是如何保持好心情，请你根据以下提示，以“How to Keep a Good Mood”为题，
用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
How to Keep a Good Mood
1. smile2. talk about your problems
3. wear bright-coloured clothes
4. do something good
要求：
（1）词数80左右（作文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Keep a Good Mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better….
第一步 审
- 体裁：说明文
- 时态：一般现在时
- 人称：第一人称为主
第二步 列
- 开头：开篇点题。
A good mood makes our life and study… But what can we do to…?
- 中间：具体介绍如何保持好心情
First, we should… Second, we should… Third. can make… Finally, we should…
- 结尾：总结全文
Keeping a good mood is… We should always…
高分范文
How to Keep a Good Mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better. But what can we do to keep a good
mood?
First, we should smile often. Smiling is like sunshine because it can make us happy and have
a good day. Second, we should talk about our problems with our parents or friends instead of
hiding them in our heart. They can help us in some ways. Third, wearing bright-coloured clothes
can make us happier. Finally, we should do something good for others. It can deal with our
unhappiness because helping others will bring us joy.
Keeping a good mood is important to us. We should always keep a good mood and enjoy
every day in our life.
名师点评
① 文章采用 First、Second、Third 及 Finally 分点阐述保持好心情的方法，逻辑层次分明，
体现了作者良好的行文构思能力。
② 在说明具体方法时，运用比喻手法，将微笑比作阳光，生动形象地展现了微笑的作用，
使表达更加鲜活且富有感染力。
③ 结尾再次强调了好心情的重要性，文章结构完整，并引发了读者的共鸣。
本文围绕“如何保持好心情”展开，采用“总—分—总”结构，逻辑清晰，符合初中英语
写作的要求。首段以“好心情让生活和学习更轻松美好”总起，通过设问自然引出核心话
题；中间段落用 First、Second、Third、Finally 分点列举具体方法，内容全面且贴近生活；
结尾总结升华，呼应开头。
第4阶 实战演练
假如你是 David，你的笔友 Mark 给你发来邮件，邮件中他谈到自己的烦恼：性格比较内
向，不善于与人交往，与同学的关系也不太融洽，所以在学习和生活中压力很大。请你给
他回一封邮件，提一些建议。词数80左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mark,
I am sorry to know that you are having a lot of problems….
…
Yours,
David
---参考答案---
第1阶 高分词句储备
1. negative
2. lonely
3. anger
4. be hard on
5. feel blue
6. in some ways
7. be full of / be filled with
8. solve problems
9. Wearing bright-colored clothes can make people happier.
10. We’ll surely deal with all the problems well.
11. We should talk about our problems instead of hiding them in our heart.
12. We can do sport so that we can reduce stress.
第4阶 实战演练
【参考范文】
Dear Mark，
I am sorry to know that you are having a lot of problems. But I think there is no need to worry
about it. You are very clever. I hope my advice can help.
I think you should talk more with your friends about your problems. Try to be more outgoing and
friendly to everyone. You can also tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help.
Finally you should take part in some interesting activities after class to communicate often with
your classmates.
Hope you’ll get along well with your classmates and make great progress in your study.
Yours,
David
