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Unit 4 大单元话题和写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 奇观；惊叹 wonder
2. 特别的；不寻常的 special
3. 北部的；向北的 northern
4. 可能变化的 changeable
5. 一点一点地；逐渐地 little by little
6. 旅行者；游客 tourist
二、佳句仿写
7. 【教材原句】By the way, do you know why it’s called the Yellow River?（by the
way）
→ 仿写：顺便问一句，几点钟了？
8. 【教材原句】Later, we sat in a special pool at the top of the falls.（at the top of）
→ 仿写：太阳从积雪的山峰顶端升起。
9. 【教材原句】Climbers must also deal with thin air, high cliffs and changeable
weather.（deal with）
→ 仿写：科学家通过研究气候变化的影响来应对冰川融化。
10. 【教材原句】Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef
is one of the most amazing places to visit.（one of + the + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词
复数）
→ 仿写：它是全世界最美的小岛之一。
第2阶 经典范文模板
Today I visited Mount Huang, one of the wonders of the natural world.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui Province and attracts millions of tourists every year.
Early in the morning, when I arrived there by car, it was raining. As soon as I got out of the car, Ibegan to climb the mountain. About half an hour later, the clouds suddenly began to clear and
the rain stopped. The sun also rose. While I was climbing the mountain, I enjoyed the sea of
clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks.
I really had a good time.
第3阶 高分范文赏析
假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim 想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内
容提示，用英语写一封 80 词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡
谷。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容提示：
- Length: approximately 505 kilometres；
- Depth: about 6 kilometres (the deepest point)；
- Best travel time: spring and summer
要求：
（1）词数：80 左右；
（2）书写美观，段落清晰。
第一步 审
- 体裁：应用文
- 时态：一般现在时
- 人称：以第三人称为主
- 内容要点：雅鲁藏布大峡谷长度、深度及最佳旅游时间
- 写作结构：总—分—总
第二步 列
开头：开门见山，介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷。
中间：介绍大峡谷的一些具体情况。
结尾：表达情感。
高分范文
Dear Tim,
I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in
China—the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon.
It’s in Xizang, China. It is about 505 kilometres long. And it is the deepest canyon in the
world. The deepest point of it reaches around 6 kilometres below the surface. As a place that allnature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and
animals. The best time to visit it is spring and summer.
I’m sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
名师点评
① 采用邮件常用的句式（I’m writing to...），直接点明写作意图，同时用破折号引出核
心介绍对象，让读者瞬间抓住主题；
② 用“The best time to do sth is...”结构，直接给出游览建议，贴合邮件“分享实用信
息”的功能；
③ 邮件以友好的祝福收尾。
这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的“三段式”写作结构，要点齐全，语言流畅，全面
介绍了景点的情况。文中 The deepest point of, is home to, thousands of 等表明了作者
灵活运用所学知识的能力，这些短语也是文中的亮点。
第4阶 实战演练
“这么近，那么美，周末到河北！”请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，推荐大
家来河北游玩。
提示：
（1）Where can people go for a visit?
（2）What can people do there?
（3）What special foods can people enjoy?
注意：
（1）短文应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
Chengde Mountain Resort （ 承 德 避 暑 山 庄 ） 、 Zhaozhou Bridge 、 beaches in
Qinhuangdao、ski resorts in Zhangjiakou（张家口滑雪场）
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
…
Welcome to Hebei at weekends!---参考答案---
第1阶 高分词句储备
1. wonder
2. unusual
3. northern / north
4. changeable
5. bit by bit / little by little
6. traveller / traveler / tourist
7. By the way, what’s the time?
8. The sun rises at the top of the snowy peak.
9. Scientists deal with melting glaciers by studying climate change impacts.
10. It is one of the most beautiful islands in the world.
第4阶 实战演练
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Chengde Mountain Resort and
Zhaozhou Bridge. You can visit the places where the ancient emperors once went. Besides,
relaxing on the beaches in Qinhuangdao is also a good choice. Of course you can also enjoy skiing
at ski resorts in Zhangjiakou. There are also many different kinds of delicious local foods in my
hometown, such as hotpot chicken and yangchangtang. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time
travelling here.
Welcome to Hebei at weekends!
