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8b unit 6 大单元话题与写作
第 1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 主要的：
2. 筷子：
3. 文化的：
4. 拥抱：
5. 到达：
6. 把……插入……：
7. 收到……的来信：
8. 准时：
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】In Japan, we bow as soon as we meet a teacher.（as soon as）
→ 仿写：刚到十二点，人们就会放鞭炮。
10. 【教材原句】But once I was used to it, I became more curious and interested in
learning about the culture there.（be used to）
→ 仿写：我的同桌一开始不习惯这些习俗，但现在好多了。
11. 【教材原句】Second, it’s important to bring a gift when you visit someone.（it’s
+ adj. + to do sth）
→ 仿写：如果餐桌上有长辈，先开始吃饭是不礼貌的。
第 2阶 经典范文模板
Dear Peter,
I am glad to know that you are coming to China as an exchange student next
month. At the same time, I want to tell you there are many differences between
Chinese and Western cultures.When you have meals with others, you shouldn’t eat until the old people sit
down. It’s impolite to talk when your mouth is full of food. As for languages, you can
talk about daily activities when you meet your friend. For students, we must wear
school uniforms on school days. I think you should pay more attention to the traffic,
because you will hear drivers honking their horns to warn pedestrians to pay attention
to road conditions.
I think these suggestions can help you and hope you can enjoy yourself.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Peng
第 3阶 高分范文赏析
中国的飞速发展引起了你的美国笔友 Peter 的关注。他计划今年暑假来中国
参观名胜并到中国朋友家做客，但他对中国的礼仪了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助。
假如你是腾飞，请你根据下面的思维导图，用英语写一封电子邮件给 Peter，向
他介绍中国的礼仪。
注意：
（1）根据思维导图所给提示进行适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
第一步 审
- 体裁：应用文
- 时态：以一般现在时为主
- 人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主
- 内容要点：介绍中国的礼仪
- 写作结构：总—分—总
第二步 列开头：开篇点题，引出话题。
中间：具体阐述中国的一些问候礼仪、餐桌礼仪和拜访礼仪。
结尾：书写结语，表示欢迎。
高分范文
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to China this summer vacation. I hope
to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our
country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It’s
polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or travel
plans. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Never stick
them upright in your bowl—it resembles incense for the dead! Also, avoid pointing at
people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally,
if you visit a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. Always
knock before entering, and it’s customary to remove your shoes unless the host says
otherwise.
Welcome to China. I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
名师点评：
① 细节描述贴合实际，既指出禁忌行为，又简要说明原因，避免文化误解。
② 灵活运用 First, Next, Also, Finally 等连接词，使文章层次分明，逻辑连
贯。
③ shake hands, use chopsticks, take a small gift, remove your shoes 等与礼仪
相关的核心词汇体现了作者对文化类话题词汇的熟练掌握。
这篇文章采用“欢迎引入—习俗介绍—友好结尾”的结构，逻辑清晰，情感真
诚。开篇回应对方来华的消息，快速拉近与收件人的距离；紧接着通过自然过渡，
引出“介绍中国礼仪”的核心内容；结尾既表达出友好态度，又传递出对对方的美
好祝愿。第 4阶 实战演练
端午节刚刚过去，家家户户挂艾蒿、包粽子、划龙舟，这是中华优秀传统文
化的体现和传承。现学校组织“中华优秀传统文化节”的庆祝活动，特向同学们征
求意见。假如你是李华，请写一封 80 词左右的英文信给学校的英语报纸专栏负
责人王老师，围绕如何传承优秀传统文化谈谈你的看法。
要点：
（1）Read books and watch videos about traditional culture；
（2）Join traditional culture clubs, such as paper-cutting clubs, Peking Opera
clubs；
（3）Draw posters of traditional culture and put them up on the school's walls.
……
---参考答案---
第1阶 高分词句储备
1. main
2. chopstick
3. cultural
4. hug
5. arrive
6. stick... into...
7. hear from
8. on time
9. People will set off firecrackers as soon as it is twelve o’clock.
10. My deskmate was not used to the customs at first, but now things get better.
11. It’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table.
第4阶 实战演练
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am very interested in the festival. Here are some of my
suggestions about how to spread traditional Chinese culture.
First of all, I think we can read some books and watch videos about traditionalculture, so that we can learn a lot from them. Second, there should be some traditional
culture clubs for us to join, such as paper-cutting clubs and Peking Opera clubs. In
addition, it’s a good idea to draw some posters of traditional culture and put them up
on the school’s walls.
I hope everyone can play a role in passing down our traditional culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
