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Unit 1 Time to Relax
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
本单元的写作话题是“业余活动和个人兴趣爱好”，属于“人与自我”范畴中的“生活
与学习”， 传达丰富、充实、积极向上的生活态度。此类写作文体多为记叙文，围绕这一话
题描述个人的业余生活以及兴趣爱好，以及从中的获益（Write about free-time activities and
hobbies ）。，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，写作时可采用“总-分-总”三段式的结
构。
本单元相关话题写作素材有：
① 运动类：running（跑步）, swimming（游泳）, basketball（篮球）, cycling（骑
行）, badminton（羽毛球），ski（滑雪）
②文艺类：painting（绘画）, music（音乐）, reading（阅读）, dancing（跳舞）,
词汇
photography（摄影），play the flute（吹长笛）
③技能类：cooking（烹饪）, gardening（园艺）, DIY（手工制作）, playing the
piano（弹钢琴）, calligraphy（书法）， programming（编写程序）
①表达喜好：be interested in（对……感兴趣）, be fond of（喜欢）, have a passion
for（对……有热情）, enjoy doing sth.（享受做某事）, prefer to do rather than do
（宁愿做……而不愿做……）
②活动描述：take part in（参加）, devote time to（致力于）, make great progress in
短语 （在……取得进步）, work together with（与……合作）, develop skills in（培
养……技能）, achieve a goal（实现目标）
③ 时间安排：in one’s spare time（在业余时间）, on weekends（在周末）, after
school（放学后）, spend...doing sth.（花费……做某事）, set aside time for
（为……留出时间）
1. 开头引入
①My favorite hobby/free-time activity is..., which brings me a lot of joy.（我最
喜欢的爱好/业余活动是……，它给我带来很多快乐。）
②I started this activity when I was...
句型
③I have been interested in...since I was in primary school.（自从小学起，我就
对……感兴趣。）
2. 中间描述
①When I do..., I always feel relaxed and excited because...（当我做……时，我总是感到放松和兴奋，因为……）
②It makes me really happy when... （当我……，我非常开心。）
③I like to do it because... （我喜欢……因为……。）
④It lets me... （它让我……。）
⑤I enjoy...when I... （当我……我喜欢……）
⑥ To do well in this activity, we first...then...finally...（为了做好这项活动，我们
首先……然后……最后……）
⑦The first step is always the hardest. （万事开头难。）
3. 结尾总结
① In my opinion, hobbies and business activities can help us grow into better
people.（在我看来，爱好和业务活动能帮助我们成长为更优秀的人。）
② I will continue to keep my hobby and take part in more meaningful activities
in the future.（未来，我会继续保持我的爱好，参加更多有意义的活动。）
③ It is important for teenagers to balance study, hobbies and social activities.
（对青少年来说，平衡学习、爱好和社交活动很重要。）
①Interest is the best teacher. （兴趣是最好的老师。）
②Interest does not lie.（兴趣是不会说谎的。）
名言
优美句子
仿
（一）基础仿写
1. 原句：My friend John likes/loves/enjoys programming after school/in his free time/ at the
weekend.
仿写：_______________________________________________________.
2. 原句：I enjoy reading books in my spare time because they can open up my mind.
仿写：I enjoy ________________ in my spare time because ________________.
3. 原句：I spend an hour practising single strokes every day.
仿写：____________________________________________.
4. 原句：Now I do calligraphy to relax. I even like how the ink smells.
仿写：Now I ____________________. I even like ___________________.5. 原句：It’s important not to forget to relax once in a while.
仿写：It’s ___________________ to _____________________
6. 原句：Reading or listening to music can help us to calm down after a busy day.
仿写： ________________ can ________________after _____________________.
7. 原句：She took part in the English speech contest and won the third prize.
仿写：He/She took part in ________________ and ________________ .
8. 原句：It was such an amazing experience!
仿写：____________________________________________.
9. 原句：Painting is a great way to discover your creative side.
仿写：_______________is a great way to _______________________.
10. 原句：I’m lucky to have a friend like her in my life.
仿写：I’m ____________ to ______________________.
（二）进阶仿写
1. 原句：Although painting takes me a lot of time, I still love it because it helps me
express my feelings.
仿写：Although _________________________ takes me a lot of time, I still love it
because ______________________ .
2. 原句：Through joining the music club, I make many friends and improve my singing
skills.
仿 写 ： Through __________________ , I have __________________ and
________________ .
3. 原句：I find it fun to sing sweet songs with my classmates.
仿写：I find it ________________________________________________.
4. 原句：He thinks that apps can be a great way to help people.
仿写：He thinks that ___________________________________________.
5. 原句：It gives me such a sense of achievement to see people using the app.仿写：________________________________________________________________.
6. 原句：One of the people who inspires me the most is my dance instructor.
仿写：One of the people who __________ me most is __________________.
写作步骤
懂
一、Before-writing
1、Introduce your favourite free-time activity or hobby
1). What is your favourite free-time activity or hobby?
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2). When did it start? _______________________________________________________
3). Where do you do it? _______________________________________________________
4). Why do you like it? _______________________________________________________
5). What can you learn from it? __________________________________________________
2、列提纲，写句子
话题1：介绍自己的一个兴趣爱好（是什么→怎么开始的→带来的好处）
话题2：描述一次难忘的业务活动（是什么活动→过程如何→收获与感悟）
列提纲 示例
Beginning My favorite hobby is playing the guitar. I started to learn it
when I was 10 years old because my uncle is a guitar player
（20词左右）：引入主
and I admire him very much.
题，说明爱好/活动是什
么及开始的原因。
Body I practice playing the guitar for 30 minutes every evening. At
first, my fingers hurt a lot, but I never gave up. Now I can
（40-60词）：描述具体
play some popular songs. When I play, my family always
过程、频率或细节，加
listen to me happily.
入感受。
Ending Playing the guitar not only makes me feel happy but also
teaches me to be patient. I hope I can play in front of more
（20词左右）：总结好
people one day.
处或未来计划。
二、While-writing
学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。三、Post - writing
1、自我检查清单：
①词汇：是否使用了至少3个核心词汇和2个短语？
②句型：是否运用了至少1个万能句型？
③语法：时态是否一致（一般现在时描述爱好，一般过去时描述活动）？主谓是否一致？
④逻辑：是否有连接词（and, but, so, because, although）使文章连贯？
2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改
建议（如：可增加活动过程的细节描述）。
3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误（如：
爱好类作文时态混淆、活动类作文缺少过程描述）。
4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。写作真题
赏
（25-26八年级上·江苏无锡·月考）假如你是李华，请根据图表内容, 以“My Hobby”为题，
写一篇短文谈谈自己的爱好。
注意：
1. 文章必须包含题目所提供的主要信息，条理清楚，语意连贯。
2. 表格中省略号部分都要紧扣主题补充完整，每个省略号处适当发挥1句。
3. 词数：80词左右，开头已经写好不计入字数。
What’s your hobby? (drawing/football/robots...)
How do you learn about it? (have lessons/practise...)
What do you get from it? (make me smart/happy...)
What’s your plan for the future? (artist/player/designer...)
My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby. I like ________________________________________
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【答案】例文Everyone has his or her own hobby. I like drawing best. It brings me joy and helps me express
my feelings through colors and lines. I have drawing lessons on the weekend and practise by copying
pictures from books.
In my free time, I like drawing with my friends. Drawing makes me smart and creative. It
teaches me to observe details and think differently. Whenever I feel stressed, drawing helps me relax
and forget worries. It also brings me happiness when others admire my works.
In the future, I plan to become an artist. I want to share beautiful artworks with the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍你的兴趣爱好，并谈谈这个兴趣爱好如何让你受益，适当增加细
节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的爱好以及如何学习它的；
第二步：介绍从爱好中得到了什么；
第三步：介绍自己对未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①on the weekend在周末
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①Whenever I feel stressed, drawing helps me relax and forget worries. (whenever引导的时间状语
从句)
题型通关
练
1．假如你是李华，很喜欢音乐，你的加拿大笔友Julie和你有相同的爱好，她想了解你的
具体情况。请你根据下列写作要点写一封电子邮件回复她。
写作要点：
1. Why do you like music?2. What kind of music do you prefer?
3. Which song do you like best? Why do you like it?
要求：
1. 内容应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于80词，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Julie,
I’m happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together.
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【答案】
例文
Dear Julie,
I’m happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together.
First, I love music because it brings me great joy and helps me relax after a long day of
studying. It makes me feel energetic and happy. Second, I prefer pop music. It has nice and fun tunes
and meaningful words, so I often listen to it while I am doing homework. Third, my favorite song is
“Imagine” by John Lennon. I like it because it talks about peace and hope, which inspires me a lot.
I hope we can share more songs soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中关于音乐喜好、原因及具体
歌曲的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明与对方有相同爱好并可一起谈论音乐，为下文介绍自己的音乐喜
好作铺垫；
第二步，具体介绍自己爱音乐的原因、偏好的音乐类型及原因、最喜欢的歌曲及原因等内容；
第三步，结尾表达希望，希望很快能分享更多歌曲。
[亮点词汇]
①great joy极大的快乐
②relax after a long day of studying在长时间学习后放松
③nice and fun tunes朗朗上口且有趣的旋律
④meaningful words有意义的歌词
⑤talks about peace and hope谈论和平与希望
[高分句型]
①It has nice and fun tunes and meaningful words, so I often listen to it while I am doing homework.
(so连接因果关系的两个句子，while引导时间状语从句)
②I like it because it talks about peace and hope, which inspires me a lot. (because引导原因状语从
句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．英语课中，老师要求学生写一篇关于“Favorite hobby sharing”的短文，请你根据下表
中的相关信息写一篇英文短文，在班中分享与你这个爱好相关的故事（或经历）以及收获。
Favorite Hobby Sharing
friendship (友谊);
What is your favorite hobby?
happiness；
Share your story (experience) about your favorite hobby.
…
注意：（1）短文必须包含表中相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（3）词数80左右；短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。
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【答案】范文
My favorite hobby is playing basketball. Last summer, I joined a basketball club where I met
many new friends. At first, I wasn’t good at it, but with practice and encouragement from my
teammates, I improved a lot.
One memorable experience was when our team won a friendly match. The joy of teamwork
made me realize how important friendship and cooperation are. Playing basketball not only brings
me happiness but also teaches me perseverance.
Now, it’s more than just a hobby—it’s a way to stay active and make lifelong friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：根据表格中的信息提示（爱好、故事/经历、收获）完成写作，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入爱好；
第二步，叙述经历；
第三步，总结收获。[亮点词汇]
① be good at 擅长
② encouragement 鼓励
③ more than 不仅仅
④lifelong friends 终身朋友
[高分句型]
The joy of teamwork made me realize how important friendship and cooperation are.（宾语从句）
3．随着学习压力和生活节奏的加快，许多学生可能会忽视个人爱好的重要性，请你以
“The Power of Hobbies”为题写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，向全校同学发出要培养良好个人爱
好的倡议。
内容包括：
1).介绍自己的爱好；
2).它是如何成为你生活的一部分；
3).发出倡议。
注意：
1)内容包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2)文章不能出现真实校名和姓名；
3)开头结尾已给出不计词数。
My dear friends,
Today, I stand here with a topic—the Power of Hobbies. _______________________________
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【答案】例文
My dear friends,
Today, I stand here with a topic—the Power of Hobbies. My hobby is reading books, and I
really love it. Reading has become a big part of my life because I do it every day. It helps me relax
after studying and also lets me learn lots of new and interesting things. Hobbies can make us feel
happy and keep us healthy. So, I think everyone should find a good hobby, like playing sports or
drawing. Let’s start today and have fun with our hobbies!
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好；
第二步，介绍它是如何成为你生活的一部分；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of许多，大量
② have fun玩得高兴
[高分句型]
Reading has become a big part of my life because I do it every day.（because引导的原因状语从
句）
4．业余爱好是成长的必修课，培养业余爱好也是落实“双减”政策的有 效途径，你们
学校的英语公众号发起了题为Grow up with Hobbies的征文 活动。请阅读征文信息并写一篇
英语短文投稿。
Dear students
We want to know your ideas about the topic “Grow up with Hobbies”. What’s your hobby?
What can you learn from your hobby?
□ What sport /music /book do you do/listen to /read when you feel…?□ How often do you do sports/listen to music /read?
□ Do your partners have the same hobbies as you?
School English
要求：
(1)你的投稿至少包含问卷中提到的两项；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Grow up with Hobbies
Having a hobby is the course of growth. I’d like to introduce my hobbies bout
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【答案】例文
Grow up with Hobbies
Having a hobby is the course of growth. I’d like to introduce my hobbies about reading and
playing basketball.
Reading is my favorite hobby because it helps me relax and learn new things. When I feel
stressed, I often read a novel or a magazine to calm down. I usually read for about an hour every day.
On the other hand, playing basketball is another hobby of mine. It keeps me healthy and teaches me
teamwork. I play basketball with my friends twice a week. Some of my friends also enjoy these
hobbies, and we often share books or play basketball together.Hobbies make my life more colorful and help me grow in many ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语
法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明业余爱好的重要性并引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述自己的业余爱好及其带来的收获；
第三步，总结业余爱好对成长的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② on the other hand另一方面
③ twice a wee一周两次
[高分句型]
①Reading is my favorite hobby because it helps me relax and learn new things. （原因状语从句）
②When I feel stressed, I often read a novel or a magazine to calm down. （时间状语从句）
5．双减”政策下，我们的课余时间增多了。丰富多彩的课余生活有利于我们身心健康。
那么，你是如何合理利用课余时间的呢？请你根据以下提示，以“My free time activities ”为
题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的课余生活。
要求：
1. 须包含提示中的相关内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。My free time activities
I do many things in my free time.________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
My free time activities
I do many things in my free time. I exercise every day because I believe that exercise is not
only helpful for my health but also for my studies. After studying, I often listen to music to relax
myself. Reading is also a good way to relax. I can open my eyes and increase my knowledge by
reading. In addition, I occasionally watch TV or go for a walk in the park.
My free time activities help me relax and improve my studies and work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分四个方面表述我的业余活动都是什么及选择这些业余活动的原因；
第二步，表述业余活动对自己学习和工作的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be helpful for对……有帮助
②not only...but also...不但……而且……③In addition此外
[高分句型]
① I exercise every day because I believe that exercise is not only helpful for my health but also for
my studies.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
② Reading is also a good way to relax.（动名词作主语）
6．自从“双减”政策实施以来，我们学生有更多的空闲时间参与文娱、体育、艺术等
方面的课外活动，这些活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-school Activities
Make My Life Colorful”为题，写一篇英语短文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
内容：1. 介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动；
2.谈一谈课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名校名或地名；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数在80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
After- school Activities Make My Life Colorful
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After-school Activities Make My Life ColorfulNowadays, we have more free time to take part in after -school activities. There are many
different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am
used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I’ve made lots of friends. We often
play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while
playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball
after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“After-school Activities Make My Life
Colorful”为题，写一篇作文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需介绍你所参与的1
至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动，同时还需要谈论课外活动给你带来的收获及
感受，同时注意写作过程不要出现单词拼写和语法错误，保证语句通顺，逻辑清晰。
7．假如你是李欣，同学们在今天的班会上讨论了“我最喜爱的业余活动 (free-time
activities)”。你的笔友Mike对班会的内容很感兴趣，请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮
件。
写作要点：
1. 你们班全体同学参加了今天的班会。
2. 班会的相关信息：
(1) 主题：我最喜爱的业余活动；
(2) 25％的同学喜欢读书；
50％的同学喜欢运动；
包括你在内的10％的同学喜欢看英文电影。(including：包括)
3. 告诉Mike你喜欢看英文电影的原因。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xin
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
I hear that you are very interested in the content of our class meeting. All of our classmates
attended today’s class meeting whose theme was “my favorite free-time activities”. We had a heated
discussion. In our class, 25% students like reading, 50% students are fond of sports, and 10%
students, including me, like watching English movies. I think watching English movies can help me
improve my listening and speaking skills. Also, I can better understand the cultural background of
English-speaking countries.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍班会的相关信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“班会主题、同学们最喜爱的业余活动”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be fond of喜欢
[高分句型]
①All of our classmates attended today’s class meeting whose theme was “my favorite free-time
activities”.（whose引导的定语从句）
②I think watching English movies can help me improve my listening and speaking skills.（省略that
的宾语从句）
8．开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free time Activities”为题，用英语
写一篇短文介绍你们学校的课外活动开展情况。
要点提示：
1. 种类多样如体育、艺术、劳动、阅读等；
2. 好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等；
3. 个人观点……
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
参考词语：knowledge（知识） skill（技巧）
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are good for us teenagers.
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Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are good for us teenagers.
My friends and I have a variety of free-time activities. First, we often run for an hour on
weekends and we always play football after class because we all like playing it. If we have time, we
will sing some songs and draw some beautiful pictures to decorate our school. What’s more, we often
help our parents do the housework. Even some of us do some volunteer work, such as cleaning up
the park and visiting the old people’s home. And we also read some interesting books and share our
ideas together.
Free-time activities are beneficial to us. We can not only relax, but also learn something that
can’t be learnt in class. Besides, we can learn some new skills that are important to our life. The most
important is that we can make new friends who have the same interest.
In my opinion, we should spare some time to do free-time activities in order to grow up
healthily.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：文章已给出，提出文章的主题；
第二步：阐述课外活动的种类；
第三步：阐述课外活动的好处；
第四步：阐述个人观点。[亮点词汇]
① a variety of各种各样
②What’s more而且
③be beneficial to us对我们有益
[高分句型]
①If we have time, we will sing some songs and draw some beautiful pictures to decorate our school.
（if条件句）
②We can not only relax, but also learn something that can’t be learnt in class.（not only...but also...
不仅……而且……）
③The most important is that we can make new friends who have the same interest.（表语从句）
9．在日常生活中，有的学生喜欢在闲暇时间玩电子游戏，有的则选择参加各种户外活
动。你更倾向于哪种休闲方式？校刊英语专栏正以“Playing video games or having outdoor
activities?”为题开展征文活动，请根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种休闲方式中任选
其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。
Playing video games Having outdoor activities
relax get close to nature
reduce stress improve physical fitness
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所选休闲方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Playing video games or having outdoor activities?
Some students like to play video games in their free time. Others prefer having outdoor
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【答案】例文
Playing video games or having outdoor activities?
Some students like to play video games in their free time. Others prefer having outdoor
activities.
Having outdoor activities is my favorite way to relax. First, spending time outdoors allows me
to get close to nature. Enjoying the beauty of parks or mountains helps me forget school stress.
Second, outdoor activities like cycling or playing basketball improve my physical fitness. They keep
me active and healthy. Besides, I can make new friends while doing these activities together. For
example, joining a weekend hiking group taught me teamwork and brought me joy.
Although video games are fun, I believe outdoor activities are more meaningful for both my
body and mind. Let’s step outside and embrace the sunshine!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意从提供的两种休闲方式中任选其一进行写作，适当发
挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你倾向于哪种休闲方式；
第二步，具体阐述你喜欢这种休闲方式的理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①allow允许
②improve改善
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]①Although video games are fun, I believe outdoor activities are more meaningful for both my body
and mind.（although引导的让步状语从句）
10．假设你是李华，请根据以下校刊的征文海报，结合所给提示，写一篇英语短文进行
投稿。选择其中一项活动分享你的看法，并列举一次相关经历，谈谈你的收获。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等；
2. 词数 80词, 标题已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：learn something about, get a feeling of, realize the importance of,
understand the meaning of
Free-time Activities Help Me Learn a Lot
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【答案】例文
Free﹣time Activities Help Me Learn a Lot
In my free time, I often volunteer outside. I think volunteering is not only to help others, butalso to help myself, because each of us needs help. I often go to the nursing home to help the elderly,
pick up garbage in the park and give out leaflets to let people care for the environment.
I still remember my experience of being a volunteer last year. I joined a group to help the
neighbors throw out their rubbish. Every day, I got up very early and collected the rubbish from door
to door. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for two weeks. I got a
thank-you letter from the neighbors in the end.
I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help. What is more, I am also
thankful for the people who have helped me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态主要用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已在海报中给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写
作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己空闲时间的活动——志愿活动；
第二步，介绍自己曾经的一次志愿活动的经历；
第三步，总结提升，讲述自己对志愿活动的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①from door to door 挨门挨户地
②feel proud of 对……感到骄傲
③What is more 此外
[高分句型]
①I think volunteering is not only to help others, but also to help myself, because each of us needs
help. （not only...but also不仅……还……；because引导原因状语从句）
②I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help.（which引导定语从句）
