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01.演讲稿(科技与生活)
写作类型分析
演讲稿是面向听众、结构清晰、语言简洁且具有感染力的语篇,结构通常包括称呼、
开头、正文、结尾四部分,写作方法上应注重开头吸引听众、正文阐述观点、结尾总结呼
吁。
1.演讲稿的特征
面向听众:演讲稿是演讲者在正式的公开演讲中使用的稿子,其目的是为了向听众传
达信息或表达观点。
结构清晰:一篇优秀的演讲稿通常具有清晰的结构,包括开头、正文和结尾,有助于
听众更好地理解和接受演讲内容。
语言简洁且具有感染力:演讲稿的语言应简洁明了,避免使用过于复杂的词汇和句子
结构。同时,语言应具有感染力,能够激发听众的情感共鸣,增强演讲的说服力。
2.演讲稿的结构
称呼:演讲稿的开头通常包括对应听众的称呼,如“Goodmorning,everyone”或
“Hello,ladiesandgentlemen”等,以吸引听众的注意力。
开头:开头部分应点明演讲主题,迅速集中听众的注意力。可以使用故事法、引言法、
描述法等方法导入主题。
正文:正文部分围绕主题进行阐述,使听众了解演讲的主要内容。正文应有重点、有
层次、有中心语句,可以按照时间或空间顺序排列,也可以平行并列、正反对比、逐层深
入。
结尾:结尾部分概括演讲内容或提出呼吁,以及结束语。可以使用归纳法、引文法、
反问法等方法结束演讲,使演讲自然收束,给人留下深刻印象。
【范文示例】
Goodmorning,everyone!
Today,Iwanttochataboutsomethingthataffectsusall—howtechnologyimpactsourdaily
lives.Technologyislikeadouble-edgedsword.
Onthebrightside,itmakeslifeeasierandfaster.Withsmartphonesandtheinternet,wecan
talktofriendsworldwideinstantly,shoponline,learnnewskillsthroughcourses,andevenwork
fromhome.Inmedicine,newtechhelpsdoctorstreatpatientsmoreaccurately,savinglives.
But,therearealsodownsides.Ourpersonalinformationisatriskonline,andtoomuchscreentimecanharmoureyes,messupoursleep,andaffectoursocialskills.Plus,somejobsarebeing
losttomachines.So,whatshouldwedo?Usetechnologywisely!Setstrongpasswords,becareful
withourdata,andlimitscreentime.Tryreading,playingsports,orspendingtimewithlovedones.
Inshort,technologyhasgoodandbadpoints.Let'suseittohelpus,nothurtus.
Thankyouforlistening!
词句应用分析
“影响”的表达方式
▲核心词汇
impact:常用短语为“haveanimpacton”。例如:Technologyhashadaprofoundimpact
onourlives.
influence:可以是积极或消极的。例如:TheMobilePhoneHasInfluencedMeMost.2
affect:通常指对某事物产生具体作用。例如:Toomuchscreentimecanaffectourhealth
andsocialskills.
effect:作为名词时,表示“影响;结果”,常用短语为“haveaneffecton”。例如:
Theadvancementoftechnologyhashadasignificanteffectonthewaywelearn.
▲常用句式
(1)主语+has/havehada(n)+形容词+impact/effect/influenceon+宾语:这是表达影响
最常用的句式之一。例如:
Technologyhashadagreatimpactoncommunication.
Theinventionoftheinternethashadapositiveeffectonglobalcommunication.
(2)主语+affects/influences/impacts+宾语:这种句式更简洁,直接陈述影响。例如:
Socialmediainfluenceshowweperceivetheworld.
ThedevelopmentofAIaffectsjobmarkets.
(3)Withthe+名词/动名词短语+of/in+宾语,主语+can/does/will+动词原形:通过描
述背景或条件,进一步阐述影响。例如:
Withtheadvancementoftechnology,wecannowcommunicateinstantlywithpeoplearound
theworld.
Withtheincreasinguseofsmartphones,peoplearebecomingmoreaddictedtodigital
devices.
(4)Itis/was+形容词/名词+that/who+从句:强调句结构,用于突出影响的重要性。
例如:Itistechnologythathasrevolutionizedthewayweliveandwork.
【范文示例】
Hithere,friends!
Today,let'stalkaboutAI,orArtificialIntelligence.AIisamazing!Ithelpsuswithsmart
homes,funapps,andevendrivingcars.It'slikeamagicwandthatmakeslifeeasier.But,AIalso
hasitsdownsides.Itcantakejobsawayfrompeopleandsometimescollectstoomuchpersonal
information.ToomuchAIcanevenmakeuslazythinkers.
So,whatshouldwedo?WeshoulduseAIwisely.Letithelpus,butdon'tletitcontrolus.
Remember,AIisatool,notareplacementforourbrains.Let'smakesureweuseitinawaythat
benefitseveryone.
Thanksforlistening!
【提升练习】
1.科技馆内,“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款语言学习助手机器人让人
很感兴趣。假如你是展厅的讲解员,请你根据提示和要求,用英语写一篇讲解稿,向前来
参观的人们介绍他(她)。
Name Xiaozhi (wise and smart)
Inventor a middle school student who …
Look ...
Material recycled material (such as plastic, metal and so on)
Function read English news, communicate in English, correct spelling, pronunciation,
s grammar and so on ...
写作要求:1.文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得使用考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce you a new kind of robot—English Learning Helper.
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2.为了丰富学生们的科学知识,培养实践和创新能力,学校将在寒假举办一系列科
技主题活动,假如你是李华,你所在的小组将活动定为科技馆之旅,在本周班会课上,请
你代表小组分享你们的项目探究过程、活动方案和意义。
Project Tech Exploration Tour
searched for information on the Internet
Research (what we did) discussed in groups
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January 26th Fuzhou Science and
Time & Place
Technology Museum
play finger games with robots
Activities (what we’ll do) watch videos about the space
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meaning ......
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总次数;
2.意思清楚,表达通畅,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen
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3.人类的进步离不开科技的发展,如今各种各样的科技产品在我们的生活中屡见不
鲜,如智能手机、机器人、高速列车和电动汽车等。假定你是八年级一班的李华,你们学校正在举办科技节。你打算参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下
面思维导图中的提示内容写一篇英文演讲稿,介绍这些发明及其特点:
要求:
1. 文中需包含所给提示的全部内容;
2. 语言表达准确,语义连贯,可适当发挥。
3. 词数:80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to give a speech here.
The fast development of science and technology have brought great changes to our lives.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
4.“苟日新,日日新,又日新”古有四大发明,今有科技创新,从造纸术、指南针
到移动支付、高速铁路,以及生活中常见的篮球、电视、手表等,都给我们的生活带来了
改变和便利,学校正在举办科技节,请你以”My Favorite Invention为题写一则演讲稿,从
发明、使用、喜欢的理由等方面介绍你最喜欢的发明,提示问题如下:
What is your favorite invention?What is it used for?
Why do you like it best?
Something more you want to say.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Do you have your favorite invention? I do.
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5.假如你就读于一所国际学校,你酷爱发明,在你们学校的科技周活动中你想向同
学们“推销”你的一项新发明。请你根据提示写一篇90—100词的英语发言稿。
提示:
1. What’s it and when was it invented?
2. What’s it used for?
3. What’s it like?
4. How does it work?
5. How much is it?
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6.随着科技发展,手机功能日益增多,许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔,成为“手
机控”一族。假设你是李华,你校英语周将举办以“远离手机危害”为主题的英语演讲比
赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,号召同学们尽量少用手机,避免成为“手机控”。
1. “手机控”的表现;
2. 沉迷手机的危害;
3. 发出号召;
要点:
1. 80个词左右,开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
Dear fellows,
As we all know, mobile phones make our life more and more convenient. However, many
people become phone freaks (手机控).
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Thanks for listening!
7.假如你是李华,你的学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下思维导图,以
“I’m proud of our country”为题写一篇演讲稿,简要阐述中国这些年在环境、中国文化传播
以及科技等方面的发展,并谈谈你的感受以及对祖国的祝愿。词数80左右。
内容包括:I am proud of our country
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
8.科技发展日新月异,人工智能、虚拟现实技术的突破和应用,都将为我们的未来
带来无限的可能。假设你校英语社团下周的交流主题是My life in 2050。请你根据以下提示,
畅想一下你未来的工作和生活,写一篇发言稿,与社团同学分享。
注意:(1)短文须包含提示内容,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息;(3)词数:80—100;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 2050? Let me tell you my predictions.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
9.假如你是李华,你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上,你的最新发明“My smart
schoolbag”获得一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题,根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇
发言稿,介绍你的新发明。
外观 看起来和普通书包一样,有一个屏幕
材料 布,塑料
优点 查单词,与父母联系,讲笑话让人开心……
缺点 太重
历时 2个月
评价 ……
提示词: look like, screen, cloth(布), plastic(塑料), look up, connect with, be made of
要求:
1. 参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 不能出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数: 不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you.
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10.学校科技节即将来临,请根据以下思维导图准备一份演讲稿,介绍一款名叫“天
猫精灵”(Tmall Genie)的语音助手。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
(参考词汇:remind 提醒)
My Smart Friend: Tmall Genie
Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to introduce my smart friend: Tmall Genie.
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11.随着社会的发展和科技的进步,未来职场上的竞争会变得越来越激烈,有一个
明确的职业生涯规划变得尤为重要。亲爱的同学,你是否对自己未来的职业有过规划呢?
近期学校将以“My Dream Job”为主题,进行一场英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿。
参考信息:
1. 你的理想职业是什么?为什么它是你的理想职业?2. 你打算为你的理想职业作哪些准备?
3. ……
写作要求:
1. 词数:80-120词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、班级、校名和其它真实信息。
Dear teachers and students! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my
dream job in the future.
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12.你是来自育才二中的王华,你发明的环保机器人在学校科技节中获得一等奖,并
被推荐多加深圳市者少年科技展览大会,你受邀在大会上进行发言。请根据下面的提示内
容,写一份英文发言稿介绍你的这项发明。
提示内容:
1. 环保机器人的外形,请发挥你的想象力;
2. 环保机器人的优势:
1) 它能吸入二氧化碳,释放氧气;
2) 它有可活动的手,捡垃圾很容易;
3) 请自行补充至少两个方面。
要求:
1. 须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词汇:carbon dioxide二氧化碳 give out释放 movable可活动的
Hello, everyone!
I’m Wang Hua from Yucai No 2 Middle School Today, I’m very honored to stand here tointroduce my invention.
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That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
参考答案
1.
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce a new kind of robot - English Learning Helper.
The smart robot, named Shaozhi, is invented by a middle school student who is interested
in modern technology and science. She’s a little fat and looks like a lovely girl with a round face.
She’s made of recycled materials like plastic and metal, so she’s a green invention.
Xiaozhi has many functions. For example, she can not only read English news for people
but also communicate with users in English. Besides, she can correct learners’ spelling,
pronunciation and grammar mistakes. She can also search English songs or movies for us.
In a word, the robot is a useful English learning helper. She can improve our listening,
speaking, reading and writing. Is she wonderful?
Thanks for listening!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲解稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,用于描述机器人的现状和功能;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括机器人的名字、发明者、外观、材质和功能等,考生
需确保涵盖所有提示信息,并适当添加细节以增强描述的生动性和全面性。
[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。名字与寓意;发明者;外观;材质;功能;
第三步,书写结语。以感谢听众的聆听作为结尾,表达希望这款机器人能对大家有所帮助
的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be made of由……制成
③in a word总而言之
④improve提高
[高分句型]
①The smart robot, named Shaozhi, is invented by a middle school student. (过去分词短语作后
置定语)
2.One possible version:
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our search with you. The subject we’ve chosen is
Tech Exploration Tour.
Before the tour, we did some research. First, we searched for information on the Internet.
Next, we discussed about what to do in groups. Finally, we made a full plan.
On January 26th, we’re going to Fuzhou Science and Technology Museum and spend 4
hours there. During the stay, we plan to play games with all kinds of robots there, such as playing
finger games. Besides, we’re going to watch some videos about space and take photos.
Through the tour, we hope that everybody will have a better understanding of science and
know the importance of creativity.
That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”与“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“分享你们的项目探究过程、活动方案和意义”并适
当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己小组的项目探究过程和结果;
第二步,根据题干表格中的要点,详细讲述活动计划;第三步,表达希望达到的活动目的,介绍活动意义。
[亮点词汇]
①share...with和……分享……
②all kinds of 各种各样的……
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Next, we discussed about what to do in groups(疑问词+不定式结构)
②Through the tour, we hope that everybody will have a better understanding of science and know
the importance of creativity.(that引导的宾语从句)
3.
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to give a speech here.
The fast development of science and technology have brought great changes to our lives.
We can see various technology products in our daily life. The most common one is smartphones.
With it, we can shop online, watch films, and have video chats with our family and friends.
Technology has also made transportation more convenient and fast. For example, electric cars can
save energy and thus protect the environment. It’s a convenient and green way of traveling. High-
speed trains improve travel speed. They are not only fast but also comfortable. In addition, there
are robots that can help with housework, even help students with their schoolwork.
In conclusion, technology changes our lives to a great extent. We should make proper use of
technology to make our lives more convenient.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。介绍自己,引出主题。(开头已给出)
第二步,具体阐述。根据思维导图中的提示内容,具体阐述智能手机、机器人、高速列车
和电动汽车是如何改变生活的。第三步,书写结语。感谢大家的聆听。(结尾已给出)
[亮点词汇]
① for example 例如
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ in addition 此外
④ in conclusion 总之
⑤ to a great extent 在很大程度上
[高分句型]
In addition, there are robots that can help with housework, even help students with their
schoolwork.(that引导定语从句)
4.
Do you have your favorite invention? I do. My favorite invention is the smartphone, a
versatile device that fits in our pockets and connects us to the world. It serves as a communication
tool, entertainment center, and personal assistant, allowing us to message, call, browse the
internet, take photos, and manage finances. I love smartphones because they make my life
convenient and efficient, enabling me to stay connected with loved ones, access information
instantly, and handle tasks on-the-go. They also help preserve memories and facilitate learning
through access to educational materials and courses. Despite concerns about screen time and
privacy, the smartphone’s benefits are immense when used responsibly. It’s a gateway to endless
possibilities and a tool that enhances our lives in numerous ways.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写
以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,介绍自己最喜欢的发明及其用途;
第二步、介绍自己喜欢该发明的原因;
第三步、介绍更多有关该发明的信息,如该发明的意义及影响等。
[亮点词汇]
①fit in适合②serve as用作
③browse the internet浏览互联网
④stay connected with…和……保持联系
[高分句型]
①It’s a gateway to endless possibilities and a tool that enhances our lives in numerous ways.(that
引导定语从句)
5.
May I have your attention, please? I’d like to introduce my new invention to you.
It is an alarm on your glasses. It was invented three months ago. It is used for finding your
glasses in your home or at school. The alarm is controlled by a remote control with a button on it.
First, press the button, and the alarm will make a sound. Then, follow the sound to look for your
glasses. You must want to know how much it is. It’s 20 yuan. It’s cheap and good. You can afford
one.
Don’t you hate it when you can’t find your glasses? If so, please come to me and buy one.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你的一项新发明,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的发明是什么以及是什么时候发明的;
第二步,介绍自己的发明可以用来做什么、它是什么样子、它是如何工作的以及它的价格;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be used for被用来
②look for寻找
③want to do sth.想要做某事
[高分句型]
①First, press the button, and the alarm will make a sound. (祈使句,and+陈述句)
②Don’t you hate it when you can’t find your glasses? (时间状语从句)
6.:
Dear fellows,As we all know, mobile phones make our life more and more convenient. However, many
people become phone freaks. They are addicted to playing phone games. They spend so much
time on mobile phones that they have little time to communicate with their family and friends face
to face. What’s worse, they will get anxious easily without mobile phones.
Obviously, it is bad for us to be addicted to mobile phones. First of all, our eyes may get
hurt if we stare at the screen for too long. Secondly, if we are busy playing with mobile phones, it
will be difficult for us to focus on other things. It is harmful to our health and study.
Mobile phones do bring us great convenience. However, spending too much time on them
will cause big problems. We should avoid being phone freaks and try to use mobile phones in a
proper way.
Thanks for listening!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍“手机控”的表现;
第二步,谈谈沉迷于手机的危害;
第三步,号召同学们少用手机,避免成为“手机控”。
[亮点词汇]
①be addicted to 沉迷于
②spend time on sth. 花时间在……上
③focus on 专注于
[高分句型]
①They spend so much time on mobile phones that they have little time to communicate with their
family and friends face to face. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②First of all, our eyes may get hurt if we stare at the screen for too long. (if引导的条件状语从
句)
7.
I am proud of our country
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to stand here and share my pride in our country.Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the
environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear
rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the
world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress
in science and technology. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s
space dream a reality. People’s living conditions have also improved a lot.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突
出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己很高兴可以做演讲;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,重点从“环境、文化、科技”等几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,表达自己的感受;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②measure措施
③at the same time同时
④progress进步,进展
⑤living conditions生活条件
[高分句型]
①At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more
foreigners interested in it. (定语从句)
②I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future. (并列句;宾
语从句)
8.Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 2050? Let me tell you my predictions.
In 2050, with the development of science and technology, I think I will work as a scientist
to develop cutting-edge technology, which is beneficial to human beings. At home, I will have a
smart robot helper that can do housework, cook delicious meals, and even teach me new skills.
The smart robot helper will make our life easier and more comfortable. Traveling will be much
faster and more convenient. I might use flying cars or high-speed trains to explore the world and
allow me to visit my friends or work in different cities quickly. Life will be more exciting and
comfortable thanks to advanced technology.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,具体为发言稿,用于英语社团的交流活动;
②时态:主要使用一般将来时,因为是对未来生活的预测;
③提示:根据题目要求,发言稿应包含对未来工作、家庭生活以及交通方式的预测,同时
要注意适当发挥,使内容更加丰富和生动。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。通过提问“What will my life be like in 2050?”来引出对未来生活的
预测,并明确将要分享的内容。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。
工作方面:预测自己将成为一名科学家,致力于人工智能和虚拟现实技术的研发,强调这
些技术对人类社会的积极影响。
家庭生活:描述家中将拥有的智能机器人助手,它如何帮助处理家务、烹饪美食,甚至教
授新技能,以及这种智能生活带来的便利和舒适。
交通方式:预测未来的交通将更加快速和便捷,如使用飞行汽车或高速列车进行长途旅行,
这将极大地缩短旅行时间,使生活更加丰富多彩。
第三步,书写结语。以“That’s all. Thanks for listening.”作为结尾,简洁明了地结束发言,
并表达感谢。
【亮点词汇】
①cutting-edge technology 尖端技术
②beneficial 有益的
③high-speed trains 高速列车
④advanced 高级的,先进的【高分句型】
①In 2050, with the development of science and technology, I think I will work as a scientist to
develop cutting-edge technology, which is beneficial to human beings.(which引导的非限制性定
语从句)
②At home, I will have a smart robot helper that can do housework, cook delicious meals, and
even teach me new skills.(that引导的定语从句)
9.
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is my smart schoolbag. It looks like an
ordinary schoolbag, but it has a special screen. It is made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly
to our planet.
There are many advantages of my smart schoolbag. It can help me look up new words
easily. I can also use it to communicate with my parents. Sometimes, it can tell jokes to make me
happy. However, it is a little heavy.
I spent two months inventing it. I believe it will be better in the future.
Thanks for listening!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“表格”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作
时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,智能书包的外观、材料、优点、缺点、评价等。
第三步,书写结语,相信智能书包未来会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①look up new words查新单词
②spent two months inventing it花了两个月时间发明它
[高分句型]
It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. (非限制性定语从句)
10.My Smart Friend: Tmall Genie
Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to introduce my smart friend: Tmall Genie. It is so small that it
is convenient to carry wherever we go. Also, both its colours and pictures are beautiful.
It can provide different kinds of service forus. Whenever we have problems with our life or
study, just speak to it and it will offer us the help that we need. In addition, the music it plays can
make us relaxed after a hard day’s work or study. Meanwhile, the children are easy to fall asleep
by listening to the story that it tells. Also, it can remind you of important dates so that we can’t
forget the important things we have to do. Every time we want to know what is happening, it will
tell us some up-to-date information at home and abroad immediately.
In general, I have found my life moreenjoyable and colourful since it came into my life. It is
always with me like my closest friend. It can almost do whatever it is asked to. That is why I like
it so much.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含思维导图中所有内容,并适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先承接开头引出主题——天猫精灵,并简单介绍其大小和颜色;
第二步,具体介绍它可以做的事情;
第三步,表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①both...and...两者都
②different kinds of不同种类的
③remind sb of sth提醒某人
④so that为了
[高分句型]
①It is so small that it is convenient to carry wherever we go. (so...that引导的结果状语从句;
wherever引导的让步状语从句)
②Whenever we have problems with our life or study, just speak to it and it will offer us the help
that we need. (whenever引导让步状语从句;that引导的定语从句)③Also, it can remind you of important dates so that we can’t forget the important things we have
to do. (so that引导目的状语从句)
④That is why I like it so much. (why引导表语状语从句)
11.
Dear teachers and students! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my
dream job in the future.
My dream job is to become a software engineer. I have always been fascinated by
technology and how it can solve real-world problems. I believe that as a software engineer, I can
create innovative solutions that make people’s lives easier and more efficient.
To achieve this dream, I plan to study computer science in college. I am also committed to
staying updated with the latest technological advancements by reading industry journals and
attending tech conferences.
In conclusion, becoming a software engineer is my dream job because it combines my
passion for technology with the opportunity to make a positive impact on society. I am determined
to work hard and prepare myself to achieve this goal.
Thank you for listening!
[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
①时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
②提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的理想职业、为什么选择这个职业以及为实现这个职业所
③做的准备。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的理想职业;
第二步,解释为什么选择这个职业;
第三步,描述为实现这个职业所做的准备;
第四步,总结并表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
fascinated by 对……着迷
①innovative solutions 创新的解决方案
②practical experience 实践经验
③continuous learning 持续学习
④[高分句型]
I believe that as a software engineer, I can create innovative solutions that make people’s lives
①easier and more efficient. (that引导的宾语从句)
I am determined to work hard and prepare myself to achieve this goal. (不定式作目的状语)
②12.
Hello, everyone! I’m Wang Hua from Yucai No 2 Middle School Today, I’m very honored to
stand here to introduce my invention. Now let me introduce my robot.
The robot is like a human. Its body is blue with long hair. It has a pair of sharp ears. It can
hear everything people say. It’s special because it has a pocket for everything you want. In
addition, it takes in carbon dioxide and gives out oxygen. What’s more, it has movable hands and
it is easy to pick up litter. The robot uses electricity instead of petrol, so it won’t pollute the
environment. Most importantly, it will do what you tell it to do.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细
节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体介绍环保机器人的外形;
第二步,具体阐述环保机器人的优势。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双
②in addition此外
③pick up捡起
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①It can hear everything people say.(定语从句)
②Most importantly, it will do what you tell it to do.(宾语从句)