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2023-2024 学年八年级下期末考点大串讲（人教版）
专题 04 单元写作梳理
Unit 1 What’s the matter?
【话题分析】
本单元的写作任务是会写针对健康问题提出合理化建议的短文。在写作过程中，要求同学们熟悉人体
部位的表述，掌握描述人体的不适等健康问题。要注意关键词语的正确使用，并能够针对健康问题运用情
态动词should和shouldn’t提出更加正确、具体和深入的合理化建议。
能表达生活中存在的健康问题，并就这些提出建议；能描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。
1. 能用＂have...＂表达健康问题及意外事故。
2. 能描述健康问题的状况或意外事故发生的过程及病情或受伤的程度。
3. 能用 ＂should/shouldn’t＂ 提建议。
4. 写作微技能：不同句式的表达。
【典型例题】
(2021江苏宿迁中考真题)
公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康
越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为
How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
How to live a healthy and happy life
健康包括身体（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。
1. 健康饮食；
身体健康 2. 适当锻炼；
3. 充足睡眠。
1. 积极乐观；
心理健康 2. 与人为善；
3.……（至少一点）
希望 ……（至少一点）
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which
includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?____________________________________________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
【高分模板】
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear and classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which
includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to
exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after
school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get
along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends
frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life
every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以How to live a healthy and happy life为题写一篇文章，发表一下自己对
“健康”这一话题的看法。题目中用表格列出了文章应包括的内容：首先介绍健康的分类；然后分别介绍
如何保持身体健康和心理健康；最后提出自己的希望。学生们可以联系自己的日常生活，根据表格中的提
示，再增加一些细节信息，用正确的英语进行表达。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时应主语：首先文章要点
全面，应包括题目中列出的所有要点，并对心理健康和希望进行补充。其次应注意英语句式结构的特点以
及与汉语表达方式的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他句
式的使用，提升文章档次。最后应注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【素材积累】
【常用短语】
（一）健康问题类短语
1. 牙痛 have a toothache
2. 头痛 have a headache
3. 肚子痛 have a stomachache
4. 背痛 have a sore back
5. 喉咙痛 have a sore throat
6. 流鼻血 have a nosebleed7. 感冒 have a cold
8. 发烧 have a fever
9. 咳嗽 have a cough
10. 感到恶心feel sick
（二）意外事故短语
1. 摔倒fall down
2. 割伤cut oneself
3. 撞到头 get hit on the head
4. 膝盖受伤 hurt one’s knee
5. 背受伤 hurt one’s back
6. 手臂受伤 hurt one’s arm
（三）措施短语
1. 躺下来休息 lie down and rest
2. 喝热的蜂蜜水 drink hot tea with honey
3. 看牙医 go to the dentist
4. 拍X光 get an X-ray
5. 量体温 take one’s temperature
6. 在……敷药 put some medicine on.....
7. 用绑带包扎 put a bandage on...
8. 在水下冲 run under the water
9. 去医院 go to the hospital
10. 休息几天 rest for a few days
11. 去看医生 go to a doctor
12. 切除 cut off
【常用句子】
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. I sat in the same way for too long without moving. The bus driver stopped the bus without thinking twice.
（without doing sth没有做某事）
2. But to his surprise, they all agreed to go with him.（to one’s surprise 使……惊讶；出乎……意料）
让我感到惊讶的是，他能独自穿越这片森林。
3. Thanks to Mr. Wang and the passengers, the doctors saved the man in time.（thanks to多亏；由于；in time
及时）
4. He bandaged himself so that he would not lose too much blood.（so that 因此）
5. His love for mountain climbing is so great that he kept on climbing mountains even after his experience.（so...
that... 如此……以至于……）
6. Aron is used to taking risks.（be used to doing sth习惯于做某事）Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks.
【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“提供帮助和做志愿者”，应用文体裁居多，该话题属于中考常考话题之一。主要是
叙述自己参与的志愿者活动，提供给别人的帮助，包括应聘到某处做志愿者，会做的志愿者活动，能为别
人或者机构提供的帮助等内容。重点考查学生以下能力：
1. 掌握并熟练使用表达出活动的要点；
2. 会写一些简单的应聘信；
3. 清晰表达自己的能力。
【写作步骤】
1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：
总------第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。
分-------第二部分：活动内容以及提供的帮助。
总——第三部分：活动的感受。
2.人称：第一人称。
3.时态：一般将来时、一般过去时。
【典型例题】
3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况
介绍给Mary。
活动时间：3月5日
活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)
参与人员：志愿者
活动形式：1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。
2. 帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……
3. 陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报……
活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人……
要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。
2. 词数100字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.
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If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Li Hua【高分模板】
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.
As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers
brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes
too. How happy they were!
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for
them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them.
When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life,
we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.
If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，也是日记。本文时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读料，认真审题，根
据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。注意语法和单词拼写。
2.例文点评：例文符合题目要求，写出了去敬老院开展志愿者活动过程，包含了所有要点。本文格式时态
使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，没有语法单词拼写错误，符合英语的表达习惯，运用了合适的连接词或过
渡词，文章思路清晰，富有逻辑性。
3.高分亮点：
（一）短语和连词的使用：As，because，too…to…，then，after，such as，when， if等。
（二）句型：（1）As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.（2）
As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too.（3）When it was time
for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.(4) From this meaningful activity, I found
that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.等。
【素材积累】
1. help to do...帮助做.....
2. clean up打扫
3. cheer up使高兴起来
4. give out food分发食物
5. teach kids教学生
6. volunteer志愿者
7. give some advice给出建议
8. make a plan制定计划
9. come up with想出......
10. work in an old people’s home在敬老院上班
11. help out with想办法解决12. lonely孤独的
13. care for照顾
14. decide to决定做
15. give up放弃
16. at the age of在.....岁时
17. try out参加.....选拔
18. tried doing尝试做
19. come true实现
20. learn something important学到了重要的东西
21. be interested in对......感兴趣
22. at the same time同时
23. volunteer to do自愿去做.....
24. put up张贴
25. repair修理
26. give away捐赠
27. thank you for...因......而感谢
28. change my life改变我的生活
一，句型积累：
1. I’d like to help to clean up the city parks.我想去帮忙打扫市里的公园。
2. I can teach kids to learn English.我会教孩子们学英语。
3. Let’s make some notices.咱们做些通知吧。
4. Iwant to be a volunteer in an old people’s home.我想在敬老院做志愿者。
5. I like reading newspaper to them.我喜欢读报给他们听。
6. We should listen to them and care for them.我们应该倾听他们并且照顾他们。
7. I love animals and want to be an animal doctor.我喜欢小动物想成为一名兽医。
8. I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their
owners’ faces.我得到强烈的满足感当我看见他们主人脸上的喜悦感。
9. Volunteering here is a dream come true.能在这做志愿者，我的梦想实现了。
10. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.我可以做我喜欢做得去帮助别人。
11. Helping others can bring us happiness.帮助别人能给我们带来快乐。
12. I think we’d better....我觉得我们最好....
13. In my free time I like to...so I think I’d be good at this job.在业余时间我喜欢做所以我觉得我擅长这项
工作。
14. I’m strong in....我强烈想加入....
15.I want to help out as a volunteer in your group.我想在你们的团队里做一名志愿者。
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room ？话题分析
本单元以＂家务、杂务＂为话题，围绕这一话题，引导学生学习掌握情态动词could表示委婉地请求以及
请求许可的用法。以谈论家务以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由为话题的作文或是请求他人帮忙的电
子邮件之类的书面表达是单元测试或中考所常考查的。
（2023·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题）
劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，
从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技
能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a
better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives.
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【答案】例文
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for
my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can
develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents
worry about me. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and
make my hometown more beautiful.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添
加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么；第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处；
第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.
（because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my
hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
【词汇积累】
rubbish 垃圾 fold 折叠 sweep 打扫 mess 杂乱 wash 清；清洗 clean 打扫
busy 忙碌 chore 杂务 housework 家务劳动 tired 累的 take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
do the dishes 洗餐具 fold the clothes 叠衣服 sweep the floor 扫地
make one’s bed 整理床铺 clean the room 打扫房间 do housework/chores 做家务
help sb.do sth.帮助某人做某事 take care of 照顾 do housework all evening 整晚做家务
find the house clean and tidy发现房间干净又整洁 share the housework分担家务
a clean and comfortable home一个干净又舒服的家
there is no need for somebody to do something 对于某人来说没必要做....
develop children's independence 养成孩子的独立（习惯）
the idea of fairness 公平意识
have no idea how to take care of himself 不知道怎样照料自己
it's fair/ unfair for children to do something对于孩子来说，做……是公平的/不公平的。
a few other things I want you to do我想要你做的另处几件事情
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
It is the parents' job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children.
在家给孩子们提供一个干净而舒服的环境是家长们的工作。
2.It is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework.
对于孩子们来说，学会怎样做家务和帮助父母亲做家务是很重要的。
3.Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it
clean and tidy.
既然他们和他们的父母生活在同一房子里，他们就应该明白每个人都应该做他们份内之事，以保持房子的
干净与整洁。
4. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
孩子们越早独立，对他们的未来就更好。5.Playing computer games is a waste of time and energy.打电脑游戏是浪费时间和精力。
6.Doing chores can develop children’s independence.做家务能够培养孩子们的独立能力。
7．We can't depend on our parents too much.我们不能过多地依赖我们的父母。
8.The more the children do the chores，the earlier they will learn to be independent.
孩子们做的家务越多，就会越早地学会独立。
9.It helps children to understand the idea of fairness. 这帮助孩子们理解公平的含义。
1-.Students have no time to do the housework. 孩子们没有时间做家务。
◆开头句
①It is everyone’s duty to do chores.
②I think it is necessary for us to do housework.
③Now many students are too lazy to do housework at home.
④I think we should help parents do some housework.
◆中间句
①I swept the floor at first and took out the rubbish.
②We should finish our homework independently and make a study plan carefully.
③What’s more，I also cooked some porridge.
④Third，doing housework can relax ourselves.
⑤I often help my parents with much housework,such as cleaning the rooms,taking out the rubbish and doing the
dishes.
◆结尾句
①I believe if we can do these things，we will be more independent.
②I think it’s our duty to share housework to keep the house clean and tidy.
◆谚语积累
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。
Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents？
话题分析
本单元的话题是“烦恼(Problems)”,该话题是中考常考话题之一，主要是描述自己或他人的烦恼，并给
出相应的建议或看法。本单元主要是青少年学生在成长过程中遇到的一些问题或烦恼，包括与父母、同学
之间的问题，并涉及处理这些问题或烦恼的方法。该话题贴近学生生活，与学生的日常学习活动息息相关。
该话题先诉说问题或烦恼，然后说说解决该问题或烦恼的方法，最后再表达一下自己的感想。如何写好这
类文章，主要需要掌握以下表达和句型句式:
常用词汇
单词 problem,pressure,advice,suggestion, happiness,
compare,understand,communicate,teenager,
argue,happy,hobby,suppose,support,spend,activity,
短语 grow up, good luck,get on well with,deal with, be kind to, communicate with,joinin, argue with,in one's opinion, compare sb.with,talk about,understand each other
常用句型句式
☞ My biggest problem is..
☞ As we are growing up,we find it.to communicate with.
☞ Now some teenagers have a hard time in communicating with their parents.
☞ I would like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
☞ There was something wrong between us. I don't know what to do.
☞ I hope you can..
☞ You said you had many problems in studying math.
☞ Only in this way can we get along well with.
☞ I think it is very important for us..
☞ Keep trying and you will soon learn it better. I believe we will be a happy family forever.
☞ I hope my advice can help you.
☞ If you follow these suggestions,you can get on well with your parents.
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息
给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
长时间使用电子产品；
近视原因
读书时间过长。
控制使用电子产品时间；
建议 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望 ……
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you?
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you? I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use
electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause
myopia.
But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the
time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some
good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises
plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make
sure your eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③play an important role in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came？
【话题分析】
本单元以＂谈论过去正在发生的事情＂为话题，讲述了大事件发生时人们正在进行的各种活动。具体
到书面表达中，要求同学们会对过去正在发生的事情进行描述，在写这类短文时，要运用相应的过去
时态，如一般过去时或过去进行时等。在写作时要注意以下几点：①明确中心思想，无论是看图写作，还是情景描写，都要围绕文章中心展开；
②要注意记叙文的几个要素，即把时间、地点、人物、事件、起因、经过、结果等交代清楚；
③要合理安排好写作的顺序；
④叙述事件时语言简洁，把文章写得生动、详实。
【典型例题】
某英文网站的＂Student Life＂栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为＂ A time when I made someone happy＂，
请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点：
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1. 词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
A time when I made someone happy
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【高分模板】
Last summer, though it was hot, I volunteered to teach children English in rural area. When I arrived there, I
couldn't adjust to the weather and life style. However, as time went by, I found myself quite happy when I saw the
students I was teaching made great progress. In order to teach them, I had to keep on learning as well. As a result,
my English improved a lot. Also, I made friends with some of my students. We are still keeping in touch by letter
now.
In a word, not only did I help those in need, but also I myself learn a lot that summer. If I have another chance
to do volunteer work, I am ready to go.
【名师点评】【素材积累】
（一）动作类短语
1. 步行回家 walk home
2. 去上班 go to work
3. 入睡 fall asleep
4. 下大雨 rain heavily
5. 洗热水澡 take a hot shower
6. 发出响声 go off
7. 接电话 pick up
8. 逐渐变弱 die down
9. 确认；确信 make sure
（二）时间类短语
1. 当暴风雨来的时候 at the time of the rainstorm
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2. 在那个时候 at that time
3. 在地震时 at the time of the earthquake
（三）其他短语
1. 沉默地 in silence 2. 做某事有困难 have trouble doing sth
3. 一团糟 in a mess 4. 首先；起初 at first
句子积累
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.
【so...that...如此……以至于……】
在台风来临时，我如此地害怕以至于待在床上一动不动。
At the time of the typhoon, I was so scared that I stayed in bed without moving.
2. I had trouble thinking clearly after that because I was very afraid.
【have trouble doing sth在……方面有困难】
由于雨下得非常大，我走路回家相当困难。
I had trouble walking home because it rained heavily.
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3. Ben’s dad was putting pieces of wood over the windows while his mom was making sure the flashlights and
radio were working.
【while当……时候，连接两个同时发生的动作】
我爸爸正在关窗户时，我妈妈在扫地。
While my dad was closing the windows, my mom was sweeping the floor.4. Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together.
【although 虽然；尽管】
尽管他累了，但他还是继续工作。
Although he was tired, he went on working.
（二）用when与while连接两个句子
when是一个从属连词，它引导的是一个时间状语从句，when后通常用短暂性动词；while后通常用持
续性动词，因此它所引导的状语从句中，谓语动词常用进行时态。
1. I was doing my homework. Typhoon Sanmei came. (while)
Typhoon Sanmei came while I was doing my homework.
2. My friend, Li Bing, was making his way home. Typhoon Sanmei came. (when)
My friend, Li Bing, was making his way home when Typhoon Sanmei came.
（2022·广西桂林·统考中考真题）
看图作文：自从2021年党中央颁布“双减”政策以来，孩子们的课余生活变得丰富多彩了。请看下面这张
照片，这是大明一家在公园里度周末时照的。假如你是照片中画画的男孩大明（Daming），请以“A
Happy Family Day”为题，写一篇英语短文，准备在班里作文课上展示。
写作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要内容，可适当发挥，增加一些细节，写成一篇连贯、通顺的文章；
2.文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
参考词汇：
Family members Activities
take pictures/photos 照相
paint/draw a picture 画画
sit on the grassland 坐在草地上
grandma, dad, mum, Daming, brother, sister drink/have tea 喝茶
ride a bike 骑自行车
read a book 看书
play with (toys/a pet...)玩（玩具/宠物……）
A Happy Family Day
Hi, everyone. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less homework now.
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【答案】例文
A Happy Family Day
Hi, everyone. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less homework now. So I went to the park with my
family last Sunday. Look! This is a picture of my family in the park. My father was taking pictures. My mother was
reading. My grandpa and grandma were sitting on the grass and drinking tea. The little boy who was drawing is me.
My brother was riding a bike. My sister was playing with her toys. We enjoyed ourselves in the park.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和过去进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据图片，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍周末活动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。要分别介绍每位家庭成员做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“玩得很开心”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a picture of一张……的照片
②sit on the grass坐在草地上
③enjoyed ourselves玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I feel happy because we have less homework now.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The little boy who was drawing is me.（who引导的定语从句）
Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.
【话题分析】
本单元话题是“传统经典故事”，要求同学们会缩写一个经典故事。在写作时，首先要把故事的主要
角色写出来，其次简单介绍故事发展的过程，最后写出故事的结局或蕴含的道理。注意描述故事应用一般
过去时。
【写作步骤】
1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：
总------第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。
分-------第二部分：活动内容以及提供的帮助。
总——第三部分：活动的感受。
2.人称：第一人称。
3.时态：一般将来时、一般过去时。
【典型例题】
同学们，在我国古代有很多经典的童话故事，如：愚公移山、精卫填海、女娲补天等等。你一定也听说过
《后羿射日》的故事吧！假定现在一群美国小朋友来到你们学校做客，请你用英语写一篇小短文，把《后羿射日》的故事讲给美国小朋友听听。
要点：
1. 从前，天上突然出现十个太阳。天气太热了，许多庄稼都干死了。人们不能像往常一样生活。
2. 后羿擅长射箭，天帝命令他惩罚太阳。为了拯救地球上的人，他决定射下九个太阳。
3. 后羿登上了一座大山，在那里射下九个太阳，最后一个太阳害怕了，承诺继续为大地和万物贡献光和热。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：庄稼crop；惩罚punish；为……服务/做贡献serve；箭arrow；天帝God
Hi, boys and girls! Today I’ll tell you a story named Hou Yi Shoots the Suns.
Once upon a time,
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This is the traditional Chinese story Hou Yi Shoots the Suns. Do you like it?
【高分模板】
Hi, boys and girls! Today I’ll tell you a story named Hou Yi Shoots the Suns.
Once upon a time, there were ten suns in the sky suddenly. It was so hot on earth that no crops could grow.
People had a hard life. A young man named Hou Yi was good at shooting. God asked him to punish the suns. To
save the people on earth, he decided to shoot down nine suns. Hou Yi climbed a mountain and shot down nine suns
from there. Finally, the last sun was afraid and promised to continue to give light and heat to the earth and all
things.
This is the traditional Chinese story Hou Yi Shoots the Suns. Do you like it?
【名师点评】
.题干解读：题目要求根据要点提示写一篇短文讲述《后羿射日》的故事。要求要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般过去时。可分为三段式写作：第一段引用已给出开头；
第二段介绍具体的故事内容；第三段用已给出的结尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【素材积累】
①Once upon a time，there was a very old man.从前，有一个老人。
②Yu Gong found a good way to solve his problem.愚公找到了一个解决问题的好方法。
③Yu Gong kept trying and didn't give up.愚公继续尝试，从不放弃。
④Sun Wukong can make 72 changes to his shape and size，turning himself into different animals and objects.孙
悟空能够在形状和大小上72变，把他自己变成不同的动物和物体。
⑤Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear.有时他能把金箍棒变得很小，以至于
可以放进他的耳朵里。
①The story is trying to show us that anything is possible if you work hard！这个故事尽全力向我们展示了如
果你努力了，什么事情都是有可能的。
②This story reminds us that you can never know what's possible unless you try to make it happen.这个故事提醒我们除非你尽力使它发生，否则你就不会知道什么是可能。
③Western children became interested in reading this story because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to
help the weak and never gives up.西方国家的孩子对读这个故事很感兴趣，是因为猴王为帮助弱者一直战斗
着，从不放弃。
【小试身手】
假设你是思考，你的美国笔友Lucy来信想了解曹冲称象的故事。请根据如下图片及要点提示用英语
写一封80词以上的回信给她。
内容要点：1. 回信目的；
2. 故事简介；
3. 故事给你的启示。
注意：1. 信中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
2. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 参考词汇：scale n. 称；calculate v. 计算
Dear Lucy,
I learn from your letter that…
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【思路导航】
本文要求给美国笔友回信，给她讲述曹冲称象的故事，要求写出回信的目的，结合图片提示简介故事
并要写出故事给人的启示。回信的目的和故事的启示用一般现在时态，故事简介用一般过去时态。故事按
动作先后顺序进行写作，用第三人称形式。学&科网
【佳作展示】
Dear Lucy,
I learn from your letter that you are very interested in the story of Cao Chong weighed the elephant. Let me tell you.
Once somebody sent Cao Chong’s father, Cao Cao, an elephant and he wanted to know its weight, but there wasnothing big enough to weigh it. Cao Chong told his father he could weigh the elephant if he had a big boat and a lot
of heavy stones. Cao Cao was very surprised, but he still ordered his men to get everything ready. When they led the
elephant down into the boat,the water came up,then Cao Chong marked the water line. Then they drove the elephant
onto the bank and put the heavy stones in the boat until the water came up to the same line. At last, Cao Chong told
the men to weigh the stones. In this way, he weighed the elephant.
I think Cao Chong is very clever. If we think hard before doing things, we can do them better.
Yours,
Thought
Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world？
►►►1.话题分析
本单元以 “保护动物和大自然”为核心话题, 谈论大自然及保护野生动物。该话题取材广泛, 主要以濒危
动物保护、环境保护等为谈论内容。
“Facts & Reasons & Ways”三步法谈论保护自然和动物。
Facts ：介绍自然、地理或珍稀动物的特点及现状；
Reasons ：分析问题产生的原因；
Ways：提出解决问题的方法；表明自己的观点和态度。
3.典例分析
1．近来全球环境问题引起了人们对环境保护以及动物保护的思考。作为一名中学生，我们也可以为
此做一些事。假如你是Zhang Bing，想申请加入动物保护协会，请用英文写一封加入协会的申请信，要点
如下表：
Name Zhang Bing Grade 8
Email 8360922@qq.com School Huaiwen Middle School
Free time 周末
1. 有些人不明白保护动物的重要性；
Reasons for protecting animals 2. 有些人砍伐大量的树木，……（结果）
3. 猎人们为了钱而捕杀动物，……
采取措施保护动物：
1. 应该保护环境，为动物们提供一个良好的生活空间；
Ways to protect animals
2. 建议身边人不要购买动物皮毛做成的衣服。
3. ……（自由发挥1-2句话）
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有要点，并可适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal Protection Society. First, let me introduce myself.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Bing
【答案】例文：
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal Protection Society. First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at
Huaiwen Middle School. Now, some people don’t understand the importance of protecting animals. They cut plenty
of trees for farms and buildings. This lead to less and less space for animals. Hunters kill them just for their fur and
fun.
I think it is important for people to protect animals because animals are our friends. We should do something
to protect the environment. So we can provide a good place for animals to live. We should not buy clothes that are
made of fur. Moreover, our government should made laws to prevent people from killing animals.
I can take part in activities at weekends. I will be happy if I can be a member of Animal Protection Society.
You can email me at 8360922@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Bing
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想要加入动物保护协会的意愿，并进行自我介绍；
第二步，介绍保护动物的原因；
第三步，介绍保护动物的方法；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① prevent...from阻止
② take part in参加
[高分句型]
① I think it is important for people to protect animals because animals are our friends.（because引导的原因状语
从句）
② I will be happy if I can be a member of Animal Protection Society.（if引导的条件状语从句）
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet ?【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“文学与音乐”，请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一位作家、一本书、一名歌手或一个
乐队。可先介绍想写的人，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢他/她的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或感想等，
可用到一般现在时、现在完成时。文章要层次分明，感情真挚。
【写作步骤】
(注意用现在完成时)
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时/现在完成时
首段：写出我熟悉的人或物是什么
中间:具体介绍这个人或物的基本情况
结尾:我喜欢他/它的原因
【典型例题】
写作实战举例 你所熟悉的一个作歌手
首段：开场白+点出我喜欢的歌手是谁
没有音乐，生活就是一个错误。我喜
欢听音乐，我最喜欢的歌手是周杰伦
中间:
我第一次听他的…歌手，我就爱上了 自从我第一次听他的《烟花易冷》，我就爱上了他的
他的作品。 歌。 它是如此的美妙。 在那之后，我听了很多他
的歌。 他过了几年才成名。 他在2000年发行了第
我听过他的哪些歌？
一张专辑，此后每年发行一张专辑。 许多人喜欢听
他是什么时候出名的？
他的歌，因为它们是关于我们生活的世界的。
结尾大：家为什么喜欢听他的歌？
其他（获奖情况/出版量等）
我非常我喜喜欢欢他他的的歌歌，，因因为为他他的的歌歌让使我我想起我们
生活中想许起多…重并要且的使事我情感，觉如…爱。情我，也友很谊，家庭
他们让喜我欢感他到，因舒为适他。不 仅我…也而喜且欢…他，因为他不
仅有才华，而且谦虚。
【高分模板】
Without music, life is a mistake. I like listening to music. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.
I have fallen in love with his songs, since I first listened to his song “Firework Cool Easily ”. It’s so beautiful.
After that, I have listened to many of his songs. It took him a few years to become famous. His first album was
released in 2000, and since then, he has released about one album per year. Many people enjoy listening to his
songs because they are about the world we live in.
I like his songs very much, because his songs remind me of the beauty in our life such as love, friendship,
family and they make me feel comfortable. I also like him because he is not only talented but also modest.
【素材积累】
你可能会要的句型：读书类：
The book has taught me how to face the difficulties in our life bravely/how to make friends/ how to deal with loneliness…
这本书教会了我…（如何勇敢的面对生活的困难/如何交朋友/如何面对孤独/… ）His words moved/encouraged/influenced me.
他的文字(感动/激励/影响…)我。
因为读了他的书，我…（变得更加勇敢/更加幽默/…）
Because of his book, I become braver/more humorous…
歌手类：
His music not only has beautiful melody, but also reminds us of the beauty in our life such as …
这些歌不仅有着好听的旋律，而且时刻提醒我关于生活中的美好，比如…(友情亲情爱情等)。
His album has enjoyed great success in many countries. And his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.
他的专辑在很多国家获得了成功。他的歌曲在各种年龄段都受欢迎。
When I feel sad/lonely/helpless…, I will listen to his song, which can make me refreshed.
当我觉得…(悲伤/孤独/无助)时，我会去听他的歌。因为他的歌能够使我再一次充满力量.
Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum ?
【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“有趣的地方”，该话题主要涉及曾经旅行过的旅游胜地、城市或国家等。
常见的考查角度有两个：
1.介绍某一地区(hometown)的情况(如位置、人口、面积、历史、名胜、气候、景观和美食等)，
体裁以说明文为主，时态多为一般现在时；这类文章一般包括三段。
开头是总体介绍，引出主题；
中间是正文，具体介绍此地的特色如著名的建筑、风景名胜等；
第三部分是结尾。
2.谈论自己过去到某地旅行的经历，表达曾经经历过某事
体裁以记叙文为主，时态多用一般过去时和现在完成时have ever been to…表达某人曾经去过的地方，用
一般将来时表达对将来的期望。
【典型例题】
美丽南通，魅力如皋。如皋是一座美丽的历史文化名城。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容，用英语为
如皋网站写一篇短文，向他人介绍一下美丽城市——如皋。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。
Hi! Let me introduce my hometown to you. Rugao is a famous historic and cultural city.
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【写作步骤】
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述家乡的地理位置和历史文化；
第二步：阐述家乡的过去和现在；
第三步：阐述自己的感受。
【高分模板】
Hi! Let me introduce my hometown to you. Rugao is a famous historic and cultural city. It lies in the middle of
Jiangsu Province and owns all kinds of natural resources. It has many places of interest with a long history,
attracting many visitors throughout the country. The local culture and food are also the highlights of the tourism.
In the past, Rugao was polluted heavily. Both of the sides of the street were full of rubbish, which made the
city dirty. Also, a great deal of waste pollution was poured into the rivers and lakes. But at present, many changes
have taken place in my hometown. The rivers are much clearer than before. An increasing number of plants and
animals turn up at times.
In my opinion, I feel glad to see these changes. I am firmly convinced that with our joints, my hometown will
be better and better.
【名师点评】
[亮点词汇]
①in the middle of在……中间
②all kinds of各种各样
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①It has many places of interest with a long history, attracting many visitors throughout the country.（非谓语动
词）
② Both of the sides of the street were full of rubbish, which made the city dirty.（定语从句）
③But at present, many changes have taken place in my hometown.（现在完成时态）
【素材积累】
1. 位置（location）be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to in the center of; in/to/on the east of
2. 面积(area)
cover/have an area of…; with an area of … It is …long/wide (from east to west).
3. 气候(climate)
The climate varies/is different from place to place neither too hot nor too cold
4. 交通(transportation)
It is very convenient for… The best /nearest way to … is…
It takes…to take a taxi/bus/walk from … to …
5. 人口(population)
have/with a (large) population (of…) The population of…is…
…percent of the population are…
6. 历史(history)
have/with a history of…years date from/ date back to
7. 资源(resources)
be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources be famous/well-known for/as…
mainly produce… The main agricultural products are…
8. 景色(scenery)
is known as/ is famous for/is home to places of interest
scenic spots
7. 特色(character) The place is famous for…
8.The special character of the place is… Something special in the place is…
Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
►►►1.话题分析
本单元主要围绕“生活环境"这一话题，常有两个考查角度：
1）.谈论私人物品的来历、持有的时间及喜欢的原因等;
体裁以记叙文为主，多使用第一人称，
能用现在完成时介绍某人拥有的物品，并分享其背后的特殊意义。能用现在完成时“have done”的结构来介
绍某人拥有的物品；能在现在完成时中准确区分和使用since和for
“三步法”介绍最喜欢的物品的文章：
◆第一步：基本介绍（what /who/ how long）；
◆第二步：谈论喜欢的原因(Why)；
◆第三步：写出有关美好的记忆。
2）.谈论家乡近年来的发展和变化。
时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。
“三步法”介绍某地变化的文章：
◆第一步：整体介绍；◆第二步：写出变化；
◆第三步：总结。
你的家乡在这些年里日新月异，请运用对比手法，以“Great changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇90
词左右的短文，描绘你家乡的变化。请参考表格内容：
环境 交通 通讯
过 房屋老旧；河流不干净；
道路狭窄；步行或骑自行车 联系困难
去 很少看到蓝天
现 高楼；空气新鲜；碧水蓝 火车站、飞机场投入使用；乘 联系方便：电话；
在 天；污染减少 公交车或火车 微信；QQ
将
你对家乡未来的畅想（至少一句）
来
Great changes in my hometown
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【答案】One possible version:
Great changes in my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, there used to be old houses. The rivers were very dirty. We could hardly see the blue sky. But now
there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The air is fresh, the rivers are clean and the water is clear. There is
less pollution than before.
When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportation conditions were terrible. People went to work
on foot or by bike. It took a lot of time. As time goes by, things have changed. The railway station and the airport
have been in use for several years. People usually go to work by bus or by train.
It was hard to keep in touch with others in the past. But now we can talk on the phone and chat by WeChat or
QQ.
I am glad to see that great changes have taken place in my hometown. I hope my hometown will be better and
better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍这些年家乡发生了很大的变化；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据所给信息分别从环境、交通和通讯三方面对比家乡现在和过去的不同；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家乡未来的美好畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常
②keep in touch with sb.与某人保持联系
[高分句型]
①There is less pollution than before. （there be句型）
②When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportation conditions were terrible.（when引导时间状语
从句）
③I am glad to see that great changes have taken place in my hometown. （宾语从句）
