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2023-2024 学年八年级下期末考点大串讲（人教版）
专题 10 书面表达
1．（22-23八年级下·浙江杭州·期末）
假定你是李平，收到来自英国笔友Kevin的邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复。
To: Li Ping
From: Kevin
Dear Li Ping,
How is it going? I’m really happy to tell you I’m going to Hangzhou again next month. I went to Hangzhou
once when I was young, and Hangzhou must have become better these years. So could you tell me the greatest
difference that Hangzhou has now?
By the way, what’s the weather like at that time? What clothes do you think I need to take? And where
people want to go on weekends in Hangzhou? Please tell me the reasons.
注意：（1）词数80左右，不计入总词数；
（2）回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
（3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to hear from you. Hangzhou has changed a lot. The street used to be narrow, but now it is very
wide. People pay more attention to getting around in a green way. For example, they prefer to ride a bike because it
can not only be good for the environment, but also keep healthy. You can see more buildings on both sides of the
street.
You can wear T-shirts and shorts because the weather is very hot at that time. But sometimes it rains,
remember to bring an umbrella. People like to go to West Lake on weekends because the scenery there is very
beautiful. People can relax. Sometimes people also travel to farther places, such as Shanghai, Suzhou and so on.
Because it takes only a few hours to get there because of the high-speed railways.
I hope you can enjoy yourself in Hangzhou.
Yours,
Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎朋友来杭州，介绍杭州这几年的变化情况；
第二步，介绍杭州的天气以及作者需要穿戴的衣服以及人们周末在哪里度过等；
第三步，最后希望朋友在杭州玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
① hear from收到某人的来信
② pay attention to注意
③ enjoy oneself玩得开心
[高分句型]
① You can wear T-shirts and shorts because the weather is very hot at that time.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I hope you can enjoy yourself in Hangzhou.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．（22-23八年级下·河北石家庄·期末）
假如你们学校英文杂志开办了My Hometown 栏目，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，向大家
介绍你的家乡。
提示：
1. Where is your hometown?
2. What interesting things can you do in your hometown?
3. What do you think of your hometown?
注意：
1. 短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
3. 词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My hometown
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【答案】例文
My hometown is Shijiazhuang and it’s the capital of Hebei Province. It’s a little big and also a center of
economy and culture. It includes about 18 counties and has over 11 million people around.
When people mention my hometown, they always think of different local cultures and attractive food. Peoplefrom all over the country come to visit here. They can visit some places of interest in Zhengding. Meanwhile, they
can enjoy the delicious food and snacks, like plate noodles, steamed pork dumplings and so on. If they like, they
can also climb some famous mountains around the city, such as Fenglong Mountain, Tiangui Mountain.
In a word, I think my hometown is full of energy, youth and covered with culture spirit. I hope you can visit it
sincerely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍自己的家乡，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家乡在哪里；
第二步，介绍在你的家乡可以做的有趣的事情；
第三步，介绍对家乡的看法以及希望。
[亮点词汇]
①think of想起
②places of interest名胜古迹
③in a word总的来说
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①When people mention my hometown, they always think of different local cultures and attractive food.(when引导
的时间状语从句)
②If they like, they can also climb some famous mountains around the city, such as Fenglong Mountain, Tiangui
Mountain.(if引导的条件状语从句)
3．（22-23八年级下·福建龙岩·期末）
我们在防控新冠疫情的同时要注重身体健康，良好的饮食习惯有助于人们保持健康。请你根据提示，以
“Eating and Health”为讨论的话题提出你的观点， 号召同学们重视饮食保持健康。
内容提示：
1.目前青少年学生的不健康饮食现象；
2.你对良好饮食的建议（饮食卫生，健康食品，规律饮食）。
作文要求：
1.80 个词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Now no one knows when the COVID-19 will disappear.
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【答案】例文
Now no one can know when the COVID-19 will disappear. In my opinion, healthy eating can build us up to
fight against the COVID-19. But some students don’t have healthy eating habits. They don’t have meals regularly.
These are bad eating habits.
What should we do to keep healthy? First, we should have clean food and cook in a right way. Second, we
should have more fruits, vegetables, fish, eggs and milk. They are all good to our health. They can give us energy
and keep us active. Third, eating regularly is also necessary for us.
In short, we should have healthy eating habits to fight against the COVID-19.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章开头，引出自己的观点；
第二步，介绍不健康饮食现象，并给出详细的饮食建议；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①build sb. up增强某人的体质
②eating habits饮食习惯
③keep healthy保持健康
④in a right way以正确的方式
[高分句型]
①Third, eating regularly is also necessary for us.（动名词作主语）
②In short, we should have healthy eating habits to fight against the COVID-19.（不定式表目的）
4．（22-23八年级下·河南洛阳·期末）
劳动是中华民族的传统美德。作为一名家庭成员，我们应该主动学习做些家务劳动，既能帮助父母，
又能锻炼自己。学习之余，你一定学习做过家务活吧，请以“I learned to ________”为题，根据以下要
点和要求，用英语写一篇你学做家务的短文。
1. 要点：
1）为什么要学做家务；
2）你学习做的是哪样家务，什么情况下学做的，过程怎么样；
3）通过这次学习，你有什么感悟。
2. 要求：
1）把题目补充完整；2）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3）词数90左右。
I learned to ________
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【答案】例文
I learned to cook
Do you like doing housework? I often help with the housework after school. I think parents are very tired after
a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest. I often help clean rooms, wash dishes, take away the rubbish and so
on.
Last Sunday, my mother was on duty. She went home late. So I wanted to try to make dinner. I boiled some
noodles first. Then I cut up some tomatoes and broke two eggs. Then I put them into the noodles. When my mother
came back home, I had already made two bowls of tomato and eggs noodles. My mother was surprised and happy.
She praised me. I was happy, too.
I think doing housework can not only improve our independence, but also teach us how to take care of
ourselves. It can also help us understand the meaning of happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，注意要把题目补充完整，可以适当增加细
节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，谈谈为什么要做家务；
第二步，讲述第一次学习做的是哪样家务，什么情况下学做的，过程怎么样；
第三步，抒发学习做家务的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take away扔，丢
②on duty当值，值班，值日
③make dinner做晚饭
④cut up切碎
⑤put into放进
⑥not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think parents are very tired after a day’s work.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②When my mother came back home, I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomatoes and eggs.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．（22-23八年级下·山东济宁·期末）
目前许多中学生不重视课外阅读，却把很多时间花在上网和玩手机上。请根据以下表格内容，以“I
Love Reading”为题，写一篇英语短文。
书籍是人类的好朋友；
阅读的益处 帮助我们获取知识，开阔眼界，了解世界；
让生活丰富多彩，带给我们快乐……
阅读的计划 每天花半个小时阅读；阅读各种各样的书籍；做读书笔记……
希望 业余时间多读书，读好书，……
写作要求：
（1）短文应包括表格中所有信息，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（2）语句通顺，语法正确，80—100词左右。
（3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：获取知识 get knowledge；开阔眼界open one’s eyes；做笔记take notes。
I Love Reading
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【答案】例文
I Love Reading
I love reading. Books are our real and best friends. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of
knowledge, but also we can open our eyes. Besides, it is a good way to know about the world. At the same time,
reading can make our life more colourful and more enjoyable.
As students, it’s time for us to read more. I plan to spend half an hour reading all kinds of books every day.
And I will take notes to remember what they said in the books.
All in all, I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍阅读的相关信息，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍阅读的益处；
第二步，介绍自己阅读的计划；
第三步，介绍自己的希望。[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②all kinds of各种各样的
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our eyes.(倒装句)
②I hope we should read more and better books in our spare time to improve ourselves.(宾语从句以及动词不定式
作目的状语)
6．（22-23八年级下·山东菏泽·期末）
地球是人类的家园，动物是人类的好朋友。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Protect the earth and love
animals”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁全体师生积极行动，构建人类与自然命运共同体。
参考词汇：disaster 灾害； law 法律；appeal 号召
写作要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and loving
animals..
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【答案】One possible version:
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and
loving animals.
The earth is our home, and animals are our friends. We share the same home with nature. However, we are
facing many different serious problems. People cut down trees and forests, so lots of animals have nowhere to live.Moreover, some hunters kill animals for their bones and furs to make money. Some natural disasters happen more
often than before. We should take action right away. The government should make laws to protect some wild
animals. As students, we should also plant more trees to provide them with more living areas.
In my opinion, it is important for everyone to play a part in protecting our earth. If we do nothing, there may
be few animals left. So let’s act together to protect the earth and love animals as well.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的思维导图完成写作，注意包含所有要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，引出演讲的主题是什么；
第二步，具体例举地球现在面临的问题，并给出具体的保护方法；
第三步，表达自己的观点；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②cut down trees砍伐树木
③make money赚钱
④take action right away立即采取行动
⑤provide sb with sth为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①Some natural disasters happen more often than before (比较级句型)
②In my opinion, it is important for everyone to play a part in protecting our earth. (it固定句型)
③If we do nothing, there may be few animals left.(if引导条件状语从句)
7．（22-23八年级下·河南驻马店·期末）
成长的过程中，你一定去过很多地方吧！你最喜欢什么地方呢？或许是引人入胜的博物馆，或许是风
景如画的城市等等。请你和大家分享一下吧！
1. 要点：
1）你去过什么地方；
2）你见到什么景色；
3）你有什么感受。
2. 要求：
1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
My favorite place
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【答案】例文：
My favorite place
Have you ever been to Beijing? I have been there several times. It’s really a wonderful place.
I fell in love with it when I first traveled there. One great thing is that I learned a lot about Chinese history
there. I visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, the Tiananmen Square and the Great Wall. They were
really fantastic. And there were many shopping centers. The people there were also very friendly.
I will never forget the experience of visiting Beijing. What’s more, I enjoyed Beijing’s most famous dish —
Beijing Roast Duck. I’m sure I will go to Beijing again soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述去过的地方；
第二步，描述去过的景点；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fantastic了不起的
②experience经历
③famous著名的
[高分句型]
①I fell in love with it when I first traveled there. （时间状语从句）
②And there were many shopping centers. （There be句型）
8．（22-23八年级下·山东淄博·期末）
林涛是学校“爱心俱乐部（Kind-Hearted Club）”的成员之一。请根据林涛的情况和图片的内容，用
英语写一篇字数80字左右的文章介绍林涛。
提示：
a tall boy with thick black hair, a round face, two small eyes, a smiling mouth, look strong and healthy, get on well
with..., get ready to help others, collect rubbish...Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club.
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【答案】例文
Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club. He is a tall boy with thick black hair. He has a round
face, two small eyes and a smiling mouth. He looks strong and healthy. He is kind-hearted and gets on well with
everyone. He always gets ready to help others. For example, he often helps his classmates with the lessons, helps
old people cross the road. When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need. To protect the
environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends. Lin Tao is a good student. We
should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所示图片完成写作，不能遗漏信息；以第三人称为主，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍林涛的外貌；
第二步，介绍林涛的性格和品质；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①kind-hearted 好心的
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③in need 需要帮助的
[高分句型]
①When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②To protect the environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends.（动词不定式
表目的）9．（22-23八年级下·河北唐山·期末）
中学时期是人生中很关键的一段旅程，青少年不仅要学习文化知识，为未来做准备，而且对亲情、友
情逐渐有了自己的认知，更想要让自己每天的生活过得精彩。请以“How to make middle school life
wonderful”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的学业规划以及如何处理与父母、朋友的关系，再谈一谈
业余时间你真正想做的事。
要点：
1. Your study plan;
2. A good relationship with parents and friends;
3. What to do in your free time. （volunteer; hobby…）
要求：
1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右，不能使用真实的人名、地名，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to make middle school life wonderful
Middle school life is an important period in life.
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【答案】例文
How to make middle school life wonderful
Middle school life is an important period in life. Firstly, we students should make a study plan, learn more
cultural knowledge, and prepare for the future. We need to finish our homework on time and read as much as
possible. Secondly, we should keep a good relationship with our parents and friends. When there are trouble and
pressure, we can share our feelings with our parents or friends. Thirdly, we should also use our spare time to
develop hobbies, such as painting, singing, or do some volunteer work to enrich ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，根据所给的提示信息，以“How to make middle school life wonderful”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一
谈你的学业规划以及如何处理与父母、朋友的关系，再谈一谈业余时间你真正想做的事。
[亮点词汇]
①make a study plan制定学习计划②prepare for准备
③as much as possible尽可能多的
④share…with与……分享
⑤do some volunteer work做一些志愿者工作
[高分句型]
①When there are trouble and pressure, we can share our feelings with our parents or friends.（when引导的时间
状语从句）
②Thirdly, we should also use our spare time to develop hobbies, such as painting, singing, or do some volunteer
work to enrich ourselves.（such as举例说明）
10．（22-23八年级下·河南信阳·期末）
假如你是王丹，你的英国朋友Linda邀请你暑假去她居住的城市伦敦旅游，但你已制定了暑假计划，
不能前往。请你给她写一封电子邮件，说明你不能前往的原因，并简要介绍你的假期活动。
要求：
1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2.100词左右，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Linda,
I’m glad that you invited me to visit your city. But I have to say I can’t go because I already have a holiday
plan.
First, I will go to a summer camp in Shanghai. There I will take some English classes to improve my listening
and speaking ability. Second, I will go back to my hometown to visit my grandparents. I don’t have time to visit
them on school days, so I plan to spend half a month with them.
Anyway, thank you again. I hope to visit London next time. And best wishes to you.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生可按照提示内容“不能前往伦敦旅游的原因、介绍自己的假期计划”完成
邮件，要注意正确用词，使得邮件表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达很开心收到邀请，但因已有假期计划，所以不能应邀；
第二步，介绍自己的假期计划；第三步，表达感谢，并表达“下次去伦敦游玩”的期望，最后表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① have to 不得不
② listening and speaking ability 听说能力
③ go back to 返回到某个地方
④ plan to do sth. 计划做某事
⑤ spend time with sb. 与某人共度时光
[高分句型]
① But I have to say I can’t go because I already have a holiday plan.（because引导原因状语从句）
② There I will take some English classes to improve my listening and speaking ability.（动词不定式作目的状
语）
③ I don’t have time to visit them on school days, so I plan to spend half month with them.（so表结果）
11．（21-22八年级下·浙江金华·期末）
暑假即将来临，为了丰富学生们的假期生活，你校团委组织了“双减”下的社团活动，活动安排如下
表。假如你是Li Hua，你的外国朋友Tony想了解你的社团选择情况，请你给他写一封邮件，选择一个你喜
欢的社团，并说明理由。
Name Art Club Sports Club
Learn singing,dancing,painting,… Learn running, swimming,…
Activity Talk with some artists Practice with the best coach in our school
Enjoy some art shows Take part in some matches
... ...
注意：
1.文中必须包含所要求的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~100：
4.邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,You asked me about my club activities. There are many clubs in our school. I am a member of the Sports Club.
Let me tell you something about it.
As a middle school student, I think it is important to be healthy. That’s why I joined it.
We have many sports activities. For example, we can learn running, swimming and so on. Besides, we can
practice with the best coach in our school. It’s meaningful to take part in some matches, which are good for our
body and make our school life more colorful.
Thanks for the club, I am better at study and sports now.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节，突出写作重心。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己加入的社团及加入原因；
第二步，介绍该社团的相关活动；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②take part in参加
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①There are many clubs in our school.（there be句型）
② It’s meaningful to take part in some matches, which are good for our body and make our school life more
colorful.（it固定句型和which引导的非限定性定语从句）
12．（21-22八年级下·山东济宁·期末）
成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长、一个朋友等，你也曾经经历过很多事情，如一次比赛、
一项活动等，这些人与事或多或少改变了你，让你变成更好的自己。请选择其中某件事或某个人，以
“_______ has changed me”为题，写一篇80—100词的短文。（注意短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它
相关信息。）
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【答案】例文Being a volunteer has changed me
I’ve been a volunteer for two years. It has changed me so much.
There are lots of volunteers around us now. And they don’t do volunteer work for money. They do it only for
happiness. I’ve tried my best to help others. I’ve helped the old people in the old people’s home. I’ve cleaned the
floor and done chores, because I think the old people are too old to do the housework by themselves. What’s more,
I’ve sung songs to bring happiness to the old people.
Being a volunteer has changed me because it makes me a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍使自己成长或改变的经历，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍是什么改变了自己；
第二步，具体阐述该事件或经历的过程；
第三步，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
②too... to...太……以至于不能……
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I think the old people are too old to do the housework by themselves.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Being a volunteer has changed me because it makes me a better person.（动名词短语作主语）
13．（21-22八年级下·山东淄博·期末）
假如你昨天参加了一个小学同学聚会，发现你的同学李辉变化很大。请你根据表格中的提示写一篇英语短
文，谈谈李辉的变化。
过去 现在
他过去害羞。
他现在外向。
他不喜欢做运
他喜欢游泳，打篮球。
动。
要求：
1. 包括以上内容要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯通畅。
2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Among my classmate in the primary school, Li Hui has changed a lot.
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Among my classmate in the primary school, Li Hui has changed a lot.
He has changed a lot. He used to be shy, but now he is quite outgoing. He likes telling jokes very much. When
we were in the primary school, he didn’t like playing sports. However, he is strong and tall now. He likes to swim
and play basketball. He is even on the school basketball team. How cool he is! He used to be weak in English. Now,
he is good at English. The other day, he took part in an English speech contest, and won the first prize. He is so
popular now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍李辉的变化，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格中的提示详细介绍李辉过去和现在的情况，适当增加细节。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②on the school basketball team在校篮球队
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①He used to be shy, but now he is quite outgoing.(but引导的并列句)
②When we were in the primary school, he didn’t like playing sports.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③How cool he is!(感叹句)
14．（21-22八年级下·河南商丘·期末）
最近你们班打算举办一次以“A fun city I’ve ever been to”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假设你想参加这次演
讲比赛，请你根据以下要点和要求，准备一篇演讲稿。
(1)要点：
1)你去过这个城市几次；
2)你游览过这个城市的哪些景点；
3)你对这个城市的印象。
(2)要求：
1)语句通顺，条理清晰；
2)包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
A fun city I’ve ever been to
Hi, boys and girls! Today I want to share my experience in
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文：
A fun city I’ve ever been to
Hi, boys and girls! Today I want to share my experience in Hangzhou with you.
I have ever been there three times. I fell in love with this beautiful city when I first traveled there. There are
many interesting places in the city. I once took a boat to watch the beautiful West Lake. I also had a look at the
music fountain. But I liked the Hangzhou Amusement Park best. It is a theme park with many special activities. I
spent an exciting and happy time there. I really like this city for its special beauty.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括次数，景点以及对城市的印象，注意不要有遗漏，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，即介绍自己去杭州的旅行经历；
第二步，具体介绍此次旅行，包括去杭州的次数，去了哪些景点，自己的感受和对这座城市的印象；
第三步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上……
②take a boat乘船
③have a look看一看
[高分句型]
①I fell in love with this beautiful city when I first traveled there.（when的引导时间状语从句）
②There are many interesting places in the city.（there be句型表示“某地有某物”）
15．（21-22八年级下·山东滨州·期末）
时光飞逝，初中学习生活已经过去两年了。在这两年中，自己变化了许多，在学习和生活中取得了很
大的进步, 请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇短文来描述自己两年来的成长。短文应包括以下内
容：
1. 生活方面：更加独立，能自己解决许多问题;
2. 学习方面：意识到学习的重要性;
3. 与人交往方面：更善解人意，与父母，老师，同学的关系更好。
要求：1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分;4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How I have changed
How time flies! It has been two years since I came to the middle school. I have changed a lot.
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【答案】例文：
How I have changed
How time flies! It has been two years since I came to the middle school. I have changed a lot.
Firstly, I have become more independent and I can deal with a lot of problems by myself. Secondly, I have
realized the importance of study. Now my grades are getting better and better. Thirdly, I am more understanding,
especially to my parents. I think it is not easy for my parents to serve the family. And I get along better with my
teachers and classmates. My classmates and I often help each other.
I am sure that I can be better and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题属于材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点和开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的关键信息，适当发挥。写作时，围绕
主题，准确使用词汇，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，引出本文的重点“我改变了许多”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从生活、学习、与人交往几个方面进行阐述；
第三步，书写结语，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
① more independent更加独立
②by myself独自
③deal with处理
④better and better越来越好
⑤get along better with与某人相处得好
[高分句型]
①Now my grades are getting better and better.（比较级+and+比较级句型）
②I think it is not easy for my parents to serve the family.（宾语从句）
16．（22-23八年级下·福建龙岩·期末）
为了弘扬中华传统服饰文化，同时也为了迎接汉服节的到来，你校于上周五举办了“校园汉服日”活
动。假如你是校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下表格写一篇短文，报道此次活动。Time 8:00 a.m.~11:00 a.m., last Friday
Place In the school hall
校
园
Learning about history, styles and materials of hanfu;
汉
Watching hanfu shows;
Activities
服
Singing and dancing;
日
…
Feeling …
注意事项：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数，80词左右；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
To make more students know about Chinese hanfu culture, our school held a meaningful activity last Friday.
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【答案】例文
To make more students know about Chinese hanfu culture, our school held a meaningful activity last Friday.
Let’s learn more about it.
The activity was held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am. First, by listening to a speech, students
learned about the history, styles as well as the materials of hanfu. Then, the wonderful hanfu fashion show began.
The costumes were so attractive that students watched with all their eyes. Great singing and dancing went
afterwards. The activity ended with a game. The students enjoyed themselves so much that they all forgot to leave.
In short, the activity not only helped students learn more about Chinese culture but also brought them great
fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍学校举办的“校园汉服日”活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍“校园汉服日”活动的时间、地点以及具体的活动；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as和
②end with以……结束③in short总之
[高分句型]
①The activity was held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am. First, by listening to a speech, students
learned about the history, styles as well as the materials of hanfu.(动名词作宾语)
②The costumes were so attractive that students watched with all their eyes.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
17．（22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期末）
假如你是阳光中学的学生李华，为帮助贫困山村的学生，你校举办了“Your kindness matters”的主题慈
善活动。请你根据以下图文要点提示和要求，写一篇英文短文来介绍此次活动并分享你的感受。
要求:
（1）80 — 100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：
central square 中心广场；charity sale 义卖
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School
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【答案】例文
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School held a charity activity with the theme of
“Your kindness matters” in the central square of our school on May 30th. Our event mainly accepted everyone to
donate books and raised money for them. We also accepted clean clothes. In the activity, some of our students
performed singing and dancing. Through this activity, we not only felt the joy of helping others, but also made us
understand the hardships of life. We should cherish the good life now and study hard.
【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍本次活动的目的、主题、地点和时间；
第二步，具体介绍本次活动的内容，例如鼓励大家捐书、捐钱、捐衣服等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达参加此次活动的感受，例如帮助他人使人快乐；让我们理解了生活的不易；我
们应该珍惜现在的生活并且好好学习等。
[亮点词汇]
① in the central square在中央广场
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ make sb do 使某人做某事
④ the hardships of life 生活的艰辛
⑤ cherish 珍惜
⑥ study hard 努力学习
[高分句型]
① Our event mainly accepted everyone to donate books and raised money for them.（and连接两个并列句）
② Through this activity, we not only felt the joy of helping others, but also made us understand the hardships of
life.（not only...but also...句型）
18．（22-23八年级下·浙江宁波·期末）
假设你是英语报的编辑Li Hua. 校报“Mr. Helper’s Column”收到初中生Alice的求助短信。短信中她提
到了自己最近遇到了些问题。请你根据以下她提到的问题写一封回信，在信中给她合理的建议，帮助她走
出困境。
Alice’s problems Advice
1. Feel lonely 1. Make more friends, …
2. Poor grades 2 …
3. Argue with parents 3 …
注意：
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有内容;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 80词左右;
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having some problems.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having some problems. You say you often argue with your parents. That’s
because your parents are always asking you to study and you don’t have enough time to do the things you love. If
you talk to your parents, you can understand each other. Your grades are poor. You should study hard. If you meet
with problems, you should ask your teacher or classmates for help in time. You say you still feel lonely, I think you
should make more friends with others. You can also take part in some activities and learn to communicate with
others.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，信件开头表达对爱丽丝遇到问题的遗憾或同情心情，常用句式为I’m sorry to hear that…；
第二步，介绍爱丽丝遇到的问题，具体问题具体分析，对症下药，给出适当的建议；
最后一步，表达个人对爱丽丝的美好祝愿或期望。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with sb.和某人争吵
②be always doing sth.总是做某事
③ask sb. for help寻求某人帮助
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①That’s because your parents are always asking you to study and you don’t have enough time to do the things you
love.（because引导表语从句）
②If you meet with problems, you should ask your teacher or classmates for help in time.（If引导条件状语从句）
19.（22-23八年级下·江苏南通·期末）
八年级的学习生活即将结束，学校正在进行最佳共青团员 Communist Youth League member选拔，你作
为代表推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人。根据以下信息，写一封推荐信给学校
团支部。
理想远大 热爱祖国；热爱共青团，……品质优秀 善良诚实；举止文明，……
学业优良 成绩优秀；兴趣广泛，……
能力超强 组织志愿者活动；积极参赛，成功获奖。
注意：1.词数 90词左右。 文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。.
2.省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear chairperson,
I would like to recommend Liu Ming, our monitor, as the best Communist Youth League member.
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___ I think Liu Ming is the best Communist Youth League member.I hope you agree with me.Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear chairperson,
I would like to recommend Liu Ming, our monitor, as the best Communist Youth League member. He loves his
country and the Communist Youth League. He is very kind and honest. He has good manners. He has excellent
grades and a wide range of interests. He is good at sports and music. He’s super capable. He often organizes
volunteer activities in his spare time. He also actively participated in various competitions and successfully won
many awards.
I think that Liu Ming is a good candidate for the Communist League. I hope you agree with me.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为推荐信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳
共青团员候选人的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你作为代表推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人”来引
出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、学业、能力等”几个方面重点介绍你推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming
作为最佳共青团员候选人的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望你同意我的看法”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend…as…推荐……为……；
②be good at擅长；③in one’s spare time在某人的业余时间；
④participate in参加。
[高分句型]
①I would like to recommend Liu Ming, our monitor, as the best Communist Youth League member. (动词不定式
作宾语)
②I think that Liu Ming is a good candidate for the Communist League. (that引导宾语从句)
20.（22-23八年级下·河南南阳·期末）
假如你是李华，你校将于下周五上午举办“国际美食节”活动。你打算邀请Peter参加。请你结合以
下图示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他具体时间、地点、活动安排，以及活动的益处。
要求：1）根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数100左右（首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to the International Food Festival. We will hold it on the playground
next Friday morning. There will be many different kinds of activities, such as making delicious food. We can taste
and sell food here. I think the Food Festival can give us a way to develop good eating habits. Also, we can raise
money, enjoy many kinds of delicious food and make our school life more colorful.
Come and have great fun with us during the International Food Festival.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山表明邀请对方参加国际美食节；
第二步，从美食节举办的时间、地点、活动、益处等方面具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②a way to do做……的方式
③have fun玩得开心
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There will be many different kinds of activities.(there be句型的一般将来时)
②Come and have great fun with us during the International Food Festival.(祈使句)
21.（21-22八年级下·河北承德·期末）
我们在世界上最亲的人是父母。他们给予我们生命，含辛茹苦抚养我们长大。请根据下面的提示以
“Care for our parents”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：（1）What do your parents do for you?
（2）What do you want your parents to do to keep healthy?
（3）What will you do for your parents
注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
Care for our parents
Our dear parents love us more than anybody else in the world. As their children, how should we care for them?
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【答案】Possible versions
Care for our parents
Our dear parents love us more than anybody else in the world. As their children, how should we care for them?
They have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so they are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep
healthy, they should do more exercise. They shouldn’t stay up late so that they can get enough sleep. They shouldalso eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we
should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not
to make them worry about us.
We love our parents!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出我们要关心父母并指出父母为我们付出的情况；
第二步，具体介绍我们应该从哪些方面关爱父母；
第三步，最后表达对父母的爱。
[亮点词汇]
① care for照顾，关心；
② stay up late熬夜；
③ get on well with sb和某人相处的好；
[高分句型]
① They shouldn’t stay up late so that they can get enough sleep.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
② Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.（动名词作主语）
22．（22-23八年级下·河北唐山·期末）
假如你是中国野生动物保护协会（CWCA）的成员，请你根据以下内容提示，以“Whales in Danger”为题，
用英语写一篇文章，呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。
内容包括：
1. 简单介绍鲸鱼习性（food, place, interesting things…）
2. 分析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因（至少2点）（in danger, kill, eat, pollution…）
3. 提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法（至少3点）（make rules, know, stop…）
Whales in Danger
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【答案】参考范文：
Whales in Danger
Whales are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that
whales can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is that they can sing beautiful songs.On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. On the other
hand, whales are also in danger because of water pollution.
We should protect whales by not putting rubbish into the sea and making rules on whale protection. What’s
more, we are supposed to stop killing them. As students, we should learn more about them.
Take actions now! We need to hold together to protect whales.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写
作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍鲸鱼习性；
第二步，析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因；
第三步，最后提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①On one hand...On the other hand一方面……另一方面
②because of因为
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water.（that引导的表语从句）
②On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. （because引
导的原因状语从句）
23．（22-23八年级下·河南洛阳·期末）
你还记得你第一次成功完成某件事情的经历吗？这份与众不同的经历，一定在你的脑海里留下了深刻的印
象。请你以“My first time to ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历并谈谈你的感受。
要点：
1）你完成了什么事；
2）你是如成功完成这件事的；
3）完成这件事后，你的感受是什么。
要求：
1）请补全标题，如：play the guitar, do housework, cook, ride a bike等；
2）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3）词数 100 左右。
My first time to ________
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【答案】例文
My first time to swim
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time when I learned to
swim.
Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. He agreed. So I went to
the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of staying in the water. And I
felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began
to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move and how to
stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn how to swim.
I felt quite happy. What an unforgettable experience it was!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明难忘的事件；
第二步，具体阐述如何完成这事件；
第三步，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②stretch out伸出
[高分句型]
①I still remember the first time when I learned to swim.（when引导的定语从句）
②It took me about four hours to learn how to swim.（不定式作主语）
24．（22-23八年级下·广东广州·期末）
上周你和你的同学们参加了志愿者服务活动。你准备向校报投稿，介绍你们的活动经历，鼓励更多同
学积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文进行投稿。
At school…
Voluntary work In the old people’s home…
…
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数 80词左右（短文的开头已给出, 不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。My classmates and I took part in some voluntary activities last week and I would like to share them with
you._________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
My classmates and I took part in some voluntary activities last week and I would like to share them with you.
We helped clean up at school and hand out leaflets to let students take care of the environment. We also helped
some grade students with their studies.
Then in the afternoon we went to the old people’s home. We helped them wash clothes and cook. They told us
some stories about their time. We also told them some interesting stories.
Although we were tired, we were happy. If I have the chance, I will take part in such activity again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在学校的志愿活动；
第二步，介绍在敬老院的志愿活动；
第三步，总结并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②leaflet传单
③interesting有趣的
[高分句型]
①Although we were tired, we were happy. （让步状语从句）
②If I have the chance, I will take part in such activity again.（条件状语从句）
25．（22-23八年级下·山东临沂·期末）
暑假即将来临，学校发起了“A Meaningful Summer Vacation”的主题征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据
下表信息用英语写一篇短文用于投稿，分享你的建议并说明理由。
Suggestions Reasons
do some sports keep healthy
help with housework learn to be independent
work as a volunteer help others
… …
要求：1. 字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确；
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，可以作出适当发挥；
3. 信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
4. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数。
Summer vacation is coming. To have a meaningful vacation, I have some suggestions.
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【答案】例文：
Summer vacation is coming. To have a meaningful vacation, I have some suggestions.
For us, during this coming summer vacation, we can do some sports because they make us keep healthy. We
can help with housework because it helps us learn to be independent. We can work as volunteers. We can help
others, clean up the city parks and visit the sick kids in hospital. I think it is our duty to make our world a better
place to live in and it will also bring me a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I am sure we will have a wonderful and meaningful summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，给即将到来的暑假提出一些建议。
第二步，介绍自己的建议及原因。
第三步，总结全文，提出愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清扫
②a strong feeling of satisfaction强烈的满足感
③have a wonderful and meaningful summer vacation度过一个美好而有意义的暑假
[高分句型]
①We can do some sports because they make us keep healthy. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it is our duty to make our world a better place to live in. (it作形式主语)
26．（22-23八年级下·江苏泰州·期末）
你们学校一直倡导“环保生活，从我做起”，准备成立学校志愿服务队(voluntary team)，招募学生环
保志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英语给服务队的负责人写一封电子邮件，申请成为其中一员。
内容包括：
1. What do you think of going green?2. What action do you usually take to go green?
3. What will you do to spread（传播）the idea of going green if your are in the team?
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to join the school voluntary team to help protect our
environment. In my opinion, going green plays a very important role in our life.
In my daily life, I often try my best to reduce pollution. For example, I always remember to take my own bags
when shopping instead of plastic bags. As we all know, it may take a plastic bag hundreds of years to break down.
What’s more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and turn
off the lights when I leave a room. I also plant flowers at home to live a green life.
If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things
and take part in all kinds of activities.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明准备学校成立志愿服务队，招募学生环保志愿者。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的看法、自己的做法以及怎样传播绿色环保理念”三方面来叙述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期待。[亮点词汇]
①environment环境
②pollution污染
③as well all know众所周知
④hundreds of成百的
[高分句型]
①If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things
and take part in all kinds of activities.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and
turn off the lights when I leave a room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
27．（22-23八年级下·江苏扬州·期末）
八（1）班的同学将举行演讲比赛。演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是
David，请准备100字左右的演讲稿参加比赛，具体内容如下：
过去 现在
学习 很少阅读 花时间读书，读书使我放松，因为……
环保 没有意识到环保的重要性 节约用电、用水的方式各举 1例
礼仪 等公交时插队 ……
爱心 零用钱用在零食、电脑游戏上 ……
展望未
越来越好……
来
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. I'm David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot
and made great progress in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lotand made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I spend a lot of time reading. Because reading can help me
relax. Second, I didn’t realize the importance of protecting the environment. Now I try to reduce air pollution by
riding a bike. I save water by taking shorter showers. I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room.
Third, I used to cut in line when I waited for a bus. Now I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus. Fourth,
I used to spend my pocket money on snacks and computers games. But now I donate my pocket money to the
children in poor areas.
I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写
作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，从学习、环保、礼仪、爱心方面叙述过去和现在的变化；
第三步，最后展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing花时间做
②the importance of……的重要性
③cut in line插队
[高分句型]
I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
28．（22-23八年级下·山东滨州·期末）
某英语网站正在举办以“Reading”为题的英语征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，向该网
站投稿。提示：
1.读书有哪些好处？
2.中学生可以读哪些书？
3.你的读书计划是什么？
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。文章的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
Reading
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【答案】例文：
Reading
Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open
our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more.
In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials.
As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes,
reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中关于“读书”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突
出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明读书有好处。读书不仅可以放松身心，还可以开阔思想；
第二步，推荐适合中学生的书籍。教科书、报纸和杂志都是好的阅读材料；
第三步，我的读书计划。我计划每个月读一本书，并且号召大家从现在开始阅读。
【亮点词汇】①play an important role in...在……中扮演重要角色
②open one’s mind开阔思想
③in one’s opinion依某人来看
④as for至于，关于
【高分句型】①Whenever I have free time, I’ll read.（whenever引导时间状语从句）
②As the saying goes, reading makes a full man.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
29．（22-23八年级下·河北唐山·期末）
同学们，在我们的生活中一定会有自己去过并喜欢的场所，给我们带来许多快乐和收获。请介绍一个
你喜欢的场所。
内容提示:
（1）Where have you ever been?
（2）What did you do there?
（3）What’s your expectation（期待）for it?
要求:
（1）文章须包括所有提示内容。可适当发挥。
（2）文中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。
（3）书写清楚、规范, 卷面整洁。
（4）不少于60字。
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【答案】例文I had always been looking forward to diving in the sea. Today, I together with my parents, went diving around
the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have ever done. I
preferred the scenic diving because it was less challenging and I love sea animals. With my instructor guiding, we
managed to reach the sport, where we came across thousands of grey seals that live on the island all year. At first, I
was so scared fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were harmless. The seal just gently
touched me with its body as if to hug me. The world here was so quiet as if time had stopped.
Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it
was the most unforgettable experience. I will come here again when I have time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己曾经去过哪里；
第二步，讲述自己在那里做的活动；
第三步，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期待
②for the first time第一次
③as if似乎
[高分句型]
①Today, I together with my parents, went diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which
became the most exciting thing that I have ever done.（定语从句）
②I preferred the scenic diving because it was less challenging and I love sea animals.（because引导原因状语从
句）
30．（22-23八年级下·山东青岛·期末）
作为一名学生，在和同学们的朝夕相处中，你们之间难免会有争执，你是如何处理和他/她的关系呢？
请根据以下提示和要求，用英文写篇文章描述你的经历及感受。
内容提示问题：
1. Have you ever argued with your classmate?
2. Why did you argue with him/her?
3. What did you do to deal with the problem?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
5. How can you get on well with your classmates?
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。
3. 字数：100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）As a student, it is interesting for us to study together, play together, there are often some arguments among the
classmates.
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【答案】例文
As a student, it is interesting for us to study together, play together, there are often some arguments among the
classmates. And it is also meaningful to get along well with our classmates in the school.
However, there are often some arguments among the classmates. Lisa is my best friend. A month ago, I argued
with her. It was Sunday, I went to the movies with her as usual. Then we went to a restaurant. I wanted to have a big
meal. But Lisa thought I ordered too much. Her words made me very angry, so I left the restaurant alone. Later, I
realized that what I did was wrong. We shouldn’t waste any food. So I called Lisa to say sorry to her. Lisa said it
wasn’t a big deal and we became close friends again.
I was very happy. From this incident, I understand that if we want to get along well with others, we should
communicate in time and take the initiative to admit our mistakes when we encounter problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏主要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的经历，重点从“起争执的原因以及如何解决问题”来讲述这样的一个经历；
第三步，表达自己吸取的经验以及如何跟朋友相处。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb.与某人相处得好
②as usual通常
③incident事件
④communicate交流
[高分句型]
①And it is also meaningful to get along well with our c lassmates in the school.（it作形式主语）
②From this incident, I understand that if we want to get along well with others, we should communicate in time
and take the initiative to admit our mistakes when we encounter problems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
