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05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
05.申请信(实践与职业)(教师版)_新人教八下资料包_35赠送其它_八年级英语下册(人教版)_写作万能模板与题型通-U51_写作万能模板与题型通关
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05.申请信(实践与职业) 写作类型分析 初中八年级英语有关申请信(实践与职业)的应用文写作主题,旨在通过模拟真实职 业场景中的申请过程,培养学生功能性表达能力及核心职业素养。这一写作主题紧贴学生 未来生活和职业发展需求,引导学生了解并掌握申请信的基本结构和写作技巧。在写作实 践中,学生需考虑申请职位的具体要求、个人条件的匹配度以及如何通过语言表达自己的 意愿和优势。同时,通过模拟不同职业场景,如申请志愿者工作、实习机会或学校社团职 位等,学生能够锻炼逻辑思维、信息整合及书面沟通能力,为将来的职业生涯奠定坚实基 础。总之,这一写作主题不仅提升了学生的英语写作技能,更促进了他们对未来职业道路 的规划与思考。 【结构分析】 结构要素 功能描述 常用表达 示例 明确收件人身 Dear [职位负责人名/团队 ‌称呼‌ Dear Library Manager 份 名称] 简要说明身份 I'm Lily from Class 8A applying for ‌自我介绍‌ I'm... writing to apply for... 与写信目的 the Summer Camp Assistant. 解释为何对该 I love organizing books and helping ‌申请原因‌ I love... / I want to help... 职位感兴趣 classmates. ‌相关技 列举2-3项匹配 I have experience in... / I I helped sort 300 books in our school 能/经验‌ 能力 can... library last month. 表达希望得到 I would appreciate... / ‌礼貌请求‌ Please email me at lily@school.com. 回复的意愿 Please contact me... ‌结尾敬语‌ 正式结束信件 Sincerely, / Best regards, Yours‌sincerely, /Lily Chen 【范文示例】‌ Dear Mr‌Lin, I’m Tom from Sunshine Middle School, writing to apply for the Museum Guide Volunteer position. I’ve loved history since visiting the Terracotta Warriors exhibit last year. As class monitor, I often explain homework to classmates, which improved my communication skills. Last month, I created a Qin Dynasty timeline poster that won our history fair. Attached is my design. I’m available every Saturday afternoon. Please send‌an‌email(tom@school.com)‌to‌me‌if‌I am‌qualified. Thank you for considering my application! Yours‌incerely, Tom Li结构表达分析 词句应用分析 如何申请加入学校活动俱乐部 ‌写作方法‌ ‌作用‌ ‌例句‌ ‌自我介绍定位‌ 明确申请人身份 I’m Li Hua from Class 3B.(八年级学生需标明班级) When I saw your moon photos at the school gate, my camera ‌兴趣起源故事‌ 展现真诚动机 started trembling!(形象化兴趣触发点) ‌技能特长举证‌ 证明胜任能力 I’ve used my grandpa’s Nikon camera to film three squirreldocumentaries. (用数据量化经验) 说明对社团的了解 I can help photograph club events, and learn editing from 阐述个人贡献‌ 和贡献意愿 seniors. (体现互利思维) 符合年龄的语言特 ‌语言表达修辞‌ My camera started trembling"(拟人化设备表达兴奋) 色 【参考范文】 Dear Photography Club Leaders, I’m Li Hua from Class 3B. When I saw your moon photos at the school gate, my camera started trembling! Last year I borrowed my grandpa’s Nikon camera to film three squirrel documentaries in the school forest. Your "Light Hunters" club poster says members share shooting skills every Friday. I can help photograph basketball games for the school website, and I really want to learn how to edit star trails like in your gallery. Please see my best squirrel photo attached. I’ll practice night shooting every weekend if accepted! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【提升练习】 1.阳光中学野生生物保护俱乐部‌(Wildlife Protection Club) 将选举新主席,假如你 是Wang Mei,请根据下表所给的信息提示,写一封申请信。 1.八年级学生; 2.品质; 个人简介 3.兴趣和爱好; 4.最喜欢的季节及理由; 1.热爱自然,对动、植物了解很多; 2.动物正处于危险中‌,因为……(至少一点)认为必须理解保护动物的重 推荐理由 要性,使它们远离危险; 3.星期天整体有空; 计划 加入协会后,将会采取什么措施。(至少两点措施) 联系方式 电话:15861066666 电子邮箱:992876599@qq.com 注意:1.表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥; 2.词数100左右,开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; 3.表达中请勿出现真实校名及姓名。 Dear Sir/Madam, _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __ Yours sincerely, Wang Mei 2.近年来,世界多地自然灾害频发,引发了全球对环境保护的思考。青少年应树立 环保意识和人类命运共同体的理念,为环保尽自己的一份力。假如你是阳光中学初二的学 生Millie,请用英文写一封加入环境保护协会的申请信,表达你对环境保护的思考与责任 意识,要点如下表: 要求: 1.语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整; 2.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Chairperson, I would like to join the Environment Protection Society. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Millie 3.“双减政策”推行后,中学生的课外生活丰富多彩。寒假即将来临,学校将举办 2025冬令营研学活动。假如你是李华,你想参加本次的研学活动,请根据以下信息写一封 申请信。 基本信息 男;15岁;八年级学生;健康又强壮。 个性 诚实友好;乐于助人。 爱好 兴趣广泛……;痴迷于‌DIY。 热爱自然,对动植物了解很多…… 其他 最喜欢的季节是冬季,因为…… 梦想 ……(适当发挥) 要求: 1.词数80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to join our school field trip this winter holiday. Let me introduce myself. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________ I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 4.假如你是‌Anna,你想加入学校社团,请你根据宣传海报的要求,给负责人 Mr. Smith写一封入社申请,并就如何让社团变得更好提出你的建议或计划。 要求: 1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; 2. 词数:100词左右,文章首尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr.Smith, I’m Anna from Class 3, Grade 8.I’d like to join.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Anna 5.古晋是阳光中学的一名中学生,今年寒假他想参加学校组织的冬令营,需要提交 一封申请信。请结合下图的信息提示,用英语帮他写一封申请信。要求: 1.要点齐全,省略号部分适当补充; 2.文中请勿提及真实的校名及姓名; 3.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 词汇提示: experience 经历 Dear Chairperson, I would like to join the Winter Camp. I am a student in Grade 8. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Winter Camp. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Y ours faithfully, Gu Jin 6.假设你是李华,你班决定这个周日去当地养老院,进行帮助老人的志愿活动,请 根据以下提示给班主任陈老师写封申请信。 1.活动目的:关爱老人,给老年人送去温暖和关怀。 2.活动计划:给老人送去鲜花和水果;帮助他们打扫卫生;给他们表演唱歌跳舞等节目。 3.希望得到老师的批准和支持。要求,词数80-100可以适当增加细节,以使行交连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________ 7.假如你是王伟,你在学校的公告栏处看到一则志愿者招募的通告。请根据招聘信息,写 一份申请,词数80左右,开头已给出(不计词数)。 Volunteers WantedAre you free next weekend? Some guests from Canada will visit our school. We need some volunteers. Would you like to join us? What are your interests and hobbies? How can these help you to do the volunteer job? Why do you want to do the volunteer work? Please e-mail us at Interdepart@163.com before April 20th. International Department Dear Sir or Madam, I'd like to be a volunteer._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ 8.澳大利亚某校(an Australian school)的部分师生将要来你校访问。学校英语社团正 在招募志愿者承担接待工作:带他们参观校园、向他们介绍潍坊文化(Weifang culture)或者 带领他们游览潍坊。 假如你是李华,请给英语社团负责人Tony写一封申请信,说明你愿意承担哪一项工 作,为什么能胜任这项工作,以及你具体打算做什么。80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计 入总词数。 Dear Tony, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 9.学校志愿者协会招募新成员,打算在寒假期间到市儿童医院组织志愿者活动。你 决定去做志愿者。请你根据以下表格内容,以李华的名义写一封申请信。可结合自己的实 际适当增加细节。词数要求80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名,校名和老师名,否则不给分。 Name Li Hua Class Class 5, Grade 8 Reasons to join the volunteer group Like helping others, love kids… Hobbies Singing, dancing, telling stories… Dear Chairman, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ I hope you will let me join the volunteer group. I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua10.假如你是李华,学校英语周报需开设“人与自然”专栏,现面向全校招募专栏 记者。请你根据提示,用英语写一封申请信。 个人信息 阳光中学,八年级学生 性格 乐于助人…… 爱好 喜爱观鸟…… 自然现状 人们砍伐树木…… 加入目的 …… 若能加入 联系方式87766123或Lihua@qq.com 要求: (1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥; (3)词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。‌ Dear Mr. Wang, I would like to be a reporter of the special column “Human and Nature”. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 参考答案 1. Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to try out for the new chairperson of the Wildlife Protection Club. I’m in Grade 8. I’m hard-working, humorous and outgoing. I love reading and travelling. I like winter best because I was born in the season. I’m interested in nature and I know a lot about animals and plants. Now lots of animals are in great danger. Many people cut down trees and kill animals for money. So we should do something to protect animals. Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. And I’m free on Sundays all the day. If you agree with me, I will try my best to let more people realize the importance of wildlife protection and lead our members to plant more trees. Please call me at 15861066666 or e-mail me at 992876599@qq.com. Yours sincerely, Wang Mei 【写作解析】 【总体分析】 ①体材:本文是一篇应用文,为申请信。 ②时态:主要用一般现在时,根据语法规则,偶尔用到一般将来时。 ③提示:写作要点已给出,写的时候注意不要遗漏任何要点并适当补充发挥。 【写作步骤】 第一步:第一段开门见山,表明目的。 第二步:第二段写出个人介绍,切记简明扼要。 第三步:第三段写出申请理由并做适当发挥。 第四步:第四段写出加入后的计划并留下联系方式。 【亮点词汇】 ①would like to do sth 想要做某事 ②try out for 参加……的选拔 ③love doing sth 喜欢做某事 ④be interested in (doing) sth 对(做)某事感兴趣 ⑤(be) in danger 处于危险之中 ⑥agree with sb 同意某人 ⑦try one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大努力做某事 ⑧lead sb to do sth 引导某人做某事【高分句型】 ①So we should do something to protect animals.(动词不定式表目的) ②Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. (动名词短语作主语) ③If you agree with me, I will try my best to let more people realize the importance of wildlife protection and lead our members to plant more trees. (if引导的条件状语从句) 2. Dear Chairperson, I would like to join the Environment Protection Society. I am a student in Grade 8. I like reading books and swimming very much. My favourite subject is maths because it’s interesting. I love nature and understand the importance of protecting our environment. That’s why I want to be a member of the Environment Protection Society. Sadly, we are facing serious problems now. More and more natural disasters are happening all over the world and cause a lot of trouble to our life. Besides, the number of the endangered animals is becoming larger and larger. Wild animals have less space to live and less food to eat. Many of them are now endangered because of our activities. It’s time for us to take action to protect the Earth. As students, we must help more people to realize the serious problems which are mainly caused by us. The government needs to build more reserves to protect wild animals and make laws to prevent people from destroying the Earth. If I can be a member of the Environment Protection Society, we can make a difference to our Earth together. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Millie 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:一般现在时和现在进行时; ③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下 文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍你的个人信息,并说明你申请加入环境保护协会的原因;第二步,阐述我们正面临的问题; 第三步,说明我们可以采取的行动。 [亮点词汇] ①importance重要性 ②serious严重的 ③cause引起 ④take action采取行动 ⑤reserve自然保护区 [高分句型] ①That’s why I want to be a member of the Environment Protection Society.(why引导的表语从 句) ②As students, we must help more people to realize the serious problems which are mainly caused by us.(which引导的限制性定语从句) ③If I can be a member of the Environment Protection Society, we can make a difference to our Earth together.(if引导的条件状语从句) 3. Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to join our school field trip this winter holiday. Let me introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, a 15-year-old boy. Now I am a grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I am healthy and strong. In my daily life, I am honest and friendly. I am always willing to help others. I have so many hobbies that others can talk with me easily and happily. I likes drawing, playing table tennis and so on. Besides, I am crazy about DIY. If I can join the school field trip, I will teach others to make some interesting and meaningful things, such as making cakes and paper roses. Moreover, I love nature, and I learn a lot about animals and plants. I also understand the importance of protecting our environment. My favourite season is winter, because I can make snowmen and play snowball fights with my friends. In the future, I hope our earth will be cleaner and tidier. Let’s work together to make a difference. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely,Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:按照写作要点完成写作,提示省略部分自行补充后完整表达。 [写作步骤] 第一步,借用文章已给开头,点题引出下文; 第二步,详细介绍自己的基本信息、性格、爱好等; 第三步,表达自己的梦想和愿望,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①daily life日常生活 ②be willing to do sth.愿意做某事 ③be crazy about迷上 ④make a difference起作用;有影响 [高分句型] ①If I can join the school field trip, I will teach others to make some interesting and meaningful things, such as making cakes and paper roses.(条件状语从句) ②I hope our earth will be cleaner and tidier.(宾语从句) 4. Dear Mr. Smith, I’m Anna from Class 3 Grade 8. I’d like to join the movie club because I’m interested in watching movies. My favorite movie is Journey to the West. It is one of the greatest movies in China.The story took place more than 1000 years ago in China. It tells us a story about the monkey king called Sun Wukong and his brothers. They tried their best to protect his teacher Tang Seng to go to the west. Unluckily, but they didn’t give up. In the end, I will offer more great movies to students. I will also share my feelings about watching movies with everyone. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Anna 【写作解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要 点。‌ [写作步骤] 第一步,自我介绍及说明加入电影俱乐部的原因。 第二步,详述所喜欢的电影内容。 第三步,提出自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in 对……感兴趣。 ②take place 发生 ③give up 放弃 [高分句型] ①I’d like to join the movie club because I’m interested in watching movies.(含原因状语从句的 复合句语) ②They tried their best to protect his teacher Tang Seng to go to the west.(动词不定式作目的状 语) 5. Dear Chairperson, I would like to join the Winter Camp. I am a student in Grade 8. I am humorous and helpful. I am always ready to help others any time. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I also like travelling. I can make DIY. Last year, I took part in Birdwatching club. When I grow up, I want to become a doctor and serve more people. I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Winter Camp. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Gu Jin 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己的性格; 第二步,介绍自己的爱好; 第三步,介绍自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to do sth.准备做某事 ②like doing sth.喜欢做某事‌ ③take part in参加‌ ④grow up长大‌ [高分句型] ①I like reading because I can learn a lot from books.(because引导的原因状语从句)‌ ②When I grow up, I want to become a doctor and serve more people.(when引导的时间状语从 句)‌ ③I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Winter Camp.(if引导的条件状语从句) 6. Dear Mr.Chen, Our class decide to go to the local old people’s home this Sunday to help the elderly volunteer activities. As soon as we reach the old people’s home. We will give flowers and fruit to the old man first. Then we’ll help the old to clean their rooms. We’ll have a talk with them. We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable. At last, there will be a talent show. Some classmates will sing songs, dance and play games with them. Besides, we will take a camera to take photos. I think we will have a good time with the old together. I’m looking forward to your approval and support. Y ours sincerely, L i Hua 【写作解析】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为信件; ②时态:时态为“一般将来时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意地点是在养老院,所以描写的活动要符合老年人的 需求。这是一封信件,要符合信件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明活动主题,并交代时间和地点; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。按照时间先后“first…;then…;at last…”详述活动计划以及 一些准备工作; 第三步,书写结语。表达希望得到老师的批准和支持。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②as soon as一……就…… ③talk with sb与某人交谈 ④look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①As soon as we reach the old people’s home, we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first.(as soon as引导的时间状语从句,遵循“主将从现”原则) ②We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable.(so that引导 的目的状语从句) 7.Dear Sir/ madam, I'd like to be a volunteer. I speak English well, so it is easy for me to communicate with the visitors. Besides, I am good at paper cutting and I want to spend time sharing the art works with them. I believe they will get a better understanding about Hangzhou, for I can share what I know with them. I love volunteering because I can do what I love to do and get a strong feeling of satisfaction when seeing the look of joy on their faces. I really want to join you. Looking forward to your reply. Wang Wei 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:该题目属于信件写作,题目要求根据招募志愿者的通告来写申请信,写作时 要注意信件格式的使用;信件内容需要针对通告中的问题一一作答,并进行适当的发挥。2.点评:这是一篇优秀的。开篇点题发出申请,紧接着对通告中的问题进行了解答,末尾 再次表达自己想要成为志愿者的意愿。严格按照信件格式写作,结构清晰,行文连贯,恰 当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡,增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点: 单词和短语:besides;believe;communicate with;be good at;spend time doing sth.;share sth. with sb.;get a better understanding about;gat a strong feeling of satisfaction;look forward to。 句型:it’s + 形容词‌+ for sb. to do sth.句型;宾语从句;for/because引导的原因状语从句; when引导的时间状语从句。 8. Dear Tony, My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade Three. I am outgoing and like to communicate with others. I want to introduce Weifang culture to them. I’m interested in Weifang culture and know a lot about it. I will introduce the history of Weifang and some related contents. I will try to make their visit to Weifang unforgettable. In addition, and most importantly, my oral English is very good. I can communicate with them in English very well. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,写作时应承接短文开头,然后介绍自己愿意承担 向澳大利亚某校的部分师生介绍潍坊文化,最后介绍你胜任这项工作的理由和打算怎么做, 可适当发挥。 2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称叙述内容;时态综合采用一般现在时和一般将来时;介 绍潍坊文化以及胜任这项工作的理由和打算怎么做时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强, 保证条理清晰。 9.One possible version Dear Chairman, I’m Li Hua. I’m in Class 5, Grade 8. I like singing, dancing and telling funny stories. I like helping others, too. I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help. Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer this winter vacation? I will try my best to help the sick kidsand cheer them up. I think volunteer work is great. It is not right for us to think about only ourselves. We should always think about people around us and try to make them happy. I hope you’ll let me join the volunteer group. I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:本文主要是申请做志愿者,根据题干中的提示进行写作,也可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,对将要发生的 事情使用一般将来时;对自己的介绍,应描写细致;对加入志愿者活动的认识要深刻;整 篇文章叙述要完整,保证条理清晰。 10.one possible version: Dear Mr. Wang, I would like to be a reporter of the special column “Human and Nature”. First, let me introduce myself to you. I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I am hardworking and helpful. I am ready to help people as well as animals. I have a lot of hobbies, and I like going birdwatching best. I am very interested in Biology. I enjoy the nature and the animals. Sadly, many animals have nowhere to live because people cut down lots of trees. I think it is important for me to do something to change the situation. I want to call on more people to protect nature and wild animals. I can take part in activities from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. at weekends. You can call me at 87766123 or email me at Lihua@qq.com. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据表格提示写一封申请信。 2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称。写作时不要遗漏要点,围绕 主题,确保无单词语法错误,可适当的使用一些短语句型使文章更顺畅。