2020 春高三目标清
北班讲义第11 讲
模块1:Part 1 Writing
感谢信
答案Dear Mr. Smith,
How time flies! I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China visiting your school
now. I've been here for several weeks and will be back home next Monday. I'm
writing to express my sincere thanks to you.
During my stay, I've learned so much about your school. To my amazement, all
the students can have convenient access to great learning resources here. Thanks
to your proper arrangements, I attended many classes of different subjects, learning
much knowledge. Meanwhile, I established a good relationship with some students
in your school and got to know your culture.
Thank you for your help and support again. I sincerely invite you to visit China
someday. If you can spare the time to make it, do tell me in advance so that I can
accompany and guide you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析Dear Mr. Smith,
How time flies! I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China visiting your school
now. I've been here for several weeks and will be back home next Monday. I'm
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writing to express my sincere thanks to you. (开头引出话题)
During my stay, I've learned so much about your school. To my amazement, all
the students can have convenient access to great learning resources here. Thanks
to your proper arrangements, I attended many classes of different subjects, learning
much knowledge. 【高分句型一】(在贵校学到很多知识) Meanwhile, I established a
good relationship with some students in your school and got to know your culture.
(建立良好的关系,了解异国文化)
Thank you for your help and support again. I sincerely invite you to visit China
someday. If you can spare the time to make it, do tell me in advance so that I can
accompany and guide you. 【高分句型二】(再次表达感谢,欢迎到中国)
Yours,
Li Hua
道歉信
答案Dear Tony,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I'm unable to carry on helping you learn
Chinese. Words fail me to show my deep regret.
It is for one year that we have helped each other. I am grateful for your selfless
and effective guidance, without which I wouldn't make such amazing advances in
English. However, it won't be a long time before I am faced with a significant
challenge, the College Entrance Examination. With my overall energy devoted to
revision, I have no time to surf the Internet. Failing to communicate with you makes
me regretful. My hope is that we can learn from each other after the exam.
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Please allow me to say sorry again. I would appreciate your understanding and
forgiveness. Hoping to study with you online soon.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
解析Dear Tony,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I'm unable to carry on helping you learn
Chinese. Words fail me to show my deep regret.(表达歉意)
It is for one year that we have helped each other. I am grateful for your selfless
and effective guidance, without which I wouldn't make such amazing advances in
English. (高分句型一)However, it won't be a long time before I am faced with a
significant challenge, the College Entrance Examination. With my overall energy
devoted to revision, I have no time to surf the Internet. Failing to communicate with
you makes me regretful. My hope is that we can learn from each other after the
exam.(高分句型二)(原因及办法)
Please allow me to say sorry again. I would appreciate your understanding and
forgiveness. Hoping to study with you online soon.(希望得到谅解)
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
邀请信
答案Dear Henry,
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Is everything going well? The 10th Art Festival of our school is drawing near.
Therefore, we would like to invite you to join us. It will be held at the end of
November in our school yard.
We will hold a variety of activities, such as sports meeting, art show, and
performances show. Therefore, you had better prepare a performance for us. What's
more, since it is getting colder and colder, a thick coat will be needed for you to
watch the performance on the playground.
All in all, I firmly believe you will have a great time if you join us. If you'd like to
participate, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours
Li Hua
解析本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。第1 步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封
电子邮件;假设你是校学生会主席李华,你校将于11 月底举行第十届校园艺术节,想邀请
外籍教师Henry 参加并表演节目,请给他写封邮件。人称应为第一、第二人称,时态应为
一般现在时和一般将来时。第2 步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组), 如the 10th Art
Festival of our school(第十届校园艺术节), invite you to join us(邀请你加入我们),
be held(被举办), a variety of activities(多种多样的活动)等。第3 步:根据提示及关
键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4 步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的
连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
建议信
答案Dear Linda,
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I'm glad to learn that you take great interest in Chinese. I'm writing in response
to your confusion about how to learn Chinese well.
Firstly, make good use of social media. With the development of technology,
it's very convenient for us to communicate with each other. Secondly, there is no
denying that interest is the best teacher. Practicing Chinese by watching movies or
reading novels never fails to arouse your interest and passion. Thirdly, never be
afraid of making mistakes. What inevitably happens is that many language
learners fail to express themselves sometimes. Only by speaking Chinese with
confidence can you make progress.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. I'm sure you will succeed through
your hard work.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析【一句多变】
There is no denying that interest is the best teacher.
①It can't be denied that interest is the best teacher.
②It goes without saying that interest is the best teacher.
③It is certain that interest is the best teacher.
图画类写作
答案 Our Meaningful Work
Last Saturday, my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to
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buy books.
That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned.
Everyone was excited, enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared
bicycles. However, something unexpected happened. We noticed the shared
bicycles parked here and there, blocking the way of the passers-by. One of my
classmates proposed placing them in order, so we got down to work immediately.
It took us about twenty minutes to finish the work. Seeing the tidily arranged
bicycles, we all felt delighted. We also received high praise for what we had done.
The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles. I think we should put
them in place after using them, which not only brings us neat and tidy environment,
but also reflects qualities of a good citizen.
解析这是一篇看图作文。上周六和同学骑共享单车去购书时看到某些不文明现象。图片中展
现出图书大厦外单车到处乱堆、乱放的现象,状况惨不忍睹,购书的学生看到这种情况立刻
把它们排放整齐。写作时要求学生根据题目中的信息,结合图片的内容,找出文章的中心,
做适当描述和拓展。学生要采用第一人称来写作,写出活动的内容,并发表自己的感受。根
据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同
的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,同时应选用合适
的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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