2020 春高三目标清
北班讲义第12 讲
模块1：Part 1 Writing
求助信
答案Dear David,
How is it going recently? I have been missing you since you left China. Recently,
I've met some difficulties in learning English. Could you give me some advice?
First of all, I wonder how to memorize English words well, because I am always
trapped in such cases where some new words are just remembered but soon
forgotten. In addition, I feel very awkward to speak English in public, which makes
me ashamed of myself. Worse still, I'm afraid to answer the teachers' questions in
class.
I'll appreciate it greatly if you can give me a hand. I'm looking forward to your
early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析【一句多变】
I wonder how to memorize English words well.
①I wonder how I should memorize English words well.
②I don't know how to memorize English words well.
③I have no idea how to memorize English words well.
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介绍信
答案Dear Peter,
How is everything going with you? I am really delighted to learn that you are
planning a trip to China in May. Welcome to China. Here I would like to tell you
something about travelling in China.
When in China, you can choose to travel by taking high speed railway or by
plane, which allows quick and easy access to most of the big cities in China. More
amazingly, unlike previous years when you had to get into some tourist attractions
with the ID card, now you can do it through a face recognition app, which will save
you much time spent waiting in a queue. Besides, you can use mobile payment
instead of paying in cash when shopping. Thus don't bother to take a lot of cash
with you. Anyway, with artificial intelligence, travelling in China will be an
unforgettable experience that you can't miss.
Hopefully, I will have a three-day holiday for May Day when you come here, so
I can show you around. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽
量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一
时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
申请信
答案Dear Sir/Madam,
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I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. Knowing that some
volunteers are needed for the International Marathon Match to be held in our city
in June, I am writing to recommend myself.
The reasons why I am confident in being qualified for the position are as follows.
First, I am friendly and out-going, which can help me get along well with others.
Second, I speak English so fluently that I have no difficulty communicating with
native English speakers. Besides, as a sports fan, playing sports has become a part
of my life. In a word, all these make me qualified to be a volunteer.
I would be grateful if you consider me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析【一句多变】
Knowing that some volunteers are needed for the International Marathon Match to
be held in our city in June.
①Knowing that some volunteers are needed for the International Marathon
Match which will be held in our city in June.
②Knowing that some volunteers are needed for the International Marathon
Match which is to take place in our city in June.
【参考译文】
亲爱的先生/女士：
我是李华，新华中学的一名学生。我了解到国际马拉松赛将于六月在我们市举办，目前
正在招募志愿者。我写信来推荐自己。
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我认为自己有以下优势：首先，我为人友善且性格外向，这有助于我与他人融洽相处。
其次，作为一名运动爱好者，做运动已经成为我生活的一部分。另外，我讲英语很流利，和
英语为母语的人士交流无障碍。这一切都使我适合做一名志愿者。
如果您考虑我，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。
敬上，
李华
概要类写作
答案 It is easy to make friends through social networking. It is with just one click
of your mouse that you can dump an unwanted friend in recent years. It is so
common to remove friends, which is called unfriend. People unfriending someone
means that it eliminates people who are annoying from your social life. Dumping
friends is not just an Internet phenomenon, but much more online friendships come
to an end more easily than in real life.
解析这是一篇概要类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要
认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本文中给出的要点比较
具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特
别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累、写作练习以外，还可以适当记忆
一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
议论文写作
答案 Robots are replacing human beings but are also creating twice as many
jobs as they have destroyed, bringing about great changes in the structure of
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workforce and requirements for reskilling.
Behind the phenomenon are various reasons. For one thing, great advances in
science and technology make it possible for robots to be widely employed in many
fields. For another, productivity has been greatly increased by using robots, which
in turn helps promote the popularity of robots. Meanwhile, the widespread
application of robots has generated great changes in the way people work as well
as their choices of jobs.
Feeling lucky to live in the intelligent age, I'd like to equip myself with relevant
knowledge and enjoy the convenience it brings us. Besides, I will try to cultivate
creative thinking and the sense of innovation so as to meet the urgent needs of the
fast development of science and technology.
解析概要写作
第一步：阅读
1. 认真阅读给定的原文材料。
2. 划出那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子；分析原文中哪些部分重要，哪些
部分次重要；对重要部分的主要观点进行概括。
3. 简要地记下主要观点——主题、标题、细节等你认为对概要写作重要的东西。
第二步：写作步骤
1. 浏览课文，找出主题：介绍了机器人出现的原因以及智能化时代的便利。
2. 分析文章的结构，把它分成几个部分，找出每个部分的主要思想，用你自己的文字简短
地写出来。 3. 按照逻辑顺序组织主要和相关的要点， 使用最短的连接词进行连接。如：
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but，and。
第三步：修改成文
草稿拟好以后，对它进行修改。
首先，与原文进行对比，明确是否把所有重要的观点都概括在内，概要写作中的观点是否与
原文中的完全一致。
其次，如果出现了不必要的词汇、短语或长句子，删除它们，保持语言简单明了。
最后，检查拼写、语法和标点符号的错误。
具体的解题写作过程需要做到以下几点：
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，
这一现象产生的原因有哪些（不少于两点）；面对即将到来的“智能时代”你所做的准备。
第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用一般将来时和现在完成时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。其中，
第一段为概要写作。第二段，这一现象产生的原因有哪些（不少于两点）。第三段，面对即
将到来的“智能时代”你所做的准备。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：productivity, generate, advance, promote, bring about,
in the structure of workforce, science and technology, productivity, in turn, the
widespread application of robots, as well as, equip... with, cultivate creative thinking,
the sense of innovation, meet the urgent needs.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:现在分词作伴随状语Robots are replacing human beings
but are also creating twice as many jobs as they have destroyed, bringing about
great changes in the structure of workforce and requirements for reskilling.It 作形式
主语，动词不定式作真正主语great advances in science and technology make it
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possible for robots to be widely employed in many field.which 引导非限制性定语从
句productivity has been greatly increased by using robots, which in turn helps
promote the popularity of robots。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：For one thing，Meanwhile，
Besides。
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
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