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Lecture
2020【春】高三目标985班
Writing
Part One
素材积累
1. 中秋节在中国农历8 月15 日。
The Mid‐Autumn Festival _______ the 15th of the eighth month of our
_____________________.
2. 比赛那么引人入胜那么有趣以至于许多学生报名参加比赛。
__________________________________________ that a lot of students
signed up for it.
3. 多亏了这次游学，我们不仅提高了语言能力，而且也对中国文化有了更好
地理解。
Thanks to the tour, _________ have we improved our speaking skills,
_______________________________________________________.
拓展句型
falls on
Chinese lunar calendar
So fascinating and interesting was the contest
not only
but we've also had a better understanding of Chinese culture
素材积累
4. 我写信邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。它是中国的一种民间艺术形式，有着
悠久的历史。
I'm writing to invite you to see the exhibition of Chinese paper‐cutting
_________________________________________.
5. 在春节期间，人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子，呈现出节日的气氛。
During the Spring Festival, ____________ and ______________________ are
used to decorate a house, ______________________________.
6. 除夕吃饺子是人们辞旧迎新的一个重要环节。
____________________________________
is
an
essential
part
of
___________________________________________________.
拓展句型
which is a Chinese folk art with a long history
red lanterns
Spring Festival couplets
presenting a festive atmosphere
Having dumplings at the New Year's Eve
bidding farewell to the old and ushering in the new year
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素材积累
7. 闪亮的小星星从烟花中蹦出来，营造出温暖的氛围。
______________________________________ create a warm atmosphere.
8. 我们班计划5月30日骑自行车环西湖观看龙舟赛，那时全国上下都在庆祝
端午节。
Our class is planning to cycle the West Lake to _________________________
on May 30, ___________________________________________________.
拓展句型
Shining little stars coming out of fireworks
watch the dragon boat race
when the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated nationwide
素材积累
9. 国庆节在每年的10月1日，假日持续7天。全球华人都沉浸在幸福、祥和的
气氛中。
National Day _______ October 1st every year, with the holiday _________ 7
days. Chinese people all over the world ______________________________
_______________________.
10. 我们最喜爱的是一家人一起赏满月的时刻。
_______________________________________________________________
______________.
拓展句型
falls on
What we love most is the time when the whole family enjoy the full
lasting for
are absorbed in a happy and
harmonious atmosphere
moon together
范文分析
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Charlie 对中国文化很感兴趣。他和家人将
于今年农历春节来中国旅游，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 欢迎他们来中国；
2. 旅行前的准备。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文分析
第一步：审题
1. 体裁：本文为__________；
2. 时态：本文时态以____________为主；
3. 人称：本文主体人称以___________为主。
建议信
一般现在时
第二人称
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第二步：列要点
1. _________________________
2. _________________________
3. _________________________
对他们来中国表示欢迎
就旅行前的准备提出建议
表达祝愿
范文分析
第三步：组织句子
1. 听说你和你的家人要来中国过春节，我很高兴。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
2. 这是一个亲身体验中国文化的好机会。
______________________________________________________
I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China
during the Spring Festival.
It is a great chance to experience Chinese culture personally.
表示欢迎
范文分析
第三步：组织句子
3. 我写这封信是想给你一些建议。
______________________________________________________
4. 你可以在旅行前做些准备，这会是个好主意。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Here I am writing to offer you some advice.
You could make some preparations before your travel.
That would be a good idea.
提出建议
范文分析
第三步：组织句子
5. 首先，学习一些简单的汉语，尤其是日常用语。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
6. 这使你更容易与当地人沟通，无论你去哪里。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily
expressions.
This makes it easier for you to communicate with the locals
wherever you go.
建议一
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范文分析
第三步：组织句子
7. 此外，熟悉一些中国的地方习俗和传统。它可以帮助你在逗留期间
举止得体。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Besides, get yourself familiar with some Chinese local customs
and traditions. It may help you behave properly during your stay.
建议二
范文分析
第三步：组织句子
8. 更重要的是，你可以事先学习如何使用筷子。
_________________________________________________________
9. 这样你可以更方便地品尝各种中国食物。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
What's more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand.
建议三
In this way you can taste different varieties of Chinese food
more conveniently.
范文分析
第三步：组织句子
10. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。祝你在中国旅途愉快。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
I hope you will find my advice helpful.
表达祝愿
Wish you a pleasant journey in China.
范文分析
第四步：升级句型
1. 用非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2。
1. I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during
the Spring Festival.
2. It is a great chance to experience Chinese culture personally.
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China
during the Spring Festival, which is a great chance to experience
Chinese culture personally.
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第四步：升级句型
2. 用it作形式主语升级句4。
4. You could make some preparations before your travel. That would
be a good idea.
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
It would be a good idea if you could make some preparations
before your travel.
范文分析
第四步：升级句型
3. 用非限制性定语从句合并句5和句6。
5. First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily
expressions.
6. This makes it easier for you to communicate with the locals
wherever you go.
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily
expressions, which makes it easier for you to communicate
with the locals wherever you go.
范文分析
第四步：升级句型
4. 用不定式作主语升级句7。
7. Besides, get yourself familiar with some Chinese local customs and
traditions. It may help you behave properly during your stay.
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Besides, to get yourself familiar with some Chinese local customs
and traditions may help you behave properly during your stay.
范文分析
第四步：升级句型
5. 用目的状语从句合并句8和句9。
8. What's more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand.
9. In this way you can taste different varieties of Chinese food more
conveniently.
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
What's more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand
so that you can taste different varieties of Chinese food more
conveniently.
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范文分析
第五步：范文成型
Dear Charlie,
I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during the Spring Festival,
which is a great chance to experience Chinese culture personally. Here I am writing to
offer you some advice.
It would be a good idea if you could make some preparations before your travel.
First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily expressions, which makes it
easier for you to communicate with the locals wherever you go. Besides, to get yourself
familiar with some Chinese local customs and traditions may help you behave properly
during your stay. What's more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand so that
you can taste different varieties of Chinese food more conveniently.
I hope you will find my advice helpful. Wish you a pleasant journey in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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