专题 02 倡议书——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
1.(改编自2021·江苏省扬州中学高一阶段练)假设你是学生李华,进入高中后你发现很多同学有为了
学习而不吃早饭、经常熬夜等不健康的生活方式。请你根据以下提示以“向不健康生活方式说不”为题
写一份倡议书。
内容包括:1.描述现状;
2.给出建议;
3.发出呼吁。
注意:1.写作词数应为120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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Say no to unhealthy lifestyles
Recently, it’s common to see that quite a few classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late
and not eating breakfast. Not only are these lifestyles harmful to health, but also lead to the decline of learning
efficiency. Therefore, I’m writing to call on us students to say no to unhealthy lifestyles.
Firstly, it’s important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume
much energy while studying. What’s more, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us
to keep fit and release stress. Eventually, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things
positively no matter what happens. In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be of
benefit to us during the whole high school life.
Let’s take action now and say good-bye to unhealthy lifestyles!
【答案】
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之倡议书写作。要求考生根据所给提示以“向不健康生活方式说不”为题
写一份倡议书。内容包括:描述现状;给出建议;发出呼吁。描述现状(很多同学有为了学习而不吃早饭、
经常熬夜等不健康的生活方式);给出建议(围绕不健康的生活方式提出改进建议。如:均衡饮食,每天
吃早饭,锻炼,积极的态度等等);发出呼吁(让我们从现在起行动起来,跟不健康的生活方式说拜拜)。
【句式拓展】
原句:In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us during the
whole high school life.
拓展:In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us, which will
help us spend the whole high school life.
【亮点句型】1.Recently, it’s common to see that quite a few classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up
late and not eating breakfast.(运用了it’s ... that主语从句...的句型)
2.Not only are these lifestyles harmful to health, but also lead to the decline of learning efficiency.
(运用了not only ... but also ... 倒装句)
3.Firstly, it’s important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume
much energy while studying.(运用了it’s ... that主语从句...的句型;because状语从句)
4.What’s more, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release
stress.(运用了of + 名词结构和which引导的非限定性定语从句)
5.Eventually, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter
what happens.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句和no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
2.(改编自2022·全国高三专题练)假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校正在开展“健康饮食”的活
动,请你代表学校用英语写一封倡议书。
内容包括:1.认识健康饮食的重要性;
2.如何健康饮食;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
At present, due to the improvement of people’s living standards, people’s eating habits have changed
greatly. Many people eat high-fat foods, leading to obesity and different diseases. In view of this phenomenon, it
is time for us to improve our diet habits.
To achieve a healthy diet, we must first realize the importance of a balanced diet. Secondly, try to eat less
fatty and high calorie foods and eat more vegetables and fruit. These foods not only provide the rich vitamins
which are needed by the human body, but also contain many minerals. Thirdly, don't overeat, and reasonably
arrange the amount of food for three meals a day.
I hope you can have a healthy eating habit. To eat healthily is to protect yourselves!
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之倡议书写作。要求考生就“健康饮食”的话题发出倡议。内容包括:认
识健康饮食的重要性;如何健康饮食;发出倡议。本篇书面表达的重点是第一段(写倡议书的背景或原因。
比如:由于人们生活水平的提高,人们的饮食习惯发生了很大的变化。许多人吃高脂肪食物,导致肥胖
和各种疾病。进而引出话题:鉴于这种现象,现在是我们改善饮食习惯的时候了)和如何健康饮食(围绕
上文中提到的现象进行拓展。比如:尽量少吃高脂肪和高热量的食物,多吃蔬菜和水果;不要吃得过多,
合理安排每天三餐的食物量)。【句式拓展】
原句:Many people eat high-fat foods, leading to obesity and different diseases.
拓展:Many people eat high-fat foods, which lead to obesity and different diseases.
【亮点句型】
1.These foods not only provide the rich vitamins which are needed by the human body, but also contain
many minerals. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
2.I hope you can have a healthy eating habit, which is more beneficial to your future life and study. (运用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.(改编自2022·湖南长沙市明德中学高一期中)5月22日是“国际生物多样性日”。据报道,世界上
有许多珍稀植物濒临灭绝。你想以校英语社团的名义写一封倡议信,呼吁全校同学“保护生物,爱护环
境”。
内容包括:1.写信目的;
2.分析原因并提出建议;
3.你的呼吁;
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:生物多样性biology-diversity
Dear schoolmates,
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The School English Club
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Dear schoolmates,
International Day for Biological Diversity falls on 22nd, May every year. Now I am writing to appeal for
your cooperation in conservation of creatures in the world.
As we know from this year’s International Day for Biological Diversity, there are many rare plants
appearing endangered altogether. The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting
too much and over destroying forests for fuel. To save the world’s creatures, we should do our bit to avoid giving
out gas and littering around to protect the environment. Furthermore, we shouldn’t cut down trees without
permission to protect the creatures’ living conditions.
I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with creatures and life will
become better.
The School English Club
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之倡议书/信写作。写一封倡议信,分析生物濒危的原因并给出建议,呼吁全校同学“保护生物,爱护环境”。本篇书面表达的重点在于分析生物濒危的原因并提出建议。分析原
因前,不要忘了提一提“世界上有许多珍稀植物濒临灭绝”,接着分析原因(人类污染环境,破坏森林等
等);提出建议要围绕“保护环境”来展开:不污染环境,不乱砍滥伐森林等等;
【句式拓展】
原句:Now I am writing to appeal for your cooperation in conservation of creatures in the world.
拓展:Now I am writing to appeal for your cooperation in conservation of creatures in the world which is
very important.
【亮点句型】
1.The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting too much and over
destroying forests for fuel.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
2.Here, we sincerely advocate that we go to school on foot or by bike as much as possible every day.
(运用了虚拟语气,即动词advocate后的宾语从句中应用should+动词原形,should可以省略)
3.Furthermore, we had better make sure those who are ignorant of International Day for Biological
Diversity are informed of the danger of creatures’ extinction.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
4.(改编自2022·广东茂名高一期末)假定你是某重点高中学生会主席李华,你市正在迎接创建全国文
明城市检查,请你以学生会名义写一篇倡议书,倡议大家积极为创建文明城市做准备。
内容包括:1.发出倡议的原因;
2.倡议的具体内容;
3.呼吁共同参与。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计算入总词数。
参考词汇:全国文明城市a National civilized city; 志愿服务精神volunteerism
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
It is known to all that our city is trying to build a national civilized city to create a better living environment
for us. I am writing to call on all of you to make joint efforts towards this goal.
As students, we can do many things to help. First of all, it’s important to care for the public environment and
keep our school clean. For example, we mustn’t drop litter or make loud noise. Second, we are always supposed
to obey the traffic rules. Third, it would be helpful to have the volunteerism and volunteer in our spare time
encouraging other citizens to behave properly. More importantly, improving ourselves is a good way to make usmore civilized.
Dear fellow students, let’s work together to make our city a better place!
The Students’ Union
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之倡议书/信写作。要求考生以学生会名义写一篇倡议书,倡议大家积极为
创建文明城市做准备。内容包括:发出倡议的原因;;呼吁共同参与。本篇书面表达的重点是“倡议的
具体内容”的设想。如:爱护公共环境(适当举例);遵守交通规则;提倡志愿服务精神;做文明公民等
等。
【句式拓展】
原句:As students, we can do many things to help.
拓展:Although we are students, we can do many things to help.
【亮点句型】
1.It is known to all that our city is trying to build a national civilized city to create a better living
environment for us.(It 是形式主语,运用了that引导的主语从句)
2.More importantly, improving ourselves is a good way to make us more civilized.(运用了动名词做主语)
5.(2022·山东青岛二中高三开学考试)2022年2月2日,冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京举行。为了弘扬
冬奥精神,请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,号召大家参与运动。
内容包括:1.运动形式;
2.运动的好处;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear boys and girls,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear boys and girls,
To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports, like skiing,
skating, ice hockey and so on.
Actually, ice and snow sports benefit us a lot. Doing them can enhance our lung capacity, making us live a
more active life in winter. Moreover, it can train our sense of balance, which is important for us as we grow up.
Besides, only by skiing, can we improve our strength as well as stay in shape.
Nothing is more interesting than doing ice and snow sports in cold winter days. Let’s take action now !
The Students’ Union【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之倡议书/信写作。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,号召大家参与
运动。内容包括:运动形式;运动的好处;发出倡议。要把“运动形式”融合到写信的目的中:为了弘
扬冬季奥运精神,我们呼吁大家参加冰雪运动,如滑雪、滑冰、冰球(这些运动要紧扣冬奥会的运动项
目)等。接下来讲,冰雪运动给我们带来了很多好处:增强我们的肺活量,使我们在冬天的生活更加活跃;
培养我们的平衡感,这对我们成长很重要。滑雪运动让我们能够提高我们的力量和保持体形。最后发出
倡议:没有什么比在寒冷的冬天做冰雪运动更有趣的了。让我们现在就采取行动吧!
【句式拓展】
原句:To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports, like
skiing, skating, ice hockey and so on.
拓展:To promote the Winter Olympic spirit, we call on everyone to participate in ice and snow sports,
which includes skiing, skating, ice hockey and so on.
【亮点句型】
1.Moreover, it can train our sense of balance, which is important for us as we grow up.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Besides, only by skiing, can we improve our strength as well as stay in shape.
(运用了“only+状语”置于句首的部分倒装)