专题 01-3 建议信
——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板(原卷和解析)
1.(2022高考英语考前作文热点预测)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Leslie最近来中国某中学交换学习，
她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处，请你给她回一封信。
内容包括：1.写信的目的；
2.具体建议及理由；
3.表达个人期待。
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【答案】
Dear Leslie,
I’m glad to know that you have come to study in China. As for the problem of how to get along with new
classmates, here is my advice.
First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively. I think the cultural difference is a good
topic. Second, you should care about your classmates and offer help to those in need. After all, being friendly is
always a good way to make friends. Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so
that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Wish you a good time in your new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生给英国笔友Leslie写一封建议信。内容包括：写
信的目的(针对如何跟新同学相处的问题给她一些建议)。具体建议及理由(比如：尝试与同学积极交流，
聊聊文化差异的话题；关心同学，帮助那些需要帮助的人，友好总是交朋友的好方法；积极参加各种各
样的课堂活动，以便与新同学建立密切的关系等等)；个人期待(希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。祝你在
新学校过得愉快)。
【句式拓展】
原句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively.
拓展：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively, which can help you understand
each other better.
【亮点句型】
1.Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build closerelationships with your new classmates.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
2.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略了that)
2.(2022·全国高三专题练)假如你是李平，为丰富校园英语广播节目内容，校英语广播电台向全体同
学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议，使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意：词数100左右。
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the
programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.
To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn
the latest news from home and abroad. In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting
room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school. Lastly, many students don’t have good learning
methods, so if you can invite the outstanding students to share their learning experience, your program will come
to the attention of students.
I hope my advice will be of help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生要求学生写一封建议信。为丰富校园英语广播节
目内容，向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议，使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。表达时首
先需要说明写信之目的(就学校的英语电台如何丰富广播内容，谈谈自己的建议)；其次是三点建议(围绕
“学校的英语电台如何丰富广播内容”去展开，还要适当阐述如此建议的理由。比如：增加英语新闻，
理由是什么；邀请普通学生到电台做才艺表演，理由是什么；邀请优秀的学生分享他们的学习经验，理
由是什么等等)；最后是必备的客套话(我希望我的建议会有所帮助。期待您的回复)。
【句式拓展】
同义句转换
原句：In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show,
which will become a hit of our school.
拓展：Additionally, it is advisable that ordinary students should be invited to the broadcasting room to do atalent show, which will become a hit of our school.
【亮点句型】
1.Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the
programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.(运用了现在分词作原因状语)
2.To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn
the latest news from home and abroad.(运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句)
3.(2022·湖南师大附中高三阶段练)假如你是李华，你的学习中文专业的外国朋友Tony将于近期来中
国交流，他来信询问你如何提高汉语口语水平。请你给他回信。
内容包括：1.提出建议；
2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【答案】
Dear Tony,
Learning that you long for some improvement in your spoken Chinese, I am more than delighted to offer
you some advice.
Make as many Chinese friends around you as possible and you can get more opportunities to practice.
Moreover, it will do you good to learn Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can provide you with an
enjoyable learning context and exert an imperceptible influence on your spoken Chinese. By the way, why not
talk to me online as much as possible?
May you achieve great progress! And welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生就近期来中国交流、学习中文专业的外国朋友
Tony来信中所询问的“如何提高汉语口语水平”的问题，给他写封建议信。开门见山表明写信的目的和
态度：得知你渴望提高你的汉语口语水平，我非常高兴为你提供一些建议。接下来的重头戏就是提建议：
围绕“如何提高汉语口语水平”这个话题展开合理想象：结交尽可能多的中国朋友，目的是什么；学习
中文歌曲和看中文电影，目的是什么等等。不要忘记了结尾所要用的客套话：祝你取得巨大进步！欢迎
来中国！
【句式拓展】
原句：Make as many Chinese friends around you as possible and you can get more opportunities topractice.
拓展：You can make as many Chinese friends around you as possible, which can offer you more
opportunities to practice.
【亮点句型】
1.Moreover, it will do you good to learn Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can provide you
with an enjoyable learning context and exert an imperceptible influence on your spoken Chinese.(运用了
which引导的非限定性定语从句)
2. Learning that you long for some improvement in your spoken Chinese, I am more than delighted to offer
you some advice.(运用了现在分词作状语及that引导宾语从句)
4.(2022·江苏高三专题练)假定你是李华，你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比
赛，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。
内容包括：1.表示祝贺；
2.提供建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意事项：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Steven,
I’m overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city’s Chinese speech contest
for overseas students. Congratulations! And I am here willing to offer some relevant suggestions.
First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and
accuracy. Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the
application of gestures. Additionally, staying self-assured is what it takes to guarantee your performance and
bring out the best in you.
I genuinely hope that your unremitting effort will pay off ultimately.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生给即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛的
好友Steven回信，提出建议。建议信的内容包括：表示祝贺；提供建议；表达祝愿。第一段：不仅仅要
表示祝贺，还要把为什么要祝贺的缘由表达出来，同时表示愿意提供建议，以便引起下文。第二段是本
篇书面表达的关键，给对方提出建议(比如：寻求汉语教师的专业指导，目的是什么；观看之前演讲比赛
的视频，目的是什么；保持自信，目的是什么等等)；第三段：必备的客套话(我真诚地希望你的不懈努力最终会得到回报)。
【句式拓展】
原句：First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency
and accuracy.
拓展：First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance so that you can reinforce your language
proficiency and accuracy.
【亮点句型】
1.I’m overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city's Chinese speech contest
for overseas students.(that引导宾语从句)
2.Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the
application of gestures.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
5.(2022·广州市二模)假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学
好中文的方法。请你写一封回信。
内容包括：1.提出建议；
2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m delighted to learn that you’ve started learning Chinese! Knowing that would like to have a better
command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable
that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning
atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make
some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real
life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you success！
Yours,
Li Ming【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生就最近选修了中文课程的外国朋友 David在他的
来咨询信中所提出的“如何学好中文的方法”的问题，给他写一封建议信。开门见山表明写信的目的和
态度：我很高兴得知你已经开始学习中文了！知道你想更好地掌握中文，我写信给你分享一些实用的建
议，仅供参考。(在提建议前，也可以做个铺垫以便使上下文联系更加紧密。比如：有了适当的指导和足
够的练习，你是一定能够学好汉语的)。接下来的重头戏就是提建议：围绕“如何学好中文的方法”这个
话题展开合理想象：定期观看一些汉语学习节目，目的是什么；最好交一些中国朋友并尽可能多地与他
们交流，目的是什么等等。不要忘记了结尾所要用的客套话：希望我上面的提示能有所帮助。祝你成功！
【句式拓展】
原句：Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you
some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
拓展：After I know that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with
you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
【亮点句型】
1.I’m delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose
you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese
culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
