专题 01-7 感谢信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
1.(2022·江苏常州三模)假定你是李华，高中毕业了，你打算给自己的中学英语老师Mary写封信，向
她表示感谢。
内容包括：1.她给你带来的变化；
2.带来变化的原因和例子；
3.希望成为终身朋友。
注意：1.书面整洁，词数80左右。
2.要点完整，没有遗漏。
3.层次分明，行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Mary,
I am writing just to express my sincere gratitude to you. Had I met you in my senior year, I wouldn’t have
achieved so much in my English leaning.
Before senior two, English was just a nightmare to me. However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this
mountain. Then, that year, there came you, with your awesome English ability and advanced teaching notion.
Your learning by doing style saved me, and saved many students like me as well.
Meeting you is like meeting a confidant. I hope to keep in touch with you throughout my life. Can I have the
honor?
Yours,
Li Hua.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之感谢信写作。要求考生乘高中毕业临别之际给自己的中学英语老师Mary
写封信，向她表示感谢。内容包括：她给你带来的变化；带来变化的原因和例子；希望成为终身朋友。
本篇书面表达除了“希望成为终身朋友”不需要多少发挥以外，前面两个要点都要进行拓展，才能符合
题目所规定的字数要求。就“她给你带来的变化”和“带来变化的原因和例子”两个方面要融合起来写。
既然Mary是你的英语老师，那么就围绕“在英语学习方面”写一写玛丽老师是如何帮助你，给你带来
英语学习方面的变化的。
【句式拓展】
原句：Had I met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.拓展：If I hadn’t met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
【亮点句型】
1.Had I met you in my senior two term I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
(运用了虚拟语气的倒装句)
2.However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this mountain.(运用了让步状语从句)
3.Then, that year, there came you, with your awesome English ability and advanced teaching notion.
(运用了倒装句和with复合结构)
2.(2022·河南模拟预测)假定你是李华，上周参加了你市组织的英语话剧比赛(English Drama
Competition)并取得了较好的成绩。你的外教Mr. White此前给予了你很多帮助和鼓励，请你给他写封电
子邮件表达谢意。
内容包括：1.告知好消息；
2.感谢他的帮助和鼓励；
3.邀请他到你家做客。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to tell you that I performed well in the English Drama Competition held in our city last week.
Undoubtedly, I should extend my sincere gratitude to you.
Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement. Every time
I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me how to do it better.
Feeling discouraged, I could get an encouraging hug, which inspired me a lot.
Thanks to you, I made my best performance. I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home
so that I can cook traditional Chinese food for you as a treat. Looking forward to your reply.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之感谢信写作。要求考生就外教Mr. White此前给予了的很多帮助和鼓励，
给他写封电子邮件表达谢意。内容包括：告知好消息；感谢他的帮助和鼓励；邀请他到你家做客。第一
个要点题干已经给出(上周参加了你市组织的英语话剧比赛并取得了较好的成绩)；第二个要点，需要围
绕“鼓励和帮助”的话题展开(需要增加具体的细节或事例)，第三个要点也要适当的发挥一下(邀请他到
你家做客为他做传统的中国菜)。
【句式拓展】
原句：Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement.
拓展：Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job if I didn't have your help andencouragement.
【亮点句型】
1.Every time I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me
how to do it better.(运用了every time引导的时间状语从句和where引导的宾语从句)
2.I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home so that I can cook authentic Chinese food
for you as a treat.(运用了so that引导的状语从句)
3.(2022·全国高三专题练)假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很
大。请你给他写一封感谢信。
内容包括：1.表示感谢；
2.你的收获；
3.希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many
unexpected benefits. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved
my writing skills. Besides, these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me
new information about cultures and societies that I never knew before.
Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading
English novels.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之感谢信写作。要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他给你推
荐的一些英文小说，使你获得很大收获。内容包括：表示感谢；你的收获；希望得到进一步指导。本篇
书面表达的重点在：Mr. Brown推荐的小说给你带来的收获(推荐的小说语言优美、通俗易懂，给你带来
了许多意想不到的好处。读完推荐的小说后，你的词汇量增加了，有助于提高了你的写作技巧。此外，
这些英语小说给你带来了新的体验和视角，为你提供了以前从未了解的文化和社会的新信息。)
【句式拓展】
原句：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
拓展：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you recommended me some English novels.【亮点句型】
1.The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many
unexpected benefits.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
2. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing
skills. (运用了现在分词的完成时态，which引导非限制性定语从句)
4.(2022·河南濮阳高三开学考)假定你是李华，你在学校举办的英语诗歌创作大赛中获得了一等奖。
请你给Jane写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.告知比赛结果；
2.回顾她对你的帮助；
3.表达对她的感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Jane,
I’m writing to share with you my excitement of winning first prize in the English Poem Writing Contest
organized by our school and express my appreciation for your help.
When I was at a loss, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge. Besides, you
carefully polished my poem and helped me correct grammar mistakes, which is of vital importance to conveying
my ideas accurately. What’s more, it was so nice of you to discuss the rhythm with me when you were available.
I can’t wait to express my gratitude to you in person when we meet next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之感谢信写作。要求考生就Jane在英语诗歌创作大赛中给自己的帮助写一
封感谢信。内容包括：告知比赛结果；回顾她对你的帮助；表达对她的感谢。本篇书面表达的重点是要
把“Jane对你的帮助”表达出来。考生需要紧扣“英语诗歌创作大赛”充分挖掘要点(你迷茫时老师对你
的鼓励；老师仔细润色你所写的的诗、帮你纠正语法错误、和你讨论诗歌的节奏等等。)
【句式拓展】
原句：I’m writing to share with you my excitement of winning first prize in the English Poem Writing
Contest organized by our school and express my appreciation for your help.
拓展：I’m writing to share with you my excitement of winning first prize in the English Poem Writing
Contest which was organized by our school and express my appreciation for your help.
【亮点句型】1.When I was at a loss, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge.
(when引起的时间状语从句；强调句式强调主语)
2.Besides, you carefully polished my poem and helped me correct grammar mistakes, which is of vital
importance to conveying my ideas accurately. (which引起的非限制性定语从句)
5.(2022·全国高三专题练)假定你是李华。你在生日之际收到了已经回国的交换生James寄来的生日
礼物。请你写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表示感谢；
2.回顾过去；
3.希望相见。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3.邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear James,
How are you doing? Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much. Actually, the
moment I opened the package, it made me smile. How considerate you are!
To be honest, it made me think of the time we spent together. During the past two years, we have had so
many happy memories. We played together and studied together. And with your help, my oral English was
greatly improved. I really hope to see you again.
Thanks again and looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之感谢信写作。要求考生给交换生James写一封邮件，表达对他寄来生日
礼物的感谢以及回顾过去和希望相见。本篇书面表达的重点内容是“回顾过去”，因此考生需要就“你
们过去相处的一段快乐时光，美好记忆”去展开。比如：一起玩、一起学习、在James的帮助下，你的
英语口语大大提高了，等等。
【句式拓展】
原句：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much.拓展：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me, which I like very much.
【亮点句型】
1. Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
2. Actually, the moment I opened the package, it made me smile. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)
