专题 01-5 申请信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
1.(2022·陕西渭南二模)为加强外籍人员的管理,确保新冠疫情防控工作稳定、常态化进行,市应疫
办现公开招募暑期疫情防控(the epidemic prevention and control project)志愿者。假设你是李华,符合招募
条件,现申请报名。
招募条件:年满18周岁,有意愿参加志愿者服务,英语交流能力强。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Lihua, an 18-year-old senior school student. Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the
epidemic prevention and control project, I am writing to apply for it.
The epidemic prevention and control work is happening as a daily routine in our country. As a part of the
society, I feel more than obliged to contribute to it. I believe I am a qualified candidate. My experience as a
volunteer last year in the epidemic prevention and control project enables me to have a better understanding of
this work. Moreover, I am capable of speaking English fluently, which is beneficial to English communication.
I will be grateful if you would take my application into consideration.
Yours sincerely.
Lihua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生给市应疫办公室写一封申请做志愿者的信。题干
所给的要点比较多也较为分散,故考生要将要点捋一捋、并一并、顺一顺。第一段:自我介绍(把自己的
年龄顺在这里表达)、写信的缘由(得知对方正在为防疫项目招募志愿者,表示自己的申请愿望);第二
段:申请做志愿者的背景(新冠疫情防控工作稳定、常态化进行,作为社会的一分子,觉得自己有义务为
社会做出贡献。根据招募条件简介自己);第三段:表示期望。
【句式拓展】
原句:Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the epidemic prevention and control project, I am
writing to apply for it.拓展:As I know you are recruiting volunteers for the epidemic prevention and control project, I am
writing to apply for it.
【亮点句型】
1.Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the epidemic prevention and control project, I am writing
to apply for it.(运用了现在分词作原因状语)
2.Moreover, I am capable of speaking English fluently, which is beneficial to English communication.
(运用了非限制性定语从句)
2.(2022·广东高三阶段练)假定你是高三学生李华,你校正在组织由外教Mr. Smith选拔两名同学参加
英国牛津大学(University of Oxford)的冬令营。请你给外教Mr. Smith发一封邮件申请参加。
内容包括:1.自我介绍;
2.申请理由;
3.期待获准。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student. Having learned a winter camp will be held by the University of
Oxford, I am writing to apply for a place.
To start with, I can speak English fluently and I’m always trying to improve my communication skills.
What’s more, I am a friendly person who is easy to get on with and I love to work with others in a team. This
program attracts me so much because it will not only give me a chance to get to know my dream school but also
add to my understanding of Western culture.
I hope I could be chosen to take part in this camp and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith发一封邮件申请参加英国牛津大
学的冬令营选拔活动。信中内容包括:自我介绍;申请理由以及期待获准。题干所给要点非常笼统,开
放度较大。考生要重点围绕“申请理由”来扩展要点(英语熟练程度、与他人的沟通、相处与合作等等)
才能顺利完成写作任务。三段式写作:第一段:自我介绍,写信的目的(包括与申请相关的信息);第二段:申请理由;第三段:期待获准和写申请信的套语。
【句式拓展】
2.句式拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句:This program attracts me so much because it will not only give me a chance to get to know my
dream school but add to my understanding of Western culture.
拓展:This program attracts me so much because not only will it give me a chance to get to know my
dream school but add to my understanding of Western culture.
【亮点句型】
1.What’s more, I am a friendly person who is easy to get on with and I love to work with others in a team.
(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2.This program attracts me so much because it will not only give me a chance to get to know my dream
school but add to my understanding of Western culture.
(运用了not only…but also…固定句型)
3.(2022·全国·高三专题练习)假设你是李华,现正在在英国学习,担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。
近期,校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知,请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。
Announcement
This is to inform that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th,
2022.Any student club that intends to join please send an email to
Internationalculturalfestival@gmail.com by May 15th, 2022 to apply for a booth(摊位). The name
of the booth and main activities should be included in the application.
Student Union
注意:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society and now I’m studying in England. I am
glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022. I am writing to
apply for a booth.The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and
its benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a
green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加国际文化节活
动。别看题干中英文文字那么多,但是题干实际所提供的要点却非常的少(李华,现正在在英国学习,担
任学校中国语言与文化社社长)。其余的要点需要考生根据通知中的要求“The name of the booth and main
activities should be included in the application”去设计。考生要围绕自己熟悉或有话可说的话题去设计要点。
比如范文就是围绕大众化的话题“中国茶艺术秀(摊位名称)”来设计具体活动的。
【句式拓展】
原句:Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting.
拓展:Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink ,which has a long history of planting.
【亮点句型】
1.The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea
and their benefits. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
2.It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy
and pleasant life.(运用了through which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
4.(2022·云南曲靖市第二中学高二期中)假定你是李华,目前正在英国学习,你校《文学评论》杂志
现招聘助理编辑。请给负责人Ms Johnson写一封电子邮件应聘。
内容包括:1.写邮件的目的;
2.你的文学功底;
3.希望应聘成功。
注意:1.词数100 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Johnson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua【答案】
Dear Ms Johnson,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from our school. Having read The Literary Review magazine’s
advertisement for editor assistant, I can’t wait to submit my application for the post.
Born in an educated family, my parents introduced me to literature at a very young age. I read lots of the
world famous and the Chinese classics, which help me broaden my horizons as well as develop my knowledge of
literature. Besides, as an outgoing and warm-hearted girl, I do quite well in collaborating with others and
working in groups. Furthermore, I won a prize for creative writing in a city-level competition last year.
I do hope this wonderful opportunity would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作(该书面表达是一封应聘信,而实际上就是一封申请信)。要
求考生(李华,目前正在英国学习)给学校《文学评论》杂志负责人Ms Johnson写一封电子邮件应聘助理
编辑一职。题干中已经将自我介绍、写信的背景和写信的目的交代清楚了(这是第一段所要表达的内容:
李华,是学校的高三学生。读了《文学评论》杂志招聘编辑助理的广告,迫不及待地想申请这个职位)。
第二段要求考生围绕“自己的文学功底”去设计要点。比如:与文学有关的家庭背景、阅读世界著名的
和中国的经典文学著作、自己的性格、与他人合作以及在与文学有关的比赛中获奖情况等等。第三段表
达希望应聘成功、并表示期待对方尽早回复。
【句式拓展】
原句:I do hope this wonderful opportunity would be offered to me.
拓展:I would appreciate it if this wonderful opportunity could be offered to me.
【亮点句型】
1.I read lots of the world famous and the Chinese classics, which help me broaden my horizons as well as
develop my knowledge of literature. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. Besides, as an outgoing and warm-hearted girl, I do quite well in collaborating with others and working
in groups. (运用了动名词作宾语)
5.(2022·江苏金陵中学高三阶段练)假定你是新华中学高三学生李华,在新闻报纸上看到某外资出版
集团Mr Smith刊登的招募翻译志愿者的广告,你的任务是把出版物中的英语翻译成中文。请根据广告
写一封邮件。
内容包括:1.自我介绍;
2.写信原因;
3.申请的优势。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已写好, 不计入总字数。
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 3 student in Xinhua High School. I’d like to apply for the position as a volunteer
translator after I read your advertisement in a newspaper.
I do believe that I am qualified for this post because I have a good command of both English and Chinese. I
have studied English for eight years, and I often work as a part-time English tourist guide in my holidays.
Additionally, I have some experience in translating English into Chinese. Last but not least, I’m quite a fast typist
and I can use the computer expertly.
I hope to be given the gold opportunity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生给外资出版集团Mr Smith写信,申请翻译志愿者
岗位。题干中已经给出了“自我介绍和写信原因”(李华,新华中学三年级的学生。在报纸上看到贵公司
的广告后,想申请一个翻译志愿者的职位)。本篇书面表达考生最需要做的是(也是第二段所要表达的内
容):围绕与“把英语翻译成中文”相关的优势设计好并正确的表达出来(相信自己能胜任这个职位,并
给出理由:掌握英汉两种语言的情况、运用英语的某些经历(尤其是将英语翻译成汉语的情况)、此外与
翻译其他优势,比如:打字很快,能熟练地使用电脑等等。第三段表达自己的期待。
【句式拓展】
原句:Last but not least, I'm quite a fast typist and I can use the computer expertly.
拓展句:Most importantly, as well as typing fast, I can operate the computer in an expert manner.
【亮点句型】
1.I’d like to apply for the position as a volunteer translator after I read your advertisement in a newspaper.
(运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
2.I do believe that I am qualified for this post because I have a good command of both English and Chinese.
(运用了强调句、that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)