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专题突破卷 13 书信写作之感谢,道歉,申请,介绍信
最新高考真题
1.（2024年新高考I卷）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写
一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Li Hua
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Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I
decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity
but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace
as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the
park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small
bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从
句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
2.（2020年新课标III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写
封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted
according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short
English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a
答案第2页，共2页steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written
the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to
review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a
visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look
forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编
短剧的支持。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达
感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next
Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，
显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。
请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an
important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. I hope the change
will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go out next Sunday afternoon? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-
face talk. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits
you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封信，对不能如约一起外出表示歉意，
并说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常地：terribly→extremely
出发：set out→set off
会面：meet→get together
不变：trouble→inconvenience
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll
have to give a lecture at the meeting.
同义句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon, when
I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting.
答案第4页，共2页【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk.（运用了
so that引导的目的状语从句）
【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate.（运用了if引导的条件状语
从句）
4．（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为
加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法
和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I
am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and
painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese
culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for makingChinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let
them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加
强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
参加：take part in→participate in
有助于：be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动：promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句：I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for
taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional
Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定
语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with
Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
2024 年高考模拟真题
5．（2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封
感恩信。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 难忘的一件事；
3. 你的祝福。
答案第6页，共2页注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Miss Gao,
I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day.
I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the
drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a
reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.
Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health.
Your student,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件
事，并表达祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：gratitude→thankfulness
立刻：immediately→right away
买：buy→purchase
照顾：take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine.
拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了
because引导的原因状语从句)
6．（2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议;
2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”.
Your insightful comments and valuable suggestions made for a truly memorable interview.
The response from our listeners was overwhelmingly positive, and many have expressed their appreciation
for your participation and the depth of your insight. We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your
experiences and knowledge with our community.
We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future. Your insights and perspectives
would be a valuable addition to our discussions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人，上周五你
校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好这一情况，给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
见解：insights→ opinion
建议：suggestions→ advice
答案第8页，共2页高兴的：delighted→ happy
宝贵的：valuable→ precious
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in
China”..
拓展句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, whose theme
is “Live in China”..
【点睛】【高分句型1】We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with
our community.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰willingness。）
【高分句型2】We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future.（运用了if引导的条件状
语从句。）
7．（2024·四川成都·模拟预测）假设你是李华，你应该在本周五提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告，但
因个人原因，现在无法按时提交。请你给Mr. Anderson发一封电子邮件，内容要求如下：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 提出补救办法；
注意：
1. 写作词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节。
Dear Mr. Anderson,
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【答案】Dear Mr. Anderson,
I am excessively sorry to say that I won’t be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this
Friday. Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission.
I know I am supposed to finish my homework before the deadline, but unfortunately, I was caught in a
heavy rain and had a high fever the day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now. Therefore, I
haven’t finished reading part yet, let alone the report.I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday. Sorry again for the
inconvenience I’m about to cause and thanks for your understanding.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给Mr. Anderson发一封道歉信，告诉他因个人原因，无
法按时提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
表达：extend→express/show
真诚的：sincere→genuine
不幸地是：unfortunately→unluckily
因此：therefore→as a result/consequently
2.句式拓展：
原句：I am excessively sorry to say that I won’t be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time
this Friday. Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission.
拓展句：Excessively sorry to say that I won’t be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this
Friday, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Sorry again for the inconvenience I’m about to cause and thanks for your understanding.(运用了省掉that/which
的定语从句。)
【高分句型2】
I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday.(运用了it作形式主语。)
8．（2024·江西景德镇·三模）假定你是李华，与外教Peter约好周六下午一起去爬南山，但因故不能赴约。
请给他写封邮件表示歉意，内容包括：
1.表达不能赴约的歉意；2说明原因；3.另约时间；
注意：写作词数应为80左右；
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go climbing with you on Saturday afternoon. I have just found that I have to
attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Sunday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the
breathtaking scenery. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what
time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇道歉信，要求考生给外教写信道歉，解释不能如期赴约的原因，并且提出补救措施。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
① 重要：important → crucial/ significant
② 改变：change → alteration/ modification
③ 麻烦：trouble → inconvenience/ difficulty
④ 享受：enjoy → appreciate/ savor
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I should be available any time after school next week.
拓展句：I should be available any time if it is after school next week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the breathtaking scenery.
（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
【高分句型2】If not, let me know what time suits you best.（运用了宾语从句）
9．（2024·重庆·模拟预测）假定你是李华，现就读于一所国际学校，打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团。
请给学生会主席写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 社团的类型；
2. 社团的活动计划和目的；
3. 希望获得批准。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear President,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear President,
I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student community.
The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students. We plan to
organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings.
These events will provide an excellent platform for students to broaden their horizons and enhance their cross-
cultural understanding. We also believe it will foster a more inclusive and diverse campus culture, while
enhancing students’ interpersonal skills and global awareness.
Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生现就读于一所国际学校，打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团，
要求考生按照要求给学生会主席写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
致力于：be dedicated to→ be devoted to
促进：promote→ facilitate
计划做：plan to do→ intend to do
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We plan to organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international
film screenings.
拓展句：We plan to organize various activities, which include cultural festivals, language workshops, and
international film screenings.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student
答案第12页，共2页community.（运用了现在分词writing作状语）
【高分句型2】The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students（运
用了动名词promoting作宾语）
10．（2024·山东·三模）大学生活丰富多彩，令人向往。假如你是李华，即将进入大学学习和生活。请根
据以下所给提示，写一封信，申请成为学校英语俱乐部成员。内容主要包括：
1. 申请原因；2. 个人优势。
参考词汇：说英语很流利speak English very fluently
与他人良好沟通communicate well with others
熟练使用电脑use the computers skillfully
有良好的团队精神have good team spirit
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：词数80~120；
3. 开头以给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to apply to join the club for English learners.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to join the club for English learners. My name is Li Hua. English is one of my favorite
subjects. So I want to improve it by joining the club.
I can speak English very fluently. I won the first prize in English speaking competition last year. In
addition, I’m an outgoing person. I can communicate well with others. What’s more, I’m good at operating
computers. I can use the computers skillfully. So I can help deal with some things using the computers. Since I
possess strong team spirit, I am capable of cooperating with other club members. We can help each other.
I would be appreciated it if I can be a member of the English club.
I look forward to your reply.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，申请成为学校英语俱乐部成员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高：improve→enhance
赢得：won→gained
另外：In addition→Moreover
外向的：outgoing→outward
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：In addition, I’m an outgoing person. I can communicate well with others.
同义句：Additionally, I am sociable and can effectively interact with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since I possess strong team spirit, I am capable of cooperating with other club
members. (运用了Since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I would be appreciated it if I can be a member of the English club.(运用了句型I would be
appreciated it if)
11．（2024·贵州贵阳·二模）假如你是李华，学校英语社在向全校学生征集社徽。请就以下要点用英文向
评委介绍自己的作品。
1. 社徽的形状、颜色等;
2. 你的设计思路;
3. 希望得到采纳。
注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右。
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【答案】范文
Good afternoon, dear judges! My name is Li Hua, and I’m submitting my design for the English Club logo.
It’s a simple but meaningful design. It’s shaped like a book, which represents learning and knowledge. The colors
答案第14页，共2页are blue and white, which look nice together and symbolize trust and clarity.
I chose these elements because I want the logo to show that our club is about learning and understanding
different cultures. The book-shaped design also reminds us of the importance of reading and writing in English.
I really hope you like my design and choose it as the official logo for our English Club.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文向评委介绍自己的社徽作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提交：submit→hand in
象征：symbolize→stand for
重要性：importance→significance
喜欢：like→enjoy
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：My name is Li Hua, and I’m submitting my design for the English Club logo. It’s a simple but meaningful
design.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, and I’m submitting my design for the English Club logo, which is a simple but
meaningful design.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s shaped like a book, which represents learning and knowledge. (运用了which引导非
限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I chose these elements because I want the logo to show that our club is about learning and
understanding different cultures. (运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
12．（2024·四川乐山·三模）假定你是李华，最近参加了学校举办的“新时代好少年”主题网络短视频制
作大赛活动，请你给学校英文报写一篇短文介绍该活动，内容包括：
1.活动设置目的；
2.你的参与情况和感受。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
An Unforgettable Video–clip Story
Recently I participated in a contest of online video -clip making, which was themed “Model Students in
New Era”.
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【答案】An Unforgettable Video-clip Story
Recently I participated in a contest of online video-clip making, which was themed “Model Students in
New Era” This activity was set to encourage our creativity, spread positive life values and find good role models
around us. Many of us gave an active response to this event.
I shot a video, telling the story of our monitor, Li Mei. I showed her experiences in volunteering in my
community, helping the classmates with their studies, and organizing a learning group on Chinese culture. I was
delighted when my video was selected as one of the winners.
The contest enriched our campus life. What’s more, It was through the model students’ stories that I
developed a stronger sense of social responsibility. I am grateful that the school organized this event.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生最近参加了学校举办的“新时代好少年”主题网络短视频制作
大赛活动，请你给学校英文报写一篇短文介绍该活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
鼓励：encourage→inspire
帮助：help→assist
高兴的：delighted→pleased
选择：select→choose
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：This activity was set to encourage our creativity, spread positive life values and find good role models
around us. Many of us gave an active response to this event.
拓展句：This activity was set to encourage our creativity, spread positive life values and find good role models
around us, so many of us gave an active response to this event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, It was through the model students’ stories that I developed a stronger
sense of social responsibility.（运用了强调句式）
【高分句型2】I am grateful that the school organized this event.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
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