专题 01-4 咨询信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
【典题解读】
(2014·全国卷I)假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注
意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词汇：住宿—accommodation
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【解读】
这是一篇应用文写作之咨询信。本篇书面表达是一篇应用文—书信。构思的关键是对图片中的广告
进行梳理，然后进行有效的整合：你计划去英国学习英语；看见了对方的广告，引起你的注意，想询问
具体信息；该校培训班的开始日期、班级规模、周课时、费用以及食宿方式；期待对方的回复。将整合
后的要点用三段式来进行表达。
【答案】官方答案
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when
will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many
students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is
included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua【答案】民间答案
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a senior high school student, to improve my English, I'm planning to go to Britain to attend a summer
school during the vacation. Would you mind answering my questions about your six-week English course?
My first question is when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week. Furthermore, I
want to know how many students make up the class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course
and whether accommodation is included. Finally, shall I live in a host family or a university dormitory?
I'd appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作点拨】
咨询信(包括电子邮件)是写信人就自己不太熟悉、不理解的事情或者问题，向有关部门、专家、熟
悉此类情况或问题的亲朋好友寻求解答时所使用的一种书信。咨询信从呈送对象来看可以分为以下两类
写给个人的和非个人的咨询信。高考英语书面表达试题中，考查类型以写给个人的咨询信居多。咨询信
的题干或是提供的文字较少或是提供的文字较多，所以考生在写作时要特别注意认真审题。对于提示文
字较少的题考生要注意扩充题干，需要通过合理想象或逻辑推理适当增加细节，以达到题目所规定的字
数要求；对于提示文字较多的题，考生应该捋顺要点、合并要点，以便不遗漏任何要点。
第一段：自我介绍表明自己的身份，叙述相关咨询背景(陈述写信目的)；
第二段：陈述咨询的具体内容；
第三段：表达强烈获取信息的愿望和感谢(必要时还要提供联系方式)。
【常用素材】
I’ve learned that you are planning to organize...我知道你们正在计划组织……
Could you tell me/us something about...你能告诉我/我们一些关于……？
Would you mind giving some detailed information about...?你介意提供一些有关……详细的信息吗?
Would you please give me details of...?您能给我提供……的详细信息吗？
I would like to know whether you can tell me something about...
我想知道您是否能告诉我有关……的情况。
I’m writing to inquire about the details of... 我写信询问……的详细信息。
I’d like to acquire all the information relative to...我想获得关于……的所有信息。
I am... and I wonder if you could provide some specific information about...
我是……。我想知道您是否能提供一些……的具体信息。
I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding...
我写信是想知道您是否能给我提供关于……的信息。
I am writing to inquire aboutsome relevant information/details.我写信是想询问一些相关的信息/细节。
I am writing to inquire if it is possible for you to provide me with some information, regarding/concerning
...我写信来是想询问您是否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
I wonder/am wondering if you could/would let me know something about...
不知道您是否能够告知我有关……的情况。I’m writing to ask you some relevant questions.我写信向您询问一些相关的问题。
I am writing to ask you some relevant information about...to be held next week.
我写信是想问你一些关于下周将举行的……的相关信息。
I’d like to know more information about ...我想知道更多关于……的信息。
I am not familiar with ..., so I would like to know about...
我对……不熟悉，所以我想了解……的相关情况。
As we know, ... is famous for...and I want to know ...
正如我们所知道的那样，……以……而闻名；我想知道/了解……
The questions that need answering are listed as follows.下列是我想咨询的问题。
The following is my confusion.以下是我的困惑。
First of all, I’m tempted to know/I wonder ...首先，我想知道……
Moreover/Then/Besides/What’s more, I would like to...此外，我们想要……
Since it is my first time to ..., I would like to know the details about ...
由于这是我第一次……，我想知道知道关于……的细节
Another point I am not certain about is...我还不确定的另外一点是……
I would appreciate it if you could inform me...如果您能告诉我……，我将不胜感激。
Could you be so kind as to send me some... on the above-mentioned aspects?
能否针对上述问题寄些相关的……给我？
I am looking forward to hearing from you.我盼望着收到您的来信。
I’ll be very grateful for any help you can give me.对于您的任何帮助我将非常感激。
I shall feel appreciated if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.
如果您能盡早回电话，我将非常感激。
I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning...
如果您能向我提供关于……的信息，我将不胜感激。
Your early attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
如果您能及早回复这封信，我将不胜感激。
I’m looking forward to/eagerly waiting for a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
我盼望着您早日回复。
May I have your reply by...(日期), if possible(语气更加委婉)?
如果可能，我能否在……(日期)之前收到您的答复呢？
Thank you for your kindness, and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
谢谢您的善意，对于您对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
Please call me at...and let me know.../Please get in touch with...at...
请拨打……告诉我……/请拨打……和……联系。
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can
contact me via ...如果您能向我提供上述信息，并通过……与我联系，我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it very much if you could let me know the information above in detail. I’m looking
forward to your early reply.如果您能让我详细了解上述信息，我将不胜感激。我期待着你的早日答
复。I would greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
请在方便时尽早回信，我将不胜感激。
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
如能在您方便时尽早收到您的答复，我将不胜感激。
【模板构建】
模板一
Dear _______,
I am...(自我介绍). I’m writing to ask for information about _______(某方面/某件事/某项活动).
I am(We are)planning to ...(咨询的背景). Could you tell me/us something about _______(咨询内容
1)? As we know, ________ is famous for _________(引起咨询内容 2 的话题)and I want to know
_________(咨询内容2). Besides, (引起咨询内容3的话题)and please introduce ... to me/us ________(咨
询内容3). What’s more,
________(咨询内容4). At last, ________(其他咨询内容).
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
或者
I am...(自我介绍). I’ve learned that you are planning/I am/We are planning to ...(咨询的背景). I am
writing to inquire about some relevant information.
The following is my confusion. First of all, I am eager to know _______. Secondly, _______?
Thirdly, _______? Finally/At last, I’d like to know _______(以上罗列要咨询的问题).
I would appreciate it very much if you can furnish me with the information above in detail and
you can contact me via _______(联系方式). I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板应用】一
(改编自2022·全国高考专题练)假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习。你和朋友计划寒假期间在该国旅
游，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。
内容包括：1.旅游信息；
2.当地特色；
3.其他注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ask for information about your
agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the winter vacation.
My friend and I are planning to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling
routes? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know
more details about these. Besides, I am also interested in the local food and please introduce some local
special food to me. At last, is there anything else I should pay special attention to?
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear _______,
I am ___________(自我介绍). Having read/learned ____________(信息来源), I am writing to see if it is
possible for you to provide me with some specific information /I’m writing to apply for a chance to join in it and
ask for some details regarding ...
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell me _____________(第一个问题)? Besides, I would also
like to __________(第二个问题). In addition, ... I want to/I wonder ____________(第三个问题). Also, what
deserves my special attention is/what’s the most important is ____________(最重要的一個问题).
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
/I will appreciate it if I will be given the chance. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板运用】二
(改编自2021·河南濮阳一高高二期中)假定你是李华，正在新西兰一所国际中学做交换生，得知学校
近期将组织一次当地的文化体验活动。请给负责人写一封询问信咨询相关事宜并申请参加。
内容包括：1.写信目的；
2.咨询内容：时间、路线、所需准备等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Having learned that a taste of local culture will be held by our
school in the near future, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific
information regarding the activity.
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell me when we will set out and where to get together, in
case I might be late. Besides, I would like to know which route we will take. In addition, having heard
that there are many places of interest in New Zealand, I want to enjoy as many as possible. Also, what deserves
my special attention is whether I should take some food and drink.
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作实践】一
(改编自2022·全国高考专题练)假设你是光明中学高二(1)班班长，准备组织班级同学去博物馆参观历
史展览。请向博物馆写一封信进行咨询。
内容如下：1. 展览内容(规模、主题及展出物品等)；
2. 展出起止时间，是否有折扣；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class One from Guangming High School, and we are planning to organize a
group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your museum. I am writing to inquire about some
relevant information.
The following is my confusion. First of all, I wonder to know the size of the exhibition, the theme as
well as the objects on display. Secondly, when will the exhibition be held? Thirdly, I'd like to know how
long it lasts. At last, I’d like to know if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students.
I would appreciate it very much if you can furnish me with the above information and you can
contact me via 1234456@df.erf. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作实践】二
(2022·新疆师范大学附属中学一模)假定你是李华，你在某项国际赛事中获得一等奖，奖励是欧洲两周游(A two-week package tour of Europe)。请给主办方写一封邮件，咨询以下事宜：
1.旅行日程安排；
2.食宿等相关费用。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, the winner of the first prize in the international competition. I am writing to see if it is
possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding the two-week package tour of
Europe.
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell me the specific time of the project and how long it will
last, so that I can properly arrange my time. Besides, I would like to know what scenic spots and activities it
offers to me. In addition, I wonder how much I have to pay for the project. Also, what’s the most important is
whether I will be provided with accommodation.
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
