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专题 01-3 建议信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
【典题解读】
(2017·北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江
之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信。
内容包括：1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解读】
【写作点拨】
建议信是向对方提出自己的合理建议的信件。建议信一般分为三类：一是给熟悉的人就有关方面主
动提供建议；二是对别人写信向你求助的回复，就其遇到的某个问题提出看法、建议等；三是写给某个
组织或机构的信，就改进服务等方面提出建议或忠告。建议信要尽量简洁明确，理由充足，具有合理性
和说服性。具体的说：
第一段：
第二段：
第三段：
【常用素材】
You have asked me for my advice on/with regard to how to ..., and I will try to make some suggestions
here.你关于如何……询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
I’m overjoyed/very glad to receive your letter/e-mail asking for my advice on how to ...很高兴收到你的来信/邮件，信上询问我关于如何……
Now I’m writing to give you some advice/suggestions/tips on how to ...
现在，关于如何……的问题，我写信给你提些建议。
I’m sorry/feel sorry to hear that you are having trouble ... and I would like to offer you the following tips.
很遗憾听说你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
I am writing to express my views/share with you some suggestions concerning ...
我写信是想表达/与你分享我对……的看法/建议。
It is my pleasure/I’m glad to offer you some advice/suggestions only for your reference.
我很高兴给您提一些建议，仅供参考。
You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.我非常乐意提供我的建议供你参考。
I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.我将尽力在这里提出一些有益的建议。
My suggestions are as follows./Here are a few suggestions./The following are my suggestions.
我的建议如下。
Hope my advice/suggestions can be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let
me know.
希望我的建议能有所帮助。如果还有什么我能做的，请告诉我。
In my opinion, you had better/you might as well/you are supposed to ...
在我看来，你最好/不妨/应该……
It’s a good idea/a wise choice to ...这是一个好主意/明智的选择……
I think the most efficient way(ways) is(are)to ....我认为最有效的方法是……
It makes sense to ...做……有意义。
... is also a good choice, which would help ...……也是一个很好的选择，这将有助于……
It will be much more convenient for you to ...做……对你来说更方便。
It’s a good idea for you to ...做……对你来说是个好主意。
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will ...Wish you all the best!
将所有这些因素考虑到，我相信你会……。祝你一切顺利！
I hope you will find these proposals useful.我希望你会觉得这些建议很有用。
I hope my suggestions above may benefit you.我希望我的建议对你有所裨益。
I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
我愿意与你讨论这个问题，以进一步了解细节。
Hope you will make sufficient progress in ... soon.希望你能在……很快取得长足的进步。
I am fully convinced that use the tips/suggestions above and you will gain benefit.
我完全相信，使用上面的技巧/建议，您将受益匪浅。
I believe it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggestions.
我相信如果你能听从我的建议，那将是非常有益的。I’m sure you can make a wise decision.我相信你会做出明智的决定。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你实用/有用/有帮助。
I will be glad/would appreciate it if you will/could take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴/我将不胜感激。
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会很开心的。
I’m looking forward to your ...我期待着收到你的……。
【模板构建】
模板一
Dear ________,
I am delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(有关内容). I’m more than glad
to offer my advice for your reference.
(或者：I am glad/sorry to hear that __________(有关内容), and (As to how to ________), I will try to
make some conducive suggestions here.)
To get started/To begin with, you had better/you might as well/you are supposed to _________(建议一).
Besides/Additionally/What’s more, it’s a good idea/a wise choice to _________(建议二). Last but not
least/Moreover/At last, I think the most efficient way(ways) is(are)to _________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题).Wish you all the
best!
(或者：I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to
further details. Wish you all the best!)
(或者：I hope my suggestions above may benefit you. Hope you will make sufficient progress in
________(某方面) soon. I am looking forward to ...)
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板运用】一
(2022·新疆乌鲁木齐市八中高三阶段练)假如你是李华，刚参加完高考且取得优异成绩。你的朋友王
东今年读高三感到读书压力大，晚上睡不着，写信向你求助，希望你能给一些建议让他能够顺利度过高
三学习生活。
内容包括：1.相信自己的老师，提高课堂听课效率；
2.课后合理安排时间，提高解题效果；
3.尽可能抽空锻炼，树立信心。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wangdong,
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Yours,
Lihua
Yours,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
I am delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on_________(有关内容)
或：I am hearing about_________(有关内容)/I am hearing that _________(有关内容). I’m more than
glad to offer my advice for your reference.
In my opinion, you are supposed to _________(建议)because _________(理由一). Additionally, it
makes sense to _________(理由二). Moreover, __________(理由三)is also a good choice, which would help
...
或：In my opinion, you are supposed to _________(建议)because _________(理由一). Additionally, it
will be much more convenient for you to _________(理由二). Therefore, it’s a good idea for you to ...
I am fully convinced that use the tips/suggestions above and you will _________(以上建议的好处). I
would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.
或：I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板运用】二
(陕西省西安中学 2019-2020 学年高三上学期期中)假如你是李华，你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的
女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，想从书法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学
习建议。请你给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：1.推荐内容及简要原因；
2.切实可行的学习建议；
3.祝福与希望。
注意：1.词数：80词左右；
2.内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【写作实践】一(2022·全国高三专题练习)假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，
写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.写信的目的；
2.提出学习中文建议；
3.期待与祝福。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Muhammad,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作实践】二
(网络资源：高中英语高考建议信写作专项练)假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用
英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久，他来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示给他回信。
内容包括：1.建议他回国；
2.你的理由。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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