专题06 建议信模板
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、
主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某
个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
这类信件通常结构清晰，开篇会简要介绍写信的背景或目的，明确指出要讨论的问题。主体部分则详细阐
述建议的内容，包括问题的分析、具体的改进措施或解决方案，以及这些建议的可行性和预期效果。
(2025·北京·高考) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外
国好友Jim 打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 提出的建议；
2. 建议的理由。
提示词：倡议 proposal
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题思路】
一、审题立意
情境：回复好友邮件，就其参加联合国全球青少年倡议活动提供建议。内容需具备全球视野和青年关怀。
身份：中国高三学生李华。建议可融入中国视角或自身观察。
对象：外国好友Jim。语气应友好、鼓励、支持，体现合作精神。
核心任务：①提出一个具体、可行的倡议建议；②阐述令人信服的理由（至少2-3 点）。
二、内容构思
1.选择建议主题：主题应切合“全球青少年”范畴，如心理健康、数字素养、环保行动、教育公平等。选
择您能展开论述的主题。
2. 构建理由：理由要层层递进，可从 问题存在的普遍性、该议题对青少年未来发展的重要性、倡议可能
带来的积极改变 等方面展开。
三、结构规划
首段：感谢来信，明确表态支持，并直接点明建议的主题。
主体段：详细阐述建议的内容和理由。这是文章的核心。
结尾段：再次鼓励，表达对Jim 成功的信心和期待。
【参考范文1】
Dear Jim,
It's fantastic to hear that you're participating in the UN proposal initiative! I'm more than happy to offer
my suggestion. I highly recommend focusing on "Promoting Digital Wellness and Responsible Technology
Use among Global Teens."
My reasoning is as follows. Firstly, in this digital era, teenagers worldwide are increasingly facing issues
like cyberbullying, information overload, and screen addiction, which severely impact their mental health.
Secondly, equipping young people with the skills to critically evaluate online information and use
technology productively is crucial for their future development. Your proposal could advocate for
incorporating digital citizenship education into school curricula globally and launching campaigns to
encourage healthy online behavior. This topic is not only timely but also resonates with the lived
experiences of teens everywhere, making your proposal highly relevant and impactful.
I believe your unique perspective will make a real difference. Best of luck with your proposal! I'm
rooting for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文2】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems,
which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will
make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures
coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
① 首段：
a.介绍自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some
conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to
further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建
议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also
helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建
议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【必备词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on)
给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice
向某人征求意见
3.as follows
如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view
在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial
认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in...
参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice
采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration
把……考虑在内
9.with regard to
关于；就
10. put forward
提出
11.in this regard/in this respect
在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb.
与某人分享某事
13.with time going on
随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with
面临
15.take sth. seriously
重视；认真对待
【万能句式】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322 路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
（25-26 高三上·北京·开学考试）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim 正在策划一次
以“中国书法”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动形式；
2. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：书法calligraphy
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning a calligraphy-themed club activity. Here are my suggestions.
For the form, you could organize a workshop followed by a small exhibition. Invite a calligraphy expert to
demonstrate basic strokes and brush techniques first. Then, members can practice writing Chinese characters like
“福” (blessing) under guidance.
For the content, prepare different styles of calligraphy works (e.g., regular script, cursive script) for display.
You could also add a quiz about the history of Chinese calligraphy to make it engaging. Finally, exhibit the best
works from members to encourage participation.
Hope these ideas help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim 回复一封邮件，就他正在策划的以“中国书
法”为主题的社团活动给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
建议：suggestion→advice
不同的：different→various
最后：finally→at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： For the form, you could organize a workshop followed by a small exhibition.
拓展句：For the form, you could organize a workshop which is then followed by a small exhibition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m glad to hear you’re planning a calligraphy-themed club activity.（运用了省略that
的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Finally, exhibit the best works from members to encourage participation. （运用了祈使句和不定
式作目的状语）
Writing 1
（2025·陕西咸阳·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter 因学业压力将放弃足球训练，请给他写一封邮
件，内容包括：
1．表示理解；
2．给出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football. The mountains of
assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of
football.
But think about it. Football isn’t just a sport; it’s a great stress reliever. After focusing on textbooks for hours, a
short training session can help you relax and recharge. My suggestion is to draw up a well-organized schedule. Set
fixed time for study, training, and rest. By doing this, you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying
football. I sincerely hope you won’t give it up.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Writing 2
（2025·河南豫东部分名校·三模）
假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas 组织的“英语月”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他
写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Thomas,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to render what I’ve found about students’ interest in our English
Month.
Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, your English Month undoubtedly offers us students a
great platform to enhance our English proficiency. However, I’ve found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved
lately. I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive
activities like English Drama Performance. Additionally, why not undertake a survey to know about what really
interests students?
I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Month will surely become one
of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Thomas 写邮件，说明同
学们参与“英语月”活动兴趣不高的问题，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：cultivate → foster
提高：enhance → improve
参与：get involved → participate
独特的：unique → distinct
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding
more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.
拓展句：I think that it would be a good idea if we showcase the unique charm of English Month by
adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, your English
Month undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency.（运用了过去
分词短语作状语）
【高分句型 2】I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English
Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.（运用了“介词 + 关系代
词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 3
(2025·山东青岛·一模)
假定你是李华，外教Chris 计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活动
建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)具体活动； (2)你的理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday. I suggest we go to the botanical garden. There,
we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing. Also, we
can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each
other. I’m looking forward to the activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris 写封信，就其计划于下周
六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
建议：suggest→ advise
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
机会：chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and
communicate with each other.
拓展句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors
and communicate with each other.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.(运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2 】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both
educational and relaxing.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 4
（2025·湖北黄冈·三模）
假定你是李华，你校将举办一场以“未来出行”为主题的创意设计比赛（Creative Design
Competition），请你给对汽车设计感兴趣的外教Mr. Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他担任评委，内容包括：
1. 比赛的时间和地点；
2. 比赛的目的和意义；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Our school will hold a Creative Design Competition on Future Mobility and I’m
writing to invite you to be a judge. The event will take place in the school hall from 2:30 to 5:00 p.m. next Friday
(May 24).
This competition aims to inspire students’ creativity in envisioning future transportation, especially in eco-
friendly car design. Participants will present their concepts through models or digital displays, hoping to bridge
innovation with sustainability. We believe your expertise in automotive design and passion for cutting-edge ideas
will greatly inspire the students and add professionalism to the event.
We’d be honored to have you join us. Could you please let me know if you’re available? Looking forward to
your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对汽车设计感兴趣的外教Mr. Smith 写一封邮件，邀请他
担任以“未来出行”为主题的创意设计比赛（Creative Design Competition）评委。内容包括： 比赛的时间
地点、比赛的目的意义以及表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励：inspire→motivate
特别：especially →particularly
希望：hope→expect
回复：reply →response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Looking forward to your reply!
拓展句：I will greatly appreciate it if you can reply at your earliest convenience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Participants will present their concepts through models or digital displays, hoping to
bridge innovation with sustainability.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】 We believe your expertise in automotive design and passion for cutting-edge ideas will greatly
inspire the students and add professionalism to the event.（运用了省略that 的宾语从句）
Writing 5
（25-26 高三上·北京海淀·开学考试）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim 即将回国，学校邀
请他制作一期海报，描述自己眼中的中国校园生活。他写邮件向你征求建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容
包括：
1.提出的建议；
2.建议的理由。
注意：1.词数100 左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm glad to hear from you. Regarding the poster about your life in a Chinese school, here are some
suggestions.
You can include pictures of our daily classes, which can show the teaching-learning atmosphere and the unique
ways of knowledge-imparting in China. Also, adding photos of various school activities like sports meets or
cultural festivals is a good idea. These activities mirror the rich and colorful campus life here, and they can help
others understand the well- rounded education system. I hope these ideas will be helpful to you. Looking forward
to seeing your wonderful poster.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就Jim 关于制作中国校园生活的海报提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
①包含：include→contain
②展示：show→demonstrate
③反映：mirror→reflect
④全面的：well-rounded→comprehensive
2. 句式拓展：
同义句
原句：Adding photos of various school activities like sports meets or cultural festivals is a good idea.
拓展句：It is a good idea to add photos of different school activities such as sports meets or cultural festivals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can include pictures of our daily classes, which can show the teaching-learning
atmosphere and the unique ways of knowledge-imparting in China.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope these ideas will be helpful to you.（使用了省略that 的宾语从句）
Writing 1
【2024 北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim 准备给其校报的Asia Today 栏目投
稿。得知今年新中国成立75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文
给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights
in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s
role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2023 年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主
题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will
all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
【2023▪新高考I&II 卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English
training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This
can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room
for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with
someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
Writing 4
2022 年全国乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果
写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are
choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching
English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English
learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading
English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing
games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and
teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语
学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
缺乏：lack→shortage
加强：strengthen→enhance
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account
for 18% and 12%.
拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only
account for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English
songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it 作形式主语，that 引导主语从句以
及who 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what 引导的
主语从句)
Writing 5
【2021 年全国甲卷】
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给
外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional
customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some
advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get
more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate
my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you
can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really
appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
