二模前强化练09 第一节写作之倡议书&建议信
【试题解析】
【2026·浙江高考首考】
假如你是李华，你发现校图书馆的书籍存在被勾画涂写的现象。请你向英文报投稿。
内容包括：1. 具体说明情况；
2. 呼吁爱护书籍。
注意：1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
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Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disturbing phenomenon in our school library. Many books have been scribbled and
defaced. Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed
out. Even worse, some books have been torn.
These books are our shared assets, not personal notebooks. They deserve our respect and care. Every mark on
them not only ruins the reading experience for others but also shortens their lifespan. Let’s treasure our library
books, keeping them in good condition. After all, a well-kept library is a reflection of our school’s culture and our
own good character.
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作之投稿(倡议书或建议信类的)写作。考生发现校图书馆的藏书存在被勾画涂
改的现象。请你向校园电台投稿。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
财产：asset → possession/property
乱涂乱画：scribble → scrawl
满是：be filled with → be stuffed with
寿命：lifespan → life expectancy
【句式拓展】
原 句：Many books have been scribbled and defaced.
拓展句：There are many books that have been scribbled and defaced.
【高分句型】
1. Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition.(运用了现在分词作状语)
2. Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed
out.(运用了while 连接并列句，表对比)
【写作漏洞推测性分析】
首先，让我们来看一下解题思路：
【如何审题】
分析维度
具体内容
体裁
投稿类应用文(倡议书或建议信类的)，用于说明问题并发出呼吁
主题
针对学校图书馆书籍被勾画涂写的现象，说明具体情况并呼吁爱护书籍
写作对象
全校师生(需使用正式、有说服力的语言)
时态
一般现在时(描述当前现象)和现在完成时(描述已观察到的现象)
人称
第一人称(I)和第一人称复数(we)，以学生身份发出呼吁
写作语气
关切要有理有据、要有呼吁性，既表达担忧又提出建设性意见
【写作提纲】
第一段：提出问题+说明现象
图书馆书籍被严重损坏，急需大家共同保护
第二段：分类描述各种损坏现象
+重点阐述损坏的影响
现象：1. 文字损坏：勾画、涂写、笔记；
2. 物理损坏：折叠、撕破、缺页；
3. 污渍损坏：食物、饮料痕迹。
影响：1. 对读者的影响：阅读困难、分心；
2. 对书籍的影响：缩短寿命、降低价值；
3. 对学校的影响：资源浪费、资金损失。
第三段：提出具体保护建议
+升华主题
建议：1. 阅读习惯：轻翻页、用书签；
2. 笔记习惯：用笔记本而非书上；
3. 监督习惯：互相提醒、报告损坏。
升华：强调“共同责任”主题。
其次，结合本题投稿类应用文要求、三段式写作提纲及考场实际作答情况，在无大规模样本数据的前
提下，笔者试图推测考生在内容、语言、结构三个层面可能出现的漏洞。
一、内容层面
第一段要点单薄，问题引入不到位。考生很可能仅简单提及“books are dirty”，难以使用with concern
/alarming phenomenon 等体现关切语气的表达；也无法开门见山点明“图书馆书籍被严重损坏、急需共同
保护”，与投稿应用文“开门见山提出问题”的要求不符；
第二段分类描述不全，影响阐述的全面性。对损坏现象的描写大概率只写勾画、涂写，几乎忘了覆盖
文字、物理、污渍三类损坏，折叠、缺页、食物饮料痕迹等细节极易遗漏，无法满足“说明具体情况”的
要求；阐述影响时，往往只说“影响阅读”，很少从读者、书籍、学校三个层面展开；更不会提及缩短书
籍寿命、浪费公共资源、增加学校购书资金等内容，导致文章缺乏说服力；
第三段建议空泛，主题升华不很够。考生多停留在 “We should protect books” 这类口号式表达，不会
细化到用书签、笔记本记笔记、及时报告损坏、互相提醒等具体可操作建议；结尾也容易忽略“共同责
任”“保护公共财产”等主题升华，与题目和标题的核心立意脱节；
此外，内容比例失衡，偏离词数与场合要求可能出现某一段过度展开、某一段过于简略的情况；或加
入指责、抱怨等无关内容，不符合面向全校师生、正式理性的投稿语境。
二、语言层面
时态与人称使用不规范，不符合文体要求描述当前现象时，考生很可能误用一般过去时，忽略一般现
在时与现在完成时的正确搭配；也可能频繁使用第二人称you 指责他人，未坚持以第一人称I / we 温和呼
吁，语气生硬且身份定位不准；
核心词汇匮乏，表达不够精准正式面对勾画、涂写、折叠、撕破、污渍等场景，考生多依赖 draw、
write、break 等基础词，极少使用 deface、scribble、highlight、tear、fold、stain、lifespan、public property
等核心词汇，语言正式度与精准度明显不足；
句型单一，高分句式运用失误全文多为简单句堆砌，很少使用 not only ... but also ...、moreover、
worse still、therefore 等衔接句型；即便尝试使用范文中的复杂句式，也容易出现结构残缺、语法错误；
语气与语体不当，不符合投稿风格容易出现口语化、情绪化表达，缺少关切、理性、建设性的语气；
“爱护书籍、共同责任” 等表达常出现中式英语，无法体现校英文报应有的正式、得体、有说服力的文
风。
三、结构层面
未严格遵循三段式结构，层次混乱。考生很可能将“提出问题、描述现象、阐述影响、提出建议”混
杂在一段，没有按“第一段：提出问题+说明现象——第二段：分类描述各种损坏现象+重点阐述损坏的影
响响——第三段：提出具体保护建议+升华主题”逐渐展开写作，段落划分随意，逻辑层次不清晰，不符
合投稿格式要求；
缺少衔接词，行文逻辑不连贯。段落内部与句间几乎不使用 recently、some ... while others...、even
worse、moreover、therefore 等路标词，导致现象、影响、建议之间衔接不够，让人(实际是阅卷老师)读起
来零散割裂，远不如范文流畅严谨；
首尾未扣标题，主题意识薄弱开头未紧扣标题 Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility 切入，
结尾未回扣“共同责任”核心；整体结构不完整，缺少投稿类应用文应有的完整性与呼应感。
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(2026·天津滨海新区·一模)假定你是晨光中学的李津，为迎接2026 年4 月23 日“世界读书日”的到来，
你校英文校报将举办以“Blissful Moments Between Pages (书页间的幸福时光)”为主题的征文活动。请你写
一篇短文投稿，分享你的阅读故事与感悟。
内容包括：1. 阐述阅读意义及给你带来的影响；
2. 介绍你的阅读习惯(如阅读时间、阅读方式、书籍类型偏好等)；
3. 向全校同学发出倡议，鼓励大家养成阅读习惯，享受阅读的乐趣。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Blissful Moments Between Pages
Books are quiet companions that enrich my world. Reading The Little Prince taught me to cherish innocence,
while biographies fuel my ambition to chase dreams.
I stick to a daily routine: 15 minutes of poetry at dawn to refresh my mind, and historical novels before bed to
wander through the past. Weekends find me in the school library, lost in stories with fellow book lovers.
This World Book Day, let’s all set aside 10 minutes daily for reading. Pick any book that draws you in —
fiction, science, or poetry. Let’s turn pages, grow wiser, and embrace the bliss reading brings!
By Li Jin
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之投稿(倡议书)。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，分享阅读故事与感悟，参加学
校举办的以“Blissful Moments Between Pages (书页间的幸福时光)”为主题的征文活动。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
珍视：cherish → treasure
激发；增强：fuel → inspire
吸引：draw → attract
抱负：ambition → aspiration
【句式拓展】
原 句：Weekends find me in the school library, lost in stories with fellow book lovers.
拓展句：Weekends find me in the school library, where I am lost in stories with fellow book lovers.
【高分句型】
1. Books are quiet companions that enrich my world.(运用了that 引导的定语从句)
2. Reading The Little Prince taught me to cherish innocence, while biographies fuel my ambition to chase
dreams.(运用了while 连接的并列句表示对比)
2
(2026·山东济南·模拟预测)假定你是校学生会主席李华，高考在即，学生会对高三学生的学习状态调研
后发现：
请你以校学生会名义，向全体高三同学写一封倡议书。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Senior Three students,
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The Students' Union
【答案】
Dear Senior Three students,
As the college entrance examination is just around the corner, the Students’ Union has conducted a survey on
our study state and found that many of us are under huge exam pressure, often feel sleepy and distracted in class,
and even unwilling to take part in any activities. To get into a better prep state, we call on everyone to adjust your
mindset to ease pressure, arrange your schedule reasonably to stay energetic in class, and take proper part in
activities to relax yourself. Let’s get in the best state and spare no effort to strive for our college dreams with full
passion and energy!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之倡议书。要求考生根据图表中学生会对高三学生的学习状态调研结果，以
校学生会名义向全体高三同学写一封倡议书。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
执行：conduct → carry out
压力：pressure → stress
参加：take part in → participate in
缓解：ease → relieve
【句式拓展】
原 句：To get into a better prep state, we call on everyone to adjust your mindset to ease pressure, arrange
your schedule reasonably to stay energetic in class, and take proper part in activities to relax
yourself.
拓展句：We call on everyone who wants to get into a better preparation state to adjust your mindset to ease
pressure, arrange your schedule reasonably to stay energetic in class and take proper part in activities
to relax yourself.
【高分句型】
1. As the college entrance examination is just around the corner, the Students’ Union has conducted a survey
on our study state and found that many of us are under huge exam pressure, often feel sleepy and distracted
in class, and even unwilling to take part in any activities. (运用了As 引导的时间状语和that 引导的宾语
从句)
2. Let’s get in the best state and spare no effort to strive for our college dreams with full passion and energy!
(运用了祈使句和不定式to strive for 作目的状语)
3
(25-26 高三上·广东·月考)假定你是李华，你发现身边部分同学缺乏体育锻炼，体质下降。请你写一份
倡议书，呼吁全校同学“积极锻炼，拥抱健康”。
内容包括：1. 体育锻炼的重要性；
2. 适合学生的体育活动(如跑步、球类运动)；
3. 倡议具体行动(如每天运动30 分钟)。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear fellow students,
I’ve recently noticed that many of us lack sufficient physical exercise, which has led to a gradual decline in
physical fitness—some even feel tired easily during classes. As teenagers, regular sports are essential: they not only
strengthen our bodies and improve immunity but also relieve academic stress and enhance our sense of teamwork.
There are plenty of accessible activities for us: we can jog on the playground before class, play basketball,
volleyball or badminton with classmates after school, or practice yoga and skipping rope in our free time. These
activities don’t require much equipment but bring great benefits.
I sincerely call on everyone to take action: set aside at least 30 minutes every day for exercise, actively
participate in school sports events, and encourage friends to join you. Let’s make physical activity a daily habit,
stay energetic, and embrace a healthy and vibrant life!
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之倡议书。要求考生写一份倡议书，呼吁全校同学“积极锻炼，拥抱健康”。
【详解】
【词汇积累】：
带来、促使：lead to→bring about/result in/cause
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
呼吁某人做某事：call on sb. to do→appeal to sb.to do
参加：participate in→take part in/be involved in
【句式拓展】：
原 句：As teenagers, regular sports are essential: they not only strengthen our bodies and improve immunity
but also relieve academic stress and enhance our sense of teamwork.
拓展句：As teenagers, regular sports are essential: not only do they strengthen our bodies and improve
immunity but they also relieve academic stress and enhance our sense of teamwork.
【高分句型】
1. I’ve recently noticed that many of us lack sufficient physical exercise, which has led to a gradual decline in
physical fitness—some even feel tired easily during classes.(运用了that 引导宾语从句和which 引导非限
制性定语从句)
2. Let’s make physical activity a daily habit, stay energetic, and embrace a healthy and vibrant life!(运用了名
词短语a daily habit 作宾补和动作链)
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(25-26 高三上·河北·期中)假定你是李华，校英文报的编辑，上周外教 Mr. Johnson 组织的户外英语课
“The Touch of Nature”让你颇受启发。现请你据此为校英文报写一篇倡议书，呼吁同学们走进自然。
内容包括：1. 课堂经历;
2. 感受与呼吁。
注意：1. 词数80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step Outside and Breathe Nature
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【答案】
Step Outside and Breathe Nature
Have you imagined learning English surrounded by nature’s beauty? That’s what exactly Mr. Johnson’s “The
Touch of Nature” outdoor lesson offered us last week. We enjoyed sunshine, felt and described the surfaces of
fallen leaves, and even composed short poems inspired by the scenery. It was more than a lesson— it was a healing
experience.
This experience proves how nature sharpens our senses and stimulates creativity. I sincerely urge you to step
outside, walking among trees, breathing deeply and feeling the earth beneath your feet. These moments will surely
refresh your spirit and inspire new perspectives.
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之倡议书。上周外教 Mr. Johnson 组织的户外英语课“The Touch of Nature”
让考生颇受启发。现请你据此为校英文报写一篇倡议书，呼吁同学们走进自然。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
被……环绕：be surrounded by→be encircled by
创作：compose→create
描写：describe→depict
使振奋：refresh→invigorate
【句式拓展】
原 句：Have you imagined learning English surrounded by nature’s beauty?
拓展句：Have you ever thought about learning English while being encircled by the beauty of nature?
【高分句型】
1. We enjoyed sunshine, felt and described the surfaces of fallen leaves, and even composed short poems
inspired by the scenery.(运用了过去分词作定语)
2. This experience proves how nature sharpens our senses and stimulates creativity.
(使用 how 引导的宾语从句)
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(25-26 高三上·天津·期中)假设你是某学校学生会主席李津，你校打算在下周开展主题为“用劳动感恩
父母”的活动。请你代表学校写一封倡议书，号召学校同学积极参与。
内容包括：1. 活动目的；
2. 活动要求；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：1. 词数不少于100 字；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I’m Li Jin, president of the Student Union. It’s my great pleasure to announce that our school will launch the
“Express Gratitude to Parents Through Labor” campaign next week. I sincerely hope every one of you can actively
participate in this meaningful activity.
This initiative aims to deepen our understanding of parents’ devotion and cultivate our sense of responsibility.
From Monday to Friday, we encourage you to perform household chores for your parents — such as cooking meals,
cleaning rooms, or doing laundry. Please document these precious moments with photos or a short video (within 3
minutes). Through this practice you will not only acquire essential life skills but also experience the joy of giving.
Let’s turn our gratitude into action! Your participation will definitely bring warmth and happiness to your
family. Join us now and make a difference through your efforts!
The Student Union
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之倡议书。题目要求学生以校学生会主席李津的身份，代表学校写一封倡议
书，号召同学积极参与“用劳动感恩父母”的活动，应首先说明活动目的，再详细介绍活动要求，
最后发出倡议。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
宣布：announce→declare
旨在做某事：aim to do→be intended to do, be meant to do
培养：cultivate→develop, foster
宝贵的：precious→valuable, treasurable
【句式拓展】
原 句：Through this practice you will not only acquire essential life skills but also experience the joy of
giving.
拓展句：Not only will you acquire essential life skills through this practice, but you will also experience the
joy of giving.
【高分句型】
1. It’s my great pleasure to announce that our school will launch the “Express Gratitude to Parents Through
Labor” campaign next week. (运用了that 引导宾语从句)
2. I sincerely hope every one of you can actively participate in this meaningful activity.
(运用了省略that 引导的宾语从句)
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(25-26 高三上·河南省新乡·月考)假定你是国际部学生李华，你校学生会计划在本周五下午举办“校园
旧物循环”(Campus Second-hand Cycle)活动，鼓励学生将闲置的旧物进行捐赠、转让或交换。请你代表学
生会写一封倡议书。
内容包括：1. 介绍相关细节；
2. 鼓励大家参加。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】
Dear fellow students,
To promote sustainable living, reduce waste and enhance mutual help between students, our Student Union is
launching the “Campus Second-hand Cycle” activity.
It will be held this Friday afternoon from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m. on the school playground. You can donate, sell or
exchange your old books, stationery, toys and other items. Through this activity, you not only can make full use of
your idle items but also understand the true meaning of saving resources and protecting the environment.
We sincerely invite you to join us, practicing the sustainable lifestyle and working together to give old things a
new life.
The Student Union
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之倡议书。要求考生代表学生会为“校园旧物循环”活动写一封倡议书。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
促进：promote→boost
发起：launch→initiate
举行：hold→host
充分利用：make full use of→take full advantage of
【句式拓展】
原 句：To promote sustainable living, reduce waste and enhance mutual help between students, our Student
Union is launching the “Campus Second-hand Cycle” activity.
拓展句：Since we aim to promote sustainable living, reduce waste and enhance mutual help between
students, our Student Union is launching the “Campus Second-hand Cycle” activity.
【高分句型】
1. To promote sustainable living, reduce waste and enhance mutual help between students, our Student Union
is launching the “Campus Second-hand Cycle” activity.(运用了不定式To promote 作目的状语)
2. We sincerely invite you to join us, practicing the sustainable lifestyle and working together to give old
things a new life.(运用了现在分词短语practicing the sustainable lifestyle and working together 作状语)
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(25-26 高三下·江西宜春·开学考试)假设你是外语社“Heart-To-Heart”专栏的编辑Jack，收到了署名为
Worried 的求助信。该同学在信中向你诉说了自己的困扰：刚进高中课业重，压力大，最近很容易发脾气，
使正常的学习和生活受到影响，请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议并说明理由；
3. 表达个人期待。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考短语：control emotions 调控情绪 lose one’s temper 发脾气
Dear Worried Friend,
I’m sorry to know that you lose your temper easily at the moment. _________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Jack
【答案】
Dear Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you lose your temper easily at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of
those periods, so you don’t have to worry. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may
not do anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful suggestions.
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without
hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an
effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jack
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之建议信。要求考生用英文给署名为Worried 的同学写一封回信，表示对他
的理解并给予安慰，并提出建议，说明理由。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
重要的：important → vital
有用的：useful → of value
方法：way → approach
摆脱：get rid of → cast off
【句式拓展】
原 句：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out
without hurting others or yourself.
拓展句：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out
without hurting others or yourself.
【高分句型】
1. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do anything you’ll regret.
(运用了不定式作表语、so that 引导的目的状语从句和that 引导的定语从句，省略了that)
2. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get
rid of anger. (运用了as 引导的原因状语从句)
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(2026 高三·全国·专题练习)假设你叫李华，你从报纸上得知世界上有多种大象面临灭绝的危险。你决
定给世界野生生物基金会(WWF)写信反映这一情况，提出你的建议和希望。
内容包括：1. 濒危原因：人类活动，如过度捕猎、栖息地遭到破坏等；
2. 提出建议；
3. 表达希望。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have learned from a newspaper that several elephant species in the world are dying out for human activities.
For example, they are overhunted because of their rare and expensive ivory. Another reason is that many habitats of
elephants are being destroyed. They are losing their homes.
Thus, it is high time that we should take some measures to protect and save elephants. For one thing, more
reserves for elephants should be set up so that they can live freely there. For another, laws should be passed to
prevent people from killing elephants and those who hunt elephants should be punished severely when arrested.
Hope the above measures will be useful for the endangered elephants.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之建议信。要求考生给世界野生生物基金会(WWF)写信反映多种大象面临灭
绝的危险这一情况，说明濒危原因，并提出建议和表达希望。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
例如：for example→for instance
稀有的：rare → scarce
因此：thus → therefore
应该：should →be supposed to
【句式拓展】
原 句：For example, they are overhunted because of their rare and expensive ivory.
拓展句：For example, they are overhunted because their ivory is rare and expensive.
【高分句型】
1. Thus, it is high time that we should take some measures to protect and save elephants. (运用了虚拟语气)
2. For another, laws should be passed to prevent people from killing elephants and those who hunt elephants
should be punished severely when arrested. (运用了who 引导的定语从句，when 引导状语从句的省略)
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(2026 高三下·全国·专题练习)假定你是李华，你校交换生Alex 计划本周六独自去徒步探险，向你咨询
相关信息，请你写一封回信。
内容包括：1. 推荐一处目的地；
2. 提出安全建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alex,
I’m excited to hear about your plan for an outdoor hiking adventure this Saturday! I highly recommend the
Green Mountain Trail. It offers stunning views and a moderate difficulty level, making it perfect for a day trip. The
trail is well-maintained, and there are several scenic spots where you can take a break and enjoy the natural beauty.
For safety, always check the weather forecast before you set out. Make sure to bring enough water and snacks
to keep your energy levels up. It’s also a good idea to let someone know your hiking route and expected return time,
just in case. Wear comfortable, sturdy shoes and consider bringing a small first-aid kit. If possible, bring a map and
a compass, even if you have a GPS device. And don’t forget your camera to capture the beautiful moments!
Have a great hike and enjoy the adventure!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作之建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给交换生Alex 写一封回信，回复其关于本
周六独自徒步探险的咨询，并推荐目的地和提出安全建议。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
推荐：highly recommend → strongly suggest
极好的：stunning → gorgeous
保持：keep → maintain
路线：route → path
【句式拓展】
原 句：Wear comfortable, sturdy shoes and consider bringing a small first-aid kit.
拓展句：You should wear comfortable, sturdy shoes and you’d better consider bringing a small first-aid kit.
【高分句型】
1. I’m excited to hear about your plan for an outdoor hiking adventure this Saturday!
(运用了“be excited to do sth.”固定搭配)
2. It offers stunning views and a moderate difficulty level, making it perfect for a day trip.
(运用了现在分词短语“making it perfect for a day trip”作结果状语)
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(2026·重庆·一模)假定你是李华，在一所国际学校上学，你校网站正在征集“AI 进校园”活动方案，
请你给网站写一些建议信。
内容包括：1. 活动的意义；
2. 具体一项建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
I'm Li Hua, a student from our school. _______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I'm Li Hua, a student from our school. I think the “AI into Campus” activity is really meaningful. It can help
us learn more about AI technology, which is important for our future, and also makes our campus life more
colorful.
Here's my specific suggestion: hold an “AI Story Creation Workshop”. We can invite AI experts to guide us.
First, experts will teach us how to use AI tools (like DeepSeek) to generate story ideas. Then, each of us will create
a short story with AI's help, and share it in class. Finally, we can select the best stories to display on the school
website. This workshop can let us experience AI’s creativity and improve our writing skills.
I hope my suggestion is helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇属于应用文之建议信。要求考生以李华的身份，给学校网站编辑写建议信，围绕“AI 进校
园”活动阐述意义并提出一项具体建议，需符合词数要求，行文简洁连贯，贴合校园场景与学生
身份。
【详解】
【词汇积累】
有意义的：important →significant
指导：guide→instruct
生成：generate→produce
展示：display→exhibit
【句式拓展】
原 句：We can invite AI experts to guide us. First, experts will teach us how to use AI tools (like DeepSeek)
to generate story ideas.
拓展句：We can invite AI experts to guide us, who will first teach us how to use AI tools(like DeepSeek)to
generate story ideas.
【高分句型】
1. It can help us learn more about AI technology, which is important for our future, and also makes our
campus life more colorful.(运用which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. First,experts will teach us how to use AI tools (like DeepSeek) to generate story ideas.
(运用“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)
