专题24 应用文写作之建议信
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目录
1. 高考真题练
2. 创新基础练
3. 高考模拟练
一 高考真题练
1．（2025·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议
征集活动。你的外国好友Jim 打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给
他回复，内容包括：
1. 提出的建议；
2. 建议的理由。
提示词：倡议 proposal
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my
advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious
problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to
take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world
where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more
harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim 关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活
动的询问进行回复，给出倡议内容的建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
建议：suggest→advise
关注：focus on → concentrate on
提高：raise→enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.
拓展句：Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We live in a world where different cultures coexist.（运用了where 引导的限制
性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Let me know if you need more ideas.（运用了if 引导的条件状语从句）
2．（2025·全国一卷·高考真题）假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出
“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；
(2)说明理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
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【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that
my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential
contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost
academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even
aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone
to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships
will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious
atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny 提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在
“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
利用：capitalize on → use
担当：serve as → act as
注意：pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose
everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which
capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that 引导的宾语从句，which 引
导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to
befriend someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since 引导的状语从句）
3．（2022·上海·高考真题）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the
instructions given below in Chinese.
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动，拟从三个活动形式
里选择一个：走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。必须包含：
(1)你的选择;
(2)你的理由。
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Dear Mr. A,
I am Li Hua, a student of Senior Three. Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity
with the theme of revisiting the history, I am writing to recommend “history play” as the main activity
instead of visiting old soldiers or making short videos.
First of all, it is a better way to know about the historical events vividly by maximum students
engagement rather than printed text and photos. Through the involvement students could efficiently
remember historical facts instead of merely reciting them from books or PPTs. Secondly, by appreciating
the heroic plots in the stage, students would comprehend the hard-won achievements of revolution deeply.
In addition, students can further recognize the background, analyze the cause and evaluate the effect after
the whole process of historical rehearsal. Most important of all, the excellent stories of national heroes and
heroines will be imprinted in students’ mind and stimulate their national pride and confidence, and even
promote their devotion to a better future of our country.
I do hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动，拟从三个活动形式里选择
一个：走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频，要求学生写出相关建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
提高：promote→enhance
理解：comprehend→understand/make… clear
激励：stimulate→motivate
2.句式拓展
改强调句型
原句：Through the involvement students could efficiently remember historical facts instead of merely
reciting them from books or PPTs.
拓展句：It is through the involvement that students could efficiently remember historical facts instead of
merely reciting them from books or PPTs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity with the theme of
revisiting the history, I am writing to recommend “history play” as the main activity instead of visiting old
soldiers or making short videos. (运用了现在分词做状语和省略that 的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I do hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration. (运用了that 引导宾语从句)
4．（2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim 准备给其校报的
Asia Today 栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件
询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the
highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to
discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition,
you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a
more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim 准备给其校报的Asia Today 栏目投稿。得知今
年新中国成立75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of
the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological
advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which 引导的非限定性定语从
句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because 引导的原因状
语从句）
5．（2023·新课标Ⅱ卷·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组，
让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,
leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less
motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken
English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大
家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to
let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving
little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get
along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who 引导定语从句）
6．（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周
的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你
校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris 写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school
and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could
deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the
opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us
strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through
the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
L
i Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris 写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座
内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our
horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to
broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and
expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that 引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when 引
导的时间状语从句）
二 创新基础练
1．（24-25 高三上·安徽六安·期末）假定你是李华，你的朋友Jasper 因为使用“作业帮”
（Homework Help）抄写作业而被老师批评，为此请你写一封邮件来开导他，内容包括：
1.你对网络辅助学习工具（online learning tools）的看法；
2.你的建议；
3.鼓励他加油。
注意：
1.词数80 左右；
2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Jasper，
I hope this email finds you well.
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jasper,
I hope this email finds you well. I heard about the incident with your teacher and wanted to share
my thoughts on online learning tools like Homework Help and offer some advice.
Online learning tools can be incredibly beneficial when used correctly. They provide a wealth of
information and resources that can help us understand complex issues better. However, don’t rely on these
tools to do our homework, or we miss out on the opportunity to truly learn and develop our problem-
solving skills. You should bear it in mind that you can use online tools to clarify doubts or deepen your
understanding, but always try to solve problems on your own first.
I know you’re capable of turning this situation around and showing everyone what you’re really
made of. Stay positive and keep pushing forward!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给因为使用“作业帮”（Homework Help）抄写作业
而被老师批评的朋友Jasper 写一封邮件来开导他。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：incredibly→extremely
有益处：be beneficial→be of benefit
解决：solve→tackle
依赖；依靠：rely on→count on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, don’t rely on these tools to do our homework.
拓展句：However, it is important that we should not rely on these tools to do our homework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Online learning tools can be incredibly beneficial when used correctly.(运用了
when 引导的时间状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】You should bear it in mind that you can use online tools to clarify doubts or deepen your
understanding, but always try to solve problems on your own first.(运用了it 作形式宾语that 从句作真正
宾语的结构)
2．（24-25 高三上·江西宜春·期末）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jim 所在的学校将开设中文选修
课，Jim 担心中文太难，犹豫是否要选这门课，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你给他回一封邮件,
内容包括:
1. 鼓励他选课；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意: 1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m so excited to hear that your school is offering a Chinese language course. I think you should
take it.I know learning Chinese is challenging for non-native speakers, but trust me, with right methods,
you can surely get the hang of it.
First, you can take advantage of various on-line resources to practice pronunciation, some of which
makes learning quite fun and interactive. I also recommend learning to sing Chinese songs since you’re a
music fan. You can also watch Chinese movies with subtitles, which not only levels up your Chinese skills
but also deepens your understanding of the culture.
If you have any difficulties in learning Chinese, feel free to tell me!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim 回复邮件给出建议，建议他选择中文课。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动：excited→thrilled
利用：take advantage of→make use of
各种各样：various→a variety of
提高：levels up→improve
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：I also recommend learning to sing Chinese songs since you’re a music fan.
拓展句：It’s also recommended that you learn to sing Chinese songs since you’re a music fan.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, you can take advantage of various on-line resources to practice
pronunciation, some of which makes learning quite fun and interactive. (运用了介词+关系代词结构非限
制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any difficulties in learning Chinese, feel free to tell me! (运用了if 引导条件状
语从句)
3．（24-25 高三上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according
to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，在本学期学校英语报的“TROUBLESHOOTER (排忧解难) ”专栏
读到Lynn 的来信(内容如下)，你通过该专栏给Lynn 写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他改变父母的想
法。你的回信须包括：
(1) 你的建议；
(2) 你的理由。
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Dear Lynn,
I am Li Ming, a Senior Three student from Mingqi High School. I am very glad to hear from you
and know your trouble. I am willing to give you some advice on how to change your parents’ mind.
Firstly, you can tell your parents that traveling abroad is a good chance to improve your English and
widen your view. Secondly, you can promise your parents that you will keep in touch with them by phone
or WeChat while staying abroad. Thirdly, you can ask your parents to take your safety into consideration.
They may worry about your safety when you are alone in a strange country. If you can make them believe
that you will be safe, they may agree with you.
I hope my advice will be helpful and you can have a wonderful experience abroad. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Min
【导语】本篇书面表达为一封建议信，要求考生针对Lynn 父母不同意其出国旅行的困扰，提供合
理建议并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly → to begin with
保持联系：keep in touch → maintain contact
考虑：take... into consideration → take... into account
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Ming, a Senior Three student from Mingqi High School.
拓展句：I am Li Ming, who is a Senior Three student from Mingqi High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, you can tell your parents that traveling abroad is a good chance to
improve your English and widen your view.（使用动名词短语作主语）
【高分句型2】If you can make them believe that you will be safe, they may agree with you.（使用if 引
导的条件状语从句）
4．（24-25 高三上·江西宜春·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Paul 目前在中国学习汉语。近
日，他发来邮件询问提升汉语听力的建议，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Paul,
I completely understand your struggle with improving your Chinese listening skills — it’s a
common challenge for learners! Here are a few tips that might help.
First, try listening to Chinese podcasts or watching Chinese TV shows with subtitles. This will help
you get used to the rhythm and pronunciation. Second, practice daily by listening to short audio clips and
repeating what you hear. Lastly, consider joining language exchange groups where you can converse with
native speakers. I’m sure you’ll make great progress with consistent effort!
Wishing you all the best in your Chinese learning journey!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给询问提升汉语听力建议的英国
好友Paul 回复一封邮件，应首先对他的处境表示理解，然后给出具体的提升建议，最后祝愿他学
习汉语顺利。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高：improve→sharpen
建议：tip→suggestion, advice
适应：get used to→be accustomed to, adjust to
与……交谈：converse with→talk with, chat with
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First, try listening to Chinese podcasts or watching Chinese TV shows with subtitles. This will help
you get used to the rhythm and pronunciation.
拓展句：First, try listening to Chinese podcasts or watching Chinese TV shows with subtitles, which will
help you get used to the rhythm and pronunciation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, practice daily by listening to short audio clips and repeating what you
hear. (运用了what 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Lastly, consider joining language exchange groups where you can converse with native
speakers. (运用了where 引导限制性定语从句)
5．（24-25 高三上·山东泰安·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Dalton 来信说他非常喜欢化学，
经常在家做实验，但是他的妈妈认为很危险，禁止他再做实验，为此他很苦恼。请你给Dalton 写
封回信，内容包括：
(1)你的宽慰;
(2)你的建议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dalton,
______________________________________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Dalton,
I understand how passionate you are about chemistry and how frustrated you must feel. It’s
important to respect your mother’s concerns about safety. My suggestion is to try and find a middle
ground. You could explain to her how much you love doing experiments and propose performing them
under safe conditions or with proper supervision. This way, you’re addressing her worries while continuing
your passion. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Dalton 写一封回信，针对他母亲禁止他
做实验的苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感兴趣的: passionate →enthusiastic
建议: suggestion →advice
感到沮丧的: frustrated →upset
担忧: concern →worry
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: My suggestion is to try and find a middle ground.
拓展句: My suggestion is that you should try and find a middle ground.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s important to respect your mother’ s concerns about safety.（使用it 作形式
主语以及不定式作真正主语）
【高分句型2】You could explain to her how much you love doing experiments and propose performing
them under safe conditions or with proper supervision.（使用how much 引导的宾语从句）
三 高考模拟练
1．（2025·福建泉州·一模）假定你是李华，你校即将举办毕业生图书捐赠活动，请你给外教Terry
写一封邮件，介绍活动基本信息并征求关于优化英文图书的捐赠方案的建议，如书目选择、前期宣
传等。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
I’m writing to introduce our upcoming book donation event and seek your valuable advice.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Terry,
I’m writing to introduce our upcoming book donation event and seek your valuable advice. The
event will take place next Monday in our school library. Graduates are encouraged to donate their used
books to enrich our library’s collection and help build a culture of knowledge-sharing.
To make this activity better, we have decided to ask for your help, as we greatly value your
experience in organizing campus activities and insights into students’ reading preferences. Could you share
your ideas on what types of English books would be meaningful additions to our library? It would also be
helpful if you could offer advice on ways to motivate more students to participate. Thank you for your
help!
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Terry 写邮件，介绍毕业生图书
捐赠活动基本信息并征求优化英文图书捐赠方案的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
丰富：enrich → broaden
重视：value → cherish
有意义的：meaningful → significant
有帮助的：be helpful → be of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Graduates are encouraged to donate their used books to enrich our library’s collection and help
build a culture of knowledge-sharing.
拓展句：Graduates are encouraged to donate their used books that can enrich our library’s collection and
help build a culture of knowledge-sharing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To make this activity better, we have decided to ask for your help, as we greatly
value your experience in organizing campus activities and insights into students’ reading preferences.(运用
了动词不定式短语作目的状语和as 引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you share your ideas on what types of English books would be meaningful
additions to our library?(运用了what 引导的宾语从句)
2．（2025·云南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Jenny 计划在下周的英语课上举行一个小组英语演
讲比赛，让同学们建议演讲的话题。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I’m excited about the upcoming group speech contest. My suggestion for the topic is “Balancing
Traditional Values and Modern Trends”.
This topic is meaningful and close to our lives, so everyone can share personal experiences easily.
We’re growing up in a fast-changing world, where we often face conflicts between family traditions and
new ideas — like how to celebrate festivals or views on career choices. It encourages us to share personal
stories, which makes speeches more vivid. Moreover, it allows us to practice various vocabulary related to
modern life.
I believe this topic can inspire lively discussions. Looking forward to your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Jenny 写一封邮件，就下周英语课上的小
组演讲比赛建议演讲的话题并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
比赛：contest→competition
面临：face→be faced with
各种各样的：various→diverse
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：It encourages us to share personal stories, which makes speeches more vivid. Moreover, it allows us
to practice various vocabulary related to modern life.
拓展句：Not only does it encourage us to share personal stories, which makes speeches more vivid, but
also it allows us to practice various vocabulary related to modern life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
We’re growing up in a fast-changing world, where we often face conflicts
between family traditions and new ideas — like how to celebrate festivals or views on career choices.
（运用了where 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
I believe this topic can inspire lively discussions（运用了省略连接词that 的宾语从
句作believe 的宾语）
3．（2025·浙江·一模）假定你是李华。为帮助学生解决遇到的问题，你校准备开展“Problem-
Solving Workshop”项目，现就如何开展该项目向全校同学征求建议。请你给负责此事的老师写一份
邮件。内容包括：
1. 你的看法；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share my thoughts regarding the upcoming Problem-Solving Workshop. This
initiative is truly commendable as it will provide students with valuable support in addressing both
academic and personal challenges.
To make the workshop more effective, I would like to suggest implementing a peer mentoring
system where experienced senior students can guide their juniors. Additionally, organizing regular theme-
based sessions focusing on common student concerns such as exam stress or time management would be
highly beneficial. To encourage wider participation, we could also introduce an anonymous problem
submission box to help shy students voice their concerns comfortably.
I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给负责“Problem-Solving Workshop”项目的老师写一
份邮件，就如何开展这个项目说明自己看法并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关于：regarding → concerning
此外：additionally → besides
建议：suggestion → advice
宝贵的：valuable → precious
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：To make the workshop more effective, I would like to suggest implementing a peer mentoring
system where experienced senior students can guide their juniors.
拓展句：I would like to suggest implementing a peer mentoring system where experienced senior students
can guide their juniors so that we can make the workshop more effective.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To make the workshop more effective, I would like to suggest implementing a
peer mentoring system where experienced senior students can guide their juniors. (运用了不定式作目的
状语)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful. (运用了省略that 的宾语从句)
4．（2025·河北·三模）假定你是李华，为培养学生的英语素养与兴趣爱好，提高学生对英语的综
合运用能力，你校计划创办英文校刊，现向全体学生征集建议。请你用英语给校刊写一封信，内容
包括：
1.提供建议；
2.表达期待。
注意：1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
Delighted to hear about the launch of our school’s English magazine, I’m writing to give you some
suggestions to make it more engaging for students.
Firstly, sections such as “Student Articles” can encourage more submissions and help develop a love
of English. Secondly, interviews with teachers or students about approaches to learning English can
provide valuable insights. Additionally, it would also be beneficial to include articles on current events or
student achievements to keep everyone informed and motivated.
Looking forward to seeing the magazine become a platform where we can all enhance our English
skills and explore new interests.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校计划创办英文校刊，向全体学生征集建议一
事，给校刊写一封信，内容包括提供建议和表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted → pleased/glad
建议：suggestion → advice
首先：firstly → to begin with
有益的：beneficial → helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, interviews with teachers or students about approaches to learning English can provide
valuable insights.
拓展句：Secondly, interviews, which are conducted with teachers or students about approaches to learning
English, can provide valuable insights.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Delighted to hear about the launch of our school’s English magazine, I’m writing
to give you some suggestions to make it more engaging for students. (运用了形容词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to seeing the magazine become a platform where we can all enhance our
English skills and explore new interests. (运用了关系副词where 引导定语从句)
5．（2025·河北秦皇岛·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jack 要参加校英语俱乐部举办的
“自然公园一日游”活动（内容如图所示），向你询问有关建议。请你回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出建议；
2. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear that you’re joining the Nature Park Day Tour. Here are a few tips, which I think will
make your trip more enjoyable.
To make the most of the tour, I suggest bringing a telescope for birdwatching and a camera to
capture the breathtaking views. Don’t forget to pack some snacks and water, as it’s a full-day activity.
Comfortable walking shoes and a hat are also important, especially if the weather is sunny.
I hope you have a wonderful time exploring the park and making new friends. Enjoy the natural
beauty and take lots of pictures.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给交换生Jack 回邮件，针对他要参加
的校英语俱乐部“自然公园一日游”活动提出建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
建议：tip→suggestion
充分利用：make the most of→take full advantage of
令人惊叹的：breathtaking→stunning
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To make the most of the tour, I suggest bringing a telescope for birdwatching and a camera to
capture the breathtaking views.
拓展句：I suggest that, if you want to make the most of the tour, you should bring a telescope for
birdwatching and a camera to capture the breathtaking views.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are a few tips, which I think will make your trip more enjoyable.（运用了
which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】To make the most of the tour, I suggest bringing a telescope for birdwatching and a
camera to capture the breathtaking views.（运用动词不定式作目的状语）
