专题27 应用文写作之活动报道
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目录
1. 高考真题练
2. 创新基础练
3. 高考模拟练
一 高考真题练
1．（2020·新高考全国I 卷·高考真题）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5 公里越野赛跑活动。请
你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】 A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention
of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five
kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish
the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. At last,
all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also
made us more cohesive.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5 公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of
every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them
necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also
makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
2．（2009·浙江·高考真题）
5 月1 日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine
Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列
要点用英语写一则100~120 个词的新闻报道。
1.时间、地点、人物、活动；
2.老人们的反应；
3.简短评论。
4. 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
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By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
【答案】 Student Volumteers Broutht Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went o Sunshine
Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly
welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working
at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with
the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.
They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their
own lives.
By Chen Jie, School Nwespaper
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇新闻报道，记录去阳光敬老院（Sunshine
Nursing Home)开展的志愿者活动。内容包括：1.时间、地点、人物、活动；2.老人们的反应；3.简
短评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
赠送：present→give away
立刻：at once→right now
感谢：thank→appreciate
高兴的：happy→delighted
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented
the elderly with flowers and fruits.
拓展句：Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, after which, they presented
the elderly with flowers and fruits respectfully.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.（运用了现在分词作状
语）
[高分句型2]
What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.（运用了what 引导主语从句）
3．（2013·江西·高考真题）星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你
是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1．时间与地点：4 月10 日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2．活动的过程；
3．你对于这次活动的评论。
注意：1．词数100 左右。
2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing
on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in
high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful
scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the
top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy
school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
【详解】试题分析：本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第
一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等
情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加
细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】①高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句What a wonderful time 及倒装结构not only...but also
的运用。②好的短语：set out for 出发,动身，着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind 落后③
非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
考点：考查应用文的写作。
二 创新基础练
1．（24-25 高三上·江苏徐州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Last weekend, the Student Union organized an activity titled “Get to Know the Plants around Us”.
We first gathered at the school garden. Then, a biology teacher introduced various plants, explaining their
characteristics and functions. We walked around, observing and taking notes.
This activity was really beneficial. We not only learned a lot about different plants but also
developed a deeper appreciation for nature. It made us realize that plants play a vital role in our lives and
we should protect them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于“认识我们身边的植物”活动
的报道，包括活动过程以及收获与感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
聚集：gather → assemble
各种各样的：various → a variety of/diverse
特征：characteristic → feature/trait
重要的：vital → crucial/essential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend, the Student Union organized an activity titled “Get to Know the Plants around Us”.
拓展句：Last weekend, the Student Union organized an activity which was titled “Get to Know the Plants
around Us”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We walked around, observing and taking notes.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型2] It made us realize that plants play a vital role in our lives and we should protect them. (运用
了省略连词that 的宾语从句)
2．（25-26 高三上·河南商丘·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校学生会上周举办了“保护我们身边的
文化遗产”活动。请为校英文报报道，内容包括：
1．活动过程；
2．活动反响。
注意：1．写作词数应为80 个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Protecting the Cultural Heritage Around Us
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【答案】
Protecting the Cultural Heritage Around Us
Last week, the Students’ Union of our school held an activity titled “Protecting the Cultural Heritage
Around Us”. A series of lectures were given to introduce the significance and value of local cultural
heritage. Then, students participated in a field trip to a nearby historical site to have a closer look.
The activity received a warm response. Students showed great enthusiasm and gained a better
understanding of the importance of protecting cultural heritage. They also expressed their determination to
take action to safeguard it.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报报道学校学生会举办的“保护我们身边的
文化遗产”活动，包括活动过程和活动反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
附近的：nearby → neighboring
热情：enthusiasm → passion
理解：understanding → comprehension
采取行动/措施：take action → take measures
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The activity received a warm response.
拓展句：The activity, which was of great significance, received a warm response.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last week, the Students’ Union of our school held an activity titled “Protecting the
Cultural Heritage Around Us”. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] A series of lectures were given to introduce the significance and value of local cultural
heritage. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
3．（25-26 高三上·云南昆明·阶段练习）作为校英文报记者，上周你参加了学校举办的以“我有我
光芒”（Shine Your Light）为主题的心理健康月活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动介绍；
2．收获与感想。
注意：1．写作词数应为80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mental Health Month at Guangming Middle School
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【答案】 Mental Health Month at Guangming Middle
School
In an effort to foster emotional resilience and psychological well-being, our school hosted the
groundbreaking “Shine Your Light” Mental Health Month from September 24th to 25th, attracting
overwhelming participation from both students and faculty.
A series of carefully designed activities unfolded, featuring stress-relief workshops, peer counseling
sessions, and an art exhibition that showcased students’ works about mental health. The most popular was
the “Compliment Wall”, which witnessed an extraordinary exchange of over 300 heartwarming messages
among participants.
This initiative not only equipped us with practical ways to cope with mental problems but also
fostered a profound sense of belonging. As one participant said, “This event helped me realize my own
value and brightness.”
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于学校举办的“我有我光芒”
心理健康月活动的报道，需涵盖活动介绍以及收获与感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
努力：in an effort to→with the effort of
开创性的：groundbreaking→innovative
展示：showcase→display
非凡的：extraordinary→remarkable
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：This initiative not only equipped us with practical ways to cope with mental problems but also
fostered a profound sense of belonging.
拓展句：Not only did this initiative equip us with practical ways to cope with mental problems, but it also
fostered a profound sense of belonging.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] In an effort to foster emotional resilience and psychological well-being, our school
hosted the groundbreaking “Shine Your Light” Mental Health Month from September 24th to 25th,
attracting overwhelming participation from both students and faculty.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型 2] The most popular was the “Compliment Wall”, which witnessed an extraordinary exchange
of over 300 heartwarming messages among participants.（运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．（25-26 高三上·江苏连云港·阶段练习）为确保学生度过一个安全的暑假，昨天你校邀请了李警
官做了一场交通安全知识讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
（1）讲座的主要内容（2）活动的意义
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A Lecture on Traffic Safety
With the summer holiday approaching, our school invited Mr. Li, a traffic policeman, to deliver a
lecture on traffic safety yesterday, aiming to ensure that students could enjoy a safe holiday. All the
teachers and students in our school participated in the lecture.
Firstly, Mr. Li showed us some pictures of typical traffic accidents, which were really impressive
and instructive. Then he explained some traffic rules to us. Finally, he appealed to all of us to pay more
attention to traffic safety.
The lecture is of great significance. Through it, we now have a better understanding of traffic rules.
More importantly, after the lecture, we know how to handle emergent traffic problems and ensure our
safety.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于交通安全知识讲座的报道，内
容包括讲座的主要内容和活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
临近：approach→draw near
参与：participate in→get involved in
重要的：important→crucial
讲解：explain→elaborate on
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：The lecture is of great significance. Through it, we now have a better understanding of traffic rules.
拓展句：The lecture is of great significance, through which we now have a better understanding of traffic
rules.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the summer holiday approaching, our school invited Mr. Li, a traffic
policeman, to deliver a lecture on traffic safety yesterday, aiming to ensure that students could enjoy a safe
holiday.（运用了with 复合结构作状语以及现在分词短语作状语和that 引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Firstly, Mr. Li showed us some pictures of typical traffic accidents, which were really
impressive and instructive. （运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．（25-26 高三上·广东·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在学校最近举行了一场主题为“How to
use DeepSeek to enhance English learning?”的演讲比赛，请你为校英语报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 比赛流程；
2. 精彩瞬间。
注意：写作词数应为80 左右；
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【答案】
Last Friday witnessed our school’s much-anticipated speech contest themed “How to Use DeepSeek
to Enhance English Learning?”, which proved a great success.
The contest, aiming to explore AI’s potential in language learning, attracted a large number of
students. After initial selections, 10 finalists took the stage, showcasing their profound insights with
confidence. The contest unfolded in three parts: opening remarks by our principal, 3-minute speeches by
contestants, and a Q&A session with judges. What impressed the audience was the diversity of
perspectives. One contestant shared how DeepSeek’s personalized vocabulary lists boosted his memory,
while another highlighted its role in simulating real-life conversations, a practice significantly improving
her fluency.
The event received positive feedback from our students, who expressed it reshaped our attitude
towards technology. We expected more of activities about cutting-edge technologies.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为主题为“How to use DeepSeek to enhance English
learning?”的演讲比赛撰写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
吸引：attract→appeal
强调：highlight→stress
增强：boost→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The contest, aiming to explore AI’s potential in language learning, attracted a large number of
students.
拓展句：The contest, whose aim was to explore AI’s potential in language learning, attracted a large
number of students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed the audience was the diversity of perspectives.（运用了what
引导主语从句）
【高分句型2】The event received positive feedback from our students, who expressed it reshaped our
attitude towards technology.（运用了who 引导非限制性定语从句）
三 高考模拟练
1．（2025·湖南永州·一模）上周六你参加了校学生会组织的“国学经典诵读”活动。请为校英文
报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Chinese Classics Recitation: A Rewarding Activity
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【答案】 The Chinese Classics Recitation: A Rewarding
Activity
Last Saturday witnessed the successful holding of “The Chinese Classics Recitation” organized by
the Student Union. The event started with an inspiring speech by the headmaster, highlighting the
significance of Chinese classics. Then, students from different classes took turns to recite various classic
works, including poems by Li Bai and Confucian Analects. Their passionate voices and profound
understanding left a deep impression on the audience. Through this activity, not only did we enhance our
appreciation of Chinese traditional culture, but also felt a strong sense of national pride. It was a wonderful
opportunity to immerse ourselves in the wisdom of our ancestors, which will surely inspire us to carry
forward these precious cultural heritages.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。请考生为校英文报写篇报道，报道周六参加了校学生会组织的“国学经
典诵读”活动的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
①见证，目睹：witness→see
②强调：highlight→emphasize
③深刻的：profound→deep
④弘扬，传承：carry forward→inherit
2.句式拓展：
原句：Last Saturday witnessed the successful holding of “The Chinese Classics Recitation” organized by
the Student Union.
拓展句：Last Saturday witnessed the successful holding of “The Chinese Classics Recitation” that was
organized by the Student Union..
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Through this activity, not only did we enhance our appreciation of Chinese
traditional culture, but also felt a strong sense of national pride.（运用了not only...but also 结构）
【高分句型 2】It was a wonderful opportunity to immerse ourselves in the wisdom of our ancestors,
which will surely inspire us to carry forward these precious cultural heritages.（运用which 引导的非限制
性定语从句）
2．（2025·湖南益阳·一模）假设你是李华，为践行“以竹代塑”(Replace Plastic with Bamboo)倡
议，上周六学校组织师生参观了本地竹产业园(bamboo industrial park)。请为校英文报写一篇报道，
内容包括：
1. 活动的内容；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To promote the “Replace Plastic with Bamboo” initiative,
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To promote the “Replace Plastic with Bamboo” initiative, our school visited a local bamboo industrial
park last Saturday.
The visit began with an eye-opening lecture where environmental experts revealed bamboo’s remarkable
advantages: rapid growth, carbon absorption, and its potential as an eco-friendly alternative to plastic. We
then toured the production lines, observing how bamboo was processed into various eco-friendly products.
The most exciting part was the hands-on workshop where we crafted bamboo baskets under professional
guidance. Though challenging, it was truly rewarding!
This experience deepened our understanding of sustainable development. By simply choosing bamboo
products, we can effectively reduce plastic pollution. Together, we can build a greener future!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英文报记者身份，简洁清晰地报道“参观竹产业
园”活动的内容及参与者的收获感想，体现“以竹代塑”倡议的实践意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
揭示，公开：reveal → disclose
参观，探索：tour → explore
制作，编织：craft → weave
有意义的，丰富充实的：rewarding → enriching
加深，加强：deepen → strengthen
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：We then toured the production lines, observing how bamboo was processed into various eco-
friendly products.
拓展句：We then toured the production lines, where we were amazed to observe how bamboo was
efficiently processed into a wide range of eco-friendly products.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We then toured the production lines, observing how bamboo was processed into
various eco-friendly products. (运用了现在分词短语和how 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The most exciting part was the hands-on workshop where we crafted bamboo baskets
under professional guidance. (运用了where 引导的定语从句)
3．（2023·四川成都·模拟预测）假定你是学校英文报的通讯员李华，你校上周日举办了第一届校
园风筝节活动。请你根据所给提示，用英语为此次活动写一篇英文报道。内容包括：
1.活动时间及地点;
2.活动内容;
3.活动反响。
注意：
1.词数100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Last Sunday witnessed the First Campus Kite Festival in our school playground, which turned out to
be a huge hit.
The activity, scheduled to begin from 4:00 pm, lasted for nearly two hours. First, many students flew
kites they made into the sky. Soon later, 200 colorful balloons were released into the air. Then, in the sky,
balloons and kites competed with each other to feast our eyes. Finally, experienced students made kites on
site, giving us a glimpse into kite-making.
This activity was highly spoken of by many students. They said not only did it enrich their campus
life, but it also enhanced their cultural confidence.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生所在校上周日举办了第一届校园风筝节活动。请你根据所给提示，
用英语为此次活动写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
见证：witness→see
预定；安排：schedule→arrange
欣赏；饱眼福：feast one's eyes→please one's eyes
高度评价：speak highly of→think highly of
句式拓展：
同义句
原句：First, many students flew kites they made into the sky.
拓展句：First, kites made by many students were flown into the sky.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Last Sunday witnessed the First Campus Kite Festival in our school
playground, which turned out to be a huge hit.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】They said not only did it enrich their campus life, but it also enhanced their cultural
confidence.（运用了 not only...but also... 结构，且not only 置于句首时，句子部分倒装）
4．（2025·吉林长春·模拟预测）上周六你校举办了骑自行车漫游城市的活动，请你为校英文报写
一篇报道，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)骑行过程；
(3)活动感受。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
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Last Saturday, a city cycling tour was organized by our school in an attempt to enrich extracurricular
activities. Many students, along with teachers, eagerly participated.
We set off from the school gate early in the morning. Riding along tree-lined streets, we enjoyed the
cool breeze and morning sunlight. The route took us past several historical landmarks, where we
experienced local culture firsthand, eventually leading us to the destination — the South Lake Park.
This activity not only enhanced our physical health, but allowed us to admire the city’s beauty.
There is no denying that it is a day filled with joy and discovery.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，说明活动目的、骑行过程以
及活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出发：set off→depart
最后：eventually→ultimately
加强：enhance→strengthen
快乐：joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Riding along tree-lined streets, we enjoyed the cool breeze and morning sunlight.
拓展句：When we rode along tree-lined streets, we enjoyed the cool breeze and morning sunlight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The route took us past several historical landmarks, where we experienced local
culture firsthand, eventually leading us to the destination — the South Lake Park.（运用了where 引导非
限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Riding along tree-lined streets, we enjoyed the cool breeze and morning sunlight.（运用
了现在分词作状语）
5．（2025·江西上饶·模拟预测）阅读理解A 篇介绍了Gastric cancer 在中国的相关情况，假定你是
一名英语通讯记者，请你根据A 篇相关内容写一份新闻短评。内容包括：1. 简要介绍研究数据来
源、规模；2. 谈谈此研究的意义。
注意：写作词数应为80 个左右，请按答题卡的相应位置作答。
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A recent study based on data from 220,304 gastric cancer patients across 53 leading hospitals in 27
Chinese provinces (2017-2023) has shed light on the nation’s gastric cancer landscape. The large-scale
research from the National Cancer Information Database reveals that early-stage (Stages I-II) diagnoses
now account for 35.63% of cases, with immunotherapy playing an increasingly significant role—16.17%
and 23.28% in first- and second-line treatments for advanced cases, respectively. Survival rate analysis
shows 5-year rates varying from 85.07% (Stage I) to 13.15% (Stage IV). This study not only provides a
comprehensive snapshot of current diagnosis and treatment trends but also offers critical evidence to refine
clinical guidelines and enhance therapeutic strategies, marking a pivotal step toward improving outcomes
for gastric cancer patients in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据A 篇介绍Gastric cancer 在中国的相关情况写一
份新闻短评。其内容包括：简要介绍研究数据来源、规模和谈谈此研究的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阐明：shed light on→illuminate
揭示： reveal→uncover
值得注意的：notable→significant
提升：enhance→upgrade
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A recent study based on data from 220,304 gastric cancer patients across 53 leading hospitals in 27
Chinese provinces (2017-2023) has shed light on the nation’s gastric cancer landscape.
拓展句：A recent study which is based on data from 220,304 gastric cancer patients across 53 leading
hospitals in 27 Chinese provinces (2017-2023) has shed light on the nation’s gastric cancer landscape.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The large-scale research from the National Cancer Information Database reveals
that early-stage (Stages I-II) diagnoses now account for 35.63% of cases, with immunotherapy playing an
increasingly significant role—16.17% and 23.28% in first- and second-line treatments for advanced cases,
respectively. （运用了with 的复合结构）
【高分句型2】This study not only provides a comprehensive snapshot of current diagnosis and treatment
trends but also offers critical evidence to refine clinical guidelines and enhance therapeutic strategies,
marking a pivotal step toward improving outcomes for gastric cancer patients in China.（运用了现在分词
作状语）
