专题8 通知
(一)命题规律分析
通知作为高考英语应用文写作的重要题型,着重考查学生准确传达信息、组织语言和规范
格式的综合能力。其命题规律主要体现在以下方面:
1. 考查频率高,实用性强
通知是学校、社团等场景中最常用的应用文体之一,命题紧密贴合学生实际生活与学习经
历。题目通常要求考生以学生干部、活动负责人等身份,向同学或团体发布某一具体事项
的安排或变更。
2. 命题形式多样
- 单一功能通知:纯粹告知某一信息,如会议时间变更、活动取消等。
- 复合功能通知(主流趋势):在告知的基础上,融合说明、号召、提醒等功能。例如,
通知比赛信息并鼓励参与;告知活动流程并提醒注意事项。
3. 情境设置贴近校园生活
常见命题情境包括:
- 校园活动:运动会、艺术节、讲座、比赛、志愿活动的通知
- 日常安排:课程调整、假期安排、考试安排的通知
- 社团事务:社团招新、会议通知、任务安排
4. 评分标准明确
- 基础分:
- 格式完整规范(标题、称呼、正文、落款)
- 信息要点完整(活动内容、时间、地点、对象等基本要素)
- 语言基本准确,无重大语法错误
- 高分关键:
- 信息组织条理清晰,逻辑性强
- 语言表达准确得体,符合通知语体
- 要点展开充分,细节恰当
- 格式规范,段落分明
- 适当使用衔接词,增强文本连贯性
(二)真题回顾
1. (2020 年浙江)你校将举办 “中国传统手工艺展”,请写一则通知,内容包括:展览
时间、地点;展品介绍(如剪纸、陶艺);参与方式(如报名、志愿者招募)。
2.( 2024 年浙江)你校英文报征集 “家乡变化” 主题短文,请写一则投稿通知,内容
包括:主题范围;稿件要求(如字数、格式);截止日期及投稿邮箱。
3.(2025 年江苏无锡一模)你校英语俱乐部举办 “Reading China” 文化创意活动,请写
一则通知,内容包括:活动目的;作品要求(如形式、主题);提交方式及截止日期。
(三)常见失分点
失分点1:格式不规范或不完整
问题描述: 通知作为一种正式文体,有严格的格式要求。考生常遗漏关键格式要素,如:
缺少标题(Notice)
遗漏发布日期(Date)
缺少落款(发布单位/人)
口头语与书面语格式混淆
反面案例: 正文直接开头,没有“Notice”标题;结尾处没有署名“Student Union”。
实用对策:
熟记标准格式:标题(Notice)→ 日期(Date,可省略或简写)→ 正文 → 落款(发布
者)。
明确发布者身份,确保落款与情境一致。
失分点2:信息要素不全或模糊
问题描述: 未能完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,或对关键信息(时间、地点、对象、内
容)表述不清。
反面案例: 通知篮球赛却未写明确切时间(只写“下周五”)和具体地点(只写“体育
馆”)。
实用对策:
运用“5W1H”检查法:确保通知包含 Who(参与对象)、What(活动内容)、When
(具体时间)、Where(具体地点)、Why(目的/原因)、How(方式/要求)。
动笔前罗列所有要点,完成后逐一核对。
失分点3:结构混乱,逻辑不清
问题描述: 信息点堆砌,段落划分不合理,缺乏逻辑顺序,读起来杂乱无章。
反面案例: 在同一段落中混杂活动目的、报名方式、时间地点和注意事项。
实用对策:
采用 "总-分-总" 结构:
开头段:直奔主题,说明通知何事及目的。
主体段:分段陈述具体信息(如时间地点、活动内容、参与要求等)。
结尾段:表达期待、发出号召或提示联系方式。
使用序列词(First, Secondly, Finally )和逻辑连接词(Moreover, For further
information...)。
失分点4:语气不当
问题描述: 语气生硬像命令,或过于随意像聊天,未能体现通知的正式性和权威性。
反面案例: “You must come to the meeting.”(命令式);“Hi guys, there’s a thing...”
(过于随意)。
实用对策:
多用被动语态和祈使句:如 "All students are requested to...","Please arrive on time."。
避免过于口语化的词汇,使用正式表达。
根据通知对象(全校师生/社团成员)微调语气,保持正式、得体。
失分点5:语言错误与表达不准确
问题描述: 出现基本的语法、拼写错误,或中式英语表达,影响信息准确传递。
实用对策:
掌握通知常用句型和词汇,确保基础语法正确。
完成后通读检查,重点审视动词时态、主谓一致、名词单复数等常见错误点。
多用简单准确的句子,避免使用没有把握的复杂结构。
失分点6:要点展开不足,内容空洞
问题描述: 只简单罗列题目要点,缺乏必要的细节补充,导致内容干瘪,字数不足。
反面案例: 只写 “There will be a lecture.”,未说明讲座主题、主讲人、针对人群等关键
细节。
实用对策:
对每个要点进行 "一句话扩展" ,补充具体细节。
牢记 "观点/事实 + 细节/解释" 的展开方式,让内容更充实。
一、文体功能与核心要素
1. 文体功能与核心目的
通知是一种具有告知性与指令性的实用文体,其主要功能在于向特定群体准确、高效地传
递信息,并促成某种行动或共识。
2. 核心要素(成功通知的四大支柱)
一份结构完整、表意清晰的通知,必须包含以下四个核心要素:
要素一:规范完整的格式
标题 (Title): 顶格居中书写 NOTICE,字体可加粗以显醒目。
日期 (Date): 位于标题右下方,书写发布日期的年月日,如 June 1, 2024。在某些简化格
式中可省略。
正文 (Body): 段落分明,逻辑清晰。
落款 (Signature): 位于正文右下角,写明发布单位(如 Students' Union)或发布人(如
Li Hua, Monitor)。
要素二:完备的信息要素
通知正文必须包含所有关键信息点,避免任何歧义或遗漏。建议使用“5W1H”法则进行
核查:
Who (对象): 通知的目标人群是谁?(如 All senior one students)
What (事件): 具体是什么事情或活动?(如 an English speech contest)
When (时间): 明确的活动日期和具体时间。(如 at 2:00 p.m., next Friday)
Where (地点): 活动的具体地点。(如 in the school auditorium)
Why (目的/原因): 为何发布此通知,活动的意义何在。
How (方式/要求): 如何参与、有何注意事项或需要做什么准备。
要素三:清晰严谨的结构
正文部分应遵循“总-分-总”的逻辑顺序:
开头段 (引言): 开门见山,直接点明通知的主题和目的。
主体段 (详情): 分段、有条理地列出“5W1H”中的具体信息。可使用 Firstly...
Secondly... Finally... 等序列词增强条理性。
结尾段 (号召/联系): 重申核心信息,发出号召(如 Everyone is welcome!),或提供联系
方式。
要素四:正式得体的语气
1.
通知的语气应客观、正式、简洁、有力。
2.
多用被动语态和祈使句: 如 All participants are required to... (被动语态);Please arrive on
time. (祈使句)。
3.
避免口语化表达: 使用 inform 而非 tell,使用 participate 而非 join in。
4.
保持权威与中立: 避免使用个人化、情感化的词语,聚焦于事实陈述和必要指示。
二、核心结构与写作模板
1. 开头句:表明通知事由
(1)
We are pleased to inform you that the school art festival will be held next month.
我们很高兴地通知您,学校艺术节将于下月举行。
(2)
This is to announce that there will be a change in the examination schedule.
特此通知,考试日程将有所变更。
(3)
All students are hereby informed that the library will be closed for renovation from June 1st to
10th.
特此通知全体同学,图书馆将于6 月1 日至10 日进行装修,期间暂停开放。
(4)
Attention, please! This notice is about the upcoming sports meeting.
请大家注意!本通知关于即将举行的运动会。
(5)
We are writing to inform you of an important school activity.
特此通知一项重要的学校活动。
(6)
It is hereby announced that a lecture on environmental protection will be given by Professor
Wang.
特此宣布,王教授将举办一场关于环境保护的讲座。
2. 正文句:说明具体安排
(1)
The event will take place in the school auditorium at 2:00 p.m. this Friday.
活动将于本周五下午两点在学校礼堂举行。
(2)
All participants are required to arrive 30 minutes in advance.
所有参与者需提前30 分钟到达。
(3)
The main purpose of this activity is to enrich students’ extracurricular life.
本次活动的主要目的是丰富学生的课外生活。
(4)
Interested students should sign up with their class monitors before this Friday.
有兴趣的同学需在本周五前向班长报名。
(5)
Please be reminded that latecomers will not be allowed to enter.
温馨提示:迟到者不得入场。
(6)
The following arrangements should be noted: first,...
请注意以下安排:第一,……
3. 结尾句:提出要求与号召
(1)
Your active participation is highly appreciated.
非常感谢您的积极参与。
(2)
For further information, please contact the Students' Union office.
如需更多信息,请联系学生会办公室。
(3)
We are looking forward to your active involvement.
我们期待您的积极参与。
(4)
Please be punctual.
请准时参加。
(5)
All students are expected to attend this important meeting.
希望所有学生都能参加这次重要会议。
(6)
Don’t miss this great opportunity!
不要错过这个好机会!
三、万能模板
1.
Notice
This is to formally announce that [活动名称] will be held on [具体日期] at [具体时间] in
[具体地点].
The main purpose of this event is to [说明活动目的]. All participants are required to [说明
具体要求]. Please be reminded that [重要注意事项].
For further information, please do not hesitate to contact [ 联系方式]. Your active
participation is highly appreciated.
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2.
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “...” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking
place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event
which ...
You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do ... The event will be held /
take place ... For any questions, call / ring ... at ...
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四、范文赏析
【2018 年全国Ⅱ卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一
部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
(1) 短片内容:学校的发展;
(2) 放映时间、地点;
(3) 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1) 词数100 左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie
about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is
organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development
of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s
more, everyone of you will be welcome to participate in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated
discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student Union
June 8, 2018
【范文赏析】
一、亮点短语(精准适配通知场景)
1.
in order to:表目的的经典短语,开篇直接点明放映短片的初衷,符合通知 “开门见山”
的特点。
2.
have a better understanding of:比简单的 “understand” 更具书面感,体现英语表达的精准
性。
3.
be shown in:专门用于 “影片放映” 的固定搭配,贴合 “观看短片” 的核心场景。
4.
relevant details:“相关细节” 的简洁表达,避免冗余,符合通知的简洁性要求。
5.
participate in:正式且通用的 “参与” 表达,适用于校园通知这类正式场景。
6.
give your own comments:“提出意见” 的地道表达,比 “put forward opinions” 更自然流
畅。
二、亮点句型(提升句式多样性与连贯性)
1.
定语从句(which 引导):“the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school”,用定语从句补充短片内容,避免简单句堆砌,使句子结
构更丰富。
2.
not only...but also... 并列结构:“it will be not only meaningful but also interesting”,强化短
片的价值,表达简洁有力,符合通知 “突出重点” 的需求。
3.
现在分词并列结构:“enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving
your own comments”,三个现在分词短语并列,描述参与后的活动,结构工整且逻辑连
贯,避免重复表述。
4.
衔接词引导逻辑:“To begin with”“What’s more” 作为过渡词,清晰划分通知的 “内容介
绍” 和 “参与要求” 板块,让读者快速抓取关键信息。
五、拔高练习
(一)选词填空
请从方框中选择合适的单词或短语,填入句子空白处,使其意思完整、语法正确(每词限
用一次)。
informed, schedule, participants, required, reminded,
appreciated, arrangements, announce, permission, prompt
1.
This is to __________ that the school sports meet will be held next week.
2.
All students are __________ that the library will be closed tomorrow.
3.
The detailed __________ for the activity is as follows.
4.
All __________ should arrive 30 minutes before the event starts.
5.
Students are __________ to wear school uniforms during the event.
6.
Please be __________ that no food or drinks are allowed in the auditorium.
7.
Your cooperation would be greatly __________.
8.
Necessary __________ have been made for the trip.
9.
Prior __________ must be obtained from the teacher.
10. We need your __________ confirmation by tomorrow.
【参考答案】
1.
announce
2.
informed
3.
schedule
4.
participants
5.
required
6.
reminded
7.
appreciated
8.
arrangements
9.
permission
10. Prompt
(二)句型转换
请将以下口语化或不够正式的表达,转换为适合书面通知的正式、得体表达。
1.
We’re having a meeting in Room 301 at 3 pm tomorrow.
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2.
You need to hand in your reports by Friday.
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3.
Don’t be late for the activity.
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4.
If you want to join, tell your class monitor.
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5.
The trip is cancelled because of the rain.
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6.
Bring your own lunch for the trip.
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7.
Let’s all come and support our team!
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8.
Ask Li Hua if you have any questions.
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9.
Wear proper clothes for the ceremony.
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10. Get your stuff ready before the trip.
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【参考答案】
1.
A meeting is scheduled to be held in Room 301 at 3:00 p.m. tomorrow.
2.
All reports are required to be submitted by Friday.
3.
All participants are expected to arrive punctually.
4.
Interested students should register with their class monitor.
5.
The trip has been cancelled due to inclement weather.
6.
Participants are required to bring their own packed lunches.
7.
All students are encouraged to come and support our team.
8.
For any inquiries, please contact Li Hua for assistance.
9.
All attendees are required to dress appropriately for the ceremony.
10. Participants should make necessary preparations in advance.
(三)单句写作
请将以下中文句子翻译成英文,要求符合英文通知的书面表达规范。
1.
所有学生必须穿着校服参加周一早晨的升旗仪式。
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2.
由于天气原因,原定于明天的户外活动将延期举行。
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3.
参赛者需在比赛开始前30 分钟到达指定场地报到。
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4.
请注意,任何迟到超过15 分钟者将不得入场。
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5.
学生会将在本周五中午12 点于会议室召开重要会议。
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6.
请各班级班长于今日放学前将报名表交至教务处。
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7.
学校图书馆将于期末考试期间延长开放时间。
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8.
如有任何疑问,请及时与活动负责人王老师联系。
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9.
请注意保持场地整洁,活动结束后请将垃圾带走。
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10. 希望同学们积极参与,共同营造良好的校园文化氛围。
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【参考答案】
1.
All students are required to wear school uniforms for the flag-raising ceremony on
Monday morning.
2.
Due to weather conditions, the outdoor activity scheduled for tomorrow will be postponed.
3.
All contestants should report to the designated venue 30 minutes before the competition
begins.
4.
Please note that anyone arriving more than 15 minutes late will not be admitted.
5.
The Student Union will hold an important meeting in the conference room at 12:00 noon
this Friday.
6.
Class monitors are requested to submit the registration forms to the Academic Affairs
Office before school ends today.
7.
The school library will extend its opening hours during the final examination period.
8.
For any inquiries, please contact the activity coordinator, Mr. Wang, in a timely manner.
9.
Please be reminded to keep the venue clean and tidy, and take your litter away after the
activity.
10. Students are encouraged to actively participate in order to collectively create a positive
campus cultural atmosphere.
(四)应用文写作
(2024 届浙江绍兴二模)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,本学期你校将为外籍学生开
设一系列以中国传统文化为主题的研讨活动(workshop),请你写一则通知,内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.阐明理由;
3.邀请参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考答案】
Notice
To help international students adapt to the life here, our school is organizing a series of
workshops on Chinese traditional culture.
As scheduled, the workshops are to take place every Thursday this semester, from 6 p.m. to
8 p.m.. During this period, you will be exposed to a selection of Chinese traditional cultures in
daily life, gaining a better insight into Four Treasures of Study, Four Great Inventions, ancient
music and lion dance. A certain amount of time will be set aside in each workshop for
interaction, in which session a teacher will be available to clarify your doubts or offer some
suggestions if necessary.
The workshops are supposed to expand your perspective of Chinese culture and meanwhile,
make your campus life here easier and more fruitful. We sincerely hope to see you there!
The Students’ Union
1.(2024·湖南衡阳·一模)假如你是李华,湖南省非物质文化遗产传承人Ms Liu 将在开学
之际为你校国际生亲授以“指尖上的非遗——剪纸”为主题的开学第一课。请你作为学生
会代表,写一则通知发到国际生交流群中,让更多国际生知晓此事,参与到本次活动中
来。内容包括:
1.专家介绍:
2.课程安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(2024·四川泸州·二模)假设你校英语报的新增栏目“A historical person in China”正
在征集作品, 请根据以下要求写一则通知。内容包括:
1. 征文活动的意义;
2. 征集作品的形式、时间等;
3. 表达愿望。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
NOTICE
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3.(2024·新疆·一模)假定你是学校英语社团负责人,计划下周三在你校举办“用英语讲好
中国故事”系列活动之“京剧(Beijing Opera)展示与体验活动”。请写一则通知,邀请
你校学生前来参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的、内容;
2.活动时间、地点;
3.欢迎现场学习。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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English Club
【参考范文】
1.
Notice
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular traditional folk arts in China. Ms. Liu, the inheritor
of Hunan Province’s intangible cultural heritage, is a famous paper-cutting master. At the
beginning of the semester, she will personally teach the first lesson of the semester with the theme
of “intangible cultural heritage on the fingertips — paper-cutting” for the international students of
our school. It will be held on Friday 23 April from 2pm to 4pm in the school auditorium. Through
this class, you will have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.
Hope you will attend on time and enjoy yourself.
2.
NOTICE
Dear students,
This term, the new column themed “A historical person in China” in our school English
newspaper, is collecting works from students. It aims to memorize and praise those great persons
who have a great impact in Chinese history.
Any student can write articles, stories and poems for this column. It’s believed that by
attending this activity, you will not only improve your writing skills, but also raise a sense of
national pride. Besides, remember to send your entry to the school English newspaper office
before the deadline, May l2th,2024.
Looking forward to your active participation and contribution to the new column. That’s all.
Student Union
3.
Notice
In order to tell Chinese stories well in English, we will hold an activity about Beijing Opera
in the school gym from 2:30 to 4:30 next Wednesday.
To begin with, a speech on the history of Beijing Opera will be delivered by a famous artist.
After that, there will be a live performance, from which you can appreciate the unique charm of it.
Besides, the artists will not only demonstrate their skills but also invite the visitors to have a try.
Everyone is welcome.
English Club