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写作操作篇之审题目
【典例精析】
1．假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，
请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【写作步骤】
▲审题立意·确定中心
体裁 求助信
时态 一般现在时和一般将来时
人称 I and you
结构 三段或四段
要点 1. 故事梗概2. 求助内容
▲结构清晰·层次分明
▲行云流水·斐然成章
【策略演练】
12．假定你是班长李华，你班来自美国的交换生Tony在学习和生活方面不太适应，向你 求
助。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示关心；
2.帮他分析原因； 、
3.提供建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华。北京2022年冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者。请你用英文写一封申请信。
内容包括: 1. 你的优势;
2. 相关经历。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games are needed.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua写作操作篇之审题目
1．Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we
adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat
for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river
navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the
adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything
inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script
attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at
your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional
advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the
Steamboat改编短剧的支持。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；
第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you
a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从
句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、
层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Tony,
You say you have difficulty adapting to the new study and life here. I know exactly how you
feel.
You must be very anxious, but it’s quite normal since this is your first time to study in a
foreign country. Just relax. First, break big learning goals into small steps. Then get involved in
school activities. where you can make more friends.
Hopefully my suggestions would be helpful. I’m always the person you can count on.
Best,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇书信应用文—建议信。要求考生根据提纲写一封建议信帮助交换生Tony
适应新生活。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。根据提纲要求，划分为三段。
要求：1.表达关心。
2.分析原因并提出建议：
1）原因（first time to study in a foreign country）
2）提出建议（study；school activity）
3. 寒暄总结。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Have difficulty doing sth; adapt to sth; the first time to do sth.; get involved in ; count on…
第三步：连词成句
1. You say you have difficulty adapting to the new study and life here.
2. it’s quite normal since this is your first time to study in a foreign country
3. Then get involved in school activities
4. I’m always the person you can count on.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end,
At last
2.表因果关系：Because, As, Since, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，
符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句
如：it’s quite normal since this is your first time to study in a foreign country这句话运用了since
引导的状语从句
Then get involved in school activities, where you can make more friends. 这句话运用了
where 引导的非限制定语从句。
使用了一些固定词组，如Have difficulty doing sth; adapt to sth; the first time to do sth.; get
involved in ; count on…等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层
次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games are needed. I’m
writing to apply for this position.
I believe I am qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in
giving players guidance and help as required. What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of
winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players. In addition, I have been
involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoy spreading our culture to
foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为冬奥会的志愿者。【详解】1.词汇积累
广泛的；extensive → comprehensive
此外：in addition → besides/moreover
控制，掌握：command → master
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoy
spreading our culture to foreigners.
拓展句：In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, in which I
enjoy spreading our culture to foreigners.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which
will prove helpful in communicating with players. (which非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. (if引导条件状语从
句)
