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写作操作篇之扩句子
【策略回顾】
1. 句子形式多样化: 根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形
式单一
① In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our
environment more and more colorful.
→In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our
environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with复合结构)
→In recent years, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our
environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式)
②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
→Study hard and you will make rapid progress. (并列句)
2. 使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端
①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)
→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.
②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)
→They went back to school, singing and laughing.
3. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容
①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of
Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).
②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a
clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).
③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor
with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom
and kitchen.
4. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力
①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)
→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.
②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)
→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
5. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work
more efficient. (强调句)
6. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈
①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)
→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得
参加一个重要会议).
7. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言
①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is
like sailing without a compass.
②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such
great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).
8. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意
①She patiently(耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow
them.
②We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.
9. 变主动为被动, 凸显英语思维
①At most five books can be borrowed(可以被借用) at a time and they can be kept(可以保存)
for ten days.
②You are allowed (被允许)about ten minutes to prepare for the work.
10. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受
①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements
of my homework.
②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as
possible(请尽快告诉我).
【策略演练】
根据所给信息补全短文，并注意高级句式的应用。假定你是李华，你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣，本周五学校将要举办“校
园文化节”，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。
Dear Tom,
1 (来好消息了). The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday.
Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to
join us.
The activity is scheduled to last about two hours, from 3: 30 pm to 5: 30 pm in the school
hall. It covers a wide variety of content. 2 (我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人
的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also we’ll watch the documentary
3 (有关的) the history of the weaving art.
In addition, 4 (一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver lectures about
5 (如何促进编织艺术的发展), 6 (在这期间你一定会对它有更好
的了解). By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three outside the school gate.
7 (我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)! I’m expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua写作操作篇之扩句子
1．Here comes a piece of good news 2．Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing
weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations 3．concerning 4．
some distinguished professors 5．how to promote the development of the weaving art
6．during which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it 7．How I hope you
can take my invitation into consideration
【分析】本文是邀请信。作者给交换生Tom写信，邀请他参加本周五学校举办的“校园文
化节”，并介绍了文化节上的相关安排。
1．考查时态和倒装句型。句意：来好消息了。描述现在的情况，用一般现在时态；“好消
息”是句子主语，用a piece of good news表示，不，谓语动词用单数，“来”是谓语动词，
用comes表示；本句可将表示方位的副词here置于句首，引起句子完全倒装。故 翻译为
Here comes a piece of good news。
2．考查固定句型和倒装。句意：我们不仅可以欣赏到各种引人入胜的编织作品，从椅子、
桌子到各种装饰品等，还可以观看有关编织艺术历史的纪录片。分析句子可知，句中使用
了not only...but also...句型，意为“不仅……，而且……”，该句型中not only置于句首时，
会引起其后句子部分倒装；“能够欣赏到”是谓语，用can appreciate表示，情态动词can
前置构成部分倒装，“许多吸引人的编织艺术作品”是宾语，用numerous appealing
weaving works表示，“从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足”是非谓语动词，用ranging from
chairs and tables to various decorations表示 。故翻译为Not only can we appreciate numerous
appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations。
3．考查介词。句意：我们不仅可以欣赏到各种引人入胜的编织作品，从椅子、桌子到各种
装饰品等，还可以观看有关编织艺术历史的纪录片。分析句子可知，“ 3 (有关的)
the history of the weaving art.”作后置定语修饰名词the documentary，结合中文应填入介词
concerning，意为“关于”。故翻译为concerning。
4．考查形容词。句意：此外，我们还会邀请一些著名的教授来做关于如何促进纺织艺术发
展的讲座，在这期间你一定会对纺织艺术有更好的了解。“一些教授”表达为some
professors，作主语，“著名的”是定语，用形容词distinguished表示。故翻译为some
distinguished professors。
5．考查“特殊疑问词+不定式”复合结构。句意：此外，我们还会邀请一些著名的教授来做关于如何促进纺织艺术发展的讲座，在这期间你一定会对纺织艺术有更好的了解。“特
殊疑问词+不定式”是一种常见复合结构，其中特殊疑问词的选择可直接根据句意确定，
该结构在句中可作主语、宾语、表语、同位语和补足语，根据句意，本句中用特殊疑问词
how；“促进”用动词promote表示，用不定式形式to promote，“编织艺术的发展”用the
development of the weaving art表示。故翻译为how to promote the development of the weaving
art。
6．考查定语从句。句意：此外，我们还会邀请一些著名的教授来做关于如何促进纺织艺术
发展的讲座，在这期间你一定会对纺织艺术有更好的了解。分析句子可知，该部分可处理
为定语从句，修饰前面整个句子，用during which引导该定语从句，“一定”用副词
definitely表示，“对它有更好的了解”是谓语部分，用gain a better understanding of it表示。
故翻译为during which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it。
7．考查感叹句。句意：我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊！该句为感叹句，用how引
导，“希望”是谓语动词，用hope表示，“你能考虑一下我的邀请”是宾语从句you can
take my invitation into consideration表示。故翻译为How I hope you can take my invitation
into consideration。
