专题 01-8 道歉信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
1.(改编自2021·北京丰台二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报
名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表达歉意；
2.不能参加的原因；
3.提出解决办法。
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Chris,
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that I can’t participate in the show on the Festival of Traditional Culture
held by the school next month.
Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I’m suffering
a badly injured arm, which means it’s impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show
will have to be canceled. To make up the loss, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he’s
an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who’s the most suitable person I can
think of.
I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封道歉信，就不能参加学
校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，向他表示道歉并解释的原因。内容包括：表达歉意；不能参
加的原因；提出解决办法。首先要告诉对方“不能参加下个月学校举行的传统文化节的演出”。然后讲
原因，这个原因需要仔细斟酌，要恰到好处，不能自相矛盾。因为“传统文化节的演出”是在下个月举
行，所以要找一个“较长时间以后也不能参加演出”的理由(比如：打篮球/踢足球胳膊受伤，腿受伤等
等)。提出解决办法：靠船下篙，立马可以想到推荐他人代替(简要介绍一下这个“他人”)。最后希望对
方予以原谅。【句式拓展】
原句：As an enthusiast, he’s an excellent Taiji player.Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing,
who’s
the most suitable person I can think of.
拓展：As an enthusiast, he’s not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing,
who’s the most suitable person I can think of.
【亮点句型】
1.As a result, I’m suffering a badly injured arm, which means it’s impossible for me to practice Taijiquan
for at least a month and my show will have to be canceled.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me.
(运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend后省略that引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
2.(改编自2022·江西九江高二期末)假如你是李华，你的好朋友Peter明天回国，你因故不能明天去机
场送他，请给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括：1.表达道歉；
2.解释原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I have to make an apology to you. I had planned to see you off tomorrow at the airport, but now I can’t.
The reason is as follows. It is at that time that I will have to participate in a spoken English competition
held, for I was once champion in our university competition. Therefore, I have no choice but to change my plan
as well as schedule and cannot make my presence when you leave for your country. I am deeply sorry for it.
Sad as I am that I can’t see you for a long time, I wish you have a good time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生就因故不能明天去机场送好友Peter回国，给他写
一封道歉信。本篇书面表达题干所给的信息非常有限，所以考生要仔细思考如何适当增加细节，也就是
在“解释原因”上要多下点功夫。原因可以从“自己那时正好要干什么事情(比如：要参加比赛啦，要参
加面试啦等等)而抽不开身前往送行”来设想。
【句式拓展】
原句：I have to make an apology to you. I had planned to see you off tomorrow at the airport, but now Ican’t.
拓展：I have to make an apology to you because I can’t see you off tomorrow at the airport.
【亮点句型】
1. It is at that time that I will have to participate in a spoken English competition held,
(运用了that强调句)
2.Sad as I am that I can’t see you for a long time, I wish you have a good time with your family.
(运用了部分倒装)
3.(改编自2022·全国高一专题练)假定你是李华，你的美国老师Mr.Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个
英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr.Evans道歉并说明情况。
要点如下：1.表示歉意；
2.道歉理由(至少两点)；
3.询问他是否有录音，以便补听讲座。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Evans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow
afternoon.
My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing
now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. However I am actually very interested in English
society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It
would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and
accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生就明天下午不能去听Mr.Evans的英国历史讲座给
他写一封信道歉信。要点如下：表示歉意；道歉理由；询问他是否有录音，以便补听讲座。本篇书面表
达的题干所给的信息还是比较多的。首先，“表示歉意；询问他是否有录音，以便补听讲座”等要点表达起来还是非常容易的；其次把“道歉理由”表达出来就可，记住至少需要两条理由。
【句式拓展】
原句：My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to
Beijing now.
拓展：My mother suddenly fell ill, because of which she was taken to hospital last night, and my father is
on a business trip to Beijing now.
【亮点句型】
1.I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won't be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow
afternoon.(由that引导的宾语从句)
2.I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.(由that引导的宾语从句)
3.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape?
(由if引导的宾语从句和if so引导的省略的条件状语从句)
4.It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
(由what引导的宾语从句)
5.I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
(由that引导的宾语从句)
4.(2022·江苏苏州中学高二期末)假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan，然后
一起去公园。但你却迟到了，他有些生气，没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信。
内容如下：1.认错，道歉，解释原因；
2.许诺以后一定守时；
3.请求原谅。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Dylan,
I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
I was supposed to pick you up at the bus station at 10 a.m. But so careless was I that I forgot to take the
busy traffic into consideration.As a result, I unfortunately got caught up in a terrible traffic jam and failed to
arrive there on time.However, it shouldn’t be my excuse and you have every right to be angry with me.
I promise that anything like this won’t happen once again. Again, I am excessively sorry about what havehappened. I would truly appreciate it if you could kindly forgive me and I will definitely turn over a new leaf in
the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给自己的朋友写一封道歉信。本篇书面表达的题
干所给的信息足够的多，看似好事，其实不然。因为考生如果按照题干中所给要点的顺序一一写出来的
话就嫌得太啰嗦，也没有逻辑性，所以考生需要对题干中的要点进行筛选并捋顺后，再设想一下如何解
释才行。筛选捋顺：本来应该到汽车站接你的，(因为什么原因)；结果你生气了；作出保证。
【句式拓展】
原句：I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
拓展：I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you because I was not punctual yesterday.
【亮点句型】
1.But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration.
(运用了that引导的结果状语从句和倒装句，即表语前置时，用倒装)
2.Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
5.(改编自2021·北京高三专题练)假设你是高二学生陈伟，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体
班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执，请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括：1.表达自己的歉意；
2.阐述道歉的原因(至少2条)；
3.表达自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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【答案】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt so sorry for what
I did and said yesterday. I donated all the money to the students in the flooded area without discussing the plan
with you.
I could have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the money, you happened to be away from
school and later I didn’t explain it to you in an appropriate way. What was worse, I said that you didn't care
about the collection, which hurt you so much.
Now I want to take back what I said. Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday, and I’d
like you to try to understand my situation. I hope our friendship will last long.Yours,
Chen Wei
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给同桌Bob写一封道歉信，表达歉意，阐述道歉
原因并表达友好之情。同上题一样，本篇书面表达的题干所给的信息足够的多，但是跟上题所不同的是
本篇书面表达所要表达内容的顺序题干已经给出：1.表达自己的歉意；2.阐述道歉的原因(至少2条)；3.
表达自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。所以考生只需要筛选一下要点。重点是设想
道歉的原因(至少2条)。
【句式拓展】
原句：Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday.
拓展：Please accept my apology, for I was so impulsive yesterday.
【亮点句型】
1. I could have dealt with it differently.(could have done，运用了虚拟语气)
2.What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much.
(综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
