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专题 01-8 道歉信——2023 届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
【典题解读】
(2021·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不
能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解读】
【写作点拨】
道歉信通常是在因自己的爽约、过失或疏忽给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉
或他人指出的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。一般来说此类题目的题干对需要道歉的某事都
说得比较清楚，但是其他部分则表述得非常笼统，所以考生在写作时要特别注意扩充题干增加具体内
容，以达到题目所规定的字数要求。
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【常用素材】
I’m terribly sorry to tell/inform you that I can’t/won’t be able to ...
我非常抱歉地告诉您，……我不能……
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that I can’ t accompany you to ...
非常抱歉地告知您，我不能陪您……
I hope/wish the unexpected change will/would not cause you much trouble.我希望这意外的变化不会给你带来太多的麻烦。
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much more trouble.我希望这次调整不会给你带来更多的麻烦。
I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.
现在我给你写这封道歉信，表示我深深的歉意。
I am writing this letter to express my regret.../to apologize for ...
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……/为……道歉。
I am writing to apologize for…我写信是为……而道歉。
I would like to give you my apology for…我想就……向你道歉。
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。
I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.我写这封信是为了表示我深深的歉意。
Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word.
因此，我写信是为了道歉，因为我没有遵守诺言。
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for not keeping my word.
我希望你能理解我，原谅我没有信守诺言。
I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation.如果您愿意听我解释，我将不胜感激。
Something unexpected happened ...出乎意料的事情发生了……
The reason for my being unable to keep the appointment was that ..., so I have to ...
我不能赴约的原因是……，所以我不得不……
The reason for my failing to keep the appointment is that ...我未能如约赴约的原因是……
The reason for my delay/absence/failing(being unable)to keep the appointment was/is that ...
我推迟/缺席/未能(无法)赴约的原因是……
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it.
我真诚地希望你能接受我的道歉并理解。
I would appreciate your allowing me to fix another time.如果您允许我另行安排，我将不胜感激。
If possible, let me know what time suits you best.如果可能的话，告诉我什么时间最适合你。
If possible, let me know what time is convenient for you.如果可能的话，告诉我您什么时候方便。
I’m really sorry and do hope you’ll understand how I feel at the moment.
我真的很抱歉，希望你能理解我此刻的感受。
Shall we fix another time?我们另定一个时间好吗？
I’ll be available any time after ...……以后我随时都有空。
Will ... suit your convenience?……你方便吗？
If it’s OK, let’s meet ... If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you
into much trouble.如果可以的话，让我们……见面。如果不行，告诉我什么时间最适合您。我希望这
样的调整不会给你带来太多麻烦。
I want you to know how bad we feel about it and to assure you that it will happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过，我向你保证这不会再发生了。
I am sorry that I can’t ... but trust that you will be able to understand.
很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你会理解的。If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do something.
如果方便的话，我们再约去做某事。
Would you mind if I change the appointment time?你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week?
顺便说一下，下周约个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
Please accept my sincere apology. I would appreciate it if you could kindly tell me when you are available
so that we will ...请接受我真诚的道歉。如果能告诉我您什么时候有空以便我们……，我将不胜感
激。
Is it possible that I make up for the loss by doing something?可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
To make up for the loss, I would/will .... I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my
apology. 为了弥补损失，我会……我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for…请接受我对于……的真诚道歉。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused/that has caused by me.
对于(由我)所造成的任何不便我再次道歉。
Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。
【模板构建】
模板一
Dear ,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that (写信的事由). Now I am writing you this letter of
apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for (请求对方原谅的事由). The reason for my
delay/absence/failing(being unable)to keep the appointment was/is that (解释原因), so I have to
(由上面原因导致的结果).
或者：I hope you will understand me and excuse me for (请求对方原谅的事由). The reason for
my delay/absence/failing(being unable)to keep the appointment was/is that (解释原因). I wish
that the unexpected change would not cause you much trouble.
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to
_________(提出补救办法). Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused by me.
或者：Please accept my sincere apology. I would appreciate it if you could kindly tell me when you are
available so that we will _________(提出补救办法).
或者：How about ________(提出补救办法). If possible, let me know what time is convenient for you.
I’m really sorry and do hope you’ll understand how I feel at the moment. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板应用】一1
(改编自【典题解读】中的2021·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【模板应用】一2
(改编自2020·福建泉州高二期中)假定你是李华，与留学生好友 Petera约好本周六晚上教他下中国象
棋，因故不能履约。请给他写封邮件。
内容包括：1.表示道歉；
2.解释原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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模板二
Dear ,
I am terribly sorry to inform you that (写信的事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not
keeping my word/I am writing to show my apology.
Something unexpected happened __________(失约的具体原因).
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time ________(某个时间段). Will ________(另约的时间)
your convenience? If it’s OK, let’s meet ___________(见面时间与地点). If not, let me know what time suits
you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble. Looking forward to your reply.
或者：To make up for the loss, I would/will _________(提出补救办法). I sincerely hope you can
understand my situation and accept my apology. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua
【模板运用】二
(2022·全国·高三专题练)假定你是李华，你和外教Mr. Smith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国
际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表示歉意；
2.解释原因；
3.补救措施。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作实践】一
(改编自2021·辽宁沈阳高一期中)假定你是李华，你原本与在你们学校做交换生的好友Peter约定周
六上午去观看功夫(kung fu)比赛，但你因为临时有事不能赴约，请你给他写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表示道歉；
2.爽约的原因；
3.补救措施。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作实践】二
(改编自2021·辽宁庄河高中高二阶段练)假设你是李明，你遗失了美国好友Tom 借给你的一本书，
请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件表示道歉。
内容包括：1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.提出补救措施。注意：1.词数80词左右；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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