【高考英语考前特训】题型专练（精选 2024 年模拟好题）
读后续写之人与动物类 15 篇（含写作指导）
1．（2024·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
When Mary entered the south Pole Penguin Research Lab, she saw her friend Tom gently
stroking (轻抚) a penguin in his arms. As children of the lab scientists, Mary and Tom often
observed the emperor penguins that were studied to understand how they adapted to extreme
temperatures —insights that could aid human survival.
“We’re thirteen, Tom. It’s time to grow up and stop playing with the lab penguins,” said Mary
as she started cleaning. “They’re research animals, not pets.”
“But the birds listen to me1” insisted Tom, his breath forming a cloud in the freezing air.
“You’re just trying to be a penguin whisperer again,” Mary replied, shaking her head with a gentle
smile. The penguins seemed playful as they walked, dove, swam and chased their live fish for
sport before eating.
Suddenly , an alarm rang out and red lights flashed , signaling a problem. The kids rushed
over to look into it. “It’s colder than before —there’s ice forming on the water,” noted Tom.
Though always cold, Mary had never seen ice here before. She checked the habitat monitor and
found that the temperature had gone down a lot. “The heater must be broken!”
Mary quickly sent a message to their parents’ research team, who were conducting outdoor
studies. With the adults away, the kids would have to deal with the freezing conditions until help
arrived.
Time dragged as Mary and Tom anxiously waited. The increasing cold caused them to shake.
“I wonder what emperor penguins do in extreme cold, since they stay in the Pole all winter instead
of going somewhere warmer,” asked Mary. “They huddle (挤作一团), ” Tom answered. “They
huddle together tightly so that the birds in the middle will be warm enough.” “What about the ones
on the edge?” Mary asked. “They push their way towards the center, and then move back out to
the edge, and struggle back again. Scientists in the early 21st century recorded it.” He replied as he
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”I have an idea to stay warm1" Tom shouted excitedly.
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【范文】“I have an idea to stay warm!” Tom shouted excitedly. Spreading his arms, he
suggested joining the penguin huddles. Worried that the penguins wouldn’t let them, Mary
hesitated but was soon persuaded by Tom’s assuring grin. He slowly approached the crowded
penguins, crouching down. Gently stroking them with care, he whispered softly. Though startled at
first, the penguins recognized Tom and let him into their group. Mary quickly followed. The
children squeezed into the huddle’s edge with the penguins. Just as the birds did, they moved
toward the middle and back out as the group shifted.
Two and a half hours later, the parents returned with help. Rushing in calling for the kids,
they were surprised. The children were safely surrounded by Emperors in a large bundle. When
asked how they stayed warm, the kids looked at each other proudly. “We used what the Emperor
Penguins do,” they told their parents. Mary patted Tom’s shoulder with admiration, calling him a
penguin whisperer. With a big smile, Tom gave credit to the penguins who taught them a lot. Their
teamwork had seen them through the difficult cold with the penguins’ aid.
【导语】
本文以动物为线索展开，讲述了一个关于爱护动物以及通过学习帝企鹅的保暖方式度过严寒的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我有一个保暖的主意!”Tom兴奋地喊道。”以及第二段首句内
容“两个半小时后，父母带着救援人员回来了。”可知，第一段可描写 Tom想到可以向帝
企鹅学习度过严寒。
②由第二段首句内容“两个半小时后，父母带着救援人员回来了。”可知，第二段可
描写父母惊讶地发现孩子们和帝企鹅团在一起从而保持温暖活了下来。
2.续写线索：Tom和Mary一起在南极企鹅研究实验室观察帝企鹅——他们从小就研究
帝企鹅，非常熟悉这些动物——突然 Mary发现实验室的加热器坏了——Mary向父母求救，
但是父母在户外进行研究——实验室越来越冷，孩子们开始想办法保暖——Tom突然想起
帝企鹅在严寒中是如何保暖的——于是，两个孩子加入了实验室的企鹅群，和企鹅们团在
了一起——父母回来后，惊讶地发现帝企鹅正围着孩子们，孩子也安然无恙
3.词汇激活
行为类
①建议：suggest/advise
②靠近：approach/come close to
③称赞：give credit to/praise
情绪类
①担忧的：worried/concerned/anxious
②惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When asked how they stayed warm, the kids looked at each other proudly.
（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】With a big smile, Tom gave credit to the penguins who taught them a lot.
（运用了who引导的定语从句）
2．（2024·湖南·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the animal shelter, Sarah
walked through the rows of cages until her eyes landed on a small, trembling dog huddled (蜷缩)
in the corner. “I think I’ve found the one, ” Sarah whispered softly to herself as she looked into thedog’s sad eyes. This timid, abandoned dog had no idea that a journey of transformation with
friendly people lay in store for him.
The shelter staff explained that the dog, named Buddy, had a difficult past and was very shy
and scared. Sarah extended a hand, offering a soothing tone, “Hey sweetie, you must have a story
to tell, but from now on, you’ve got a buddy in me. ”
Bringing Buddy home was just the beginning of their journey, which was rocky at first for
him. Everything was strange and new, causing him to hide under furniture and startle at every
sound. Therefore, Sarah provided a cozy bed, delicious meals, and most importantly, heaps of love
and comfort.
Slowly but surely, he started to emerge from his shell, wagging his tail tentatively and gazing
at Sarah with a glimmer of hope in his eyes. Under Sarah’s patient and loving guidance, Buddy
flourished, even learning tricks and commands, and forming a deep bond with his new owner.
The journey of healing turned out to be a success. But Sarah had never expected it would
bring about another one.
One day, while scrolling through social media, Sarah came across a heartwarming story about
dogs being trained to assist children with autism ( 自 闭 症 ). Those children had social
communication difficulties and had few facial expressions and gestures. Without hesitation, she
inquired about the program and soon, Buddy was enrolled in training to become a certified
therapy(治疗) dog. But she was unsure whether Buddy would be comfortable with the new
challenge.
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Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty.
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【范文】
Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty. The children, accustomed to
their own company or limited interactions, were initially cautious about Buddy. Some would avoid
eye contact, while others stood still observing from a distance. Buddy sensed the anxiety too and
mirrored their calm, sitting patiently and occasionally offering a gentle touch with his nose to a
child who seemed less afraid. Despite the initial challenges, Sarah was confident that Buddy
would eventually adapt to this new environment and make a positive impact.
As the weeks progressed, Sarah noticed a remarkable change both in the children and Buddy.
The once timid dog now eagerly approached the children, gently touching their hands with his
nose and wagging his tail enthusiastically. In return, the children would stroke his soft fur and
share their snacks with him. Their fear and hesitation gradually changed into smiles and laughter
as they began to trust and form bonds with one another. It was evident that the journey of
transformation that began in the animal shelter had now extended to the therapy center, where
Buddy’s presence brought joy and comfort to those in need.
【导语】本文以作者家收养的一条流浪狗为线索展开，讲述了作者在动物收容所收养
了一条有一段艰难的过去的狗，作者用爱和安慰让这只狗摆脱了过去的痛苦，之后作者让
这只狗参加了帮助自闭症儿童的训练，这只名为巴迪的狗用行动给自闭症孩子带来了欢笑。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他们在治疗中心的第一天充满了不确定性。”可知，第一段可
描写巴迪第一次去自闭症治疗中心时的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“几个星期过去了，萨拉注意到孩子们和巴迪都发生了显著的变
化。”可知，第二段可描写巴迪和自闭症的孩子们建立了联系，为他们带来欢笑。
2. 续写线索：收养巴迪——用爱和安慰帮助巴迪茁壮成长——参加训练——和孩子们建立联系——给那些需要帮助的人带来了快乐和安慰。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①观察：observing/watching/noticing
②信任：trust/have faith in/believe
③建立：form/establish/build up
情绪类
①焦虑：anxiety/worry/tension
②恐惧：fear/scare/fright
【点睛】[高分句型1]Their fear and hesitation gradually changed into smiles and laughter
as they began to trust and form bonds with one another.(as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]It was evident that the journey of transformation that began in the animal shelter
had now extended to the therapy center, where Buddy’s presence brought joy and comfort to those
in need.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl,
who is chubby and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got
ready, I could hear icy rain pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there
somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing,
but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all.
That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl
had been staying with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C． Baby-Girl
had gotten out of my parents’ house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident
“realistic”, which mean the spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s
either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes.
Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do with a little more faith!
Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do
the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeksstretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited.
How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-
Girl’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping
she’d been found.
“Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone
too long. You’re not going to find her.”
“Well, I just have a feeling,” I said
Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter.
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We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
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【范文】We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived. I tiptoed into the room
with a strong feeling of anticipation. Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my
prompt attention suddenly. My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner. She was skinnier
than I remember, but it was my Baby-Girl all right! Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and
delight, I opened the cage door. Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms. I held her close, with
my eye swelling up tears, as my Dad looked on, his jaw dropping wide with shock.
Soon after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. The instant we dropped Baby-Girl off,freeing her from the carrier, she immediately dashed to the hearth, seeking her favourite spot. On
seeing this scene, we all roared with laughter, signaling that my Dad’s doubts were removed as
well. Against all odds, my cat was home again, right before Christmas. It was such a miracle that
my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. As
for my dear father who always support me, it turned out that Baby-Girl’s return made him a man
of a believer.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby-Gir的经历。在圣诞
节前夜，作者醒来时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方。虽然已经
过去了几周，但作者仍然有信心。在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找 Baby-Girl。但父
亲是一个“现实主义者”，他试图让作者为最坏的情况做好准备。作者深信，如果有任何
一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是她的Baby-Girl。尽管作者未能在动物收容所中找
到她，但她仍然相信她们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们被带到了被遗弃的猫住的房间。”可知，第一段可描写作
者进入一所房子，听到了熟悉的猫叫声，找到了她的Baby-Girl
②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，我震惊的爸爸开车送我们回家。”可知，第二段可
描写作者和父亲一起把猫咪带回家，猫咪非常开心，作者心中充满感激。
2.续写线索：走进房间——听到猫叫声——找到猫咪——喜悦——回家——开心——
感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①吸引：absorbed/captivated/engrossed/immersed
②专注于：zeroed in on/focused/concentrated/fixed
③冲向：dashed/rushed/sprinted/bolted
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill/exhilaration/elation
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness/appreciation/indebtedness
【点睛】[高分句型1]Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt
attention suddenly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed
with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. (运用了such…that引导的结果状语从句)4．（2024·山西晋中·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My
mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we
boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was
loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We
didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had
run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read
this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never
found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be
shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was
still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search
for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to
be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from
Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food
out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木丛). Sadly, the lady
told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his
eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
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Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
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【范文】Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My father’s eyes lit up immediately. We
all looked in the direction of the sound and saw a yellow dog emerge from the bush. It was Spider!
He ran towards my father, wagging his tail excitedly. My father kneeled down and hugged him
tightly, tears streaming down his face. It was a heartwarming reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. He was thin and tired, but still recognized us. We gave
him a warm bath and fed him a delicious meal. Spider lay on the floor, looking happy and content.
My father sat beside him, stroking his fur and telling him how much he had missed him. It was as
if nothing had changed between them. From then on, Spider became a part of our family again,
bringing us endless joy and companionship.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家从搬家、母亲生病、送走爱犬，到
爱犬失踪、父亲和全家人寻找爱犬，并最终重逢的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，灌木丛中传来了声音。”以及第二段首句内容“回到家
后，我们轻轻地把他清理干净。”可知，第一段可描写作者他们循声而去找到了爱犬。
②由第二段首句内容“回到家后，我们轻轻地把他清理干净。”可知，第二段可描写
作者一家和爱犬重逢后更加珍惜彼此的陪伴。
2.续写线索：作者八岁时，一家人不得不搬去英国为母亲治病——作者一家不得不将
爱犬送给朋友代为照顾——不幸的是，不久后朋友来信告知作者的父亲爱犬跑丢了——朋
友一直寻找，可是总也找不到小狗——作者一家后来回到了故乡——他们一直没有放弃寻
找小狗——一天，一个老妇人打来电话，说看到了一只黄狗——作者一家前去辨认——到了之后，作者的父亲吹响了特殊的口哨声，灌木丛中立刻传来了声音——作者一家循声寻
找，发现那正是他家的爱犬——一家人将小狗带回去，更加珍惜彼此的陪伴
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看见：see/catch sight of
②拥抱：hug/embrace
③流下：stream down/roll down
情绪类
①兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
②高兴的：happy/delighted
【点睛】【高分句型1】My father kneeled down and hugged him tightly, tears streaming
down his face. （运用了独立主格结构）
【高分句型2】It was as if nothing had changed between them.（运用了as if引导的表语
从句）
5．（2024·江西萍乡·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
My parents were always against me owning my own pet, afraid of the mess it would make or
that I would quickly lose interest in taking care of it, but we made a compromise: I could
volunteer at a local pet shelter on the weekends to test my sense of responsibility and dedication.
That was how I first came to volunteer at the Avondale pet shelter and—more importantly—where
I met my future best friend, Chocolate.
One hot August afternoon, my boss Charlie told me that they were bringing in a young black
Labrador Retriever and that I’d be its primary caretaker. An hour after our conversation and in
came Chocolate—a beautiful dog with shining brown fur and amazing blue eyes. At about 3
months old, I expected him to be a lot more energetic and playful, but he immediately backed and
lay down at the back of his pen (围栏).
I asked Charlie what was the matter with him. He replied that Chocolate had a genetic
problem which caused him to be born with a short tail, leading potential owners to think there was
something wrong with him; so the breeder felt that they had no choice but to give up the puppy to
the shelter.
He was overlooked and underappreciated. I felt very angry at the thought that an otherwisehealthy dog could be thrown away so easily. At the same time, I felt a deep sympathy for this dog
who had been cheated out of the love and attention he deserved. It was at this moment that I
resolved to give Chocolate as much love and attention as I could while working as a volunteer.
Although Chocolate was reluctant and shy at first. eventually through enough treats and play
he slowly came around and warmed up to me. Soon enough, whenever I came around his pen to
let him out for his turn of walks and play, Chocolate was always excited and jumping with joy.
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2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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As time passed by, the connection between Chocolate and I grew stronger and stronger.
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【范文】One possible version:
As time passed by, the connection between Chocolate and I grew stronger and stronger. The
grassland of the shelter often witnessed heartwarming and harmonious scenes where a girl and a
dog chased after each other, or curdled together, leisurely enjoying sunshine’s caress. With my
company and care, Chocolate’s previous shyness and timidity gave way to curiosity and
enthusiasm. So attached was he to me that he even bit my trousers to stop my pace when I had tohead home. Magically, whenever I approached him, my heart would brim with warmth and
affection, a sense of responsibility to protect him rising deep down. Perceiving him as my best
friend, I resolved to attend to him well and sheltered him from any potential harm.
One day, Charlie said Chocolate must find a home soon or he would be removed. The news
struck me like a bolt from the blue, making my heart sink with deep concern that he would be
ruthlessly abandoned again. However, it suddenly struck me that I could be Chocolate’s owner.
Filled with eagerness and anticipation, I pleaded with my parents to allow me to keep Chocolate.
Beyond my wildest dreams, they should approve of my request, telling me “Honey, your
unconditional love and continuous devotion to Chocolate eventually made us change our original
idea.” Now, it is a blessing that Chocolate has become my family member and it is he that
awakens me to the realization that nothing can be a greater delight than dedicating love and
reaping trust in reward.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者很想拥有自己的宠物，但遭到了父母的
反对，后来两方都妥协了，作者在宠物收容所做志愿者，以测试责任感和奉献精神。在这
里，作者遇到了一只被忽视的拉布拉多猎犬Chocolate。收容所的负责人Charlie让作者担
任Chocolate的主要看护人，并告知作者它因为基因问题导致短尾巴，不被人们接受，所以
被送至收容所。作者为此感到生气，对Chocolate充满同情，决定给它更多的爱和关注。虽
然起初Chocolate很害羞，但经过作者耐心的陪伴，它开始与作者建立了亲密关系，每次见
到作者都会表现出兴奋与欢喜。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“随着时间的流逝，Chocolate和我之间的联系越来越紧密”可知，
第一段可描写作者和 Chocolate 之间日常亲密相处的情景，以及作者由此非常珍视
Chocolate，内心产生责任感。
②由第二段首句内容“有一天，Charlie说Chocolate必须尽快找到一个家，否则就会
被赶走”可知，第二段可描写作者因为这个消息而非常难过，想出了自己可以收养Charlie
的解决方法，并得到了父母的同意，以及作者从这段经历中得到的感悟。
2. 续写线索：作者和Chocolate联系更紧密——作者和Chocolate亲密相处——作者产
生责任感——Chocolate需要尽快找到一个家——作者收养Chocolate——作者的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类①追逐：chase after/run after
②回家：head home/go home
③照顾：attend to/take care of
④抛弃：abandon/desert
⑤改变：change/alter
⑥收获：reap/harvest/gain
情绪类
①热情：enthusiasm/passion/keenness
②担忧：concern/worry
③喜悦：delight/joy/happiness
【点睛】[高分句型 1] The grassland of the shelter often witnessed heartwarming and
harmonious scenes where a girl and a dog chased after each other, or curdled together, leisurely
enjoying sunshine’s caress. (where引导限制性定语从句、现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] So attached was he to me that he even bit my trousers to stop my pace when I
had to head home. (so…that…引导结果状语从句、when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] The news struck me like a bolt from the blue, making my heart sink with deep
concern that he would be ruthlessly abandoned again. (现在分词短语作状语、that引导同位语
从句)
6．（2024·湖北武汉·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
My best friend, Cocoa, and I live in a senior-citizen apartment complex in a lovely small
town. Cocoa is a ten-year-old poodle(卷毛狗) and I am a sixty-nine-year-old lady, so you can see
we both qualify as senior citizens.
Years ago, I promised myself that when I retired I would get a chocolate poodle to share my
golden years. From the very beginning, Cocoa has always been exceptionally well-behaved. I
never have to tell him anything more than once. He is extremely neat—when taking toys from his
box to play, he always puts them back when he is finished. I have been accused of being
obsessively neat, and sometimes I wonder if he mimics me or if he was born that way, too.
He is a wonderful companion. When I throw a ball for him, he picks it up in his mouth and
gives it back to me. He does many amusing things that make me laugh, and when that happens, he
is so delighted that he just keeps it up. I enjoy his company very much.But almost two years ago, Cocoa did something that challenged comprehension. Was it a
miracle or a coincidence? It is certainly a mystery.
One afternoon, Cocoa started acting strangely. I was sitting on the floor playing with him
when he started pawing and sniffing at the right side of my chest. He had never done anything like
this before, and I told him, “No.” Usually, one “no” is sufficient, but not that day. He stopped
briefly, then suddenly ran toward me from the other side of the room, throwing his entire weight—
eighteen pounds—at the right side of my chest. He crashed into me and I yelled in pain. It hurt
more than I thought it would have.
Soon after this, I felt a lump (肿瘤). I went to the doctors, and after X-rays, tests and lab
work were done, they told me I had cancer.
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When cancer starts, a wall of calcium（钙） builds to which the lump or cancer attaches
itself. This is known as calcification. It is believed that calcium acts as a protective barrier thatisolates the cancerous cells from the surrounding tissues. Cocoa’s strange behavior that day,
pawing and sniffing at the right side of my chest, could have been a response to the changes
happening in my body. Animals, especially dogs, have an incredible sense of smell and can detect
subtle changes in our body odors. It is possible that Cocoa could sense the presence of the
cancerous cells even before any physical symptoms or pain appeared.
Was Cocoa just aware of what he was doing? I believe so. Cocoa’s actions that day were
extraordinary. He not only detected the presence of cancer but also tried to draw my attention to it
by pawing and crashing into me. His behavior was a clear gesture of concern and protection.
Cocoa’s intervention ultimately led to my early detection and treatment, and this incident made me
reflect on the unique bond that humans share with their pets. And I will forever be grateful for
having such a caring and perceptive companion by my side.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，这篇文章讲述了作者的一只卷毛狗 Cocoa在作者患
癌症之前通过异常的行为发现了疾病，并引起了作者的关注和治疗，探讨了人与宠物之间
独特的联系和宠物在健康问题上的感知能力。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当癌症开始时，肿块或癌症附着在一堵钙墙上。”可知，第一
段可描写Cocoa因为其难以置信的嗅觉察觉到了作者身体“钙化”的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“Cocoa知道它在做什么吗?”可知，第二段可描写作者很确信
Cocoa知道自己所做的一切，同时描述作者通过此次事件的感悟。
2.续写线索：
解释Cocoa的奇怪行为——Cocoa发现了作者身体中癌细胞的存在——作者确信Cocoa
知道自己所做的一切——反思自己与动物之间的纽带关系——最终感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充当：act as/ serve as
②发现：detect/discover
③撞击：crash/hit
情绪类
①难以置信的：incredible/ unbelievable
②感激的：grateful/ appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1]It is believed that calcium acts as a protective barrier that isolates thecancerous cells from the surrounding tissues.（句中包含that引导的主语从句以及that引导的
定语从句）
[高分句型2]Cocoa’s intervention ultimately led to my early detection and treatment, and this
incident made me reflect on the unique bond that humans share with their pets. （由关系代词
that引导限制性定语从句）
7．（2024·安徽池州·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Josie and I wanted a dog more than anything else. Whenever we had time, we’d sit together
and talk about dogs. “You’re so silly, Jake,” Josie would say. “Bulldogs (斗牛犬) are scary.”
“Hah. Golden retrievers (金毛猎犬) are scary,” I’d say. We had this ongoing argument about what
our ideal dog would be. But it made no difference—any dog would do, as long as it had a tail to
wag and a friendly face.
One summer night, as we sat together beside the window, Josie saw something. “What’s
that?” she said, pointing to a dark shadow on our driveway. The moon was up and everything
looked either black or milky. At first all I saw was darkness. Then the shadow moved and I heard
the sound of metal. Then the shadow flowed out onto the silvery driveway. With a little fright, we
found ourselves stepping down to the front door. There in our yard stood a dog—a big, black dog
with long, shaggy (蓬松的) hair.
Josie made a little kissing noise and held out her hand. “Here, boy!” I said. And the dog came
to us slowly, taking a few steps forward, and then a step back, not sure whether to trust us. When
close enough, it had a doggy smell that always made me think of dirt and grass and piles of leaves.
“Don’t say ‘Here, boy’,” said Josie. “She’s a female.” Pulling back and looking, I said, “I wonder
what her name is.” I felt for her collar while she sat patiently. I found no tags, but just a chain with
a small old bell on it.
“I bet she’s hungry,” said Josie. “I can feel her ribs.” I ran my hand through her fur. The dog
was so skinny that you could feel every bone, and her coat was twisted and full of dirt. If she
belonged to someone, they weren’t taking good care of her.
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“What can we give her?” Josie asked me. “Milk! I’ll get her some milk.” I went into the
kitchen to fill one plate with milk and some raw eggs. The dog ate everything up, but instantly she
finished, she ran into the shadows. “Don’t go!” Josie called loudly. But the dog was gone. “She’ll
be back when hungry again,” I said. “Nobody is feeding her.” The following evening, as soon as
we set the plate down, she appeared as if from nowhere. We named her ‘Shadow’ and gave her
food again, but this time for some reason she wouldn’t eat it.
The dog did something completely unexpected. She grabbed the plate in her mouth and
dragged it away into the bushes. When running there, we couldn’t find her. This went on for
several days. However, one night, Shadow didn’t come. Josie and I tried to figure out what had
happened. Another two days passed but we got no answer. We couldn’t wait to comb through the
bushes until we found something unexpected. At our feet lay a litter of four puppies, squeaking
and climbing around on top of each other. Our plates were there, and so was Shadow, cold and
motionless. She must have saved all her food for her puppies.
【导语】文章以时间为线索展开，讲述作者和Josie都很喜欢狗，并且一有时间就谈论
狗。一个夏夜，他们发现家附近的车道上有条黑色的大狗。狗怯怯地靠近他们，她看起来很瘦，像是饿了很久。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①根据第一段首句“‘我们能给她什么呢?’Josie问我”可知，下文可描写他们给狗狗
拿了什么吃的东西，以及狗狗的反应。
②根据第二段首句“狗做了一件完全出乎意料的事”可知，下文可描写作者和 Josie通
过这种奇怪行为的发现。
2.续写线索：思考拿什么给狗狗吃——从家里拿出东西给狗狗（比如牛奶鸡蛋之类）
——狗狗第二天又来了——狗狗做出奇怪的行为——尾随狗来到灌木丛——发现小狗
3.词类激活
行为类
①吃完：finish/eat up/complete
②出现：appear/show up/emerge
③弄清楚：figure out/make out
情绪类
①意料之外的；unexpected/unanticipated
【点睛】[高分句型1] The dog ate everything up, but instantly she finished, she ran into the
shadows. （运用了instantly引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] Josie and I tried to figure out what had happened. （运用了what引导的宾语
从句）
[高分句型3] At our feet lay a litter of four puppies, squeaking and climbing around on top of
each other. （运用了现在分词作状语）
8．（2024·重庆·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
Tom is a special child. Ever since he was little, dogs have been his greatest passion. He often
growled (低吼) and barked and sometimes moved around the house on all fours. His parents
brought in a little brown female dog named Lynn. Tom was on cloud nine. One day, this little boy,
together with Lynn, was sitting quietly down by the side of the street when suddenly a giant dog
walked across him. He was a little surprised and started screaming as loudly as he could! All of
this frightened Lynn away immediately.
Tom’s parents tried to see what the chances were of Lynn coming home on her own. But five
days later, there was still no sign of Lynn. The boy didn’t just have tears streaming down hischeeks — his parents were saddened too.
The woods behind their home stretched for over 50 miles! Together with their neighbors, they
searched for over a month. But Lynn was gone. Tom’s parents wanted to choose a new puppy for
him. But no dog could replace Lynn for him.
Tom was not the same boy. He locked himself in his room. He seemed to have lost his love
for dogs. He could not focus his attention on his classes so he didn’t want to go to school. He
would easily get angry with people around him. Tom changed from a happy, smiling boy to an
upset and annoying kid.
Tom’s parents wanted him to stay home and he had been studying at home ever since. His
parents accompanied him almost every day, but staying home didn’t help much. The boy’s mother
worried a lot. One rainy afternoon, she saw him staring out the window. “I miss Lynn so much. I
wonder if everything is okay with her?” It had been a long time since his beloved dog ran away,
but Tom’s despair was as great as the day it happened. Days later, Tom walked out the front door
with his head down and sat by the side of the street.
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A huge brown dog crossed the street and stood in front of the crying boy.
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【范文】 A huge brown dog crossed the street and stood in front of the crying boy.
The animal barked twice and watched Tom, tongue rolling out. It was only after a few minutes that
he looked at it more closely. The four-legged giant’s glassy eyes reminded him of hugging by the
fireplace and running between the sprinklers in the backyard. He knew the dog very well. It was
Lynn!!! Tom ran to his friend and wrapped his arms tightly around her neck.
Lynn licked his cheeks and then walked to the edge of the woods. Tom ran after Lynn and
entered the woods. He lost sight of her for a moment, but luckily soon heard his friend barking.
And he finally saw it… Lynn grew up to be an adult dog and became a mother! She had three
fluffy, sweet little puppies. Tom took Lynn and her puppies home and his parents were very happy
to adopt the little dogs. Tom took good care of Lynn and her puppies. He shared his story, showing
his appreciation of tiny animals. Tom made a full recovery. He happily returned to school. His
classmates visit him almost every day. Of course, they want to see not only Tom, but also Lynn
and her puppies.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tom非常喜欢狗，父母给了他一只名叫Lynn
的小狗，他非常喜欢，但Lynn意外走失了，寻找很长时间无果后Tom非常伤心，从一个
快乐、微笑的男孩变成了一个心烦意乱、令人讨厌的孩子，父母只能让他在家学习，Tom
非常想念Lynn，有一天Tom低着头走出前门，坐在路边。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一只巨大的棕色狗穿过街道，站在哭泣的男孩面前。”可知，
第一段可描写Tom认出这条大狗就是Lynn。
②由第二段首句内容“Lynn舔了舔脸颊，然后走到树林的边缘。”可知，第二段可描
写Tom把Lynn和它的小狗带回家精心照顾，Tom也完全康复并回到学校。
2.续写线索：大狗吠叫并看着Tom——认出大狗是Lynn——搂住大狗脖子——来到森
林——将Lynn和小狗带回家照顾——康复并返校
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拥抱：hug/embrace
②照顾：take care of/look after
③返回：return/go back情绪类
①幸运地：luckily/fortunately
②高兴的：happy/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型 1] It was only after a few minutes that he looked at it more closely.
（运用了强调句型）
[高分句型2] He shared his story, showing his appreciation of tiny animals.（运用了现在分
词作状语）
9．（2024·安徽·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
In a very cold January, a puppy wandered around Mr. Lacey’s house, where he lived with his
wife Mamie and their daughter Doris. Icicles (冰锥) hung three feet or more from the roofs of
houses and snow swallowed up cars.
The puppy had been abandoned, and it made its way down the road toward the Laceys’ small
house, with its ears down and trembling from shyness and cold. Doris, whose school had been
called off because of the snow, was clearing the steps when she spotted the puppy on the road.
“Come on, little dog!” she called it over. The puppy shyly wagged its tail when Doris
approached. As soon as Doris put the dog down in the kitchen, her mom, Mrs. Lacey, asked where
the dog came from. Mr. Lacey, who was cleaning his fingernails with his pocketknife at the table,
said, “I don’t know where it came from, but I know for sure where it’s going.” Doris hugged the
puppy hard against her. She said nothing.
Because of the snowy weather, Mr. Lacey couldn’t take the puppy to the shelter right away.
So, it stayed in the basement, and Doris fed it leftovers, even though her mom didn’t want to
waste food. Doris thought the puppy was around six months old and would be quite noisy
sometimes. Surprisingly, the puppy behaved well, didn’t cry or make trouble in the basement, and
only followed Doris upstairs when she invited it. Doris often found it on the basement steps
listening to the kitchen talk and smelling the food. She felt the puppy wanted company.
Even after a week, Doris didn’t name the dog, knowing her parents wouldn’t let her keep it.
Her father made so little money that any pets were out of the question. Desperate to keep the dog,
Doris tried to convince her parents by praising the dog’s good behavior and expressing her love
for it, but her parents didn’t give a definite answer.Despite her efforts, Doris secretly wished the bad weather would never go away, fearing the
puppy’s unavoidable trip to the shelter. However, nine days after the dog had arrived, the sun was
shining.
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Doris knew it was time to say goodbye to the dog and felt rather worried.
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Doris knew it was time to say goodbye to the dog and felt rather worried. She was sitting
alone in the living room, hugging a pillow and rocking back and forth on the edge of a chair. She
was trying not to cry but she was not strong enough. Her face was wet and red, her eyes full of
sadness. Just as Doris was at her lowest, her parents appeared from the doorway. With a smile on
Mrs. Lacey’s face, she said, “Honey, Papa and I have agreed to keep the puppy as a part of our
family.”
Doris put her hand to her mouth and couldn’t believe what she had heard. She looked at her
parents surprisedly. “Doris, you were right. He has brought so much happiness to us,” Mr. Lacey
continued, “and I drove by the local animal shelter yesterday. The conditions there are quite poor.
We can’t leave him there.” Doris smiled with tears of happiness in her eyes and threw her arms
around her parents. She knew they not only embraced the puppy into their family but also gavehim a chance at a much happier life.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了一个寒冷的一月，雪下地非常大，一只被遗
弃的小狗来到Lacey一家的门口，被小女孩Doris发现并收留进家中。虽然Lacey先生表示
之后要把小狗送去收容所，但是Doris内心希望把小狗留下，她认真地照顾着小狗。尽管
小狗表现优秀，Doris试图说服父母允许自己留下小狗，但仍未得到确切答复。最终，随着
天气转暖，小狗的命运成了悬念。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Doris知道是时候和狗说再见了，她感到相当担心”可知，第一
段可描写Doris担心的神情和行为表现，以及父母突然告诉她可以把小狗留在家中的消息。
②由第二段首句内容“Doris用手捂住嘴，简直不敢相信自己所听到的”可知，第二段
可描写父母向Doris解释他们决定留下小狗的原因，以及Doris开心的行为举动。
2. 续写线索：Doris很担心——Doris的神情和行为——父母打算留下小狗——Doris不
敢相信——父母解释原因——Doris很开心
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①拥抱：hug/cuddle
②哭泣：cry/weep/shed tears
③出现：appear/show up
④笑：smile/beam/grin
⑤给予：give/offer
情绪类
①悲伤：sadness/sorrow/unhappiness
②惊讶地：surprisedly/astonishedly
③开心：happiness/joy/delight
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Just as Doris was at her lowest, her parents appeared from the
doorway. (as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] She knew they not only embraced the puppy into their family but also gave him
a chance at a much happier life. (that引导名词性从句作knew的宾语并被省略、not only… but
also…固定句型)
10．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整
的故事。For many, an act of kindness is its own reward. But Eva Hachey found her selflessness
answered in ways she could never have imagined.
For weeks, Eva Hachey had imagined adopting a golden Chihuahua with a white spot on its
forehead. And there he was, at her local SPCA in Fredericton, New Brunswick. The dog had been
abused by his previous owners and was timid. “He’d come to me, then back away and growl, then
come back to me,” Hachey said. “After 15 minutes, the attendant picked him up and put him in
my lap. He started giving me kisses. He stole my heart in that moment.” She adopted the ten-
month-old puppy on the spot and named him Bruno.
Bruno lived happily with Hachey and her 35-year-old daughter, Angel Hutchinson, for five
months. Then, on the evening of September 26, 2016, Hachey, 52 at the time, returned home as
usual at 8 p. m. from her job as a chiropractic assistant and office manager. And as usual, she ate
supper in front of the TV in the living room. Around 10: 30, a friend called, just as Bruno went
into Hutchinson’s room to go to sleep for the night. Hachey and her friend chatted a bit, and as
Hachey hung up, she noticed the time was 11: 08.
“The next thing I remember was a male voice saying, ‘Eva, Eva, wake up.’ It was an
emergency doctor,” said Hachey. “I looked around, and the room was just full of people. And I
said, ‘What are you doing in my house?’”
What they were doing was saving her life. By the time Hachey had hung up with her friend,
Hutchinson was fast asleep in her bedroom and Bruno was in his usual spot next to her under the
blankets. Hachey believed Bruno heard something odd then and possibly went to the living room
to investigate.
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Unexpectedly, Bruno ran back to the bedroom and tried every means to awaken Hutchinson.
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【范文】Unexpectedly, Bruno ran back to the bedroom and tried every means to awaken
Hutchinson. He barked and jumped on and off the bed. When that didn’t work, he attacked
Hutchinson’s fleshy skin between her fingers. Finally, Hutchinson woke up and was immediately
led into the living room, only to discover Hatchey passed out in the chair. She had almost stopped
breathing and was apparently in danger. Without hesitation, Hutchson lifted her head up so her
mother could breathe, and dialed 911 on her cell. The ambulance finally arrived and Hatchey was
rushed to the hospital. It turned out that she suffered a stroke and would have died without the
quick response.
A year later, Hachey finally fully recovered. Recalling the experience, she was convinced that
being found so quickly after the attack was the key factor in helping her survive. She owed it to
Bruno, saying that it was he that saved her life. “I never imagined he would save my life when I
adopted him. I do believe the animal will pick us and I am lucky he chose me. ” Hatchey gazed at
Bruno and stroked his fur gently, smiling contentedly. Any act of kindness is its own reward, no
matter how small it seems.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，本文讲述了 Eva Hachey通过采取一只庇护所狗狗布
鲁诺做出的善良行为，而最终获得了她意想不到的回报。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“出乎意料的是，布鲁诺跑回卧室，并尽一切办法唤醒
Hutchinson”可知，第一段可描写第一段可描写布鲁诺叫醒Hutchinson，以及如何救Hachey
的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“一年后，Hachey终于完全康复了”可知，第二段可描写Hachey
恢复之后，得知自己被布鲁诺拯救的过程，很感动和感悟。
2.续写线索：Hachey领养Bruno——Hachey的女儿以及Bruno关系非常亲密——一天，Hachey突发
中风——Bruno唤醒Hachey的女儿，及时拨打911——Hachey病情恢复——Hachey得知真
相非常感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①到达：arrive/reach/get to
②拯救：save/rescue
③看着：gaze at/stare at
情绪类
①毫不犹豫：without hesitation/unhesitatingly
②满意地：contentedly/satisfactorily
【点睛】[高分句型1] It turned out that she suffered a stroke and would have died without
the quick response. （句中含有it作形式主语，that引导主语从句的结构）
[高分句型2] Hatchey gazed at Bruno and stroked his fur gently, smiling contentedly. （句
中含有现在分词作状语的结构）
11．（2024·河南南阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sarah was a kind girl who lived near a big forest. She loved animals more than anything else.
The forest was her favorite place, where she liked to watch the animals.
One cold winter day, she found a hurt deer caught in a trap. It looked awfully scared, and
Sarah knew she had to help immediately. She went close slowly and set the deer free. The deer
seemed to know that Sarah was kind, and they became friends. She named the deer Grace. She
built a rough shelter from old pieces of wood for Grace.
Every day, Sarah went to see Grace. She brought food, water, and bandages for Grace’s hurt
leg. Slowly, the leg got better. They liked to spend time together. Sarah would read to Grace, and
Grace would listen.
When spring came, Grace’s leg was all better. It was time for her to go back to the wild.
Saying goodbye was very hard for Sarah. She hugged Grace and cried as she watched her go back
to the forest. But she knew it was the right thing to do.
The years went by, and Sarah never forgot about Grace. She wanted to keep helping animals,
so she became an animal doctor for wild animals. She helped many animals, but Grace was alwaysspecial to her.
Their time together was filled with love and trust. It changed Sarah’s life and helped her
know what she wanted to do. Every day, she thought about Grace’s gentle eyes and their
friendship. It made her want to help other animals like she helped Grace.
Sarah’s story with Grace was more than just a girl and a deer. It was about love. trust, and
understanding. It was about knowing what is right and doing it, even when it’s hard. Most of all, it
was about a friendship that lasted forever, in Sarah’s heart.
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Several years later, while on a rescue mission in the same forest. Sarah noticed a deer with a
familiar gleam in her eyes.
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Several years later, while on a rescue mission in the same forest. Sarah noticed a deer with a
familiar gleam in her eyes. The deer stood beside her, looking at her with gentle eyes. Sarah felt so
excited that she stood rooted to the spot. The deer nudge her playfully with its nose, and thenSarah regained her senses. She quickly brought some fresh fruits and vegetables to the deer and let
it drink clean drinking water. After spending a pleasant afternoon here, the dear returned to the
forest.
The story of Sarah and Grace spread in the community, becoming a symbol of human-animal
empathy. From that day on, Sarah settled in the forest, and the deer became a regular visitor to
Sarah’s backyard. Sarah always prepared the best foods to feed the deer and created a comfortable
place for it to rest in during the day. While taking care of the deer, Sarah was also caring for
animals in need. The backyard became a playground for various animals. During the interactions
with animals, Sarah felt happy and a sense of achievement. She hoped that such days could last
forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。萨拉救了一只被陷阱困
住的鹿，小心护理使它恢复了健康，给它起名字格蕾丝。精心照料后，鹿变得强壮和自信
返回野外。萨拉感到有些悲伤，但也知道鹿应该回到自然栖息地，萨拉继续照顾需要帮助
的动物。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“几年后，在同一片森林执行救援任务时。萨拉注视着一只鹿，
眼睛里闪烁着熟悉的光芒。”可知，第一段可以描写萨拉和格蕾丝见面时的动作和心理活
动。
②由第二段句首内容“萨拉和格蕾丝的故事在社区里传开了。成为人类与动物共情的
象征。”可知，第二段可以描写萨拉和格蕾丝接下来的相处和萨拉对其它动物的照顾。
2.续写线索：看到鹿—相认—返回—故事传开—更多保护
3.词汇激活
行为类
①恢复：regain/restore
②返回：return/go back
③准备好：prepare/gear up
情绪类
①激动的：excited/agitato
②愉快的：pleasant/delightful
【点睛】【高分句型1】The deer stood beside her, looking at her with gentle eyes. ( 运用
了现在分词短语looking at作状语)【高分句型2】Sarah felt so excited that she stood rooted to the spot.( 运用了that引导的
结果状语从句)
【高分句型3】While taking care of the deer, Sarah was also caring for animals in need. (运
用了While引导的时间状语从句的省略)
12．（2024·辽宁·模拟预测）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Our neighbor, Mrs. Moore is an old artist, who lives alone with her cat Taffy. Her husband
passed away years ago and her children work in other cities. Mrs. Moore always wears a serious
look but in fact she is a very nice neighbor. She does three things every day-petting Taffy, painting
and baking, among which baking is the part I like. Whenever the mouth-watering smell gets over
the fence, I could expect a paper bag containing delicious cookies to be passed over the fence and
shared by my sister Jennifer and me. To return this favor, my dad would mow the lawn (修剪草
坪) for Mrs. Moore and help repair the water pipes.
Last year, Dad put his idea of building a tree house for us in our back yard into action. Dad
shot from the hip (干事利落) and got everything in place within two weeks. It was a yellow tree
house with red roof, which made a great place. for Jennifer and me to get out of the sight of Mom
and Dad to have fun and talk about our girlish matters. We couldn’t wait to get in only to find
Taffy had taken occupation of it and messed up the inside. We ourselves were unwilling to talk
about such a problem to our nice neighbor, but we had no other choice. Dad was the one we sent
to Mrs. Moore’s house for a friendly talk about the issue.
After the talk, Dad took Mrs. Moore on an inspection of the tree house, at which she was
extremely astonished, saying she had never expected Taffy could be so fascinated with it. She
promised to take care of the problem but to our disappointment, the cat could still find ways to
climb over the fence and get into the tree house. After a thousand apologies to us, Mrs. Moore
gave the problem a careful consideration and came up to a big decision: In view of Taffy’s
obsession (痴迷) with a tree house, why not build one specially for him?
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Mrs. Moore bought a ready-made one from an Internet store and had some workers fixed it up inher garden.
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【范文】Mrs. Moore bought a ready-made one from an Internet store and had some workers
fixed it up in her garden. The tree house looked great in the garden. It was in the shape of a bird
nest with bright colors of purple and orange. Mrs. Moore put cat toys and cat food in it to make
sure Taffy would be attracted. However, out of the expectation of all of us, however much effort
she put into making the tree house attractive, the cat just wouldn’t give it a single visit, and
wouldn’t stop coming into ours.
Mrs, Moore racked her brains (绞尽胸汁) and worked out a plan to exchange our tree
houses. Now that she failed to attract Taffy to her tree house, she might as well attract Jennifer and
me to it. She painted beautiful pictures on the walls of the tree house and put comfortable cushions
in it. Sure enough, unlike the silly cat, we were wise enough to decide it was much better than our
tree house and an agreement was made on the spot. We couldn’t be happier to have Mrs. Moore as
our neighbor and we couldn’t love her more.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的邻居摩尔太太养着一只猫，这只猫很
喜欢去作者家花园的树屋。后来为了避免打扰作者一家人，摩尔太太在网上购买了树屋，
但是她的猫仍然很喜欢去作者家的树屋。于是，摩尔太太决定提出和作者家提出交换树屋
的决定，最终作者一家人同意摩尔太太的提议，成为了好邻居。【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“摩尔太太从网上商店买了一个现成的，并让一些工人在她的花
园里把它修好了。”可知，第一段可描写摩尔太太树屋建好后设法让猫进去的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“摩尔太太绞尽脑汁想出了一个交换树屋的计划。”可知，第二
段可描写作者和珍妮佛同意摩尔太太的计划并且很喜欢交换后的树屋。
2.续写线索：摩尔太太买树屋——树屋建好——吸引猫——提出交换计划——同意计
划——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①吸引：attract/ appeal to
②.决定：decide / determine
③.确保：make sure / guarantee
情绪类
①.明智的，聪明的：wise /smart
②.更高兴的：happier /more cheerful
【点睛】[高分句型1]. However, out of the expectation of all of us, however much effort
she put into making the tree house attractive, the cat just wouldn’t give it a single visit, and
wouldn’t stop coming into ours.（运用了however引导的让步状语从句。）
[高分句型2]. Now that she failed to attract Taffy to her tree house, she might as well attract
Jennifer and me to it.（运用了Now that引导的原因状语从句。）
13．（2024·浙江宁波·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
There once was a stray dog (流浪狗) named Rufus who was the most amazing dog on
Kumquat Street. He could hear a ladybug blowing its nose. He could see a pill bug eating a black
licorice candy at midnight. Rufus could even smell a caterpillar that hadn’t washed its feet.
You would think that Rufus, being so amazing, was also happy. But he wasn’t. You see, there
was one thing that kept Rufus from being adopted by his favorite human. And that was ...Rufus
barked backward. Here’s what he sounded like: “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”
Rufus could stand being laughed at by every squirrel and cat in the neighborhood. What he
couldn't stand was that his bark kept him from living with Janie Johnson.
Janie never laughed at Rufus when he barked. More than anything else, Rufus wanted to beher pet. He wanted to play catch in her yard every day and sleep at the foot of her bed each night.
But Janie’s father, Mr. Johnson, wouldn’t hear of it. “What? A dog that barks backward? Wed
be the laughingstocks of Kumquat Street! we Johnsons didn't get where we are today by adopting
dogs that bark backward. No, Janie. It’s out of the question.”
“I’m sorry,” Janie told Rufus one morning as they sat on her front porch. “I keep telling
Daddy how great you are. He just won’t listen.”
“Krab-krab!” said Rufus.
“Yes, sometimes he is bad-tempered,” said Janie “I’ll keep trying, though. Don’t worry.”
But Rufus did worry. That evening he talked it over with his friend Bill Bulldog. “I don’t
think Mr Johnson will ever like me,” Rufus said. “As long as I bark backward, he’ll never let me
live in his home.”
“Have you tried treatment?” asked Bill.
Rufus said, “I’ve tried everything. Nothing helps. It’s just the way I bark.”
“You’re a great dog Roof. Anyone can see that,” said Bill. “It just takes some humans longer
to figure it out, that’s all. Hey, want to go with me to Succotash Street? I’ve heard that their
garbage is fantastic.”
Rufus yawned. “No, thanks,” he said. “I’ll take a nap.”
When Rufus woke up, it was late afternoon. As he was lying there, his sharp ears heard Mr.
Johnson saying, “It’s almost suppertime. ls Janie still roller-skating? We Johnsons didn’t get where
we are today by being late for supper.”
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Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie.
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【范文】Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. He listened for the clickety-click
of Janie’s skates. He sniffed for her special bubble-gum-and-peaches scent. He looked for her sky-
blue helmet. But he didn’t hear, smell, or see her anywhere. Rufus started baking as loud as he
could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!” A squirrel giggled in a tree, “I’ve never
heard anything so silly in my life!” “You don’t even sound like a dog!”, yowled a cat. Rusfus
ignored them all and kept on barking. Soon all you heard in the neighborhood was his bark.
Suddenly, Janie skated up to Rufus. “Oh, Rufus, I knew I heard you!” cried Janie.
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up. “Janie,” he said. “Where on earth have
you been?” Janie explained, “I took wrong turn and got lost, Daddy! Then all of a sudden, I heard
‘Wob-wow, fra-fra-fra.’ It was Rufus! I knew if I followed the sound of his bark, I’d find my way
back home.” Mr. Johnson knelt in front of Rufus and held out his hand. “Rufus, I owe you an
apology,” he said. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re
wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you to come live with us.” Rufus happily gave Mr.
Johnson his paw and licked his cheek. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by letting dogs
lick us on the cheek.” said Mr. Johnson. “Hmph! Well, I guess that wasn’t so bad!”
【导语】
本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了一只名叫 Rufus的流浪狗未能获得主人Mr.
Johnson的喜爱，从而不能和家人生活在一起。最终，当Janie迷路时，Rufus用他特有的吠
叫引导她回家，打动了Janie的父亲，最终获得了这一家人的认可的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Rufus沿着金桔街跑去找Janie。”可知，第一段可描写Rufus
跑去找Janie时，他即听又闻又看，却没能找到Janie，他便开始大声地像以前一样叫出来，
却被树上的一只松鼠嘲笑了，但Rufus继续吠叫使得Janie来到了Rufus面前的经过及相关细节。
②由第二段首句内容“看到Janie和Rufus，Mr. Johnson跑了上来。”可知，第二段可
描写Mr. Johnson看到Janie后询问女儿去了哪里，Janie说自己迷路了，多亏Rufus的叫声
才找到回家的路，Mr. Johnson决定向Rufus道歉并邀请他和家人一起住，Rufus高兴地与
Mr. Johnson互动的过程及相关细节。
2.续写线索：Rufus努力寻找Janie——Rufus大声吠叫——Janie闻声前来——一起回到
家中——Mr. Johnson向Rufus道歉——Rufus和家人一起居住
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 寻找：look for/hunt for/seek for
② 看见：see/observe
③ 叫喊：cry/scream
情绪类
① 快乐地：happily/merrily
② 糟糕的：bad/awful/terrible
【点睛】[高分句型1] Soon all you heard in the neighborhood was his bark. (使用了that引
导的定语从句修饰先行词all，that已经省略)
[高分句型 2] We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re
wrong. (前面使用了where引导的地点状语从句，admitting 后接when引导的宾语从句)
14．（2024·新疆·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
Eli looked up at the sky. It was bright blue, his favorite color. As he lay on his back, the soft
green grass brushed against his arms and legs. The cool wind kept him at the perfect temperature,
and the weather was just right for playing outside. Every summer vacation, he and his family
drove to the small city of Ithaca to visit his mother’s family.
Just as Eli was starting to fall asleep in the backyard, his stomach growled (饥肠辘辘).
“Time for dinner” he thought. So he stood up and began to walk back to the house. Suddenly he
noticed something move out of the corner of his eye. It was near the woods in the back yard. Then
he heard some rustling (沙沙地响). So he went to check what it was. When he got closer, the
object stopped moving. He walked over quietly until he could see something lying in the grass —
it was a baby deer!Even though Eli was standing very close to the animal, he found it strange that the baby deer
didn’t try running away. Eli rushed into the house and told his mother what he had found. “Well,
we should check if the deer is injured. If not, we shouldn’t do anything because its mother will
come back and take care of it,” she told Eli. So the two of them walked to the baby animal. Eli’s
mother walked very slowly and finally got close enough to the deer.
Eli watched his mother frow n as she examined the baby deer. She walked back to Eli. “I
think its back le g is injured,” she said. “But we’ll wait for a few hours and see if the deer’s
mother comes back for it. If we do anything now, we might scare it and hurt it more.” Eli wanted
to help the baby, but he knew his mother was right. They went back into the house and had lunch.
They both kept checking the clock.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the sky was getting dark, the little deer was still lying there.
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【范文】
As the sky was getting dark, the little deer was still lying there. Eli lost his patience and
couldn’t wait any longer, so he hurried his mother to save the deer since its mother wouldn’t come
back. “Alright. I will call the rescue center so they can take the deer away for professionaltreatment,” Eli’s mother agreed. While his mother made the phone call, Eli slowly approached the
deer. It couldn’t move with its leg injured but still awake. Just as he was about to reach out to
comfort the deer, his mother stopped him, “Eli, you might scare it. The rescue truck will be here
soon.”
Twenty minutes later, a big rescue truck drove into their driveway. Seeing two rescue
personnel get off the truck, Eli ran over to them. Eli and his mother briefly described the situation
and guided them to the deer. The rescue personnel checked the deer carefully, carried it to the
truck and placed it in the back. “Don’t worry. We will take good care of it!” The two told Eli and
his mother, and then they drove away. Eli felt a great sense of relief. “I just helped save that baby’s
life!” he thought proudly.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。伊莱注意到草地上躺着
一只小鹿。伊莱的妈妈打量着小鹿。她走回伊莱身边。“我想它的后腿受伤了，”她说。
“但我们要等几个小时，看看鹿妈妈会不会回来找它。如果我们现在做点什么，可能会把
它吓得更厉害。”伊莱想帮助小鹿，但他知道妈妈是对的。他们回到屋里吃午饭。他们俩
都不停地看时钟。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“天色渐渐黑了，小鹿还躺在那里。”可知，第一段可以描写伊
莱看到天色渐黑后小鹿还躺在那里时的心情、做法，妈妈采取的措施。
②由第二段句首内容“20分钟后，一辆大型救援卡车开进了他们的车道。”可知，第
二段可以描写救援人员到达后，二人的动作和感受。
2.续写线索：小鹿还在—相救助—大救援电话—救援卡车到—讲述—带走—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拯救：save/rescue
②回来：come back/return
③同意：agree/approve
情绪类
①失去了耐心：lose one’s patience/be out of patience
②担心：worry/feel anxious
【点睛】【高分句型1】Eli lost his patience and couldn’t wait any longer, so he hurried his
mother to save the deer since its mother wouldn’t come back. ( 运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】While his mother made the phone call, Eli slowly approached the deer. ( 运
用了While引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型3】Seeing two rescue personnel get off the truck, Eli ran over to them. (运用了
现在分词Seeing作原因状语)
15．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
We moved to a small seaside community in New Zealand 10 years ago, because my husband
Phil worked as a biologist and he had to do research near the sea. I had seen seals (海豚) around
Pilot Bay, which is near here. Sometimes you see them out on the rocks, sunning themselves or
playing-but usually in their own territory. They never thought about disturbing their neighbors.
It was a dark winter morning in August this year when a seal came. At 5:50 a.m., I left the house
to go fitness training. I went down to the car parked in the driveway and heard a growl (咆哮). I
thought our cat, Coco, must have chased a dog under the car. I jumped into the car to avoid getting
my ankles bitten, and moved slowly, but then I felt the car hit something. When I got out to have a
look, I couldn’t see anything and thought it must have moved on. Then when I got back into my
seat, I saw a baby seal in the headlights.
I thought, Oh, my God, “but didn’t panic—the ocean is just down the driveway and I thought
it would find its way back. Off I went to the training center and gave everyone there a laugh when
I said, “Sorry I’m late; there was a seal under the car.” I didn’t think about it again until I got
home. As I walked through the garage (车库), I noticed our baskets had been moved. I wondered
if it was the seal, but then I guessed it could not be the seal because I didn’t think it could fit
through the cat door, which was the only way into the garage. But I was wrong. As I opened the
door to the house, I brushed something and heard this flip-flip-flip-flip sound, and thought, “My
God, that is the seal.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was so cute like a lovely soft toy.
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It was so cute like a lovely soft toy. It had watery eyes and looked at me like a chi id, which
made me desperate ty want to keep it secretly. But I knew it was a wild animal and it should be
back to its home, because wild animals belong to the wild. With a deep sigh, I phone d Phil, who
was on his way home from a work trip. He told me that wild animals smelled bad and I probably
never knew how sharp their teeth were. On Phil’s arriving home, we immediately looked for the
contact information.
We called Animal Protection Station, and a worker came over. It was sad to see the little
lovely wild creature wrapped up in a net to be taken away, but a great relief lifted from my inner
heart when the worker said it would be released into the sea after being checked. Experiencing this
fortuitous encounter with the seal reminded me that we should help raise awareness of protecting
seals. So, I together with Phil, posted the photos on the social media and it snowballed. For us, it
was pretty good to see so many people care for our lovely wild neighbors: seals.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家搬到了新西兰的一个海边小社区，
某天作者发现一只海豹出现在自家门前。作者给丈夫打了电话，丈夫联系了动物保护站，
最后工作人员把这只海豹带走了。这次与海豹的偶遇提醒了作者，我们应该帮助提高保护
海豹的意识。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“它是如此可爱，像一个可爱的软玩具”可知，第一段可描写作者想让海豹回归自己的家园，于是和丈夫一起找保护站的联系方式。
②由第二段首句内容“我们打电话给动物保护站，一个工作人员过来了”可知，第二
段可描写工作人员把海豹带走了，这次与海豹的偶遇提醒了作者，我们应该帮助提高保护
海豹的意识。
2.续写线索：发现海豹——联系丈夫——打电话给动物保护站——工作人员带走海豹
——认识到应该提高保护海豹意识
3.词汇激活
行为类
①提高：raise/promote
②返回：be back to/return
③释放：release/free
情绪类
①可爱：lovely/adorable
②意外：fortuitous/unexpected
【点睛】[高分句型1] But I knew it was a wild animal and it should be back to its home,
because wild animals belong to the wild. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
