读后续写：人与动物类
Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人）.....................................................................1
Part2：人与动物故事构造套路.......................................................................3
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节..................................................................................3
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节..................................................................................6
套路三、主题升华句.................................................................................................8
Part3：人与动物场景素材积累.......................................................................8
Part4：灵活应用............................................................................................11
例1：人与麻雀........................................................................................................11
Part5：高考真题再现....................................................................................13
真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】..............................................13
真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】...................................................16
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文
本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，
要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高
大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故
事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼 wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；
人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇 polar bear 追赶的惊险经历（2020 年
6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给 Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助 Poppy摆脱孤
独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求
助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。Part1：经典例文 （小狗救人）
Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member
by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate’s birth, Catherine decided she wanted
a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to
inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman
Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.
Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as
sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward
to having the dog join the family.
Hearing of Khan’s rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was
overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there
were risks involved. Well, the obvious risks from bringing a large, potentially dangerous
animal to her young baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had not adopted Khan,
he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was his new life and second
chance, and the family was hoping for the best.
Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However,
everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character.
The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had
her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary.
Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this. However,
things were different this day.
So what was actually happening out there? The two were not being loud or crazy.
They began running through the backyard grass together. Again, Catherine watched the
two closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant!
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Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden,_______________________________________________________________________________
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Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying
eyes.
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One possible version:
Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched
Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. Just as she was wondering how he could suddenly
become this way, Khan put down Kate outside the yard. Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her
to safety while Khan barked towards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous
snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away.
可汗突然开始疯狂地表演起来。凯瑟琳张开嘴，看着汗拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下
来。就在她想知道他怎么会突然变成这样的时候，汗把凯特放在院子外面。凯瑟琳冲到凯
特身边，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗则疯狂地向院子走去。凯瑟琳回来了，结果发现一条
毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它开走了。
Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then collapsed with
dying eyes. Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and was attacked. Although living
with the family for merely four days, he became the protector as Catherine had hoped. Catherine
rushed Khan to the vet. “May God bless you”, Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best to save
him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear of relief.
显然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠声很微弱，然后瘫倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保护
凯特不受有毒生物的伤害，并遭到了袭击。虽然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他还是像
凯瑟琳所希望的那样成为了保护者。凯瑟琳冲着可汗去看兽医。“愿上帝保佑你。”凯瑟
琳喃喃地说。兽医尽力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凯瑟琳如释了一口气。Part2：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是
狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
1、外貌
1. a pair of large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛
2. two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛
3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛
4. a nose like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子
5. long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的 腿
6. fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一样洁白
7. a long little tail 一条长长的小尾巴
2、动作
wag the tail 摇尾巴
smell/sniff 嗅
bark/yap/yelp 狗吠
lick 舔
put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来
shake the whole body 抖动全身
bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角
rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部
hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住
fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天
run around me 围着我跑
keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你
raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身leap to its feet 跳起来
rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里
keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿弯曲
3、高兴
1. They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到
以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.
（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
2. Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in
for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy
was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3、常见动物
鹿：
1. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns （有一对大的鹿角）appeared in front of him,
with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying on the dry ground. （202103宁波十校）
2. The poor creature, apparently in desperate need of water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink
tongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）
3. The mother deer lowered her head and licked my boy’s cheek gently, as if expressing
gratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）. （202103宁波十校）
马：
1. At the pen, Gina saw the horse. It was of medium size. It had a fine, soft blackcoat and one
white foot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）. There was a wide white patch
(斑纹)that ran down the center of its face. Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow! What a
horse.” （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
2. The horse seemed to feel her kindness, sniffing her（闻了闻她）. （英语周报高三第十期
2020.9.4）狗：
1.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa,
but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快乐）. （2020年1月高考
浙江卷）
2. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever so slowly, then
faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. Poppy approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only
moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box（把它的头伸出盒子） to peek at
its new home and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
4. Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppy’s ears pricked up（竖起耳朵） and
suddenly she was on all fours（四脚着地）. The boy was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched
bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one
who licked his fingers fondly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故
事情节为主。
1、害怕
1. Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考
浙江卷）
2. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧
吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，
使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
4. A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）
5. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死）
（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palmssweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7
高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that
the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考
浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）
and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾
狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗）
till he had become dry. （山东模拟）
5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只
狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
3、熊：
1. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,
and smelled our garlic bread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs（用他的后腿站起来） and pushed at
the wooden fence posts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired to tear down us（想要撕裂我们）
with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owing to the dreadful spray. （2020.7
高考浙江卷）
4. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.
（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
5. One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what
he got（对他得到的很满意）, the wolf ran into the woods. （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
4、狼：
1. Pale-yellow eyes narrowed. Black lips tightened. Double sets of two-inch sharp teeth wereexposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）. Suddenly the wolf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a
painful cry rose from its throat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.
（2020.11金华十校）
2. The wolf’s head sank to the ground, sad yellow eyes looking at us（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着
我们）. （2020.11金华十校）
3. So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮） and smacking
the window violently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
套路三：主题升华设计
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.
（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充
满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just
like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）
4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s
hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）
Part3：人与动物场景素材积累
(01)
Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. “Wait for me! It won’t be long,” he exclaimed
to me. Desperate and hopeless, I closed my eyes, praying this was all a dream. And even worse,
the water was so cold it felt like millions of needles were stabbing me. How I wished that I couldfly out of the icy water like a bird! After what seemed to be ages, Harry returned to the pond,
with a long oak branch in his hand. As I grabbed hold of one end of the branch, my brother started
to drag the other with every last ounce of his strength. Thank goodness, I was able to climb out of
the ice hole and then we galloped home.
Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. “Oh,
my God! Where have you been?” she said in surprise. “You're completely wet.” “It’s Harry’s
fault!” I complained to her through my chattering teeth. When I told her what had happened to me,
her eyes were wide with horror. All of a sudden, she took my arm, pulled me into the bathroom
and then gave me a warm bath. After that, mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a
blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. She sat next to me, smiling, relieved that I was all right.
Sure enough, my brother was criticized by mum for his lack of safety awareness.
(02)
Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next morning. He rang the doorbell and politely waited
for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside, frantic to
get out. Sam stood by the door, debating with himself whether to walk the unfriendly dog to help
his best friend. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with
a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager to go out
with him. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good
time, dear!” Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out of the
house.
Paragraph 2：A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.
Obviously, Sam’s efforts paid off—Roland was healthy and active. But what pleased her most was
that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing.
Besides, they would help her clean up the yard. From then on, laughter filled her house and she no
longer felt lonely. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to—the day he was paid
for his work. What a big surprise! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what
Sam had done for him. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly supporthis friend when he was in trouble.
(03)
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was
that? She wondered. A sea fish? Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot
once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling
around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her.
And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It
was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second,
her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help,
Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as
quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to
move. At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With
all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away.
And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few
minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
(04)
Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). The terrifying
day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor
slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and
hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost
collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar
and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless,
the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.
Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn’t act as most had imagined. Much to their surprise, the
savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then lickedthe slave’s hands and feet. He behaved likea pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didn’t you recognize
me?” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest. Sighing with relief, the slave
stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the
story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion. One good turn deserves
another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.
(05)
Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my
eyes. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a coincidence
that Arthur would appear in front of me when I had trouble! I thought. For a second, I stared at
him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me and he
gave me a huge hug. “What brings you here?” he asked with a puzzled expression on his face. So I
told him that my car got a flat tire and that considering the poor road condition, it might broke
downon my way back home. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to
give me a hand again.
Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. After
listening to the sound of the engine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it. And then
they started to fix the tire and we chatted happily. Arthur told me that the thank-you note from
me inspired him to live a meaningful life by helping others. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed.
He got up, wiped the sweat from his face and wished me a pleasant journey. I couldn’t thank him
enough. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is
meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.
(06)
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He exposed his sharp teeth,
snarling at us, as he ran forward. And again the furious creature stood on his back legs and began
to snap at the fence like a demon. It seemed that his mouth was dripping with blood and his eyes
were red with rage. At the sight of it, I could feel a flicker of fear flooding over me, and Ellis was
stunned, her mouth hanging open. It was only then that my mind began to race. Once again, Iplucked my courage to blast him with pepper spray, but without success. Then all of a sudden,
came a crash of the fence falling down.
Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It landed in a clearing, not far from our
camp, and the loud noises from the rescue helicopter scared the bear. For an instant, he froze, but
after a while, he started to charge at us again. "Ellis!" I shrieked, "Look out!" We immediately
stepped aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the
helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily
eating the bread we had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned home safe and sound, we
realized that something should be done for bears.
(07)
Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. A familiar
figure leaped out, rushed towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was Joe who
came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go
back. Frightened and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my
husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out
that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck.
He struggled to throw the rope to me and shouted, "Catch! Open the door!"
Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn't make it. At that moment, the sound of the raging water
outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joe’s
waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe realized that
there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said
soothingly, "Don't panic, honey! I'm here." With Joe's help, I burst the door open, and Joe
immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the
car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up
inside me.Part4：灵活应用
例 1：人与麻雀
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do
so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two
daring sparrows (麻雀) had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and
some other breadcrumbs (面包屑) on our kitchen counter.
Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every
continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-
walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to
living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.
When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor
into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option,
with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to
stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof
viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows.
She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved
sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can't stop observing and celebrating their
dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I
have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.
Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage
and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling
that we don' t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried
about their droppings (粪便).
注意:
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One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.
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About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!”
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【答案】One day, they left some droppings in my husband 's reading room. They happened to
dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the
windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the
reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent,
and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals.
About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something
similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said
excitedly, “Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow's nest! They 're going to
have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed
window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢
迎它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是
有点担心它们的粪便。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些
粪便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心
理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说:“哦，天
哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的
转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：do a thorough cleaning，
break in，run over，have a look 等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如 He was so angry that he
asked me to close the windows；宾语从句，如 I immediately did a thorough cleaning and
promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows
can't break in again；定语从句，如I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals等高级句式。
Part5：高考真题再现
真题 1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020 年 1 月浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug
his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions
(情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several
hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to
say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then
laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.”
he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he
walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned
to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t
seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too,
but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the
sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What
should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the
house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy
welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
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That video was posted the day before Halloween.
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【参考答案1】
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of
the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she
accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came
the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the
two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她
低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻
了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩
耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents
and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time.
When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a
big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughedat the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155)
几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在
想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男
孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是
波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。
【参考答案2】
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box,
with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on
its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom
picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog? It's for you!" Mom
said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running
and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas
and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的
神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父
母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱
的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高
兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之
后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and
licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously.
It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and
sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable
puppy! Whose is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing
what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the
old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly,
Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms.几周后，男孩从大学回家。 波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她
的尾巴剧烈地摆动。 男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边
咆哮和嗅。 他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！ 是谁的？” 他的父
母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为......”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，
把那个老女孩抱在怀里。 他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。” 然后静静地，波比抬起头，
看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。
真题 2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020 年 7 月浙江卷】
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying
at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in
Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild
animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear,
I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done.
This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake
sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots
hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears
off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws
(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be
30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some picturesof the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment.
The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt
them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face.
With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ___________________
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Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. _____________________________
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One possible version:
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had
only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence
like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed
several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the
attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out.
Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on
the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and
ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare
scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次
他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在
这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑
到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。
第2部分：
就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们
很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只
熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，
我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！
