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初中英语写作微技能指导学案----掌握常用过渡性词语,让作文更流畅

初中英语写作微技能指导学案----掌握常用过渡性词语,让作文更流畅

姓名:__________ 班级:__________ 日期:__________

一、学习目标

能识别并分类记忆叙事文和议论文中常用的过渡性词语。

能在写作中恰当运用过渡词,使文章逻辑清晰、衔接自然。

能通过例析和练习,提升作文的连贯性和表达效果。

二、知识梳理

(一)叙事文常用过渡词

1. 时间顺序:at first; then/next/after that; at last; in the end
例句:At first, I was nervous. Then I took a deep breath and began to speak.
2.同时发生:when/while/as soon as; not…until; at the same time
例句:While I was reading, my mother was cooking.
3.偶尔发生at times; once in a while
例句:Once in a while, I go to the library after school.
4.目的: so that;
例句:I got up early so that I could catch the first bus.
5.情感变化: to one's surprise/joy; luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately
例句:To my surprise, he passed the exam easily.
6.总结in a word; in all
例句:In a word, it was an unforgettable day.

(二)议论文常用过渡词

1.并列either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also
例句:Both teachers and students should take action.
2.递进besides; what's more; what's worse; moreover
例句:Besides, doing sports is good for our health.
3.原因because; for; because of; thanks to
  例句:Thanks to his help, I made great progress.
4.结果so; as a result; so…that; therefore
例句:He worked hard. As a result, he succeeded.
5.目的so that; in order that; in order to; for
例句:In order to keep healthy, we should exercise every day.
6.对比while; on the one hand…on the other hand; Each coin has two sides; prefer…to…; would rather…than
  例句:On the one hand, it's convenient. On the other hand, it costs too much.
7.转折however; but
  例句:However, not everyone agrees with this idea.
8.举例for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say
例句:For example, we can recycle paper and plastic.
9.总结:in all; in a word; in brief; last but not least
  例句:Last but not least, we should protect our environment.
10.利弊be good/bad for; be harmful to; do harm to; have influence on; benefit; affect; have an effect on
  例句:Playing computer games too much is harmful to our eyes.
11.喜爱love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; lose oneself in; put one's heart into; be good at; be weak in
例句:I'm fond of reading novels in my free time.
12.个人想法I think/believe; as for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; personally
  例句:In my opinion, we should balance study and rest.
13.其他过渡词in general; generally speaking; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one's mind to do; in a way
例句:To be honest, I didn't like the movie at first.

三、写作例析

例析一:叙事文过渡词运用

题目:以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题,写一篇短文。

✗ 原稿(无过渡词,平铺直叙):

I went to the beach with my parents. We played in the water. We built a sandcastle. A big wave came. It destroyed our sandcastle. I was sad. My father said we could build a better one. We built a new one. It was bigger and nicer. We took a photo. It was a wonderful day.

✓ 修改稿(加入过渡词):

Last summer, I went to the beach with my parents.At first, we played in the water happily.After that, we began to build a sandcastle.However, a big wave camesuddenlyand destroyed it. I was sad.To my surprise, my father said we could build a better one.Sowe started again.In the end, we built a new one which was bigger and nicer.Before we left, we took a photo.In a word, it was a wonderful day.

点评:加入时间顺序、转折、情感、总结等过渡词后,文章层次分明,情感起伏自然,可读性大大增强。

例析二:议论文过渡词运用

题目:以“Should Students Have Mobile Phones?”为题,写一篇短文。

✗ 原稿(无过渡词,逻辑混乱):

Students have mobile phones. It is good. They can call their parents. It is bad. They play games in class. I think they should not bring phones to school.

✓ 修改稿(加入过渡词):

As we know, more and more students have mobile phones.Each coin has two sides.On the one hand, mobile phones are useful.For example, students can call their parents when they need help.On the other hand, they can also cause problems.What's worse, some students play games in class, whichhas a bad effect ontheir study.Therefore,in my opinion, students should not bring mobile phones to school.In a word, we should use mobile phones properly.

点评:加入对比、举例、递进、结果、总结等过渡词后,文章正反分明,论证有力,逻辑严密。

例析三:综合运用

题目:以“My Favorite Hobby”为题,写一篇短文。

✗ 原稿:

My favorite hobby is reading. I read books every day. I like storybooks. They are interesting. I learn many things. I think reading is good for me.

✓ 修改稿:

Generally speaking, everyone has a hobby.As for me, my favorite hobby is reading. Iam fond ofreading storybooksbecausethey are interesting.Besides, I read books every dayso thatI can learn more knowledge.What's more, readingis good formy writing.In a word, reading benefits me a lot. I put my heart intoit and I will keep this hobby forever.

点评:综合运用了喜爱、原因、目的、递进、利弊、总结等多种过渡词,文章内容丰富,衔接自然。

四、实战演练

练习一:选词填空

从方框中选择合适的过渡词填空。

however / at first / in a word / what's more / as a result / for example / so that / to my surprise

Last week, I took part in an English speech contest. __________, I felt very nervous. __________, I couldn't even speak a word. __________, my teacher encouraged me and said, "Believe in yourself!" __________, I took a deep breath and started. __________, I did a good job. __________, I won the first prize. __________, I learned that confidence is very important. __________, we should never give up.

参考答案:

At first

As a result

To my surprise

So that

However(此处需根据语境调整,也可用 Luckily)

What's more

In a word

Therefore

注:此题可灵活处理,只要逻辑通顺即可。

练习二:改写句子

用括号中的过渡词连接下列句子。

I was tired. I kept working.(however)
→ ___________________________________
He studies hard. He can get good grades.(so that)
→ ___________________________________
Reading is good for us. It can open our eyes.(what's more)
→ ___________________________________
She was ill. She didn't come to school.(because of)
→ ___________________________________

参考答案:

I was tired. However, I kept working.

He studies hard so that he can get good grades.

Reading is good for us. What's more, it can open our eyes.

She didn't come to school because of her illness.

练习三:段落写作

以“My Weekend”为题,写一段话(50—80词),至少使用5个过渡词。

参考范文:

Last weekend, I had a wonderful time.On Saturday morning, I did my homeworkfirst.After that, I went to the park with my friends.Whilewe were playing, it suddenly began to rain.Unluckily, we didn't bring umbrellas.However, we ran home quickly and watched a movie together.In the end, we all enjoyed ourselves.In a word, it was an unforgettable weekend.

练习四:篇章写作

以“Should We Do Housework?”为题,写一篇80—100词的短文,要求使用至少8个过渡词。

参考范文:

As we know, doing housework is a common topic among students.Each coin has two sides.On the one hand, some students think they are too busy with their study.Besides, they think housework is their parents' job.On the other hand,in my opinion, we should do housework.For example, we can clean our rooms and wash dishes.What's more, doing housework can help us learn to be independent.Therefore,as a student, I think we should share housework with our parents.In a word, doing houseworkis good forour growth.

四、写作小贴士

分类记忆:将过渡词按功能分类记忆,写作时根据需要快速提取。

适量使用:过渡词不宜过多,每段2—3个即可,否则显得堆砌。
位置灵活:过渡词可放在句首、句中或句末,注意标点符号。
体裁匹配:叙事文多用时间顺序词,议论文多用逻辑连接词。
多读多练:通过阅读范文,积累过渡词的地道用法,并在写作中反复练习。

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