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专题 14 读后续写八步成文法
【三大步】
三步核心：审题 构思 润色
审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接
构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。
润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使
用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后，务
必整洁地写在答题卡上。
【八小步】
1. 情绪：消极情绪
2. 细节：进一步解释描写
3. 转折：个人的努力或借助外界
4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
5. 失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
6. 新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
7. 结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
8. 总结：点题，呼应前文
读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：
第1步:消极情绪
1. a wave of...=a feeling/sense of+情绪名词 flooded over阵...的情绪涌上心头。
sb=swept over sb
情绪名词fear,terror, fright, panic 害怕happiness,joy,delight 开心gratitude,appreciation 感激sadness,sorrow 悲伤anger,
rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness 紧张,不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret 后悔,内疚
Sb felt sb was floating in an ocean of+ 情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在...的海洋中.
第2步： 细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写
描写与head有关动作nodded one's head点头shook one's head摇头
描写“看”这一动作词: saw看见 spotted 发现 recognized认出observed sb doing/do sth 注意到某人正在
做/做过
短语:stared at盯着看 glared at 怒视 glanced at瞥一眼带“eye”的表达:looked sb in the eye 直视某人的眼睛
带“sight”的表达看得见:
sb/sth be in my sight /came into my sight/sb. caught sight of sth看不见:sb/sth be out of sight/ faded away
哭/笑: burst into tears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn't help crying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tears welled up in the
eyes 眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下
描写“说”
温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说said gently/added /insisted / sobbed/whispered
与arm (手臂)有关的动作描写waved his arms.挥手grabbed her left arm抓住她的左臂put his arms around her
他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作took out取出/拿出held one's hand抓住某人的手shook hands with与...握手
hand in hand 手拉手raised one's hand 举手held out one's hand伸出手 took one's hand牵某人的手Her hands
shook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着
屏住呼吸:Sb held one's breath.
深呼吸:Sb took a deep breath.
心里想: An inner voice told sb that 内心的声音告诉某人...
细节描写:笑
看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。
(1) At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.
(2) Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.
(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane's eyes/face lit up with delight.
(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Jane's face/eyes.
细节描写:哭
(1) A lump came to his throat. 他哽咽欲哭。
(2) Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
(3) Her eyes brimmed with tears. 她的眼里满含泪水。
(4) Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。细节描写:害怕
我感到很害怕。
(1) I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear.
(3) I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.
(6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror, my palms sweating
细节描写:高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2)When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3) When she knew the result of the test, her heart was pounding with wild joy.
(4) When she knew the result of the test, a wild excitement took hold of her.
(5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.
(6)Knowing the result of the test, she was overcome with excitement.
情绪描写:生气愤怒
felt/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger/rage/fury; eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off; storm/say angrily; sth
makes sb blood boil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp one's fists/teeth; speechless
细节描写:生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.
(3) Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
(4) Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.
(5) Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.
第3步： 转折：个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
1.Without hesitation/Without even thinking, sb did sth.
鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励pluck up/take/gather one's courage (to do...)
毫不犹豫
(1) sb could hardly wait to do sth(2) without a second thought
(3) without even thinking
(4) without delay
(5) without hesitation
第4步：转机：--事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
似乎
(1) It was like doing sth
(2) It seemed as if/that
希望
(1)1hoping that...
(2) see/feel a glimmer of hope
(3) trying hard to do sth
欣慰
(1) ...breathed a sigh of relief=sighed with relief 松了
(2) (a wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb
(3) to one’s relief,.. 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
第5步：失望：问题还未解决或出现了新问题
但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么;消极情绪不幸的是:
1.Sb did sth, but in vain /but without... /but no use success不知道做什么
1. wondering what to do next.
2. not knowing what to do next.
3. unsure of what to do next.
消极情绪:a feeling/sense of...flooded over sb
第6步：新的想法：面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. At this dark and hopeless moment, it suddenly occurred to sb that
从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck sb that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
在这黑暗而绝望的时刻,某人突然想到..."
2. At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to sb.在这黑暗和无助的时刻,某人突然想到一个绝
妙的主意。
第7步：结局--皆大欢喜：在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折:不久： not long after that,...-before long, .=It didn't take long before 从何=It took some time before从句
在某人的帮助下:
With the aid/help of sb , sb approached/solved the problem finally.在...的帮助下,某人最终解决了问题。
有了结果:
(1) To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that+从句
(2) But on second thoughts
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
(4)To one's surprise/delight, it turned out that 从句令某人惊讶/高兴的事,结果证明..
感到欣慰:
To one's relief, . 使人欣慰的/放心的是
A wave of relief flooded over sb.某人感到如释重负。
感谢:Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heart felt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢感动:
In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来).
I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.刹那间，我热泪盈眶，被感动得说不出话来。我觉
得很温暖，好像有九个太阳在我的胸膛。
第8步： 总结：点题，呼应前文
第8步:最后总结，点题
（1）直到……才意识到
1.倒装句:
Not until+时间状语+did sb realize/notice that+从句
2.强调句:
It was only+时间状语+that sb realized that+从句
（2）还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中
1.One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2.One's words/voice/song lingered/whispered in one's mind head.
(3) 经历与教训
1.One's head was still full of...
2.What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson sb taught me/sb learned from sb!
3. What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable memorable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!在某
人的内心深处
(3)Down deep in one's heart,...“八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解
【典例分析1】
故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是
亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to
the track so that you don’t get lost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to
the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late
afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the
night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early
in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After
breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to
graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I
wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our
horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the
track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out
of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late
afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the
ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
八步法思路
1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy.
（情绪）
2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down.
（细节详述）
3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns.
（转折：个人努力）
4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse.
（转机：成功，希望来了）
5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air.
（衔接句：新问题来了）
6.“Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face.
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain.
(努力，失败)
2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby.
（突然有了办法）
3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last.
（开始做）
4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight.
（成功了）
5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine.
（感受）
6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling 911.”
（幽默对话）
7.“To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin.
8. What an unforgettable experience we had!【典例分析2】
故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她
感到很失望。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.
Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached
the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned
around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain
top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she
walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the
night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and
tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance.
Quickly she followed the sound to a stream . To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a
few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the
stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees
made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane
took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Paragraph 1
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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第一段：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
读后续写 续写
1.A wave of terror swept over her. 一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。 1.情绪2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm 她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个 2.细节：详述
sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to 内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安 情绪
find a safe place. 全的地方。
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her 虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气 3.转折∶ 个
courage to feel the way. 去感受这条路。 人努力
4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a 4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞 转机：成功、
cave.5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of 穴。 希望来了。
hope. saying to herself."Tomorrow is another
5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。
day."
对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。”
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her 说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪 衔接句
husband kept her company. 伴着她。
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
读后续写 续写
1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not 1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机， 再度失望（出
any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to 不知所措。 现新问题）
do.
2.It suddenly dawned on her that she 2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。 突然有了办法
should find a big open area first. 3. 她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出
3. Having gobbling down some 发了。
blackberries, she can't wait to set off. 4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现
4. After what seemed a century,such an 了。
area did come into sight. 5.她的脸变亮了。
1. Her face brightened up.
6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a 6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧 结果解决问
合。
helicopter was flying towards her. 题，巧不成
7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。
7. Upon its landing, out dashed her 书，皆大欢喜
husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears
welling up in their heart.
8. It was at the moment that they decided 8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了 （总结）
not to quarrel any more but learned to 妥协
compromise.
Writing 01
【广东省六校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】In our cozy little house nestled at the end of a quietstreet, my sister Oscar and I were bustling (忙碌的) about, filled with anticipation for Mother’s Day. Our mother
Clare was the heart of our family. She was the type of mom who always put our needs first, sacrificing her own
desires for our happiness.
Growing up, we established a beautiful tradition that each year, we would surprise her with a special gift to
show our gratitude and love. This year, Oscar came up with a brilliant idea: “What if we made her a long and
beautiful dress?” she exclaimed, her voice filled with excitement. As I recalled, since the day we were born, Mom
hadn’t bought herself a beautiful new dress, so I knew we had to make this year’s surprise truly special.
With that thought in mind, we set to work. I grabbed my drawing book and began to design, my pencil
dancing across the page; while Oscar with her perfect sense of measurement and love for sewing. she got down to
handling the cloth. Her eyes shone with concentration, while I focused on the beautiful patterns on the dress. Soon,
the dress began to take shape — it was such a magnificent long dress, and we carefully wrapped it in gift paper.
But then came the question: where to hide it for the surprise to be revealed at dinner? We put our heads
together, brainstorming the perfect hiding spot. “Nobody would think to look in my bedroom closet.” I suggested
Oscar giggled, nodding in agreement, but we both neglected the fact that our two playful cats could be a problem.
Finally, the moment arrived. After dessert, I exchanged a knowing look with Oscar. It was time to unveil our
creation! We dashed to our bedroom together, my heart pounding in my chest as I flung open the closet door.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“NO” I yelled, seeing our cats dashed out of the closet.
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“Where did you get such a beautiful scarf?” Mom asked.
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【2025届河南省信阳市高三第一次教学质量检测（一模）】In Maplewood High School, honesty was a
principle often discussed but not always practiced. Among the students, Emma Turner was known for her honesty.
She was diligent , always completed her homework on time, and was trusted by her peers (同龄人) and teachers
alike. She was also a model student, often helping others with their homework and organizing study groups. Her
reputation for honesty and hard work made her a natural leader in her class.
One autumn day, the entire school was excited. The annual science fair was approaching, and the students
were busy perfecting their projects. Posters, models, and experiments filled the classrooms as everyone worked
diligently. Emma had spent weeks on her project about renewable energy. She devoted herself to various
sustainable (可持续的) energy sources, conducted experiments, and created a detailed display to showcase her
findings. She was confident it would impress the judges.
Her best friend, Max, however, had struggled to come up with an idea. He had procrastinated (拖延) , unsure
of what topic to choose, and now the deadline drew near. Max admired Emma and felt guilty for not being
prepared. In a moment of desperation, Max decided to “borrow” an older cousin's project and present it as his own.
Max was sure that no one at Maplewood would know.
The day of the science fair arrived, and the gym was filled with colorful displays, excited students, and
curious parents. The air was thick with the smell of poster paint and anticipation. Emma’s display attracted a lot of
attention. Teachers, students, and even a local news reporter stopped by to ask questions about her innovative ideas.
She felt a sense of pride and accomplishment.
As she made her rounds to view other projects, she noticed Max’s project. Her heart sank when she realized
she had seen it before at a different fair years ago.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Emma faced a difficult situation.
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Emma took a deep breath and approached Max.
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Writing 03
【重庆市南开中学2024-2025学年高三上学期第二次质量检测】Having recently transferred to the high
school, Emily felt like a ghost drifting through the hallways — unseen and unheard. Struggling to adapt to her new
environment, she found herself isolated. A group of popular girls, led by Jessica, frequently made fun of her. They
even threw insults at her intelligence, as if excelling in school was something to be ashamed of. To avoid adding
more stress to her already overworked parents, Emily bottled up her feelings, swallowing the daily suffering like
bitter medicine.
One gray afternoon, after the final bell had rung and the last echoes of chatter had faded, Emily found her
books and notebooks scattered in a dirty bin. With embarrassment burning her cheeks, tears welled up in her eyes,
blurring her vision as she knelt to gather her belongings. Just then, Lily, a classmate who had always noticed
Emily’s struggles but never intervened, approached and knelt beside her. “They’re just trying to feel better by
making others feel worse,” Lily said softly, her voice like a gentle breeze on a suffocating day. Then, she handed
Emily her notebooks, offering an understanding smile.
Though touched by Lily’s kindness, Emily still felt the shadow hanging over her. Jessica and her friends
tripped Emily in the hallways, pushed her in the lunch line, and even hid her gym shoes, laughing as she crazily
searched for them. Each incident added to the weight pressing down on Emily’s chest. She began pretending to be
sick, hoping to escape the torture that turned her school life into a daily nightmare.
In an English class, the teacher assigned an essay titled “My Wish”. Emily poured her heart into the
assignment and wrote about her longing for a true friend and the pain of feeling like an outsider, baring her soul on
the page, exposing the raw wounds and the bullying she had endured. The teacher, noticing the weight of her
words, realized what Emily had been going through. The school responded swiftly, taking measures to address the
effects of bullying and organizing counseling sessions to help Emily rebuild her confidence. Throughout this time,
Lily stayed by Emily’s side, becoming her pillar of strength.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Emily’s recovery began to show signs of progress with Lily’s support.
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Also, the school’s ban on bullying made Jessica and her friends reflect.
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