专题 01
家庭生活与问题 闲暇活动（人与自我）
2023 年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句
【读后续写】
1．（2023春·江苏常州·高三统考开学考试）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
“Where’s the rest of my paper?” thundered an angry Papa Bear, storming into the living room. It didn’t take
him long to find Brother Bear and the sports section.
“I just borrowed it.“ said Brother. Papa snatched it up and plumped down in his easy chair. Brother wandered
into the kitchen looking for sympathy from Mama Bear. “Gee,” he said, “what’s eating him?” “Your father looks
forward to his evening paper,” Mama said, “and he has a perfect right to be annoyed when half of it is missing —
and furthermore, thank you not to refer to your father as him!”
She stomped out of the kitchen.
“Why not? He’s a him, isn’t he? Gosh,” said Brother, “what’s eating her?”
What was “eating” Mama was Sister Bear. Sister had been on the phone with Lizy Bruin for almost an hour.
“But Mama!” she protested when she was told to say good-bye.
“Don’t But Mama’ me!“ said Mama Bear. “This is not your private phone. You’ve had all day to talk to Lizy at
school, and you’ll have all day to talk to her tomorrow. So hang up that phone now!”
Sister did as she was told.
“Phew!” breathed Brother as he fell into the seat beside Cousin Fred on the school bus.
“Tough morning?” asked Fred.
“You better believe it!” said Sister, taking the seat Lizzy had saved for her.
The four compared notes on the way to school. The children agreed that while there was no doubt that their
parents loved them, they were a little difficult to get along with sometimes. They nagged (唠叨); they said no a lot;
and they never wanted kids to have any fun.
“Hey,” said Brother as they got off the bus, “what are we going to do for the Parents Night Talent Show?”
“Don’t know,” said Lizzy. “Let’s think about it”When the four searched their brains, Brother snapped his fingers and said, “I’ve got it! Remember what we
were talking about just now?” “Sure,” said Fred. “We were saying how grownups can be a big pain.”
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“Well,” said Brother, “let’s put on a play about that, and call it...”
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Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally.
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【答案】“Well” said Brother “let’s put on a play about that, and call it…” “The Trouble with Grownups!”
shouted all the others. “Sensational!” said Sister as they slapped hands, delighted with the idea of showing parents
how hard it is being cub. Putting on a play is easier said than done. You have to write it, figure out who is going to
play the parts, then memorize it. Then you have to worry about costumes and scenery. The cubs did all that. It was
hard, but it was fun, and they did it all in secret. The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time
for the big Parents Night Talent Show.
Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally. The audience of
parents laughed and laughed when they saw how they seemed to their cubs. Mama and Papa laughed until tears
rolled down their cheeks. Papa laughed, too, but not as much as Mama.
They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done. They admitted that it helped
them understand what it was like being a cub.
Later, when they were going back home, Papa said, “I have a better idea how cubs feel now.” Mama agreed.“After all, we were cubs once ourselves,” said Mama. “And here’s a thought: You’ll be grownups someday
and, each probably have cubs of your own.”
Brother and Sister thought about that for a moment. They looked at each other. Then they looked out into the
distance and thought about it. It was something to think about.
【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述了熊哥哥和熊妹妹在家里受到熊爸爸和熊妈妈的责备，在上学
路上向同学佛瑞德和莉兹抱怨，四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，在“家长之夜才艺表演”上进行表演。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一部分首句内容“‘好吧，’熊哥哥说，‘我们就此出个剧吧，叫它……’”可知，第一部分可描
写四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，排练“与大人的麻烦!”的过程。
②由第二部分首句内容“尽管筹备过程很困难，尤其是服装，但他们的大日子终于来了。”可知，第二部
分可描写他们的表演获得成功和大人们的反应。
2.续写线索：确定剧名——精心准备——表演成功——与父母交流——开始反思
3.词汇激活
行为类
①命名，给……取名：call/name
②记住：memorize/keep in mind
③认真考虑：think about/reflect upon
情绪类
①极好的，绝妙的：sensational/wonderful
②高兴的：delighted/glad
【点睛】[高分句型1] You have to write it, figure out who is going to play the parts, then memorize it.(运用了
who引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time for the big Parents Night Talent
Show.(运用了before引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done.(运用了which引
导非限制性定语从句)
2．（2023春·浙江·高三天台中学校联考阶段练习）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个
完整的故事。
LESSONS LEARNED OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOMMr. Gray was my history teacher in tenth grade. I couldn’t tell what kind of history he taught for two reasons:
one, I never liked history, and two, my body was in class, but my mind wasn’t. Mr. Gray wasn’t the teacher who
offered retakes (补考) on tests; he did so much more for me than that. He offered me a pair of ears and a shoulder
to cry on.
Before Mr. Gray came along, one major event was taking place in my life. My mom told me she wanted to
divorce my dad. Why then? I didn’t understand. I barricaded (筑起壁垒) myself in my basement bedroom, listening
to angry music and sleeping. I fell into a depression and my grades were falling. Then there was Mr. Gray.
I sat against a brick wall outside the library, knees pulled into my chest, head down, surrounded by my noisy
friends that I was slowly distancing myself from, when I heard his voice: “Ever feel like you’re a fire hydrant (消防
栓) and every dog in the neighborhood is stopping by to visit you?” I picked my head up and then I saw Mr. Gray.
I had heard him use this line in the classroom a few times before, when it looked like a kid was having a bad
day. It usually aroused a laugh and ended there. This time was different though — he was waiting for an answer.
Next thing I knew I was following him into the library.
We sat amongst the shelves of the mostly empty library for the rest of lunchtime. I don’t remember much
about that first conversation other than the unconditional promise he made me of lending a pair of ears and a
shoulder to cry on. What made him such a special teacher was that he saw that I was struggling and reached out to
me outside of the classroom.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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However, that didn’t change our classroom relationship.
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Many lunchtime library conversations followed throughout the school year.
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【答案】Possible version:
However, that didn’t change our classroom relationship. Every time he noticed my mind was wandering, he
would call on me, trying to draw my attention back. Unsurprisingly, I still distanced myself from classmates. I still
didn’t know most of the answers. But I think he knew that I was at a crossroads. Apparently, my problem needed to
be addressed first outside the classroom and then in class.
More lunchtime library conversations followed throughout the school year. They always made me feel freer
and I didn’t feel trapped like before. Mr. Gray who was always there unconditionally, presented me with an outlet
for my pain and frustration. His presence and life wisdom enabled me to become less defensive and open up more.
Gradually, the hours spent amongst the library shelves became my favorite time to take his “class”. Little as I
remembered about what he taught in the history class, the lessons learned outside the classroom would never fade
away.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和他十年级历史老师之间的故事。在遇到新老师之前，作者
的父母离婚，他想不通，因此开始封闭自己。有一次在学校，作者蜷缩在图书馆外，觉得自己和周围的距
离越来越远。历史老师发现了他，并对他说了老师常常对心情不好的学生说的笑话，这开启了两人课外的
对话。此后作者经常在午饭的空余时间和老师去图书馆交流。此后，历史课上只要发现作者开小差，老师
便会提醒他。虽然多数时候回答不上问题，老师并没放弃，而是继续帮助他开导他，解决学习之外，思想
方面的问题。作者因为不喜欢历史，且上历史课思绪早已在教室外，并没记住老师传授的历史知识，但是
老师敏锐地发现他的痛苦和沮丧，在课堂外教给了作者生活智慧，使他走出困境，这也使得这位老师对作
者而言，很特别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，这并没有改变我们的课堂关系。”可知，第一段可描写作者在历史课上的表
现的有这样表现的原因。
②由第二段首句内容“整个学年，更多的午餐时间图书馆对话接踵而至。”可知，第二段可描写老师继续
利用午餐空余时间和作者沟通，最终成功开导作者。
2.续写线索：父母离婚——心情郁闷——欠佳的状况被老师发现——老师开导——走出困境，再次敞开心
扉3.词汇激活
行为类
①.需要被解决或处理：need to be addressed/need to be handled
②.消失：fade away/disappear
③.记得：remember/recall
情绪类
①.不出所料：unsurprisingly/as expected
②.沮丧：frustration/depression
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Every time he noticed my mind was wandering, he would call on me, trying to draw my
attention back.（由连接词every time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Mr. Gray who was always there unconditionally, presented me with an outlet for my pain and
frustration.（由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）
3．（2023·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the
house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having
wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside
a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she
gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy as she wiped her tears.” Even a stranger
on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for
me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so?
I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you
were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Lucy sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weatheredhands. “Why didn’t I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. Why haven’t I
thanked my mum for what she has done for me?”
On the way home, Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she
arrived home.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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Approaching the doorway,
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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【答案】One possible version:
Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of the door, she
was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar
face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely. Her mother opened the door but
Lucy was so ashamed that she didn’t know what to say.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Lucy couldn’t help crying and said “Sorry, mom, I know I
have made a big mistake. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you. I shouldn’t have run away from home. Could you
forgive me?” Lucy’s mother was moved, saying “Good girl, never mind, I also should make an apology to you for
scolding at you angrily. I am very worried about you. ” Tears rolled down from both of their faces and they hugged
each other tightly.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走，走在街上，觉得饿了，一个卖面条的摊位前停下， 摊主人知道情况后，免费请她吃了一碗面并听她倾诉，她很感恩，摊主却告诉
她：“我请你吃一碗面，你就感激我，你想想你的妈妈养大你，给你做了多少顿饭呢？”Lucy顿悟，决定
回家和妈妈好好沟通。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“离家门口越来越近，”可知，第一段可描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活
动。
②由第二段首句内容“头顶的轻轻抚摸把她的思绪拉回来。”可知，第二段可描写Lucy和妈妈的谈话。
2.续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——妈妈担心——拥抱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①推开门：open the door/push the door open
②哭了起来：can’t help crying/burst into tears
③向...道歉：say sorry to /apologize to
情绪类
①.羞愧/悔恨：be ashamed /feel regretful
②担心：be worried about/be concerned about
【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her
rudeness. （使用了现在分词作状语和连接词whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided
to knock on the door bravely.（由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you.(使用的情态动词结构shouldn’t have done 表示“本不应该
做某事”)
4．（2023秋·山东潍坊·高三统考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
It was an early winter morning. Joan was sleeping soundly when the phone rang in the living room. She rolled
over and glanced at the clock on the wall—it was already nine o’clock.Every weekend morning, her mother had to
work part-time in the cafe. Although Joan was still sleepy, she knew she had to get up. After all, she didn’t expect
her brother Mike, who was sleeping like a log, to hear the phone. She quietly went over to the living room. When
she picked up the receiver, on the other end came the warmhearted greetings,“Good morning, myDear!”Recognizing the voice from her father, Joan was immediately surrounded by a sense of joy and the
sleepiness swept away.
Joan’s father was a seaman, who rarely came back. Working on the sea was really hard.Born in a not-rich
family, Joan and Mike felt the stress of life but they were happy to enjoy the family atmosphere. At school, they
were straight-A students throughout the academic career and actively involved in school activities. They became
the pride of the school and the envy of the students.
“Good morning, Dad, what’s up?”Joan said in an easy tone.“I have been very nice recently, my baby. Today is
your mother’s birthday, and I have ordered her a cake online and it should come to the house in one and half an
hour. Do remember to take the cake.”
Hearing her father’s words, Joan felt a little ashamed. How she could forget Mum’s birthday!She took a glance
at the dirty clothes piled on the sofa and the oily floor that hadn’t been mopped(拖地) for a few days—There was
two hours before her mother came back. She calculated they had enough time to prepare a surprise for Mum.
Thinking of this, she felt full of excitement.“Well, Dad, now I’m going to wake Mike up.We will give Mum a
surprise !”
Joan hung up the phone with Dad, and hurriedly went to Mike’s room to share him her Big Cleaning plan.
After listening to Joan, Mike readily accepted her idea.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Big Cleaning plan began.
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【答案】The Big Cleaning plan began. Joan collected the clothes from sofa and then put them in the water of a
basin. After pouring in some washing liquids, she began to wash them by hand. Realizing the clothes were clean
enough, Joan gently squeezed water out and hung them to dry. Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back
and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum had at home! They had just finished the
cleaning when the express boy came to the door.
With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in. “Happy birthday, Mum!”, they greeted in chorus. Confused
and surprised, Mum stood frozen. When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart.
Staring at the clean floor and the washed clothes, she could hardly contain her excitement and hugged them tightly,
“It is the best birthday gift I have ever had!” Mum said emotionally. Just then Joan took out her smartphone and
took a happy video named Mum’s Birthday and sent it to Dad.
【导语】本文为一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Joan在爸爸的提醒下想起来妈妈的生日，于是和弟弟一起为
妈妈准备了生日惊喜。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大扫除计划开始了。”可知，第一段可描写Joan和弟弟是如何大扫除的。
②由第二段首句内容“蛋糕放在桌上，妈妈走了进来。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看到Joan和弟弟大扫除
以及收到蛋糕后的心理感受。
2.续写线索：Joan和弟弟在周末的早晨熟睡——Joan接到爸爸的电话，得知今天是妈妈的生日——Joan决
定和弟弟一起给妈妈一个惊喜——Joan和弟弟将家里进行了大扫除——妈妈回来后看到这一切很感动，觉
得这是最好的生日礼物
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始：begin/start
②控制：contain/control
③完成：finish/complete
情绪类
①困惑的：confused/perplexed
②惊讶的：surprised/astonished/stunned【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back and forth with all his strength, really
aware of what hard work his Mum had at home!（本句运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart.（本句运用了when引
导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
5．（2022秋·山东济南·高三统考期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故
事。
I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is neither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big
garden. My father loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants, watering them,
applying fertilizer, weeding and getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff. But at that time, I
didn’t understand why working in the dirt excited him so much.
Unfortunately, in the summer vacation before senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an
accident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several business trips, so she couldn’t take care of the
garden. I didn’t want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered. I assumed
that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often, so I didn’t
think much about the garden.
One Saturday morning, my father said to me, “Christine, the vegetables should be about ready to be picked.
Let’s have a salad today!” I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce (生菜) leaves and
carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There were hundreds of bugs all over them!
I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables. When I
was making the salad, my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I was
embarrassed and admitted, “Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaster. I don’t want to disappoint him, so I
went to the store and bought some vegetables.” My mother smiled, saying, “Honey, you know what is the right
thing to do.”
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【答案】One possible version:
My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. “It looks so good. Your salad makes my mouth
water,” Dad couldn’t wait to try it. He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly, his face spreading in a
satisfied smile. Giving me a thumbs-up, he said, “Little did I know you are so good at gardening. You are a man of
your word.” My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced
a bitter smile. How could I cheat my father?
Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing. With tears welling up in my eyes, I told my father I didn’t live
up to his expectations and that the garden was a mess. To my surprise, instead of scolding me, my father patted me
on the shoulder gently and told me to turn to him if I needed any help. Under his guidance, I learned to apply
fertilizer, weed and remove bugs. The vegetables became better and better day by day, and so did my father. I began
to enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father’s pleasure of working in the dirt.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者爸爸一直悉心照料着花园，可有一天受伤之后就交给作者来
照料，但作者却没有花心思去做好，结果花园里的蔬菜都被虫糟蹋了。有一天作者父亲想吃自己蔬菜做出
的沙拉，作者怕爸爸伤心，于是偷偷去商店买了蔬菜，后来被妈妈发现了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由续写第一段首句“当我把沙拉递给父亲时，父亲似乎很高兴”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：爸爸品
尝沙拉并表扬“我”将菜园照顾地很好，而“我”却非常尴尬和羞愧。(学生也有可能在第一段续写父亲发
现了端倪，揭穿了“我”，这样第二段的right thing就是“我”决定将功补过，在菜园辛勤劳作，只要能
自圆其说也可以。)
②由第二段首句“感到内疚，我决定做正确的事。”可以预测：“我”向爸爸坦白了一切，而爸爸鼓励“我”将功补过。“我”学着父亲的样子在菜园劳作，同时也在这次经历中获得成长。
2.续写线索：作者父亲品尝沙拉——觉得沙拉很好并表扬作者——作者内心挣扎——告诉父亲真相——原
谅作者并为作者提供帮助——爱上照顾花园中蔬菜
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.表扬：praise/speak highly of
②.强颜欢笑：forced a bitter smile /force a smiling face
③.欺骗：cheat / deceive/trick
情绪类
①.满意的：satisfied /pleased/ content
②.让我惊讶：to my surprise/to my amazement/to my astonishment
【点睛】[高分句型1]My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. （运用了which引导的非限制
性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced a bitter smile.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
6．（2023秋·河北石家庄·高三校联考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Late one evening, my constant yawns(呵欠)convinced me to retire for the night. I put on a comfortable cotton
gown, turned the lights low, and crawled into bed between the cool but comfortable sheets. To ensure a good night’s
rest, I called out towards the kitchen to my smart speaker, “Alexa, play sounds to sleep by.” As I gathered my cozy
sheet up under my chin, I felt at peace with my cat Bella snuggled up(依偎)to me.
During the night, a heavy object landed on my stomach, causing me to scream and sit up, only to discover that
it was Bella. She had a habit of waking me up to get her a snack, but the hands on the clock said 3:00 am, and I was
annoyed that she had interrupted a happy dream. I fell back against the pillow and promised I’d feed her in the
morning. That wasn’t acceptable to her, so she continued to walk on top of me while pressing her paws into my
body.
Because that proved to be unsuccessful, she jumped over to the bedside table and deliberately used her paw to
knock things on the floor, one at a time, to keep me from going back to sleep. Her efforts paid off as I looked over
in the dark room and knew the smug(沾沾自喜的)look on her face conveyed a serious demand. “Get up, human.
I’m ready for my nightly treat.”Knowing she would keep disturbing me until she got her snack, I took a few minutes to focus my eyes and
heard what sounded like running water or someone pressure-washing a wall. I couldn’t imagine our apartment staff
doing maintenance in the middle of the night, so I assumed I had turned off the water tap. I would regret the large
water bill it would bring about, so I unwillingly got up and went into the kitchen. I found nothing out of the
ordinary so I continued to search with Bella following me. I checked the bathroom, where I found no running water.
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Since the sound was still evident,I realized the seriousness of the situation. I thought it necessary to solve the
mystery. I returned to the kitchen, where the disturbance was more obvious and stood like a statue trying to identify
the sound. Despite Bella’s loud yowl, I was still able to hear the strange noise, which seemed to come from inside
the wall between my apartment and the unit next door. I could feel my muscles tense up and my hands shake
because I was now convinced a pipe had burst, and water could be flooding the neighboring apartment.
I didn’t see water on the wall, so I thought it wasn’t an emergency. However, one thing I had done was drag
someone out of bed in the middle of the night. I walked to the end of the kitchen bar closest to the wall in
question,picked up my phone, and placed my fumbling fingers on the keypad. Instantly, the reality of what was
happening became clear to me, and I joyfully identified the source of the mysterious noise. All I had to do to settle
the entire mystery was to say angrily, “Alexa, shut up!”【导语】这是一篇记叙文。本文以人物角色生活细节展开，描述了作者在睡梦中被自家的猫惊醒，本想继
续入睡，但几次三番又被它吵醒，只能起身为它喂食。就在这时，作者听到了奇怪的响动，但是转了一圈
也没找到声音是哪儿传出来的。最后经过细致“勘察现场”，终于发现是自己设定的智能扬声器发出的声
音。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“因为那个声音仍然很明显，我意识到了情况的严重性。”可知，第一段可描写作者
认真搜寻响声处的行动。
②由第二段首句内容“我没有看到水溅到墙上，所以判断应该不是紧急事件。”可知，第二段可以描写作
者发现某个非紧急状况的故障问题后，继续细致分析调查响声的源头。
2.续写线索：重视情况——返回厨房——发现水管爆裂——分析情况——调查——找到声源
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.找到；发现：identify/spot
②.相信：be convinced/believe/figure
③.放置：place/put/rest
情绪类
①.生气地：angrily/wildly
②.兴奋地：joyfully/excitedly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I returned to the kitchen, where the disturbance was more obvious and stood like a statue
trying to identify the sound.（由where引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Despite Bella’s loud yowl, I was still able to hear the strange noise, which seemed to come from
inside the wall between my apartment and the unit next door.（由which引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. Instantly, the reality of what was happening became clear to me, and I identified the source of the
mysterious noise.（由what引导的宾语从句）
7．（2022秋·重庆·高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Jordi! Wake up!” Dad’s voice calls from the hallway, and I sit up quickly. Today is the day! The day that I
will finally be a casteller —a castle builder.
My city is hosting today’s competition. Never before have I been part of the tower. It is so high. And it
sometimes falls. I was hesitant to be up there. Today, for the first time in a competition, I will help build the tower !In town, I see that the center of the square is already packed with people. While I wait for our turn to compete,
my friend Tomeu comes to stand with me.“What if I’m not ready for this, Tomeu?” I ask. Tomeu’s dark eyes
sparkle as he smiles at me. “We are never ready, Jordi. None of us who compete knows for sure how it will go.” He
gestures toward the tower going up in front of us. “Just like these people,you must have faith in the others. You
must trust those below who lift you up, and you must trust yourself.” Tomeu pats me on the shoulder. “Have focus.
Have faith.”
I nod to show that I understand. I will do my best to follow his suggestions. Soon,too soon,it is our turn.
Dad and several strongest men make the base for our tower. Four smaller men create a strong second level.
Our tower is growing taller and taller. I watch as Mom climbs nimbly(敏捷地)up. She and my aunt form the fifth
level.
“Then suddenly it is my turn. Tomeu and I will make up the sixth level. Each of the castellers wears a waist
belt, and I grip the belts with my bare toes as I climb up. I pass the first two levels without difficulty,but as I go
higher,the tower feels less steady. By the time I reach the fifth level,nerves make my hands sweat and my knees
tremble,for I am very high off the ground.
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I place my foot into Mom’s waist belt and try to stand, but it slips off.
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【答案】I place my foot into Mom’s waist belt and try to stand, but it slips off. Fortunately, Mom grasps me by the
wrist before I lose my balance and tumble backwards. My heart leaps into my throat. Panic is rippling through me
so fiercely that my whole body shivers. “Tranquil. Easy.” Mom whispers soothingly. I take a deep breath to calm
myself. I cannot let my team down. Meanwhile, Tomeu’s words echo in my mind: “Have focus. Have faith.” I again
place my foot into Mom’s belt. This time, my toes grip firmly. Slowly but steadily, I step up and onto her shoulders.
Opposite me, Tomeu has also made it to the top.
Tomeu and I grasp each other’s arms, and our tower is complete. I breathe a sigh of relief. It is not until this
moment that I truly feel the charm of castle building. I am no longer frightened. Beneath me, the base feels strong,
and my heart beats steady in my chest. Far below, I can hear the crowd’s cheering. I smile across at Tomeu.
Whether or not we win this competition, I know we have done what we set out to do. Our team has worked
together. With faith in each other and with focus on the task, we have built our castle. Today, I am a casteller!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者和他的家人、朋友一起参加他们所在的城市举办的建塔
比赛，凭着对彼此的信任和对任务的专注，经过一系列紧张刺激的过程，有惊无险地，他们成功了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我把脚放进妈妈的腰带里，想站起来，但腰带滑脱了。”可知，第一段内容可描写
在出现状况之后，因为母亲的帮助和鼓励，作者重新调整了心态，最后爬了上去。
②由第二段首句内容“Tomeu 和我互相拥抱，我们的塔完成了。”可知，第二段可描写完成建塔之后，作
者内心的情感和由这个活动而引发的感悟。
2.续写线索：陪走路——帮助——感谢——陪回家——拒绝——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
滑落：slip off/ slide off
深吸一口气：take a deep breath / draw a deep breath
情绪类
不再害怕：no longer frightened / no longer afraid
跳进喉咙，紧张： leap into my throat/feel nervous/feel uptight【点睛】[高分句型1] It is not until this moment that I truly feel the charm of castle building.（运用了 not until
的强调句句型）
[高分句型2]. I know we have done what we set out to do.（运用了宾语从句）
8．（2022·山东潍坊·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
This past summer, my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake. There were various activities
to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and building sand castle on the beach. In the evenings, we gathered on
the beach, having great fun.
However, by the third day of our vacation, I noticed my sister, Jane, spent most of her time watching videos
and looking through online shops indoors. She was so addicted to her cell phone! Over dinner, I told Jane we would
hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning. I stared at her, “Put your phone away and
enjoy the scenery. It's really amazing. ”
“Well,” Jane shrugged (耸) her shoulders and answered unwillingly, “there are some bargains tomorrow in
several online shops, so I'll not be available.”
“Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views. Hiking is fun!”
“Sounds more like punishment than a vacation,” she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled (嘟囔), “I
cannot walk that far. ”
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top, she nodded, “OK, I'll go.”
The next morning was perfect for a hike, with sunny clear skies and gentle winds. I got up early and packed
some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera. Jane came slowly downstairs, and
announced in a very unenthusiastic voice, “I'm ready to go, Jim.”
Anyway, we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes. Against the blue
skies, a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides. The
sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake. We began from the path. “I'm still wondering if this is a good
idea, but if you could do it, I could also do.” She complained, frowning.
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She followed me, her mind wandering. Minutes later, we started to climb a steep slope. Jane sighed, dragging
her legs behind me. I was surprised to find some rarely-seen trees and flowers, and took many photos but Jane
showed no interest. She stopped and sat on a rock, thirsty, sweaty and bored. I handed her a bottle of water and we
took a break. “I missed my phone,” she complained as we continued climbing. Though unhappy, she just climbed
along with me.
Reaching the top, Jane widened her eyes, shouting, “How awesome !” She looked around dreamily, her eyes
twinkling with indescribably wild excitement. A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread
out below us and birds chirped between branches. We sat on a large rock and ate sandwiches, enjoying the sounds,
the smells and the sunlight. “Anyone still wants her phone?” I joked. She rolled her eyes, laughing out loud. The
next morning, Jane danced to my room, crying, “Let's hike around the lake today.” Sure, get our backpack then, I
beamed, relieved and joyful.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲的是作者全家去湖边的一间小屋度假，他们都玩得很愉快，但是
作者第三天发现他的妹妹Jane沉迷于手机，所以他决定让Jane和他一起出去爬山。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她跟着我，心不在焉”可知，第一段可描写Jane虽然同意和作者一起爬山，但是感
觉爬山很累，不如玩手机有趣。
②由第二段首句内容“登上山顶时，Jane睁大了眼睛，喊道：“太棒了！””可知，第二段可描写Jane到
达山顶看到美景惊讶，从此爱上了户外活动。2.续写线索：Jane勉强同意外出爬山——途中，Jane抱怨这次爬山体验——到达山顶，Jane被美景征服
——从此爱上户外活动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①到达：reach /arrive at/get to
②大叫：shout/ scream/yell/cry
③休息一会儿：take a break/take a rest /have a rest
情绪类
①惊讶的： surprised /astonished/amazed
②不高兴的：unhappy/ uncheerful/upset
③高兴：delight/excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Jane sighed, dragging her legs behind me.（使用非谓语作状语）
[高分句型2]. She looked around dreamily, her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement.（使用独立主
格结构）
9．（2021秋·江苏淮安·高三校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As mountains go,1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn’t particularly grand. But its inviting views of western
Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming self-satisfied with its steep,slippery cliffs(悬崖) , resulting in
countless injuries and even deaths.
Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak’s
record.Therefore, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day.
He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the vista; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip
of the cliff with her husband.
When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two turned to continue on their way. Suddenly,he heard a heavy dull
sound, he told the Cornell Daily Sun. Then he heard something chilling: “Paula! Paula!” a man yelled wildly. Grant
wheeled around. The woman in pink was no-where to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees.Grant told his
mother,“I hate to say this, but they’re probably going to find a body.”
Uncertain they could help, Grant and his mother headed down the trail. But when he saw hikers still searching,
he decided to lend a hand. “My young dumb brain was like, ‘I can do it,’” he says.After assuring his mother that hewould be safe, he made a long and difficult journey alone, hoping he wasn’t too late.
After 15 minutes of scrambling over the large rock, pushing past prickly(多刺的)brush,and slipping down
patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a
kneeling position on a small rocky.
The woman had fallen about 75 feet.
Unexpectedly,she was alive.
“Paula!” Grant shouted.“Paula.Is that you?”
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The woman barely responded.
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The woman barely responded. She was clearly hurt and almost mad. Grant called 911 to report her location.
He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.
Afraid that in her muddled state of mind, she might tumble off the outcropping to her death, Grant crawled on allfours up a tight, narrow path, gaining traction by digging into the dirt with his fingers and feet until he reached
Paula. She was moaning and barely making sense. Her head, arms, and legs were bleeding. Securing himself
against a tree, Grant gently put her hand in his and tried to keep her mind off the pain by peppering her with
questions.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top. To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and
secured Paula to a stretcher. Rescuers at the summit lifted the stretcher to the top and then carried her to a waiting
ATV. Eventually, Paula and her husband would be flown by helicopter to a hospital
【分析】本文以格兰特和他的母亲一起爬山为线索展开。讲述了格兰特开学前一周，和他的母亲一起爬斯
阔峰，一名叫宝拉的穿粉色衣服的女士和她的丈夫正在悬崖边旁攀爬。突然，宝拉从悬崖边摔下去了。格
兰特和几个徒步者开始去寻找她，后来格兰特在一块岩石上发现了宝拉，他打了911报告了位置，陪着宝
拉直到救援人员赶到，用直升机把她送往医院。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那个女人几乎没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写格兰特发现宝拉受伤了，格兰特打
911申请救援，设法靠近宝拉，并陪着她等候救援。
②由第二段首句内容“大约45分钟后，第一批救援人员到达山顶。”可知，第二段写第一批救援人员赶
到，用担架抬宝拉到山顶，等待直升机来接宝拉送往医院。
2.续写线索：发现宝拉受伤——拨打911——陪着宝拉等待救援——救援赶到——等待直升机将宝拉送往医
院。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回应：respond/reply /answer
②.到达：arrive on/reach
③.抬：lift/promote
情绪类
①.发疯的，混乱的：mad /crazy
②.糊涂的：muddled / confused/ chaotic
【点睛】[高分句型1].
He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.
（由连接副词where引导的地点状语从句）[高分句型2].
To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher.（运用了动词不定式to reach them作目
的状语）
10．（2022秋·重庆·高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写
两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was turning ten in the summer of 1959. On a warm evening while at the dinner table, my mother announced
we were taking a trip to Niagara Falls when summer vacation started so that we could celebrate my birthday there.
It all sounded incredibly good until Mom said we would be driving to Canada. As usual, my father would do
all the driving while my mother managed the directions.
I looked over at my sister,Marlene,who was three years younger than me and rolled my eyes. She giggled and
did the same. It wasn’t that I didn’t like car rides - but my Dad usually took a wrong turn along the way and Mom
would complain. “You were supposed to turn right according to the map like I told you, but you made a left.” My
Dad would get annoyed and growl. My mother would end the conversation with “I can’t believe we’re arguing over
this.” Later, they’d apologize and make up until the next wrong turn.
Driving in the car also meant I’d share the back seat with my sister, which was not part of what I considered a
pleasant journey.
“Hey, can we take a plane there instead?” I asked between mouthfuls of hamburger and Frenchfries.
Sometimes, when Dad had a day off from work, we would drive out to Idlewild Airport to watch the planes take off
and land. I always hoped one day Pd get to sit in my own seat on one of those planes. It would be cool to get high
up and then stick my head out a window. Windows on planes do open, don’t they?
“Sorry honey, maybe next time,” my mother replied as she and my father exchanged glances. I turned to my
sister, hoping she’d say she wanted to get on a plane, but she stuck her tongue out at me and giggled.
Didn’t they get it? I was in desperate need of a plane ride, and I needed something cool to talk about with my
friends when we got home. “Sitting in the back seat of the car sucks,” I blurted out.
“Jay!” My mother shouted. “Watch your mouth!”
“Ok, sorry, but I really wanted to go by plane.”
“This conversation’s over.” My father growled. “If you’re finished eating, go to your room.”
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【答案】参考范文
We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car. I gave a sincere apology to both my parents and helped
stuff the car trunk full of suitcases. There I was, stuck in the back seat with no hope of having great tales of
adventure for my friends and little expectation of celebrating my birthday with style. After what seemed like a
lifetime, I felt extremely bored as Marlene fell asleep beside me. Rolling down the window, I caught a glimpse of a
large plane flying overhead. How I wished I were on that plane! At that moment, I noticed my father made a turn
off the highway and drove past a sign that read “Airport Parking.” I couldn’t believe my eyes. We were heading
right into the airport!
I was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport. “We were planning this as a birthday present for
you all along,” my mother explained, “despite your impolite language the other night. Happy Birthday, sweetheart.”
My father also wished me a happy birthday as he bent down to kiss my head while Marlene threw her arms around
me, winking and giggling. Overwhelmed with emotions, I looked at the boarding pass in my hands, finally waking
up to the fact that my dream of taking a flight was eventually coming true. Yet what touched me most was the great
lengths that my family had gone to that actually made it the best birthday ever!
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述作者一家计划去尼亚加拉瀑布旅行，但因为作者的爸爸和妈妈总是
因为开车走错路而吵架，并且坐在后座也不舒服，因此吵着要通过坐飞机出行。但这个想法当时被爸爸否决了。
【详解】1.段落续写
①根据第一段首句“两天后的星期六早上，我们开车离开了”可知，下文可描写作者坐车时的无聊，以及
车到达机场时的兴奋。
②根据第二段首句“我被告知要等到我们在机场办理行李托运手续”可知，下文可描写这次乘飞机出行其
实是父母给作者的生日礼物以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：开车离开——途中感觉万分无聊——车到达机场时感到意外——得知原因——感悟
3.词类活用
行为类
①帮助：help/assist/aid
②拥抱：throw one’s arms around sb./hug sb./embrace sb.
③实现梦想：one’s dream come true/realize one’s dream
④看见：spot/notice
情绪类
①无聊的：bored/tiresome
②感动：move/touch
【点睛】[高分句型1]After what seemed like a lifetime, I felt extremely bored as Marlene fell asleep beside me.
（运用了what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Overwhelmed with emotions, I looked at the boarding pass in my hands, finally waking up to the fact
that my dream of taking a flight was eventually coming true. （运用了that引导同位语从句）
