一、原题简析

这是一封写给外教 Kate 的电子邮件，体裁属于应用文里的 "建议信加自荐"。交际对象是外教，语气要友好、得体，不能太生硬。

情境设定在班级日常事务中 —— 把大家的英语作文汇编成册，贴近学生生活，学生有话可写。内容要点有两个：一是建议配图，二是自荐承担画图工作。开放度较高，配图内容和自荐理由都由学生自己发挥，不是死套模板。

核心考查的语言功能是 "提出建议" 和 "主动请缨"。整体命题趋势是：情境小而真，要点精简为两个，词数压低，不追求华丽句式，重在能否把事情说清楚、说到位。

二、模拟新题

假定你是李华，你校英语社团计划创办一份英文手抄报（English Newsletter），外教 Mr. Brown 负责指导。请给 Mr. Brown 写封邮件，内容包括：

(1) 建议增设一个栏目。

(2) 自荐担任该栏目的编辑。

注意：

(1) 写作词数应为 80 个左右。

(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mr. Brown,

I'm glad to hear that our English club is going to start a school English newsletter.

Yours,

Li Hua

三、新题写作思路

开头先用一句话呼应情境，比如 "I'm glad to hear…" 或 "It's a wonderful idea…"，自然引出下文。

第一个要点是建议栏目，学生可以自拟一个栏目名称，比如 English Sayings（英语名言）、Culture Tips（文化小贴士）或者 Campus Life（校园生活），然后用一句话说明为什么建议设这个栏目。

第二个要点是自荐当编辑，需要简单说一下自己的优势，比如平时喜欢阅读和写作、时间比较充裕、做事认真负责等等，让自荐有说服力而不是空喊一句 "I want to do it"。

结尾用一句期待回复收尾，比如 "Looking forward to your reply."

这道题和原题是 "平行替换" 关系，同样是 "建议某事物＋自荐承担工作" 的双要点结构，同样邮件体裁，但情境从 "作文配图" 换到 "校刊栏目"，学生没法直接套原题范文，真正考查迁移能力。

范文 1（基础版）

Dear Mr. Brown,

I'm glad to hear that our English club is going to start a school English newsletter. I have a suggestion for it. I hope we can add a column called Campus Life. In this column, we can share students’ interesting stories and school activities. It will make the newsletter more attractive.

I would like to work as the editor of this column. I like writing and I am careful with my work. I have plenty of free time to collect materials. I believe I can do the job well.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, 

Li Hua

范文 2

Dear Mr. Brown,

I'm glad to hear that our English club is going to start a school English newsletter. I’m writing to offer a suggestion and volunteer for a position.

I recommend adding a column named Culture Window, where we can introduce western customs and share Chinese traditional culture. It can help us deepen cross-cultural awareness and arouse students’ interest in English.

I’d like to serve as its editor. Equipped with good writing skills and rich experience in collecting materials, I’m confident to take charge of this column.

Looking forward to your approval.

Yours, 

Li Hua