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第 2 讲 微观解析 分类突破
考向一 短文改错之错词命题
命题角度一 动词的错用
考点1 谓语动词的错用
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.在带有时间状语的句子中要看 1.(2022·安徽安庆示范高中联考)I
谓语动词的时态与该时间状语是 seen the cleaning woman several times
否一致。 before we had the questionnaire.
2.在平行或并列结构中，动词的 2.(2021·全国乙)I also water the flowers
形式通常是一致的。关键问题是 in the yard and up my own bedroom
看and，or等后的动词与前面的 whenever necessary.
时态的错用 哪个动词并列，一定要辨别清 3.No sooner\s\up7(∧) he finished his
楚。 task than we went out for a drink.
3.固定句型中谓语动词的时态要 4.We students have had many tests or
牢记。前面语法填空专题已讲 exams.We have both achieved success
解。 and from failure，but different
4.完成时态中的过去分词不要误 students have different attitudes towards
用作其他形式。 failure.
1.构成被动语态的过去分词写成
了过去式或现在分词。 5.(2022·广西桂林、梧州一模)Only in
2.主动语态中多了be及其变形， this way can a balance between the
语态的错用
或被动语态中缺失 be及其变 environment and the economy
形；系动词没有被动语态；不及 \s\up7(∧) achieved.
物动词或短语无被动语态。
6.(2020·全国Ⅰ)Today I tried cooking a
1.情态动词后要跟动词原形。
情态动词的 simple dish myself.I like eating fried
2.表示对过去的推测时其后跟
错用 tomatoes with eggs，and I thought it
“have＋过去分词”。
must to be easy to cook.
1.条件从句中的虚拟语气：应注
7.If I you，I would follow our
意表示与现在、过去或将来相反
虚拟语气的 时从句谓语动词的形式。 teacher’s advice.
错用 2.宾语从句中的虚拟语气：在表 8.It’s high time that you \s\up7(∧)
示“坚持、命令、建议、要求” 或 to the station to pick up our boss.
等词后的宾语从句中，谓语动词用“(should＋)动词原形”。
3.“It’s (high) time that”从句的
谓语动词用一般过去式或
“should＋动词原形”。
主语是单数形式，谓语却用复数
9.(2021·全国甲)One of the questions
主谓一致的 形式；主语是复数形式，谓语却
：Who will you go to in times of
错用 用单数形式，导致主谓不一致的
trouble？
情况。
考点2 非谓语动词的错用
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.Good morning，everyone！I feel
句中已有谓语动词，且另一动
非谓语动词与谓 honored to be standing here， my
词不作并列谓语或从句谓语，
语动词的误用 opinions on the relationship between
则只能用非谓语动词。
the environment and the economy.
动词-ing形式表示主动、进行；
动词-ed 形式表示被动、完成；
动词-ing形式转化的形容词表示 2.(2022·安徽安庆示范高中联考)I
动词-ing形式与-
“令人……的”，常修饰物； handed in my paper with the last
ed形式的误用
而动词-ed形式转化的形容词表 question not .
示“感到……的”，常修饰
人。
不定式的多余：感官动词和使
3.(2022·河南大联考三模)In
役动词(get除外)后跟不带to的
addition，we students were asked
不定式作宾语补足语。
不定式的误用 what measures we should
不定式的缺失：有些动词，如
take\s\up7(∧) save food in our
want，decide，plan等后应接带
daily life.
to的不定式作宾语。
介词之后往往跟doing作宾语。
要留意有些短语以介词to结
介词后动词形式 尾，如：devote...to，be 4.(2019·全国Ⅲ)If I succeed in
的误用 accustomed to，get used to， one，I will open more.
object to，look forward to，
contribute to等。
动词原形不能作主语或宾语， 5.I think for a newspaper and
作主语的非谓语
往往使用doing或者to do 形式 reporting from all over the world are
形式的误用
作主语或宾语。 really exciting.命题角度二 名词的错用
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.(2021·全国甲)Many students
1.表示单一概念的可数名词，要 say they will talk to their or
用单数。 classmates because they’re of
2.可数名词前有 all，many，a lot the same age and can
of，different，a few，some或者 understand each other.
超过“一”的数词等修饰时，名 2.(2020·全国Ⅲ)My mom is
名词数的错用 词要用复数形式。 really concerned with the health
3.不可数名词没有复数形式。常 of everyone in our .
见的有：advice，news， 3.(2022·云南普洱期末统测)I
information，progress，fun， hope that more people can
weather，music，health，luck participate in the activity to
等。 advertise the and benefits of
environmental protection.
1.误把名词用作名词所有格：表 4.When I was little， night
示“……的”应用所有格形式； was our family game night.
名词可以作定语的不用所有格形 5.We accepted the invitation
名词格的错用 式。 without a hesitation.
2.所有格形式用错：名词所有格 6.The park is near to our
是在名词后直接加’再加s，以s hotel，which is only five
结尾的单词只加’。 walk.
1.不要把名词误用作形容词，名
7.(2019·全国Ⅰ)To
词作表语时，一般与主语是同位
everyone’s ，the ball went
关系，而形容词作表语则是对主
名词形式的错用 into the net.
语的描述。
8.The building under will be a
2.不要把名词误用作动词，在介
supermarket.
词和冠词后常用名词。
命题角度三 形容词和副词的错用
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.副词修饰动词、形容词、副词或整
1.(2021·全国乙)What’s more，doing
个句子，在句中作状语。
形容词和 housework can be a form of
2.形容词主要用来修饰名词或代词，
副词的 relaxation from study.
表示事物或人的性质或特征。
混用
2.(2022·安徽阜阳期末质检)I was by
3.-ing形容词一般表示“令人……
my efficiency and thought about the
的”，往往修饰物，而-ed形容词一般表示“感到……的”，往往修饰人。 reasons.
1.句子本身没有比较或者是同级比 3.I arrived at the office an hour more
较，误用了比较级；有比较级的标志 earlier than the others on Monday
than但误用了原级。 morning.
2.句子里有最高级的提示词却用了比 4.What’s worse，some even lose
形容词和
较级，或者句中有比较级的提示词却 heart and no longer study as as
副词等级
用了最高级。 before.
的误用
3.单音节形容词、副词和一些双音节
形容词、副词，变比较级加-er或-r，
变最高级加-est或-st，但句中却使用
了more或者most。
5.(2021·全国甲)In my opinion，when
要留意常弄混的一些副词：hard刻苦
in trouble，we should seek help from
形近副词 地，hardly几乎不；late 迟于，later
those we trust .
的混用 以后，lately最近；most极其，mostly
6.(2022·江西萍乡质检)So I worked
主要地。
this summer vacation.
7.(2022·河南部分学校大联考)By
doing voluntary work，students realize
however表转折，therefore表结果；
连接副词 the importance of social work and
beside在旁边，besides表示并列关
的混用 enhance their social responsibility.，
系。
not all the voluntary activities are
suitable for students.
Group 1 达标练
1．(2022·广西桂林、梧州一模)Everyone can help fight by the following golden rule：
reduce，reuse and recycle.
2．(2022·河南部分学校联考)Being volunteers is of great benefit to students， them a sense of
achievement when they are helping others.
3．(2022·河南大联考三模)I hope the details mentioned above will be of use to you.
4．Truly artistic paintings other than calligraphy(书法) came into during the Qin Dynasty and
matured in the Wei and Jin periods.
5．(2022·陕西西安五模)Now I understand a mother of two is not easy work as I thought.
6．(2022·安徽阜阳期末质检)That acts like a stimulus，encouraging or forcing you to on yourwork.
7．(2022·安徽芜湖期末质监)Allan Stewart，a famous legend，was born on March 7th,1915.
8．(2022·安徽芜湖期末质监)Successfully，he got his master’s degree in 2006 when he was at
the age of 91，the one，creating a world record.
9．(2022·云南普洱期末统测)As a member of human beings，I am willing to protect the
wildlife.
10．(2022·四川泸州期末联考)They say it is far away that they will not see me for a whole year
and they are afraid that I will feel lonely.
Group 2 真题练
1．He showed me how his medical instruments used.(2022·全国甲)
2．However，after I went to high school，somehow I distant from him.(2022·全国甲)
3．I was unwilling \s\up7(∧) talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not out with my
friends too late.(2022·全国甲)
4．We all know that cycling is a exercise.(2022·全国乙)
5．A doctor tells me people who the longest are dancers and cyclists.(2022·全国乙)
6．Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with .(2022·全国乙)
7．My mom told me how to it.(2020·全国Ⅰ)
8．Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with .(2020·全国Ⅰ)
9．I’m you’ll have a good time.(2020·全国Ⅱ)
10．I stopped the ball and kicked it back to the playground.(2019·全国Ⅰ)
A
Mr Zhang is one of my favorite high school teacher.He is a very patient teacher，who often
explains us everything carefully to make him understood.He’s also such kind and friendly that we
always turn to him for help.Deal with students can be annoying sometimes ，but he never
complained.Besides，he always explores new ways to make his lessons attractively.Above all，Mr
Zhang is constantly encouraged us to get involved in classroom activities.He makes me to realize
teaching is a very meaningful profession.That’s because I’m determined to be a teacher like him
in the future.
答案
Mr Zhang is one of my favorite high school .He is a very patient teacher，who often
explains \s\up7(∧) us everything carefully to make understood.He’s also kind and friendly
that we always turn to him for help. with students can be annoying sometimes，but he never
.Besides，he always explores new ways to make his lessons .Above all，Mr Zhang is constantly
us to get involved in classroom activities.He makes me to realize teaching is a very meaningfulprofession.That’s I’m determined to be a teacher like him in the future.
B
On Mother’s Day we can show our mothers our thank.Last Mother’s Day，I had the good
time with my mom.I got up early in the morning and cook a delicious breakfast.My mom said it
was a wonderfully breakfast.After that，we went to the park and took on lots of pictures.The sky
was blue but the air was fresh.We rented a boat row around the lake.At the end of that day，I said
to your mom，“Thank you，mom，I will love you forever.” What happy she was.I hope every
mother can spend a pleased time with her beloved children.
答案
On Mother’s Day we can show our mothers our .Last Mother’s Day，I had good time
with my mom.I got up early in the morning and a delicious breakfast.My mom said it was a
breakfast.After that，we went to the park and took on lots of pictures.The sky was blue the air
was fresh.We rented a boat \s\up7(∧) row around the lake.At the end of that day，I said to
mom，“Thank you，mom，I will love you forever.” happy she was.I hope every mother can
spend a time with her beloved children.
强化练(三十五) 短文改错(2)
A
(2022·河南洛阳统考)
I love sports.My friends and I often play football in my out-of-class activities.Today I finish
my PE test.As a boy，I was joined in two parts，the long jump and the 1,000m race.I was better at
the 1,000m race，where took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds.But I didn’t do well at the long
jump.I only jumped 4.5 meter.I love sports so much because they can not only make my body
stronger，and also let me keep optimistic all the time.While exercised，I can get a strong sense of
successful.I can get excited and confident.In word，sports are my favorites.
答案
I love sports.My friends and I often play football in out-of-class activities.Today I my PE
test.As a boy，I was joined in two parts，the long jump and the 1,000m race.I was better at the
1,000m race， took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds.But I didn’t do well the long jump.I only
jumped 4.5 .I love sports so much because they can not only make my body stronger， also let me
keep optimistic all the time.While ，I can get a strong sense of .I can get excited and confident.In
\s\up7(∧) word，sports are my favorites.
B
(2022·安徽淮南一模)Keep Traffic Safety in Mind
To raise students awareness of road safety，one traffic police officer was invited to give us a
lecture in the school hall the other days.
At first，an officer presented us with some typical cases of traffic accidents，which greatly
shock all the students.Then，he analyzed what led to the accidents and stressed the significant of
following traffic rules.Finally，to make all the students at present understand the traffic regulations
better，he interpreted them in detail.
So valuable the lecture that all the students benefited considerable.We realized what to avoid
being injured on the road and that they should attach great importance to obeying traffic rules as
well.
答案
Keep Traffic Safety in Mind
To raise awareness of road safety，one traffic police officer was invited to give us a lecture
in the school hall the other.
At first， officer presented us with some typical cases of traffic accidents，which greatly all
the students.Then，he analyzed what led to the accidents and stressed the of following traffic
rules.Finally，to make all the students at present understand the traffic regulations better，he
interpreted them in detail.
So valuable\s\up7(∧) the lecture that all the students benefited .We realized to avoid being
injured on the road and that should attach great importance to obeying traffic rules as well.
C
(2022·山西朔州怀仁三模)
After my graduation in 2015，I joined in another university in Shanghai for further studies.I
saw that people are more modern in this city.Whenever I went out with his Chinese classmates，I
always saw them paying with their phone.With the help of my classmates，I final got my own
account with Alipay，an online payment service launching by Jack Ma.It was very convenient and
easy to use.However the amount，it can be done on Alipay.From thousands to only few cents，all
can be easily transferred with a touch and two.Now，with the start of a new era，I always goes out
without my wallet.
答案
After my graduation in 2015，I joined in another university in Shanghai for further studies.I
saw that people are more modern in this city.Whenever I went out with Chinese classmates，I
always saw them paying with their .With the help of my classmates，I got my own account with
Alipay，an online payment service by Jack Ma.It very convenient and easy to use. the
amount，it can be done on Alipay.From thousands to only\s\up7(∧) few cents，all can be easily
transferred with a touch two.Now，with the start of a new era，I always out without my
wallet.D
(2022·江西萍乡二检)
Dear Tom，
Knowing that you are going to return your own country，I’m writing to extend my sincerely
gratitude for your help in my English learning.
If it has not been for your assistance，I wouldn’t have made so rapid progress.Whenever I
had trouble in learning English，you were always there helped me.However，those books you
gave me are also of a great help to me.I am fond of them very much，from that I have got a lot of
knowledges.
Again，I would like to express our thanks to you.Wish you a safe journey home.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Tom，
Knowing that you are going to return\s\up7(∧) your own country，I’m writing to extend
my gratitude for your help in my English learning.
If it not been for your assistance，I wouldn’t have made rapid progress.Whenever I had
trouble in learning English，you were always there me.，those books you gave me are also of a
great help to me.I am fond of them very much，from I have got a lot of .
Again，I would like to express thanks to you.Wish you a safe journey home.
Yours，
Li Hua
考向二 短文改错之综合命题
命题角度一 冠词
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.a和an的混用。请牢记此口诀：
用a用an这样辨，不看字母看音素，见
了原因(元音音素)，要施“恩(n)”。
1.(2022·安徽安庆示范高中联
请注意下面两句话中的冠词：
考)What unforgettable
(1)In a university，a European and a
lesson！
one-eyed man walked along a one-way
冠词的混用 2.We should ensure the
road with a useful thing.This is a usual
development strategies are
thing.
followed in environmentally
(2)An hour ago，an honest man accepted
friendly way.
an unusual gift and went to finish an
honorable task.
2.不定冠词和定冠词的混用：表示特指时用定冠词the；表示泛指时用不定冠词
a(n)。注意固定搭配中冠词的使用情况。
3.(2022·江西景德镇三
检)Facing so many interesting
1.若某个词是名词复数、专有名词、抽象 extracurricular activities，we
名词、物质名词，或已经有了限定词， students have a trouble
冠词的多余 前面不适合加冠词，应把位置空下来， choosing the proper ones.
形成“零冠词”。
4.(2022·江西新余二模)She
2.很多不用冠词的固定搭配需要牢记。
kept telling me she believed I
would make a great progress
one day.
5.(2022·河南许平汝联盟模
1.一般来说，单数可数名词前应有适当的
拟)At \s\up7(∧) end of each
冠词，表示泛指用a(n)，表示特指用
day，she will bring them out to
the。
冠词的缺失 the main part of the shop.
2.复数可数名词如果有定语修饰表示特指
6.I can get excited and
也要用the。
confident.In \s\up7(∧)
3.注意固定短语和搭配中冠词不可缺失。
word，sports are my favorites.
命题角度二 代词
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.人称代词、物主代词以及反身代
1.(2022·广西桂林、梧州一
词等都有单复数之分，要根据上下
模)Undoubtedly，it’s duty to
文确定是用单数还是用复数。
protect the environment while we
2.形容词性物主代词相当于形容
aim for economic development.
词，不能单独使用，常用来修饰名
2.(2020·全国Ⅲ)I tell my mom that
词；名词性物主代词相当于名词，
if we’re forced to eat things，we
常单独使用，不能修饰名词。
may become ill.But insists on us
3.人称代词表示“谁”，而物主代
代词的错用
eating healthy food.
词表示“谁的”，切忌混用。
3.(2022·河南大联考三模) of these
4.反身代词是指代主语的，指动作
activities were aimed at raising our
的发出者把动作反射到本人身上。
awareness of saving food.
若所用代词与主语不一致，就要用
4.What’s more，you have to be
人称代词而不用反身代词。
friends with your pupils and take
5.如果文中出现了代词，那么它所
good care of .
代替的词一定存在于上文的某处，
5.(2022·江西景德镇三
要注意它们的一致性。例如，前面检)However，opposite voices can
also be heard，claiming that
如果是男性单数，后面要用he，
recreational activities waste too
him或his取代。
time，and therefore may keep
6.常见的不定代词有many与
students from focusing on his or her
much，some(thing)与any(thing)，
study.
other与another，表示两者的
6.Because of the heat I stay at home
both，either和neither，表示三者
most of the time during the summer
或三者以上的all和none等，需要
vacation and only occasionally go
掌握其用法，不能混用。
to the beach to get into the cool
water.
代词的多余常存在于定语从句中， 7.The car that my uncle had just
若关系词在从句中作宾语，此时就 bought it was destroyed in the
代词的多余
不能再用it，him或them等作宾语 earthquake.
了。
主要是人称代词与物主代词的缺
8.At last，I will be on my own，
失。若缺少主语，则考虑是否用人
but I still want to have my parents
代词的缺失 称代词，还要根据上下文考虑名词
to turn to whenever \s\up7(∧)
前是否缺少物主代词。形式宾语it
need help.
也经常被漏用。
命题角度三 介词
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.(2022·河南大联考三模)An
1.介词基本用法的错用：有时我们会受汉 exhibition of Chinese Calligraphy
语的影响而错用介词，例如：在墙上(有 which was written by students was
一个洞)，英语应用in the wall而不是on displayed the school library.
the wall。 2.(2022·陕西西安五模)As he was
介词的错用
2.固定搭配中介词的错用：介词可与名 too young to be left alone，I
词、动词、形容词等构成固定搭配，其 needed to focus my attention
中的介词是固定的。有时搭配中的介词 him constantly.
不同意义也不同。 3.But I didn’t do well the long
jump.I only jumped 4.5 meters.
4.You can also choose to make
1.及物动词后无需加介词直接跟宾语。
changes in famous dramas to enter
2.this/that/these/those/last/next/a/every/each
介词的多余 into the competition.
等词构成的时间短语，单独作状语时，
5.Bob’s wife told him that he
前面不用任何介词。
had forgotten his wallet in thatmorning.
1.不及物动词后需要加介词才能跟宾语。
2.作定语的不定式中，动词如果是不及物 6.He fed the snake on mice and
介词的缺失 动词，或不定式修饰的名词或代词是不 gave it a huge area in their yard to
定式动词的地点、工具等，不定式后要 live\s\up7(∧).
有相应的介词。
命题角度四 连词
并列句和复合句是增加句子长度，使句子变得复杂且丰富的有效手段。但在使用中要注
意并列连词和各类从句引导词的用法。
设错方向 解题思路 针对训练
1.并列连词的错用：常见的并列连 1.(2020·全国Ⅰ)First I cut the
词有and(表示递进、并列或顺 tomatoes into pieces put them aside.
承)，but(表示转折)，or(表示选 2.Though not very big，but the
择)，so(表示因果)等。应根据逻辑 restaurant is popular in our area.
并列连词的
关系选择适当的连词。
错用与多余
2.并列连词的多余：同一个句子中
although/though和but不能同时使
用，because和so也不能同时使
用。
1.关系代词that与which的错用：
3.(2022·河南部分学校大联
在非限制性定语从句中关系代词用
考)Nowadays，more and more people
which，介词后用which；在不定代
have taken part in voluntary work，
词、最高级、序数词后用that。特
is a sign of social progress.
定语从句关 别注意：what不能引导定语从句。
4.(2020·全国Ⅲ)Understanding her
系词的错用 2.关系代词与关系副词的错用：关
good intentions，I eat all the food is
与缺失 系代词在从句中作主语、宾语、表
provided by Mom with appreciation.
语和定语；关系副词作状语。
5.(2022·河南许平汝联盟模拟)At the
3.关系词的缺失：在there be句型
back of the shop is a big room
中经常考查，容易受汉语影响而漏
another lady works.
用关系词who/that/which。
1.从属连词与连接代词、连接副词 6. you should do is make full
名词性从句 的错用：从属连词不作成分，而连 preparations for it.
连接词的错 接代词、连接副词作成分。 7.(2022·广西桂林、梧州一模)For
用、缺失与 2.连接代词与连接副词的错用：连 one thing，it’s unavoidable to
多余 接代词在从句中作主语、宾语、表 damage the environment that while we
语，而连接副词在从句中作状语。 develop the economy.3.从属连词that的缺失：that引导
8.I’ve also realized difficult it is
主语从句、表语从句和同位语从句
for my parents to support our family.
时一般不能省略，引导宾语从句时
9.One reason for her preference for
可省略。
city life is\s\up7(∧) she can have
4.连接词的多余：一个从句只能有
easy access to places like shops and
一个连接词，即使这个连接词可以
restaurants.
省略，也不能再用其他连接词。
10.(2021·全国甲)In my opinion， in
1.应根据逻辑关系判定是何种状语
trouble，we should seek help from
从句，并选择适当的连接词。
those we trust most.
2.不要把介词误用作连接词，例
状语从句连 11. it might sound strange，his idea
如：despite，during等为介词，不
接词的错用 was accepted by all the people at the
能引导状语从句。
meeting.
3.应注意常见的固定句式中连接词
12.Jack is so tall he can reach the
的使用。
flower on the wall.
强调句结构为：It’s...that/who...，
强调句结构 13.It’s not what you say but what
有时与定语从句或名词性从句混
的错用 you do matters.
用，而把that错用。
Group 1 达标练
1．(2022·河南部分学校大联考)There are many different kinds of voluntary activities students
can participate\s\up7(∧).
2．(2022·河南许平汝联盟模拟)Every time my uncle enters，they will say hello him warmly.
3．I love sports so much because they can not only make my body stronger， also let me keep
optimistic all the time.
4．Traditional painting techniques lasted until the end of the Qing Dynasty，when modern
painting techniques started to challenge the traditional .
5．(2022·江西景德镇三检)It is numerous activities，such as spoken English competitions，
sports events，and clubs of different interests， help make campus life colorful and diversified.
6．(2022·江西萍乡质检)But as a second-year senior student，I had to prepare for the college
entrance examination was only a year away.
7．(2022·江西新余二模)I still remember the day when I told her I had failed in a math test.Tosurprise，she gave me a warm hug and encouraged me.
8．(2022·陕西宝鸡模拟)I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures
should be taken to prevent such \s\up7(∧) incident happening again.
9．(2022·陕西西安五模)I have a much younger brother who is only 2 years old.Last week，my
mother was busy cleaning the house and asked me to take care of .
10．(2022·四川绵阳三诊)My mother is always my role model.Last Sunday，I found that she put
some food into bag and went out with it.
Group 2 真题练
1．The disagreement was so sharp neither he nor I knew to settle it.(2022·全国甲)
2．One day，he talked with me hoped to mend our relations.(2022·全国甲)
3．With the efforts made by sides，we began to understand each other better.(2022·全国甲)
4．Maybe it is because \s\up7(∧) the combination of fresh air，smooth movement and
exercise.(2022·全国乙)
5. you ride a bicycle，you don’t use petrol.(2022·全国乙)
6．They often run at high speeds， may put our lives in danger.(2022·全国乙)
7．Only a few choose to deal with the problems on own.(2021·全国甲)
8．In my opinion，students can benefit a lot \s\up7(∧) doing some housework.(2021·全国乙)
9．I also water the flowers in the yard and tidy up my own bedroom necessary.(2021·全国乙)
10．Actually，I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old， I have long been out of
practice.(2020·全国Ⅱ)
A
(2022·江西上饶六校联考)
Dear Lily，
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation！Knowing that you’re
amazing at traditional China，I’d like to recommend my most favourite city，Suzhou，to you.
Suzhou，referring as the Venice of the East，is an attractively city located in the southeast of
Jiangsu Province.It had been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage.The Classical Gardens
are the symbol of the city，there you can have better understanding of China.Because these
gardens are not large，they’re unique to their designs.It bring together the beauty of nature，
architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案Dear Lily，
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation！Knowing that you’re at
traditional China，I’d like to recommend my most favourite city，Suzhou，to you.
Suzhou， as the Venice of the East，is an city located in the southeast of Jiangsu Province.It
been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage.The Classical Gardens are the symbol of the
city， you can have \s\up7(∧) better understanding of China. these gardens are not large，
they’re unique their designs. bring together the beauty of nature，architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours，
Li Hua
B
(2022·山西大学附属中学三模)
Dear Penny，
Knowing that you are confused about the custom of giving gifts in China, I’d like to share
with some suggestions here.
To begin with，the meaning of the gifts lie in value rather than price.Giving that, you’d
better found out the preference of your hosts.When comes to the color of wrapping paper, black or
white may not be advisable, both of them are considered to be unlucky in China.Beside, it’s bad
manner to pick a clock or a pair of shoes for your hosts.Finally, what makes the gifts specially is
the bond between the sender and the recipient.The gifts to the hosts should not be cost.
I hope these suggestions will be of great help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Penny，
Knowing that you are confused about the custom of giving gifts in China, I’d like to share
with some suggestions here.
To begin with，the meaning of the gifts in value rather than price. that, you’d better out
the preference of your hosts.When \s\up7(∧) comes to the color of wrapping paper, black or
white may not be advisable, both of are considered to be unlucky in China.， it’s bad to pick
a clock or a pair of shoes for your hosts.Finally, what makes the gifts is the bond between the
sender and the recipient.The gifts to the hosts should not be .
I hope these suggestions will be of great help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua强化练(三十六) 短文改错(3)
A
(2022·安徽蚌埠二检)
In my childhood，my parents send me to learn Chinese handwriting，believing that it could
benefit me great.However，things were quite opposite to our expectations.Not only did I get bored
with hours of practice and I doubted the value of it.But my later experience proved that practice
handwriting was of great uses.When I attended to high school，handwriting became fantastic way
for me to relax.It was at that time that I realized what important it was to master a certain
skill.Don’t refuse to learn a skill because you will find it very help later.
答案
In my childhood，my parents me to learn Chinese handwriting，believing that it could
benefit me .However，things were quite opposite to expectations.Not only did I get bored with
hours of practice I doubted the value of it.But my later experience proved that handwriting was of
great .When I attended to high school，handwriting became\s\up7(∧) fantastic way for me to
relax.It was at that time that I realized important it was to master a certain skill.Don’t refuse to
learn a skill because you will find it very later.
B
(2022·山西晋中一模)
Good afternoon，everyone!
The topic of my speech today was “School Safety”．It is no doubt that school safety is
directly relate to students’ healthy growth and the happiness of millions of families.But what to
guarantee school safety?
Firstly，to improve school safety，we should keep our classrooms，hallways and other
school areas are organized and free of hazards.Secondly，the last person leave the classroom must
keep locks on all doors and windows.Thirdly，raise fire safety awareness.While fire drills can
seem repetitive at times，practice them seriously can cause the difference between safety and
danger in the event of a fire emergency.Lastly，turn off all electrical equipment as soon as we
don’t use them.
Let’s take action right now but make our own contribution to creating the safe campus!
Thanks for your listening.
答案
Good afternoon，everyone!
The topic of my speech today “School Safety”. is no doubt that school safety is directly
to students’ healthy growth and the happiness of millions of families.But to guarantee school
safety?Firstly，to improve school safety，we should keep our classrooms，hallways and other
school areas are organized and free of hazards.Secondly，the last person \s\up7(∧) leave the
classroom must keep locks on all doors and windows.Thirdly，raise fire safety awareness.While
fire drills can seem repetitive at times， them seriously can cause the difference between safety
and danger in the event of a fire emergency.Lastly，turn off all electrical equipment as soon as we
don’t use .
Let’s take action right now make our own contribution to creating safe campus!
Thanks for your listening.
C
(2022·江西南昌一模)
One day in June，all of sudden，it rained heavily and the raindrops made a wonderful
sound.We felt very hot in the classroom that we couldn’t concentrate on schoolwork and instead
of were eager to enjoy the cool rain.Sensed that ， the teacher simple wrote “sitting and
listening” on the blackboard with a smile.I am sitting next to the window，listening to the rain.It
seemed to calm me down but reminded me of ancient Chinese poems，who brought me a sense of
peace.We should appreciate the small thing in life，like sunsets and rainbows after storms.In this
way，we can develop their inner world into an ideal state.
答案
One day in June，all of \s\up7(∧) sudden，it rained heavily and the raindrops made a
wonderful sound.We felt hot in the classroom that we couldn’t concentrate on schoolwork and
instead of were eager to enjoy the cool rain. that，the teacher wrote “sitting and listening” on
the blackboard with a smile.I sitting next to the window，listening to the rain.It seemed to calm
me down reminded me of ancient Chinese poems， brought me a sense of peace.We should
appreciate the small in life，like sunsets and rainbows after storms.In this way，we can develop
inner world into an ideal state.
D
(2022·江西赣州一模)
A few weeks ago，I received a package which contained some seeds as gift from my friend.I
sowed the seeds in the soil of a beautiful flowerpot but during the first few days，something
happened.I began to feel disappointing and a bit down.I water the seeds in dry periods and made
sure not to over-water them.Also，I placed the flowerpot in the sunlights.More days passed.Under
my care，the flowerpot soon became crowded of green plants.Thanks to my friend and my
patient，these plants have played an important part in brighten my everyday life.Let us all to slow
our pace down but be patient to observe the world around us carefully.
答案
A few weeks ago，I received a package which contained some seeds as\s\up7(∧) gift from
my friend.I sowed the seeds in the soil of a beautiful flowerpot but during the first few days，happened.I began to feel and a bit down.I the seeds in dry periods and made sure not to over-water
them.Also，I placed the flowerpot in the .More days passed.Under my care，the flowerpot soon
became crowded green plants.Thanks to my friend and my ，these plants have played an
important part in my everyday life.Let us all to slow our pace down be patient to observe the
world around us carefully.
