【高考真题作文】2025年高考英语全国一卷读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.

There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.

My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.

It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.

A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise —a shock, actually: "Not a chance." Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned.

Two months passed, My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience(良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.

注意：

(1) 续写词数应为 150 个左右；

(2) 请按如下格式作答。

I realized it was me who was at fault.

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【写作思路】

故事梗概：

情节线

开端：初夏时节，作者为了庆祝乔迁之喜，邀请亲朋好友在家聚会，但担心弟弟的狗会撞倒孩子们。作者让弟弟把他带来的狗留在室外，与孩子们互不打扰 → 发展：下雨了，作者不想让狗进屋，弟弟不希望狗被淋湿，双方僵持不下，弟弟中途离去 → 高潮：作者的弟弟从此不主动联系作者，作者开始反省自己的行为：弟弟的妻子去世，小狗是弟弟一直以来的同伴 → 结局：作者意识到自己的做法不妥之后发生了什么?

情感线

高兴 → 担忧 → 满意 → 尴尬 → 忐忑不安 → ?

续写思路：

Para.1:：I realized it was me who was at fault. 我意识到是我的错。

→ Q1：作者反思自己错在了哪些地方? Q2:作者的内心感受如何?

续写第一段应该重点描述作者的心路历程，反思自己缺少对他人的同理心，内心感到羞愧与后悔。再结合第二段开头语可知，本段应提到做饼干。

Para.2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at mybrother's door. 拿着妻子做的饼干，我来到弟弟家门口。

→ Q1：敲门之前作者是什么样的心情？Q2：弟弟看到作者时的反应如何？Q3：作者与弟弟最终和好了吗?

续写第二段首先写作者敲门前的忐忑不安，然后再写弟弟看到作者时的表情，最后写兄弟握手言和，注意该段中最好描写小狗 Toby 的表现，比如欢快地跑来跑去等。

【参考范文一】

I realized it was me who was at fault. As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me. My brother, already burdened with grief and loneliness, had only sought companionship in Toby, while I had treated them both as inconveniences. Instead of finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the dog, I had prioritized my own comfort over his feelings.  The thought of him spending these months being isolated filled me with deep regret. Seeing this, my wife decided to do something, so she baked some biscuits for me to bring to my brother.

With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Hesitating, I raised my hand to knock, my heart pounding with uncertainty. When the door opened, my brother's eyes widened in surprise. Before he could speak, I handed him the biscuits, saying sorry to him sincerely. The stiffness in his expression softened slightly. It was at this moment that Toby bounced over, wagging his tail merrily.A faint smile touched my brother's lips, and it gradually spread into a brilliant one. The next few hours witnessed us taking a walk outside and talking heart to heart.

我意识到错的人是我。当我回想那天晚上发生的事时，羞愧涌上心头。我的弟弟，本已背负着悲伤与孤独，只是在托比身上寻求陪伴，而我却把他们俩都当作麻烦。我没有通过在家里给狗安排一个空间来找到折中办法，而是把自己的舒适置于他的感受之上。想到他这几个月来被孤立，我心中充满了深深的悔恨。看到这些，我的妻子决定做点什么，于是她烤了一些饼干让我带给我的弟弟。

带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟的门前。我犹豫着，抬起手敲门，心因不确定而怦怦直跳。门开时，弟弟的眼睛因惊讶而睁大。在他开口之前，我把饼干递给他，真诚地向他道歉。他表情中的僵硬稍稍缓和了。就在这时，托比蹦跳过来，欢快地摇着尾巴。一丝微笑触上弟弟的嘴唇，那微笑又绽开成灿烂的笑容。接下来的几个小时见证了我们到外面散步、敞开心扉地交谈。

【参考范文二】

I realized it was me who was at fault. Consumed by guilt, I stared blankly at my brother's last message: “Not a chance.” Though simple, it pierced through me like a blade, reminding me of how my thoughtlessness had pushed him further into isolation. The weight of regret tightened around me like a noose, dragging me deeper into self-reproach. Just then, my wife gently tapped my shoulder, her voice soft yet firm: “You still have a choice — so long as you're determined to make things right.” Her words struck a chord. I drew a deep breath, nodded, and exchanged a knowing glance with her. She smiled and offered to bake his favorite biscuits — dividing them thoughtfully into two boxes: one for my brother, the other for Toby.

With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Heart pounding and palms clammy, I stood before his door, rehearsing possible words of apology. Before I could knock, the door burst open and out darted a ball of fur —Toby. He leapt at me, tail wagging furiously, licking my face as if nothing had happened. I bent down to pat him, murmuring, “I'm sorry, Bro. You and Toby were always part of our lives. ”A chuckle came from behind the door. "That's fine," my brother said, eyes softening as he took the biscuits from my hands. I asked about his health, invited him and Toby to visit us again. It was the rain that once clouded our bond — but now, the sky had cleared.

我意识到错的人是我。被愧疚吞噬，我茫然地盯着弟弟最后那条消息：“不可能。”虽然简单，它却像刀刃一样刺穿我，提醒我我的轻率如何把他进一步推入孤立。悔恨的重量像绞索一样收紧在我周围，把我拖入更深的自责。就在这时，我的妻子轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，她的声音轻柔却坚定：“你仍然有选择——只要你决心把事情做对。” 她的话触动了我的心弦。我深吸一口气，点了点头，和她交换了一个会意的眼神。她笑了，主动提出烤他最喜欢的饼干——细心地分成两盒：一盒给我的弟弟，另一盒给托比。

带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟的门前。心怦怦直跳、手掌湿冷，我站在他的门前，排练着可能的道歉话语。我还没来得及敲门，门猛地开了，一团毛球冲了出来——托比。他扑向我，尾巴疯狂地摇着，舔我的脸，仿佛什么都没发生过。我弯下腰拍拍他，低声说：“对不起，兄弟。你和托比一直是我们生活的一部分。”门后传来一声轻笑。“没关系，”弟弟说，眼神柔和下来，从我手里接过饼干。我问了他的身体情况，邀请他和托比再来我们家做客。曾经是雨遮蔽了我们的纽带——但现在，天已经晴了。

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