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注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
In the beginning of years, when the world was so new and the Animals were just beginning to work for Man,
there was a Camel, and he lived in the middle of a Howling Desert because he did not want to work; and besides,
he was a Howler himself. When anybody spoke to him he said＇Humph!'Just “Humph!' and no more.
Presently the Horse came to him on Monday morning, with a saddle(鞍) on his back and a bit in his mouth,
and said,“Camel,O Camel, come out and run like the rest of us.”
“Humph!”said the Camel;and the Horse went away and told the Man.
Presently the Dog came to him, with a stick in his mouth, and said, “Camel,O Camel, come and fetch and
carry like the rest of us.”
“Humph!”said the Camel; and the Dog went away and told the Man.
Presently the Ox came to him, with the yoke on his neck and said,“Camel,O Camel,come and plough(耕
田)like the rest of us.”
“Humph!”said the Camel; and the Ox went away and told the Man.
At the end of the day the Man called the Horse and the Dog and the Ox together,and said, “Three,O Three,I'm
very sorry for you (with the world so new-and-all); but that Humph-thing in the Desert can't work, or he would
have been here by now, so I am going to leave him alone, and you must work double-time to make up for it.”
That made the Three very angry (with the world so new-and-all), and they thought the Camel was a good-for-
nothing on the edge of the Desert; and the Camel came chewing on milkweed, and laughed at them. Then he said
'Humph!' and went away again.
Presently there came along the Djinn in charge of All Deserts, rolling in a cloud of dust(Djinns always travel
that way because it is Magic),and he stopped to the Camel and pow-pow with the Three.
＂Djinn of All Deserts," said the Horse,“is it right for any one to be idle,with the world so new-and-all?"
“Certainly not,”said the Djinn.
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“Well,” said the Horse,“there's a thing that has done nothing since Monday morning. He won't run.”
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And the Camel said 'Humph!' again, but no sooner had he said it than he saw a great big lolloping
humph(驼峰)(we call it 'hump' now,not to hurt his feelings)on his back.
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“Well,” said the Horse,“there's a thing that has done nothing since Monday morning. He won't run.”
“Oh!” said the Djinn, whistling, “that’s my Camel. He should be most powerful among all of you. Didn’t he do
most of the job? What does he say about it?”“No, not at all. He only says ‘Humph!’” said the Dog; “and he won’t
fetch and carry.”“Very good,” said the Djinn. “I’ll change him if you will kindly wait a minute.”The Djinn walked
across the desert, and found the Camel most idle, looking at his own reflection in a pool of water.“My friend,” said
the Djinn, “I hear you have done no work, with the world so new-and-all?”
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And the Camel said 'Humph!' again, but no sooner had he said it than he saw a great big lolloping
humph(驼峰)(we call it 'hump' now,not to hurt his feelings)on his back.“Do you see that?” said the Djinn.
“That’s your very own hump that you’ve brought upon your very own self by not working. Today is Thursday, and
you’ve done no work since Monday, when the work began. Now you are going to work.”The Camel went away to
join the Three. And from that day to this he works silently all the time but always wears a hump.
【文章概要】
文章讲述一只在沙漠中无所事事的骆驼。
因为骆驼不愿干事情而引起了马，狗和牛的不满。最终掌管沙漠的精灵来了。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
第一段开头是：“是这样，”马儿说，“有只动物从星期一早上起就没做什么事情。他不会跑。”所以这
一段应该写精灵听了所有动物对骆驼的抱怨后找到了骆驼。
第二段开头是：骆驼说:“哼!可他刚说完，就看见背上有个巨大的驼峰(我们现在叫它“驼峰”，免得伤了
他的感情)。所以这段主要写骆驼收到了惩罚，从此带着驼峰加入其他动物的行列默默的工作。
最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时,由于本篇文章人物角色存在动物视角，需要注意人称，
且对话过程一般又会使用现在进行时，需要注意转化
从句使用
定语从句：That’s your very own hump that you’ve brought upon your very own self by not working；
条件状语从句：I’ll change him if you will kindly wait a minute.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell phone rang. A child's voice on the other end spoke
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】to me softly, "Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number
once again. I don’t have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of
calls nowadays, so I replied rudely, "You've dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.
During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung
up right away rudely. I couldn’t help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over
and over again?” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone
rang up again. It was from the same girl- It seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.
She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my number from time to
time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come
back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right?
Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take care of me. She is tired out from looking after me.
Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK?” The innocent request
was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you.... Dad, I am
so... happy, so …happy
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Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone.
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I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was.
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通过阅读所给文章可知，作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后，女孩依旧不时地拨
打作者的号码，即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后，作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女
孩对爸爸的想念，作者应其请求，在电话中给了她一个吻，女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。
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Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. When I called the
number back, a woman answered, “Sorry, sir. I am really sorry to bother you. I did want to call to apologize.” From
the woman, I learnt that the girl had bone cancer when she was born, and unfortunately her father died in an
accident weeks ago. The little girl suffered from unbearable treatment every day. Feeling painful, she would cry for
her dad who had always encouraged her, so her mother gave her a random number.
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I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was.The woman thought for a while, saying sadly, “She
has gone. You must have kissed her on the phone, and she went with a smile as she tightly held the cell phone with
which she could hear her voice...” On hearing this, I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my
cheeks. I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
第一段开头是：在这之后不久，我对电话的另一端是谁产生了兴趣……，所以接下来应该写作者回拨电话
以及女孩妈妈对作者的回复内容。特别要详细描述女孩之所以不停打电话找爸爸的具体原因。
第二段开头是：我迫不及待地想问那个女人她女儿怎么样了……。本段应该写女孩现在的情况以及作者得
知实情后的表现。
最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时.
高级词汇：suffered from，apologize，encourage，think for a while，stream down，pray for
句式表达
限制性定语从句“she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...”，
独立主格“I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks.”
非谓语的灵活使用：
“I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.”
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