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注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out
of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her
,
mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours she felt a little hungry and wished for something
to eat, but it was not possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a while,
watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and
had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh, yes...but I don’t have money on me…” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried
silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a
stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed
no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles
and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number
the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered
hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have
never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon
as she arrived home.
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Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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本文中心思想是：詹妮是家里的独子，与妈妈争吵后离家出走，在街上闲逛后，她饿了想吃东西，但是没
有钱，店主给了她一碗面，她非常感激，店主说她更应该感谢她的妈妈，最终詹妮回家向妈妈表示了歉意。
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Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the
door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. "Where could my
mother be?" she wondered, "was she still angry with me?" Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.
She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that
her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her
mother. "Here you come! I've been looking for you," she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn't help throwing
herself into her mother's arms. "Mum, I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me." She expressed her
sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled patting her back gently.
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
第一段开头是：詹妮回家之后发现母亲不在家，自己内心开始反思自己的行为，感到后悔（因为第二段才
有敲门—一段不能之间见到母亲）
第二段开头是：母亲回来敲门，詹妮向母亲表达自己的歉意以及母亲对詹妮同样有所反思的回答
从句使用
Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. 形容词做伴随状语
Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her， s
he felt rather ashamed， and tears began to roll down her checks．使用现在分词作状语，that引导同位语从句。
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting
out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with
complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who
seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence．
Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of
money for the less fortunate people in our school district. “Christmas is a season of giving,” I told
my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By
contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these needy
people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”
When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten
except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk.
Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container. “I don’t need milk for lunch,” he
mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.
That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn’t help
sharing the incident that had taken place. “I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting
ready to become a part of the world around him,” I told the principal. “Yes.” he nodded. “And we
might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in
our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it.” As I gazed
down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing
this, I decided to do something for him.
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family.
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The next day, I had a special class for Willard.
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通过阅读所给文章可知，沉默寡言的Willard同学，在感恩节其他同学都忘记带要捐赠的东西时，Willard
毅然决然捐出了自己的牛奶费用。作者随后在贫困生名单中发现 Willard 赫然在列，所以决定帮助
Willard。
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a
barely empty room with a broken bed and a dirty sofa. Willard told me his mother died and that his father was
missing, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard
mumbled, “I just want to help others by contributing my milk money.” I couldn’t help bursting into tears,
thinking I should help him break his silence.
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The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said,
“Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thanks to Willard, you are great!” After a silence, all the
students clapped, saying “Willard, you are great!” and they walked to him and hugged him tightly. A friend
relationship was built and Willard’s silence was broken by a smile on his face.
【详解】
第一段开头是：星期天我前往Willard家进行家访。上文讲到Willard时贫困家庭，所以这一段落的续写应
该是围绕着Willard家有多么贫困所展开。所以应该具体写家中的装潢来体现贫困。
第二段的开头：接下来的一天，我决定给Willard一场特别的课。上文说到虽然贫困，但是Willard还是捐
出了自己的牛奶钱。所以这一段肯定是要通过这堂课对Willard的奉献精神进行赞扬，以及课堂结束后所带
来的结果。
词汇拓展：can’t help doing; burst into tears; mumble
句式表达
宾语从句和状语从句的省略
When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard mumbled, “I just want to help others by contributing my
milk money.”
非谓语作状语I couldn’t help bursting into tears, thinking I should help him break his silence.
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