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注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。
Long, long ago, in a little village lived a humble(谦虚的) man named Ashwin. He went about making
ends meet by pulling a rickshaw(人力车) and transporting passengers from one destination to another. Times
were hard and he had to take the responsibility for supporting his family.
One day, while returning from work, a man who looked like a wealthy person coming from the city
stopped his rickshaw. He quickly told Ashwin the place he wanted to visit. His car had broken down and he
desperately needed to get to the mentioned address urgently. After an uneventful ride, they reached the
destination, and the passenger paid the fare.
Ashwin, on returning home, found to his surprise that his passenger just then had dropped a small bag in
his rickshaw. On opening it, he found 50 gold coins in it. He showed it to his family who couldn’t believe their
luck. His wife said with joy, “Thank goodness. Now we find a solution to our problems.”
That night, Ashwin couldn’t sleep. His conscience(良心) kept troubling him. At the crack of dawn, he
woke his wife up. He said, “Lalita, I think it’s wrong to keep someone else’s gold coins. I am going to search
for the man and hand over the coins to him.” Lalita was shocked and cried, but Ashwin stuck to his word. He
tried hard to find the man, but nothing seemed to work.
Eventually when he was about to give up, he saw that wealthy passenger. Ashwin ran to him and
thrust(塞) the bag in his hand, “Sir, you left this bag in my rickshaw. I have been looking for you since then
and I am so relieved to find you. Please take this,” he said.
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The man was surprised.
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Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well.
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【文章概要】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了贫穷的Ashwin以拉人力车为生,一天一个有钱人乘他的车去某地时,把
一个装有50个金币的包忘在了车上。妻子想把这些金币据为己有,但Ashwin的良心过意不去,他决定去
寻找失主。就在多次寻找无果,准备放弃时,Ashwin看到了这个有钱人,并把包还给他。
线索:吃惊—发现Ashwin生活贫困—提供帮助—拒绝—提出负责孩子教育—同意—孩子学成归来—经常
教育孩子—孩子以父亲为榜样
【参考范文】
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The man was surprised.He was touched by Ashwin’s conscience and said he wanted to meet his family.
Ashwin took the man home and introduced him to his family. The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s
house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. Ashwin refused, but the man was
insistent and said, “I would like to take the responsibility for educating your children.” Ashwin could not refuse the
assistance since he wanted the children to become soGANmeone important. He agreed to send them to the city.
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Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well. Each vacation they went home to visit their
parents. Ashwin often reminded them, “Never do anything at the cost of someone else.” The children remembered
the advice and followed it. Years later, they became successful. When the poor man’s children had children of their
own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.
【详解】
由第一段首句内容“这个人很吃惊”知,
第一段可写他被Ashwin的良知感动了,准备登门道谢。看到他们贫穷的生活后,有钱人准备给他们提供
帮助。但被善良的Ashwin拒绝了。在有钱人再三坚持下,Ashwin终于同意他帮助自己的孩子接受良好的
教育。
由第二段首句内容“Ashwin的孩子们得到了很好的教育,并且学习很好”知,
第二段可描写Ashwin经常教育孩子,孩子们也谨记父亲教诲,并把他的事迹讲给子孙后代听。
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】词汇积累
行为 ①帮助:help/do sb. a favor/ offer help to sb. ②拒绝 :refuse/decline ③拜访:visit/ pay a visit to
情绪 ①感动:touch/move
句式表达
The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children
and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. (that引导宾语从句。
Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important.
(since引导原因状语从句。
When the poor man’s children had children of their own,
they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins. (when引导时间状语从句。
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】Jack and Rose were sitting face to face. At this moment, the landlord came in and asked, “Are
you sure you do not rent the house any more?” He kept silent and she only shook her head. They
were going to divorce, so it was obvious that they would not continue renting the house any more.
Then the landlord began examining the house. After looking around, he screamed, “Goddamn!
See how you have ruined my house? The walls are full of nails! How could I rent the house to
others?"
Jack said,"The room is too small and can hardly accommodate all loads of our stuff. So we could
only hang them on the walls."The landlord did not listen to him and turned around up to the floor.
Rose began looking around her familiar room. Four years ago, she became his bride here. On the
night of their marriage, he felt deeply guilty to her, saying, “I feel so sorry for you for having you
live in this small room. In the future I will earn a lot of money to buy our own house.”
The room was only 13 square meters with two nails on the wall next to the door, one for her to
hang her bag and the other for hanging umbrellas. At that time, she threw all her stuff such as her bag
and umbrella on the floor once she entered the room, staring at the whole mess and feeling terribly
upset.
There were three nails on the left wall, on which he hung his clothes yesterday. After she lived in
the room, he removed all the clothes boxes and bought her a desk in the spared room because he
knew she loved writing and drawing.
There were four nails on the right wall that were used to fix their wedding photo frame. But now
there were only four nails without the frame. She still remembered he got hurt on his fingers when
trying to drive the nails home. It was her who pushed him to receive an injection against tetanus(破
伤风)。
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The landlord tried to pry(撬动,撬开) the nails out when complaining at the same time.
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They hung all the things back to the wall.
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通过阅读所给文章可知, Jack和Rose这一对夫妻由于决定离婚而不再租赁房东的房子,房东抱怨他们把
房子的墙上钉了太多的钉子。他们开始回忆房间里这些钉子的来历以及它们背后的故事。
【参考范文】
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The landlord tried to pry(撬动,撬开) the nails out when complaining at the same time.After
the nails were removed, the walls were left with numerous holes.Seeing this,Rose felt harshly heartbroken as
if her heart was pierced through those holes and bleeding nonstop. All of a sudden, she sprang from her seat
and exclaimed,"Stop! Stop! We will continue renting the house!” Jack looked at her with great surprise,and
then turned round,tears over his face.
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They hung all the things back to the wall. They hung all the things back to the wall. Jack asked
Rose, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me?” She dusted the ash off her hands and looked at the
walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying,“Yes! For me,it is not a suffering to live."Rose finally
came to understand that their marriage was like a wall full of numerous holes. But if all the nails were still in
their own places,the wall was still undamaged and reliable.
【详解】
第一段首句内容“房东一边抱怨一边试图把钉子撬出来。”知,
第一段应该描写钉子被拔出来以后发生的事情,可以写Jack和Rose在钉子被拔出来以后的心理感受
以及所做出的反应。
由于下一段的开头是“They hung all the things back to the wall.(他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。)”知,
续写的第一段中还应该写出他们最终决定和好,重新租回房子。
由第二段首句内容“他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。”知,
第二段应描写他们和好以后的事情,并且为不离婚的决定给出一个合理的解释。
资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】词汇积累:
动作
①.大叫,呼喊:exclaim/shout loudly/yell
②.突然起身:spring/stand up suddenly
③.续租:continue renting /continue to rent
情绪
①.伤心,心碎:harshly heartbroken / Extremely sad
②.惊讶地:with great surprise / in shock
③.愿意做:be willing to do sth./would rather do sth.
句式表达
Jack looked at her with great surprise and then turned round, tears over his face.
(tears over his face是独立主格结构作伴随状语)
She dusted the ash off her hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying,
“Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live." (saying是现在分词作伴随状语)
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