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注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
My in-laws(公公婆婆)loved to travel and every winter would visit different countries. While they were
gone, some friends moved into their house so it would not be left empty. This year it was decided that I would
be the one to move into their house. Fortunately, I was allowed to return home on the weekend.
I tried to keep myself busy. Each day I walked down to the bottom of the driveway to collect the mail，
sewed curtains for four large windows, filled the bird feeders, cleaned the house from top to bottom. watched
an occasional TV show and spent a disappointing couple of hours trying to get on the dial-up Internet.
Chatting with friends and family on the phone helped comfort me, but these conversations and the simple
chores didn't totally fill my time. Basically I did whatever I could to keep my mind off the fact that I was there
alone.
On Friday I would head back to the city to meet up with friends and spend time with my husband and our
family. On Monday, the car filled with groceries. I'd make the drive back to my in-laws' house.
During my third week in the country the temperature dropped and a massive snowstorm set in. The
driveway was filled quickly with wet, heavy snow. I hadn't seen that much snow since I was a child. and
lovely as it was. I feared that I wouldn't be able to get out. It was very cold and every day the snow kept
falling. On Thursday night it started to rain. With a sinking heart I knew I wouldn't be going home that
weekend.
Disappointed and feeling very low, I worried about not having enough food. What would I do if the
power went out? What if I fell ill?
Friday morning I awoke to a winter wonderland. The trees were weighed down with ice and the
surrounding countryside was blanketed in a deep hill of unbroken white. I felt very helpless.
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Suddenly I heard a noise and I quickly ran across the room to the window.
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As I stood there watching, I realized that I might have a slim chance that I would
get out.
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通过阅读所给文章可知，作者的公公婆婆喜欢旅游，每年冬天会去不同的国家。当他们离开后，一些朋友
搬进了他们的房子，这样房子就不会空着了。今年决定由作者来搬进他们的房子。幸运的是，作者被允许
在周末回家。在第三个星期时，气温下降了，一场巨大的暴风雪来临了，作者知道自己那个周末回不了家
了。失望，情绪低落。作者担心着各种可能会发现的坏事。星期五早上，作者一觉醒来，就看到了一个冬
天的仙境。树木被冰压垮了，周围的乡村被覆盖在连绵不断的白雪皑皑的深山中。作者感到很无助。
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Suddenly I heard a noise and I quickly ran across the room to the window.It was
freezing cold outside, the light wind blowing into the house. I saw a man that I had never met clearing the
driveway. The noise I heard was him trying to break through the ice with nothing more than a clearing tool. Who
was this man? Why was he clearing the driveway? Although the man wore a thick coat and a scarf, he still felt
bitterly cold.
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As I stood there watching, I realized that I might have a slim chance that I would
get out.Thrilled, I put on my coat and boots and went out to help him. It took us four hours to clear that driveway.
He did most of the heavy work. It turned out that he was my in-laws' closest neighbour and before they left, Mom
had asked him to take good care of me. She also explained to him how important it was for me to go back to the
city on the weekend. My heart was filled with thankfulness to my in-laws and this kind man.
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，
第一段开头：突然我听到一个声音，我迅速跑过房间到窗户那儿。所以后文应该是讲述作者去窗户那里看
是谁发出的声音，是一个素未谋面的人正在清扫车道，作者感到疑惑。尽管这个人穿着厚厚的外套，围着
围巾，他仍然感到刺骨的寒冷。
第二段开头：我站在那里看着，我意识到我出去的机会可能很小。本段应该写作者和那个一起花了四个小
时清理完了车道，最后发现他是作者公公婆婆的邻居，在他们离开之前，作者的公公婆婆让他好好照顾作
者。她还向他解释周末回城里对我有多重要。作者的心里充满了对公公婆婆和这个善良的男人的感激。
词汇词组：freezing cold；break through；turn out；put on；be filled with；thankfulness
从句使用
I saw a man that I had never met clearing the driveway. 定语从句
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Although the man wore a thick coat and a scarf, he still felt bitterly cold. 让步状语从句
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
The darkness was gathering as she wobbled(颤颤巍巍)in high heels along the side of the
highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a teenager she did the only
thing she could think of...get out and walk.
It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only
someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward.
The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop," she
hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door opened. A
wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up
into the cab and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and
disappeared into the night, never to be seen again.
I woke up in a cold sweat, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a vision? It was
unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her
room. Her bed was empty.
I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began
to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there for
the night. It was 1:30 a.m., but I raced to the phone and dialed a number.
“Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep.
“Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didn't come home tonight and I was wondering if she
stayed at your place?"
“No, she left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by midnight!”
The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic.
Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor
in anxiety.
At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up on our long driveway. I could tell
immediately that it was not my daughter's car.
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My face pressed against the window and I found it hard to breathe.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Paragraph 2:
“Mom, she gave me a ride home."Becki said.
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文章讲述了作者梦到自己的女儿在高速路上打车的场景。醒来后发现女儿真的不在家，而且作者从女儿的
朋友处确认她已经离开，本该最迟在午夜回到家。作者很担心，在家里焦急地踱步。后来发现有车停靠近
家的方向，但不是女儿的车。
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My face pressed against the window and I found it hard to breathe.The car pulled in
front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter, making her way up the steps. Tears
stinging(使刺痛)my eyes,I threw open the door,pulled her inside and hugged her tightly. The dream
was just too real and I could hardly believe I was now having my daughter in my hug. I wondered
if it was because my pray was answered. Then through my blurred vision(模糊的视野)I saw a lady
stepping out of the car.
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“Mom, she gave me a ride home."Becki said. “My car broke down on the highway and
without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels. " she continued, exposing her
blistered(起泡的)ankles. My heart shuddered(一想起就怕/担心/难受) at the thought of how painfully
Becki staggered(踉跄) along the dark highway. She must be an angel for Becki! I approached the
lady and invited her inside. Now,I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand.
【详解】
由第一段开头“My face pressed against the window and I found it hard.to breathe.”我把脸凑在窗户边去看，感
觉很难呼吸，可知，
第一段内容可为：车最后在作者家门口停下来，作者的女儿从车里出来，毫发无损。作者松了口气，并告
诉了女儿她的噩梦。在与女儿谈话时，作者注意到了车里的女人。
由第二段开头“ 'Mom, she gave me a ride home.' Becki said.” Becki说“妈妈，她是开车送我回家的人。”知，
第二段内容可为：作者女儿给她解释坐别人车回来的原因，以及事情的经过。作者看到女儿受伤的脚踝很
心痛，同时邀请女士进屋，对她帮助女儿的行为表示感谢。
句式表达
The car pulled in front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter, making her way up the steps.
out of it表示地点的介词短语放在句子开头，后面句子用了全倒装，且用making现在分词作状语
wondered if it was because my pray was answered. 中if引导宾语从句，because引导表语从句
My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels.
Without...would never...虚拟语气。
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