专题18 读后续写（新高考）（全国通用）
考点分类
三年考情（2024-2026）
命题规律
考点1
人与自我
（5 年3 考）
2026 年全国二卷--熬夜伤身调整作息实现蜕变；
2025 全国二卷--学生因名字意识到文化身份；
2024 浙江1 月卷--脑图定位找目标。
1.续写话题贴近校园，贴近生
活，贴近学生。
2.通过研读材料，利用段首
句，续写合理的情节走向，体
现人物合理情感状态。
3.故事的结尾都传递正能量，
矛盾得到圆满解决，人际关系
更加融洽。
4.综合考查学生阅读、归纳、
思辨和写作能力，引导学生坚
定理想信念、提升品德修养。
考点2
人与社会
（5 年4 考）
2026 全国一卷--暴雪驱车被困，陌生夫妇救助；
2025 全国一卷--闹别扭的兄弟和解；
2025 浙江1 月卷--看到陌生人进入邻居家后；
2024 新课标I&II 卷--诚信回报陌生司机相助。
考点3
人与自然
（5 年3 考）
2026 浙江1 月卷--路偶遇受惊母牛合力安抚；
2025 八省联考卷--机车党硬汉柔情；
2024 九省联考卷--海豚的秘密百宝箱。
Passage 1
【答案】
Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Realizing the wisdom in their
advice, Emily agreed without hesitation. The kind couple immediately drove her to the local station and even
helped her purchase a ticket. Wrapped in their thick coats, Emily boarded the train, her heart filled with
immense gratitude. Hours later, she finally arrived in Toronto. Walking onto the platform, she was instantly
enveloped in her boyfriend’s tight embrace, tears of joy and relief welling up in her eyes as she recounted her
perilous adventure and the heartwarming rescue by strangers.
Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. The fierce storm had completely passed, leaving the
streets blanketed in sparkling white snow. With the assistance of local police and tow truck drivers, her
vehicle was successfully pulled out of the ditch. Holding a small gift box, Emily visited Daniel and Rachel’s
home to express her heartfelt thanks. They smiled warmly, insisting that helping others was simply what
neighbors do. This unforgettable experience taught Emily a profound lesson: while reckless love can lead to
danger, the unexpected kindness of strangers can melt the coldest winter.
Passage 2
【答案1】
Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change. That very night, I initiated my battle
against my deep-rooted habits. I forcibly switched off my laptop and phone at 10 p.m., placing them
completely out of reach. However, my rebellious biological clock refused to cooperate. I tossed and turned in
the darkness, the silence of the room amplifying my anxiety. The urge to grab my phone and drown in videos
was overwhelmingly tempting. Just as my willpower was about to crumble, the doctor's stern voice and that
terrifying sharp pain in my chest echoed in my mind, anchoring me back to reality. I squeezed my eyes shut,
practicing deep breathing until exhaustion finally claimed me.
Slowly but surely, my efforts to adjust to the new routine paid off. The mornings, which used to be my
greatest enemy, gradually transformed into a welcoming friend. Instead of racing through assignments with
a foggy brain at midnight, I found myself tackling them with a clear and focused mind in the golden
sunlight. Not only did the heavy burden on my chest vanish, but an unprecedented sense of vitality also
flowed through my veins. When I proudly showed my parents my improved medical report during the
holiday, their relieved smiles were my best reward. I finally realized that true comfort isn't found in the
unruly hours of the night, but in the vibrant rhythm of a disciplined life.
Passage 3
【答案】
Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. They stepped out of their
patrol car calmly, holding a thick rope in hand. I hurried to share my childhood farm experience with them,
and we made a quick plan to cooperate. One officer slowly circled the cow to distract it, keeping his
movements gentle to avoid scaring it again. I seized the chance to approach from the side, whispering soft
words like I used to do to calm the cows on my old farm. Little by little, the cow’s tense body relaxed, its
threatening lowing faded, and it even blinked at me gently.
After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. Luckily, a farmer
passing by recognized the cow immediately — it was his. He thanked us profusely, explaining that the cow
had broken free from the fence early that morning and gone missing. When I picked up Emma after her
lesson, I told her every detail of the rescue. Her face lit up with admiration: “Dad, you’re really my hero!”
That day, I understood that heroism isn’t about being fearless, but about summoning courage to do what’s
right even when scared.
Passage 1
【答案】One possible version:
I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I
failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. My pride had kept me
from reaching out, and now months had passed without a proper conversation. One evening, I picked up the
phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. To my relief,
he called back the next day, and we agreed to get together soon.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. He opened it with a surprised
smile, and for a moment, neither of us spoke. Then we hugged — something we hadn’t done since before his
wife passed away. We sat on the porch with Toby resting beside us, and I handed him the box of biscuits.
“Thank you,” he said quietly. We talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding
what had been lost. As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the
path to healing.
Passage 2
【答案】
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. Standing up, I felt a mix of
nervousness and excitement. “My name, Qiuyu, combines the characters for autumn and rain in Chinese,” I
began, my voice steady. “Autumn represents harvest and maturity, while rain symbolizes nourishment and
growth. Together, they embody a time of abundance and renewal.” As I spoke, I noticed the rapt attention of
my classmates, their eyes reflecting curiosity and respect. It was a moment of connection, a bridge built
between cultures through the simple act of sharing my name.
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. They surrounded me, their
questions pouring out like a stream. “What other names have beautiful meanings in Chinese?” “Can you
teach us how to write our names in Chinese characters?” I smiled, feeling a warmth spread through me. I
took out a piece of paper and began to sketch out characters, explaining each stroke and its significance.
Through this interaction, I realized that by embracing my cultural identity, I was not only preserving my
heritage but also enriching the lives of those around me. It was a small yet meaningful step towards fostering
cultural understanding and appreciation.
Passage 3
【答案】One possible version:
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained how he had witnessed
the strange man entering their house and how he was arrested. Mr. and Mrs. Green listened attentively, with
a mixture of surprise and gratitude on their faces. Mrs. Green hugged Kevin, thanking him for his bravery.
Mr. Green, however, looked thoughtful. He asked Kevin to describe the man in detail and then revealed that
the man was indeed his younger brother, who had come to retrieve a watch their father had left behind.
Kevin's eyes widened in shock.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. On the way, Mr. Green
explained that the watch was a family heirloom, passed down from generation to generation. At the police
station, they explained the situation to the officers, who were surprised but understanding. The man, who
had been released after his identity was verified, was waiting outside. He smiled weakly at Kevin, who felt a
mix of embarrassment and relief. Mr. Green handed over the watch to his brother with a pat on the back,
and they all agreed to keep in touch. Kevin learned an important lesson that day: always verify the facts
before taking action, but never hesitate to help those in need.
Passage 1
【答案】
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do.
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to
Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May
I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or
you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my
business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your
promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I
jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus
station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug
the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity
and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for
the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he
turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight.
We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-
hearted friend like Gunter.
Passage 2
【答案】
When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. In the vast expanse of her
school, a girl with poor directional skills struggled to navigate and often got lost. One day, during gym class,
she observed a unique way to find her way - following the shadows of trees. As the sun cast its rays, the girl
noticed how the shadows created patterns on the ground, guiding her path. She took a leap of faith and
followed the shadows, surprising herself with each turn and stretch. Her efforts were noticed by the teacher,
who praised her innovative thinking.
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. She used the shadows to navigate
the school hallways, find her classes, and even locate the school's various facilities. This newfound skill not
only helped the girl navigate her school but also instilled in her a sense of confidence and adventure. She
learned excitedly that with a little creativity and observation, any challenge could be overcome. And with
each step she took, she left behind a legacy of inspiration for those who followed in her footsteps, knowing
that even without a clear sense of direction, there's always a way to find one's way.
Passage 1
【答案】
Silence fell upon us when we sat down to prepare at first. Neither of us spoke for what felt like an
eternity. I kept my eyes fixed on the notebook, my fingers nervously twisting together. Then, out of the
corner of my eye, I saw Emily reach out and gently push a pen toward me — the same pen I had lent her
years ago during a chemistry exam. That small gesture broke something inside me. “I’m sorry,” I whispered,
my voice trembling. She looked up, tears welling in her eyes. “Me too,” she said softly. Without another
word, we pulled our chairs closer and began dividing the presentation slides. The ice finally melted away.
With the weight lifted off our shoulders, we threw ourselves into preparing the presentation. Dividing
the work naturally, we soon found our old rhythm — she researched statistics while I designed the slides.
Before long, we finished our own parts and discussed how to polish the presentation as a whole. Finally came
the presentation day. Having exchanged an encouraging smile, we strode to the front with confidence. The
applause that followed felt like a shared victory. It was then that I realized: True friendship isn’t about
waiting for the other to apologize first — it’s about being the one brave enough to reach out.
Passage 2
【答案】
Mrs. Brown looked up and started sharing the stories. She told him that the photo was taken with her
husband on their wedding day many years ago. She recalled their happy days traveling together and the
little joys in daily life. Though her voice was weak, it was full of warmth. Tom did not interrupt but nodded
from time to time, showing his sincere attention. He even shared his own school life with her, talking about
his studies and hobbies. For the first time, Tom did not feel nervous when talking to a stranger. They talked
delightfully, unaware of hours slipping by.
When it was time to leave, Tom stood up and stared at Mrs. Brown. “I’ll come to see you more often,”
Tom promised, smiling warmly. Mrs. Brown held his hand tightly, with tears of gratitude in her eyes. She
thanked him for spending the time with her and said he had brought her great happiness. On his way home,
Tom felt light-hearted and proud. He realized that kindness was not about doing something great, but about
giving care and company from the heart. From that day on, Tom became more outgoing and confident.
Passage 3
【答案】
“Not sure when they flower — isn’t it upsetting?” I asked. “It makes every effort meaningful,” he
replied calmly. “Flowers develop bit by bit every single day. Blooming is just a brief moment, while the
whole process of growing matters far more.” His words sank deep into my heart. I recalled my blue mood
over poor grades and those sleepless nights, realizing I was too eager to succeed and cared too much about
final results so that I ignored steady progress and the value of effort itself. I thanked the gardener sincerely
and left the garden with a peaceful and relaxed mind.
From that day on, I decided to follow his advice — less hurrying, more growing. I adjusted my study
state and made solid progress step by step instead of blindly chasing high rankings. When graduation finally
arrived, I visited the garden again and saw countless flowers in full bloom. Soon afterwards, I received the
admission notice from my target university. I realized I needn’t rush for success. As long as I keep moving
forward steadily, I will surely shine in my own proper time.
Passage 4
【答案】
With only three days left, I knew I had to act. After brainstorming some ideas, I invited Jake and Lily to
my house. Opening my grandfather’s diary, I pointed at the faded photo of his class. “Your camera can save
the moment for the future,” I told Jake, whose eyes suddenly sparkled. Then I suggested he photograph
every corner of the school like “time travelers” Meanwhile, Lily was engaged in my grandfather’s love letter,
eager to bring hidden stories back to life. I was busy organizing layouts, combining historical accuracy with
creativity. The clock was ticking, but our laughter replaced earlier frustration.
On the final day, we presented our brochure in class. We stood by the blackboard as everyone went
through the pages. They examined the brochure carefully, with their fingers tracing the photos, narratives
and timelines which connected three generations of graduates. Noticing surprise on every face, we couldn’t
wait to hear Mr. Dow’s announcement of the winner. “This work isn’t just about the school anniversary,” he
finally said, tapping the cover where our three names shone, “it’s about how its spirit lives through students’
cooperation.” That afternoon in the library, seeing our brochure on display, we realized our combined
talents had created what none could alone.
Passage 5
【答案】范文
I was deeply shocked by this girl’s misfortune. I couldn’t believe someone so kind had suffered so much
pain. Compared with her, my little disappointment seemed totally insignificant. I had a warm family and
healthy parents who loved me deeply, yet I was always selfish and rude, complaining about trivial things and
even saying hurtful words to them. Hearing her story made me rethink my attitude towards life. A wave of
guilt washed over me, and my eyes grew wet. I realized how lucky I actually was.
With a heavy heart, I walked into the living room and hugged both my parents. I apologized sincerely
for my bad temper and impolite words earlier. I told them I would go to the family gathering happily. My
parents were surprised but smiled warmly. Their warm embrace made me feel even more grateful for what I
had. That night, I reflected a lot. From then on, I learned to be grateful and tried to understand my parents.
I no longer lost my temper easily, and our relationship became much closer.
Passage 6
【答案】
The man cast his eyes around the people in the library, his voice slightly shaky. “Years ago, I was in
great trouble. Right here, I picked up coins that had fallen from an old man’s pocket,” he shared. “I lived in
fear. But someone left daily necessities for me every month, with no name attached.” His voice grew stronger.
“Those silent acts of kindness didn’t just help me survive; they taught me that no one should be defined by
their worst moment. It was that kindness that kept me going.” He paused, eyes wet, “This library gave me
hope, so I want to give it new life.”
Moved to tears, Oliver fully understood his grandfather’s kindness and wisdom. His grandfather was
right: a person’s worth is never measured by a few coins. His grandfather didn’t just forgive a mistake; he
planted a seed of goodness. That seed grew in the man’s heart over the years, quietly taking root and
ultimately blooming into generosity. Overwhelmed by this realization, Oliver walked up, and held his hand.
“The giver was my grandfather. He’d be proud of you,” Oliver whispered, his voice thick with emotion. The
man hugged him tightly, and the library was filled with warm silence — proof that kindness, once sown,
always finds its way back, often multiplied.
Passage 7
【答案】
Feeling encouraged, Mary stepped onto the stage confidently. The bright stage lights shone on her, and
for a moment, she remembered all the practice she had done those days — how she had practiced walking
steadily in front of the mirror, how she had learned to keep a natural smile, and how her mother had
encouraged her every step of the way. Mary followed the rhythm she had practiced countless times, walking
slowly and gracefully across the stage, her smile warm and confident, completely different from the hesitant
girl she had been just a few days before. All the judges nodded with admiration, deeply impressed by Mary’s
elegant posture and natural charm.
When the winner was announced, Mary and her mother cried joyfully. They won first prize among so
many excellent competitors! Holding the prize, Mrs. Smith hugged Mary tightly, repeatedly praising Mary
as her perfect and most outstanding model. Seeing her mother’s delighted smile, Mary felt a strong sense of
pride and achievement welling up in her heart. She was glad that she had the courage to agree and did not
let her mother down. She also overcame her inner timidity and gained precious confidence and bravery. This
unforgettable experience not only strengthened the bond between the mother and the daughter, but also
became a precious, heartwarming memory that Mary would treasure for a lifetime.
Passage 8
【答案】
I hesitated, then told him I had fallen and couldn’t move. Without another word, he opened the
unlocked door and rushed to my side. He knelt down, examined my ankle gently, and helped me onto the
sofa. “You should have called me earlier,” he said softly, handing me his phone to reach my parents. Then he
went back home and returned with an ice pack and a bowl of hot soup. Watching him move around my
living room — fetching blankets, adjusting the ice pack — I felt a strange mix of shame and warmth. Shame
for the years I had wasted on pride, and warmth for a kindness I never knew existed.
The next day, Mr. Miller came by, and my mother brought up the past. Before she could say another
word, I interrupted. “Mr. Miller, I’m truly sorry. I was a kid who didn’t know any better. You had every
right to be upset about your roses.” He looked at me, his eyes softening. “I’m sorry too,” he said. “I
shouldn’t have shouted at a child.” We stood in silence for a moment, six years of cold nods melting away. At
that moment, I learned that sometimes, the hardest step in growing up is admitting you were wrong. But
once you take it, the weight on your shoulders suddenly feels much lighter.
Passage 9
【答案】
Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. Aslam quickly responded, grabbing the
box. We leaned forward and looked hard into the darkness — a pangolin! Aslam hissed my name and
signaled me to get it. For a while I held my breath, watching the pangolin sweeping dry leaves with its scaled
tail. Aslam pressed me on by reminding me of Grandpa’s words about acting like a man. Yet I just couldn’t
bring myself to harm the innocent creature. I tried to convince Aslam it was utterly inhuman to earn money
by hunting pangolins. Aslam fell silent, staring at the helpless pangolin, and slowly lowered the box.
After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. He glanced from Aslam to me. His white
eyebrows stitched together. Unable to lie to him, I recounted everything in detail. I’d expected a good
scolding, but instead I felt Grandpa’s rough hands gently stroking my face. He admitted he never liked the
work and had turned to it only to support the family. Then he urged me to stay in school so I’d never have to
make a living through something that troubled my conscience. Deeply touched, I promised someday I’d
make him proud. The money was gone, but Grandpa’s back no longer looked so “bent” to me.
Passage 10
【答案】例文
When he saw us, he let out several anxious quacks and glanced back toward the basement. Without
waiting for us, he immediately turned around and struggled back down the stairs. Confused by his unusual
behavior, we hurried after him. In the dim basement, the duck brother rushed toward the corner where the
ducks had been resting, flapping his wings wildly and quacking over and over again. A weak rustling sound
soon caught our attention. Through the shadows and scattered supplies, we could barely make out another
duck struggling helplessly among the ropes and fishing nets.
We finally understood why the duck had tried so hard to climb upstairs. I quickly rushed to the kitchen
for a pair of scissors while my mother gently tried to calm the trapped duck. Back in the basement, I knelt
beside her and carefully cut through the tangled net strand by strand. After several tense moments, the final
piece finally fell away. Freed at last, the duck sister weakly moved toward her brother, and the duck brother
immediately quieted down and stayed close beside her. Watching the two ducks lean against each other once
again in the warm basement, I felt a lump rise in my throat. That night, I realized animals may not speak
our language, but they understand love, trust and family far more deeply than we often imagine.
