专题09 读后续写
主题01 成长励志篇
Passage 1
【答案】 Holding my pen, I started to tell my own story in the new school. I poured my heart onto the paper,
describing the loneliness I felt during lunch breaks and the fear that held me back from making friends. Yet, I also
wrote about the small glimmers of hope, like the kindness of a teacher who noticed me and the first time I felt brave
enough to raise my hand in class. As I finished, a sense of relief washed over me. Submitting my essay to the
competition felt like taking a step out of the shadows.
After announcing that I was the winner, my teacher read my writing before class. As she read, the room fell silent.
I glanced around and saw nods of understanding and even a few smiles. When she finished, there was a round of
applause. A girl sitting nearby turned to me and said, “I had no idea you felt that way. I’d love to be your friend.”
Others echoed her sentiment, and for the first time, I didn’t feel invisible. The competition had not only showcased
my writing but also opened doors to connections I had longed for since arriving at this new school.
Passage 2
【答案】参考范文
I froze, not expecting such a response. Mrs. Gable’s gentle voice explained how her own son had once received
similar grace after an accident. “Honesty matters more than any scratch,” she repeated, firmly declining my offer to
pay. “Someone gave him a second chance back then, and now I’m giving you one.” Her final advice to “drive safer”
lingered in my heart long after we hung up, filling me with warmth that melted all my earlier anxieties. Her unexpected
forgiveness taught me that courage to be honest often meets with understanding.
That night, I told my dad everything. He leaned against the table, listening without interruption. When I finished,
he pulled me into a hug — his arms steady, like always. “I’m proud of you,” he said in a firm voice. “You chose
integrity over fear. That’s the mark of a man.” We talked for hours, about responsibility, about second chances, about
how kindness spread around. Before bed, he handed me a check. “For your books,” he said gently. Dad was right —
taking responsibility wasn’t a burden. It was freedom. And that birthday, I didn’t just grow older — I grew up.
Passage 3
【答案】 That night, I sat at my desk, notebook open and mind racing with details. I decided to design a gentle
reminder app especially for the elderly. I listed simple functions: important dates, daily tasks, and warm notes. I
focused on making the words big and the buttons easy to touch. Whenever I felt stuck, I thought of Mrs. Thompson’s
kind smile and her wish for something to help her remember. I carefully tested every part again and again, making
sure it was simple and helpful. Deep in my heart, I hoped this little app could bring convenience and warmth to her
and more elderly people.
A week later, I presented my project to Ms. Davis. I introduced the app’s purpose and showed how it worked.
Ms. Davis praised my thoughtful idea and spoke highly of my project. After class, I brought the app to Mrs. Thompson.
She was delighted and tried it at once. “This is exactly what I need,” she said happily. Watching her smile, I truly
understood what Ms. Davis had meant: coding is not just code, but a way to use technology to care for others.
Passage 4
【答案】One possible version:
My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. “It looks so good. Your salad makes my mouth
water,” Dad couldn’t wait to try it. He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly, his face spreading in a
satisfied smile. Giving me a thumbs-up, he said, “Little did I know you are so good at gardening. You are a man of
your word.” My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced
a bitter smile. How could I cheat my father?
Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing. With tears welling up in my eyes, I told my father I didn’t live up
to his expectations and that the garden was a mess. To my surprise, instead of scolding me, my father patted me on
the shoulder gently and told me to turn to him if I needed any help. Under his guidance, I learned to apply fertilizer,
weed and remove bugs. The vegetables became better and better day by day, and so did my father. I began to enjoy
taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father’s pleasure of working in the dirt.
主题02 亲情友情篇
Passage 1
【答案】参考范文
“Mom, shall we start the dinner?” asked Alex. Mom nodded, her eyes still reflecting a trace of worry. Alex
quickly guided everyone to the dining table with a warm smile. He raised his glass and said, “Let’s toast to a wonderful
new year, even though Dad can’t be with us right now. He’s out there making sure others can have a bright and warm
night. He’s our hero!” The room filled with applause and cheers. Everyone started to enjoy the delicious food, sharing
stories and laughter, making the best of the moment.
At 11:50, the door opened and in came Dad, looking tired. His face was covered with dirt and sweat, but his
eyes shone with a sense of accomplishment. Alex rushed to him and gave him a big hug. Dad smiled weakly and
said, “I’m sorry I’m late. But we finally fixed the power line.” Mom walked over and wiped the dirt off Dad’s face.
“You did a great job, honey.” she said softly. As the clock struck midnight, they all shouted “Happy New Year!” and
hugged each other tightly, feeling the warmth of family and the joy of a new beginning.
Passage 2
【答案】 After thinking hard, Ben told his mom that he had left it home. Mom’s eyes widened in surprise.
Ben begged her to go back home and fetch it. But mom refused since the contest would begin soon and she had to
get prepared as a judge. Patting him on the back, mom comforted, “You’re still a very scary monster.” Ben forced out
a smile, trying to hide his disappointment, but deep down he believed that without the Creepy Claw, he would just
be an ordinary monster. When he almost couldn’t hold back his tears, he heard a familiar voice from behind calling
his name.
As Ben turned around, he saw Kyla with the Creepy Claw in her hand. She walked up to Ben, waving the
claw delightedly. Seeing that, Ben’s eyes lit up. Kyla handed the claw to him, explaining that mom called her about
it and she begged Ana’s mom to drive her back home. “But you’re missing the party,” Ben exclaimed, with a worried
look coming over his face. “It’s OK. I’ll head back now. ” Kyla beamed. “After all, a monster without the Creepy
Claw isn’t really creepy.” Hearing what she said, Ben gave her a grateful hug. She was definitely the best sister in
the world!
Passage 3
【答案】 Ana’s voice trembled ( 颤抖) as she opened her hand. The coins, polished by her tiny palms,
gleamed under the lamplight. Elena’s eyes softened, and a gentle smile spread across her face. She reached out,
cupping Ana’s face in her flour-dusted hands. “Sweetheart, this is the most precious gift I’ve ever received. But let’s
think of something else we can do together to celebrate my birthday.” Ana looked at her mother, confusion and
disappointment in her eyes, but she nodded slowly.
“Oh, could you buy some multi-color threads for me?” Elena asked. Ana’s eyes lit up with curiosity. The next
day, Ana rushed to the store with the coins and bought the threads. Elena then taught Ana how to embroider. Together,
they worked on the grey dress, adding colorful patterns of flowers and stars. When it was done, the dress was a
beautiful piece of art. Elena put it on, and Ana saw that her mother looked more radiant than ever. This simple act of
creating together had made the birthday truly special.
Passage 4
【答案】参考范文：
At once, I ran to a shop nearby. Holding the money in my hand, I asked the shopkeeper if I could buy a pair of
warm gloves for my mom as a birthday gift. The shopkeeper looked at me and smiled kindly. He asked me to wait
for a moment. Soon, he came back with a pair of soft pink gloves. “These are just ten dollars,” he said gently. I could
not believe my ears. I gave him the money and took the gloves carefully, with great joy.
On my way home, I held the gloves close to my chest. I kept thinking about Mom’s happy face. I thanked the
kind shopkeeper and Mrs. Green again and again in my mind. Their kindness made me feel that the world was full
of love. When I handed the gloves to Mom, she looked very surprised and happy. She put them on at once and hugged
me tightly. At that moment, I truly understood that love is not measured by how much money you spend, but by how
much care and warmth you give.
主题03 善良助人篇
Passage 1
【答案】范文
Building the ramp wasn’t easy. None of them had built anything before, but their determination to help Mr.
Wagner kept them going. They watched tutorial videos online, asked their parents how to measure, cut, and fasten
wood, and borrowed tools from neighbors. Under the hot sun, they worked with sweat rolling down their faces,
learning through trial and error. They accepted Mr. Wagner’s orange and grape juice but refused his suggestion to
take a break. Every afternoon, the sounds of tools mixed with laughter, turning their street into the liveliest place.
After a full week of hard work, the ramp was finally ready. Mr. Wagner came to the door in his wheelchair.
Slowly, he rolled onto the ramp and down into the yard. For the first time in weeks, he was outside again. He looked at
the kids, his eyes shining. He told them he had been feeling lonely, but now, thanks to the ramp, he felt part of the
world again. That summer, the ramp became more than just a way for Mr. Wagner to get outside. It became a symbol of
kindness, connection, and community.
Passage 2
【答案】 As soon as the dawn broke, Lucy continued to search the dark forest. She called out Patrick’s name
loudly, her voice trembling with worry and love. She stepped carefully over branches and rocks, following the small
path she had discovered the night before. Tired and hungry as she was, she never stopped moving. The hope of finding
her son kept her going. Suddenly, a thin wisp of smoke rising in the distance caught her attention. Her eyes lit up
immediately, and she rushed towards it as fast as she could.
The smoke was coming from an old cabin by a still lake. She pushed the door open gently and found Patrick
sitting quietly by a small fire, safe and unhurt. He had found the cabin and stayed there to keep warm. The moment
Patrick saw Lucy, he jumped up and ran into her arms, crying happily. Lucy held him tightly, tears of relief running
down her face. She gave him food and water, and then they walked back to the campsite together. Everyone was
overjoyed to see Patrick return safely.
Passage 3
【答案】 I didn’t want to be rude to a new friend, so I reluctantly dragged out my lunch bag and unzipped
it. The moment I partially lifted the lid, I could practically taste the garlic and soy sauce. I expected them to turn
away — and turn me away. What I did not expect was for Katrina to instantly grab a small piece of tofu and eat it
ravenously. And I most certainly did not expect for her to encourage the rest of the table to try my lunch.
It took me a second to recognize that my homemade Chinese food was not being rejected. In fact, it had become a
source of personal pride. My new friends were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to
prepare a cooked meal for me. They were enchanted by the fact that tofu could actually taste good. While I didn’t get
to eat any of my mom’s pan-fried tofu, I was full of pride and gratitude. When I arrived home, my mom noticed that
the container was empty, she hesitated before asking, “How was the food?” I paused a moment before I replied,
“Perfect.”
Passage 4
【答案】范文
Slowly, the garden started to take shape. The muddy puddles disappeared, replaced by neat, small flower beds.
The most eye-catching were the sunflowers. The empty ground was now covered with soft and green grass. We built a
simple winding path using bricks and stones we found. The thrown-away furniture was gone, and in its place stood
the new wooden bench and a small fence painted white. A young tree was planted in one corner, its new leaves gently
swaying in the wind. Birds and butterflies started visiting, adding life and movement. The once dirty place was now
full of life and beauty.
The garden quickly became a favorite spot for our community. Every afternoon after school, children would run
straight here to play. They loved chasing each other along the path, watching butterflies, or simply lying on the grass
to look at the clouds. Parents sat on the bench or on mats, talking and laughing, while their children played nearby.
Mr. Wilson was almost always there, patiently watering the plants. The garden was no longer just a place with plants; it
became the one where people shared stories and built friendships. It taught us all that by working together, we could
create not just a beautiful garden, but a warmer and closer community.
主题01 成长励志篇
Passage 1
【答案】
“New plan. We can no longer wait for them to come to us,” I declared. I grabbed a couple of our items and
stepped straight into the crowd. My voice was tense but firm as I approached the students, introducing our crafts
proudly — candles in recycled jars, woven bracelets, and painted wooden keychains. Attracted by our unique
handmade items and eco-friendly ideas, they followed me to our booth. Maya, Jake and I smiled and served every
customer warmly. Students asked about the herbs in the candles and the story behind each keychain and bracelet,
their curiosity turning into purchases.
After the final bell rang, we counted our earnings eagerly. Jake’s hands trembled as he counted the bills. “Three
hundred and twenty-six dollars,” he announced. We hugged with laughter and joyful tears mixed. Three hundred for
the loan, and twenty-six left to share. We realized the real reward was what we had discovered about ourselves. We
had started the day as three nervous students with handmade crafts, but ended it as a team who learned that courage,
not products, made our business succeed.
Passage 2
【答案】参考范文
Li Yue realized that the key solution was getting everyone involved. Without hesitation, she turned to Emma for
help, whose eyes lit up at once. They announced to the whole class that volunteers were needed. To their delight, all
the students raised their hands eagerly, their faces shining with enthusiasm. Greatly relieved, Li Yue wasted no time
dividing them into two groups: one led by her to craft lanterns with riddles attached, and the other led by Emma to
prepare the ingredients and tools for making yuanxiao. With clear roles assigned, everyone immediately set to work.
On Tuesday afternoon, everything was ready.
The party took place as scheduled in the school cafeteria. Red lanterns decorated the space, creating a festive
atmosphere. Guided by Li Yue, the whole grade made yuanxiao together. Soon, bowls of steaming yuanxiao were
served, and everyone savored their handmade delicacies. The highlight was the riddle-guessing activity, which filled
the cafeteria with bursts of laughter and cheers. To deepen everyone’s understanding, Li Yue introduced each tradition
in detail and even taught the students to say some Chinese blessings. Bathed in the warm lantern light, the students
shared not just food and fun, but a profound sense of connection, making it an unforgettable night for everyone.
Passage 3
【答案】One possible version:
Then I remembered Virginia DeView and the seed she had planted in my mind. Her belief in my potential
echoed loudly, silencing my doubts. Realizing that ignoring my passion was like betraying myself, I bravely
switched my major to journalism, despite my family’s concerns. The transition was tough, yet every article felt like
coming home. I poured my heart into uncovering truths, just as that reporter had inspired me. My grades soared,
not from force, but because I finally loved what I was learning. The confusion vanished, replaced by a clear sense
of purpose.
Having graduated with honors in journalism, I went to thank her in person. Walking into her classroom, I
found her still teaching with that same demanding brilliance. When I shared my journey, her eyes lit up with pride.
“I knew you had it in you,” she said softly. She explained her tough exterior was just a tool to unlock hidden
potential. Holding her hand, I thanked her for seeing the writer in a confused teenager. That day, the circle was
complete; the teacher who ignited my dream now witnessed its fulfillment.
Passage 4
【答案】
The road to the competition was filled with obstacles. But the three partners encouraged each other to keep
going. When Leo felt down because of the high pressure, Jake and Mia comforted him with the belief that they were
sure to succeed. And they made every effort to do their part. For example, Jake spent a whole night figuring out the
guidelines. It was the spirit of never giving up that pushed them to be a good team.
When the final scores were announced, the room went quiet. The moment they heard their team’s name, they
jumped into the air with excitement. Their hard work eventually paid off. They screamed and hugged each other
tightly. Their teacher Mrs. Henderson walked towards them, wearing a shining smile. “Congratulations! You make
our school proud!” she said. “Thank you, Mrs. Henderson,” said Jake, still out of breath. “You believed in us and
kept encouraging us. Thank you for everything you’ve done.”
主题02 亲情友情篇
Passage 1
【答案】【参考范文】
Watching them talk happily with Hamish, Nora felt unnoticed, remembered only for workbooks. She stood by
the window, feeling a sense of disappointment. She’d spent hours picking out suitable workbooks, hoping to help
them keep up with schoolwork, yet it seemed her efforts were overshadowed by the fun of swings, kites, and ukulele.
However, just as she turned to leave, Millie caught her hand, holding a colorful drawing. “Grandma, we made this
for you!” It described a scene with Grandma handing out books, Grandpa fixing the ukulele, and the kids laughing
nearby. Leo nodded, adding, “Yeah, your cookies were the best!”
Nora smiled and realized she and Hamish had different roles to play. Hamish brought excitement and adventure,
letting the kids enjoy their childhood freely, while she provided gentle guidance and care, ensuring they didn’t ignore
their studies. Their roles matched each other really well. She looked at Hamish, who gave her a warm smile, and
hugged the children tightly. “I’m so glad you enjoyed your stay,” she said softly. At that moment, Nora understood
that love wasn’t about being the favorite—it was about working together to give the grandchildren the best of both
worlds: fun memories and steady progress.
Passage 2
【答案】 Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car. The wind was still
howling, and broken pieces flew through the air like deadly missiles. With his parents trapped and moaning in pain,
Branson knew he had to act fast. Taking a deep breath, he started running toward the nearest house. His legs felt
weak, and the roar of the tornado seemed to follow him, but he didn’t stop. He remembered the neighbor’s storm
shelter was nearby, and he ran as fast as he could, screaming for help. Finally, he reached the door and pounded on it
with all his strength. The door opened and a shocked couple asked what happened.
When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action. The neighbors grabbed a first-aid
kit and rushed out, calling 911 on the way. Together, they hurried to the destroyed truck, where Wayne and Lindy
were still trapped. The man forced the door open and the woman helped to wrap the wounds. Branson held his
mother’s hand, whispering, “You’re going to be okay.” Within minutes, emergency services arrived. In time, his
parents were rushed to the hospital and eventually made a full recovery. Though he was only nine years old, Branson
had shown bravery and quick thinking beyond his years, proving that heroes can come in any size.
Passage 3
【答案】Possible version:
As I listened to Grandpa’s words, my cheeks burned with shame. I hung my head, recalling how I had thrown
the old pen back in the box and called it useless. I reached out to pick up the pen again, holding it gently as if it were a
rare treasure. Running my fingers over the faded body and rough cap, I seemed to see great-grandfather’s hands
holding the pen in the cold, and his figure bending over the desk under the lamp. I whispered an apology to Grandpa,
realizing that true value lies not in how expensive something is, but in the memories and spirit it holds. From that
day on, I began my own collection journey, no longer chasing expensive things but cherishing the warmth and
affection around me.
Months later, I showed my priceless collection box to Grandpa. Inside were my mom’s hair from when she
brushed it for me, a note from my friend encouraging me after a failed exam, and a leaf I picked on the day Grandpa
told me his story. I told him every story behind these small things, my voice filled with warmth. Grandpa smiled
softly, touching each item carefully. He patted me on the shoulder and said, “You’ve truly understood what collection
means—it’s about cherishing the warmth around you and passing down love.” Tears welled up in my eyes, as I knew I
had grown into a person who could see the beauty in ordinary moments.
主题03 善良助人篇
Passage 1
【答案】
Jamie was determined to find the owner anyway. He refused to give up the diary that carried so much love and
hope. He took photos of the diary and the old address, then posted them on local social media groups, telling the
moving story behind it. Days later, he received a message from an elderly woman named Nancy, who said the diary
belonged to her late mother Eleanor. Her voice trembled as she explained that her family had moved away years ago
and the coat was donated by accident. They immediately arranged to meet.
Jamie and Nancy met at a café as agreed. When Jamie handed her the diary, Nancy’s eyes were filled with tears at
once. She gently touched the familiar handwriting, recalling her mother’s deep love and endless waiting for her father.
She thanked Jamie sincerely for bringing back such a precious treasure. For Jamie, this experience taught him that
every old item not only holds a story but also connects lost love and memories, making this rainy Saturday unusually
meaningful.
Passage 2
【答案】
I walked over and the man noticed me. “Excuse me,” I said, “I lost my passport. Have you seen it?” He smiled with
relief. “Is this yours?” he asked, showing me a blue passport. He explained that he was going to get a coffee when he
saw the passport on the seat. He added that he had asked the people nearby, but it did not belong to any of them, so
he waited there, hoping the owner would return. My heart jumped. I checked the passport and confirmed it was
mine. I thanked him sincerely, telling him he had saved me. To express my gratitude, I decided to buy him a coffee.
I quickly went to a nearby café and bought the man a coffee. When I returned, we talked for a minute. He was
in a hurry for his flight too. After saying goodbye, I rushed back to the restaurant. Mark and John were worried. “Did
you find it?” Mark asked. I held up my passport with a big smile. “Yes! A kind man found it and waited for me.” We
gathered our things and went straight to our gate. As we boarded the flight home, I held my passport tightly. The rest
of the journey felt safe and easy, thanks to the help of a stranger.
Passage 3
【答案】
“We’re doing the right thing. Maybe we’ll even get a greater reward,” Kiko said. The thought of a greater reward
brought a smile to the friends’ faces and helped them make up their minds. The next morning, they were at Kiko’s
house bright and early, eager to get to the museum to find out where the treasure had come from and get their reward. It
turned out that those coins did come from Peg Leg’s ship. Thanks to Kiko and his friends, the scientists eventually
found the lost ship based on their discovery.
Tourists from around the world came for an opportunity to see the lost ship and the treasure. With all of the
tourists, local companies around the island earned a lot of money, which was then used to help the villagers repair
their homes, start new businesses, and make improvements in the neighborhood. As a result, the entire village
benefited from Kiko and his friends’ choice. Kiko and his friends had no regrets about giving all the treasure to the
museum because they did gain a greater reward in the end.
