【好题汇编】2024 年高考英语三模试题分类汇编
专题08 短文改错
1．（2024 届青海省西宁市大通高三三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改
你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
School life has taught me a lot, of them I think honesty is the most important. When I was in Senior One, I
caught cheating in the final exam. I feel everyone in my class looked down upon myself. I was very ashamed that I
decided to run away from school. Upon know this, my teacher paid a visit to my home in person but had a long chat
with me. He made me to come to know that being brave enough to recognize one’s mistakes and overcome them
are a basic quality for a man. Since then, I’ve made up my mind to be honesty and work hard.
2．（2024 届宁夏银川一中高三三模试卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分
I fell in love flower gardening after a school assignment. To me, it is not only relaxing but also educationally.
I had experienced lots of successes and failures in growing flowers, making me realize failure is a normal part of
life that lead to improvement and success. When I’m in low spirit, I often go to see how is going on in the pots.
Watch things grow makes me feel at peace. He also reminds me that life is not a race but the most precious moment
is now. Besides, I usually listen to books while are tending to my plants, killing two birds with one stone.
3．（2024 届宁夏回族自治区石嘴山市大武口区三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Journalism has a good development future. Attracting by it, I’m writing to apply for a position as a journalist.
First of all, I’m hard-working but ambitious, which can true help me do a good job. In addition to, I have
accumulated some relevant experience, which can not only broadens my vision but also improve my ability.
Therefore, that I want to stress at last is that I am skilled in photographing. So at your convenient I hope you can
take a look at your personal resume. I would appreciate very much if you could take my application into account.
Y
ours,
L
i Hua
4．（2024 届四川省成都石室中学高三诊模拟试卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你
修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(
)
﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I went to an amazing Chinese art festival. There were different stands artists could demonstrate
their skills and teach the visitors! It was definite an exciting experience. What caught our attention first was a 18th-
century qinghua bowl. It vividly illustrated two dragons’ playing with a ball, which were typical of Chinese
porcelain. Then I try some paper cutting, namely, making images out of papers. It was difficult, but a lot of fun!
With the help of an artist, and I managed to make one in the shape of a fish. Another man seating next to him
showed me how seal cutting worked. He made one for me with my name on Chinese — pretty awesome!
5．（2024 届四川省凉山州高三第三次诊断性试题）下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、
删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每句不超过两个错误；（2）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
As science fiction offers surprise and exciting, I had a strong urge to read The Three- Body Problem written
by Liu Cixin. The book, first releasing as a series in Science Fiction World magazine in 2006 in China, turned out
to be a hit.
The book described the story of Ye Wenjie and Wang Miao, two scientists on the not distant future. Ye joins a
secret project to contact aliens. Meanwhile, Wang registers or logs on to an online video game called “Three Body”.
It has influenced minds deeply that people are worried about the possibility of the earth being invaded by an
advanced civilization.
Curiously, I was referred to an online forum and concluded that the concern is necessary, at least for now.
Which is declared by scientists, the chance of life beyond the earth develops into superior intelligence is quite slim.
6．（2024 届内蒙古名校联盟高三联合质量检测（三）试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单
词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Last Friday, our English class holds a debate on online shopping. Here are not the main points. The
supporters argued that online shopping has advantages saving time and money, and having a wide variety of
available products. It is also convenient, allow people to shop anytime and have items delivered to they doorsteps.
The opponents, however, believed that online shopping poses risks, such as frauds (伪劣品) but a lack of security.
They also mentioned the problem of impulse (冲动) purchase and the inability to physical check products before
purchase.
In my view, both sides made good point. Online shopping, that offers convenience, must be giving
prevention to fight against frauds.
7．（2024 届四川省眉山市高中高三第三次诊断试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增
加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
I am writing to express my thank for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was the
unforgettable experience for me. Through visit American universities, I got a good knowledge of them in some
way, which broadened my horizon and introduce me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer
camp, I made some American friends, that gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposing to
English language, my English listening and speaking skills great got improved. Would you like join the summer
camp in China in next summer? I'll be your best guide and you can experience tradition Chinese culture. I'm
looking forward to your coming.
8．（四川省内江市2023-2024 学年高三三模英语试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增
加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
When I was in middle school, I thought math very difficultly. My parents didn’t receive a good education.
They couldn’t to help me with my math. I didn’t know that I could do to change the situation. As result, I did worse
and worse, almost lose interest in math. Even my math teacher was disappointed. So everything changed after I
made friends to a girl, who was kind and hard-working. We became friends because we all loved reading classic
novels. However, soon Lisa finds I was bad at math. She decided to give me a hand. Due to her help, I did better
than before and made much progresses in math.
9．（2024 届陕西省安康市高三模拟预测试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改
你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、
删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Enlarge the vocabulary, as we know, is must for us to learn English well. Students told me that if they knew
the meanings of more words, he could do better in the exams. But how is the way to memorize new words
effective? Doing more reading and learn the words in context will work. The more you read, the larger number of
word you will know. After reading, you’d better to retell what you’ve read in your own way, where will help you
use the words flexibly. If you have your vocabulary enlarged, you are more likely to make yourself became a better
learner.
10．（2024 届陕西省商洛市高三三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my parents and me went to the countryside, which we had a great time together. To make it a
green journey, we all agree to cycle there. With everything ready, we set out. Upon arrival, we got down to make
preparations. Everyone was enjoying the pleasant but relaxing family atmosphere in open air. After eating some
snacks, my father and I couldn’t wait to fly kites. We watched our kites dancing highly in the sky, laughing happily
together. Mum was so excited that she cheered for us. Dusk fell down before we realized it. Seating together at
ease, we quietly watched the golden sun setting, wishing to have more joyful weekend like this.
11．（2024 届陕西省百师联盟三模英语试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你
同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I flew back to New York from a spring break. My flight landed lately in the evening. I decided to taking an
airport bus to the downtown area so that I could find a faster and cheap taxi to get home. It turned out that a bus
was full of passengers but I was chatting with a few of them. I told that it was unsafe to be waiting for in the street
to catch a taxi at midnight. One of the woman in the bus said that her car was parked near the station. So she
offered me a ride to my home, drop me safely and did not accept a penny in return. I was so thankful for his
kindness.
12．（四川省遂宁市射洪市2023-2024 学年三模联考试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词
的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
Our school was found in 1929. Since then, it has brought up a great number of outstanding talents, included
some famous revolutionaries, scientists and artists. There are many excellent students studying here now, among
them are winners in math, physics and chemistry contest. In recently years, great changes have taken place. A new
library has been built, which keeps nearly one hundred and twenty thousand of books and many kinds of
magazines. The new stadium to be completed will make this possible for the students to go in for sports whether or
not it rains. What is important is how we have many experienced teachers who are always willing for give us a
hand. The teachers have made and are still making great contributions to development of our school. We all like our
school.
13．（2024 届宁夏石嘴山市第三中学高三三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你
修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修
改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I went to a museum nearby and had a good time here. I got up early in the morning. It was sunny,
so I decide to bicycle to make a greener travel. After about an hour’s ride, I finally arrived at entrance. I had my
ticket check quickly and walked into the museum, following a group of visitors with a tour guide, which was really
knowledgeable. She gave each exhibit to a vivid description. What impressed me most were the development of
Chinese characters. This visit not only increased our interest in Chinese history, and broadened my horizons.
14．（2024 届陕西省安康市安康市高新中学高三模拟预测试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )
∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
The other day, our class watch a short movie about noise pollution. The film shows us that long-term
exposure noise pollution can cause 12,000 early deaths and 48,000 new case of heart disease annually in Europe
alone. Never did I thought loud noises do so many damage to our health. Now, I always warn me to be considerate
of the comfort of those nearby when used my electronic devices. I never yell at the top of my voice in the public. I
often remind my parents to grow more plants in our yard, what absorb sound energy but clean the air as well.
