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专题 08 短文改错
短文改错口诀
动词形,名词数,
还要注意形和副;
非谓语,细辨别,习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析,逻辑错误须关注;冠词连词常光顾。
口诀详解:
一、动词形:
即动词的形式,主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。动词形常见错误
有:
1) 一般过去时与一般 现在时错用。
2)第三人称单数形式错用。 第三人称单数:Is/was
2) and,but,or,also 前后动词时态不一致。(具有对称性)
4) 主谓不一致。
5) 缺少谓语动词 1.主谓宾结构
缺少be动词2、主系表结构(am/is/are/was/were)
6) 主动语态与被动语态错用 wash-is washed
7)Used to 的运用错误
例如: My favorite sport are football. (is)
Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are)
二、名词数:
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。
解题方法:
1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份.
2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
例如:
…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects)
三、还要注意形和副
注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。命题特点:主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。
解题方法
1) 根据adj或adv的基本用法确定错误;
2) 修饰系动词(am/is/are/was/were)或名词用形容词;修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
例如:I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful)
Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately)
四、非谓语,细辨别
这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词,动名词和不定式错误。
命题特点及解题方法:1)不定式to do;
2)动名词doing作主语、宾语;
3)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时);
4)现在分词和过去分词的区别等
例如:…in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. (interested)
Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also … (playing)
My parents love me… and will do all they can ∧ make sure… (to)
五、习惯用法要记住
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
例如:
It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and… (of)
We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves. (of)
六、句子成分多分析:不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构
和成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。
例如:
They ∧eager to know everything about China and… (were)
I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (which)
七、逻辑错误须关注:与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误,如上下文数的一致;或
者代词的张冠李戴。
例如:
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (their)
… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. (everyone)
七、冠词连词常光顾常考的错误形式有:连词but, and, or和so的用法错误,以及冠词的用法错误等。
四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改(不是不改,而是按错词或少词来改)。
④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词,在句中不可能用错
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you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates
because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for
help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to
others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we
trust mostly.
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Family life may well distract you from your studies, and there will also be the questions of that you should pay your
relatives. No matter how caring they may be and no matter how much they want you with they, they won’t expect
to keep you for nothing. Pay too much or too little can be easily lead you to bad feeling. But setting the right
amount can be tricky and embarrassed. Some people may distrust arrangement of relatives. Believe it or not, there’s
a strange idea that it costs nothing either for you or for relatives, if you’re living with them. Lodging with strangers
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snowy field. Dewey was such excited to run around in the snow that he couldn’t help ran right through the photo,
but ended up helping me create something fantastic. I decided the photo couldn’t be keeping to me alone because of
it was just too great. I posted it online to see that anyone else would find it just as wonderfully—and of course, they
absolutely did.
Text 2(2023·四川·校联考一模)
Early this morning, I was riding my bike to my school while suddenly it hit a parked car. Frightening and
guilty, I saw a scratch (划痕) on the car. At first, I thought about run away. But when I remembered the quality of
honesty taught by my parents, I decided to do nothing better. However, I wrote a note with my apology and
personal informations. Then I placed it on the window of the car and leave for my school. Surprising, in the
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Text 3(2023·江西上饶·统考一模)
I always had a dream to be a fluency speaker. However, such shy was I that I didn’t dare to utter a word in
public. That was just beyond my wildest imagination was that fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my
dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told me I was given an unique opportunity to
take part in an English speaking competition. Hearing this, I could hardly hide my excitement, hoped to give it a
shot immediately. When making preparation for the competition, I wrote my speech heart and soul. After finishing
the composition, I discussed it with my teacher and got much advice on how to improve it. Under the help of my
English teacher, I didn’t lose my heart and made great progress. Only then I realize that it was great beneficial to
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Text 4(2023·河南·校联考一模)
Our school holds a special traditional culture exhibition hall on last month. Yesterday, I was lucky enough visit
the exhibition hall, where is on the fourth floor in the laboratory building. There are varieties of objects represented
Chinese traditional culture displayed in the hall, such as Chinese instruments, the “scholar’s four jewels” but
different kinds of Chinese drawings. To be honest, I am amazed at the richnesses of Chinese traditional culture. I
am pride of being a Chinese. I strong recommend you to pay a visit to the exhibition hall. I am sure they will
benefit a lot from it.
Text 5(2023·四川成都·校联考二模)It was 7:15 in the morning of January 8th, 2023. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while a
passer-by of average build came out of the park on the other side of the road. Just at that moment, I see a yellow car
driving up the Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road.
Unlucky, the car hit the man when she was crossing the road. And he knocked down with a painful cry.
However, instead of stopping, the car with the plate number AC864 drove off even fast. Seeing this, about two
minute later, I stopped a passing car and who rushed the man to the nearest hospital.
Text 6(2023·甘肃酒泉·统考一模)
We are pleased inform you that the English speech competition for high school students is to be held in our
school from 8:30 am to 11:30 am next month.
Twenty high school students from our city were going to gather in our school and deliver their speeches,
which topic is Future Life. Some English professor from the USA and China will be invited to be judges but
evaluate the performances of the competitors.
Welcome to attend this competition if you have any interesting in English speeches and this topic. It would be
the valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellently English learners. Don’t miss for taking
part in them.
Text 7(2023·黑龙江大庆·统考一模)
Last Sunday was the Double Ninth Festival and it was a fine and warmly day. All the class were very pleasing
because we went to a nearby nursing home to celebrate the festival with the elderly people lived there. As soon as
we got there, we warmly welcomed. Then we helped do some of cleaning. Some students swept the floor, and the
others wiped the windows. The elderly were watching us and were very happy with their work. We didn’t stop
working that all the rooms were clean and tidy. At around 1 pm, we went to the sports room which we sang and
danced for the senior citizens. We gave them many gift before we left for home. How a wonderful time we had!
Text 8(2023·江西·校联考模拟预测)
If you happen to be a heavy sleeper, that always wakes up about 20 minutes late for lectures, a special app
calling Sleep If U Can is for you. Sleep If U Can is alarm app for students. When the alarm rings, some small task
should be completed to turn the alarm on. For example, you needed to take a photo of some specifically things or
shake the phone a number of times. In addition to, Sleep If U Can will also give yourself the latest weather
condition. You can decide whether to take an umbrella with you before left home.
Text 9(2023·陕西咸阳·统考一模)
On a recent weekend, my family had so many fun in Huangshandian village. The village, attracted more than400, 000 tourist arrivals on average every year, becomes a hot spot thanks to it’s country lifestyle. We took a part in
adventures in the mushroom house and the outdoor pumpkin rolling classes in the morning. Then, we picked eggs,
dig up sweet potatoes and ran after chickens in the field. It was calm at night, but we set a big campfire and a group
tourists gathered round it, singing and dancing happily. My son who has never done farm work before said it was so
different from that they did in school. He told me he couldn’t wait to go here again.
Text 10(2023·贵州毕节·统考一模)
I’m fond of travelling. In my opinion, it’s very interesting explore new places and experience different
cultures. I had been to several cities both at home or abroad so far. Of all trip I’ve taken, the best one what I made
deep impression on was the trip to London two years ago. I was attracted by its remarkable architectures, especial
London Bridge. Besides, I had my English greatly improving by communicating with native English speakers
during the week-long trip. I found people there was friendly to me and willing to introduce the history of the city. In
a word, not only did I academically benefit a lot of but also I physically and mentally felt relaxing.
Text 11(2023·陕西榆林·统考一模)
I began to learn English at 10 years old, where I was still in primary school. In a fact, I was having much
trouble with English then. I wasn’t good at it until I gone to senior high school last year. One day, I went to my
English teacher office. My English teacher was rather strict, but I needed help. As she was attempting explain a
problem, I said in a low voice that I was too stupid to understanding it. To my surprise, she gentle replied, “Don’t
say that. It’s not because you are stupid but because you are not familiar to it.” I often think about what she said,
which allows myself to see things from a different angle. Now she is one of my favorite teachers. And my English
have greatly improved.
Text 12(2023·河南郑州·统考一模)
Last Saturday I took part a farm work program in the suburbs, which really impressed me. Before an activity,
our team leader told us some specific arrangements about it. Its theme was “Labor is the most glory”. Meanwhile,
he stressed the importance or value of working with our own hands. Unable to hold back my happiness, I pictured
that was to come next. On the farm, we worked hard with the farmers, picking watermelons and carried them to the
truck. While I was working, I had realized how tough it was to work in the fields in the burning sun. When I got
home, I put down my luggages, hungry and tired. Over dinner, I shared my experience with my parents excited.
Happy and proud, they all spoke highly of me.
Text 13(2023·河南安阳·统考一模)
Dear Jack,Heard that you have been addicted to Tiktok recently, I feel terrible sorry and can’t wait to write this email in
reply to your problem. Actually, this is commonly seen that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about
Tiktok. They spend plenty of time watching and sharing videos online, what makes it hard for them to focus on
study. As a result, action must taken before things get worse.
In my opinion, you’ d better try and develop a few other hobby. Besides, communicating with friends face to
face will do the trick. That’s why this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits. I do hope my
suggestions will be of greatly helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
Text 14(2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模)
To better work for the good of the community, our class organized a voluntary activity on last Saturday. We
carried out a thorough clean-up of the city square.
We set out earlier in the morning. As soon as we got there, we divided into two groups. One group picked up
all the rubbishes on the ground, such as waste paper, cigarette ends and plastic bags throwing everywhere. The
others group removed all illegal advertisements from the poles and trees, which were a tough job.
We felt tired and happy when the activity was over. How a meaningful day we had! It’s true to say that we
make the living by what we get but we make a life by what we give.
Text 15(2023·陕西·校联考一模)
Dear Tom,
I am writing to share with you one of my favorite Chinese folk dance, the peacock dance (孔雀舞) of the Dai
people, who are known as their dancing skills. It is said that about a thousand years ago, when the Dai minority
learned to dance through copying the elegant gestures of the peacock, which is a symbol of happiness. The dance
movements are usually performed in fixed order. The dance first start with a peacock flying out from its nest. But
next it wanders around the wild, cautiously search for food. Then the peacock goes to the river bank to bath in the
water and comb their feathers. In the end, the peacock spreads out the wings and flies joyful into the sky. To show a
lively peacock, dancers must use a range of hand movements and eye expressions. Their knees must be flexible,
too.
Yours,
MaryText 16(2023·江西九江·校联考二模)
While leaving a shop, I heard a conversation between a staff member and a lady, whom was looking to enter
the shop with her dog. A staff member was apologizing that the dog not permitted to enter—it wasn’t a support dog.
The lady turned to leave out. I called out to her to wait and offer to look after the dog. She was surprised, and half
joking asked if I was going to steal her dog. I told her I was a pet lover either. I then spent lovely 20 minutes get to
know Baxter while its owner took his time to do the shopping. How a wonderful experience!
Text 17(2023·广西柳州·统考二模)
To be honest, I wasn’t the fan of sports before. I used to think playing a sport would distract me from my
schoolwork. However, after read an article stressing the benefits of working out, I change my mind. Therefore, I
joined the football team of their class this year. My coach and teammates are always ready to help me. Though my
skills aren’t good enough for me compete in the real games, but I have learned a lot from the daily practice. During
the training, I have been taught to build teamwork and communicate effective with other people, that is helpful
when I encounter problem in my life. Now I’m in love for football and I will try more sports.
Text 18(2022·河南洛阳·统考三模)
While in my first year of high school, I live in the dormitory and could only go home at weekends. Therefore,
I learned to be independently. Once, I couldn’t bear the dirtiness of my shoe after playing basketball. I decided to
wash them of my own for the first time. In a fact, I even hadn’t seen my mother do the job. What should I get it
done? I borrowed a brush and some washed powder from one of my roommates, and with his help I managed to
make my shoes as clean a new pair. I was about to cheer himself when I heard him say, “Maybe you should use
more water next time. You’ve wasted too much.”
Text 19(2022·广西·统考一模)
Two week ago, it was announced that there was going to have an English speech competition. Its theme was
linked with a globe event about wildlife protection. One student from each class would be selected for a
competition. I really wanted to be involve as it was a subject I had been very interested in it. Afterwards, I searched
for a lot relevant information on the Internet. I write a speech and presented it to my class. Lucky, I was given the
opportunity. Under the guidance of my teacher, I made a wonderful speech but won first prize in the end.
Text 20(2022·广西南宁·统考三模)
Nowadays, more and more people have taken part in voluntary work, that is a sign of social progress. There
are many different kinds of voluntary activity students can participate. For instance, they can work as volunteers in
a library or a bookstore if they were fond of reading or they can go to the nursing home to help the elderly. As thesaying goes, the fragrance always stay in the hand that gives the rose. Being volunteers is of great benefit to
students, give them a sense of an achievement when they are helping others. By doing voluntary work, students
realize the importance of social work and enhance their social responsibility. Therefore, not all the voluntary
activities are suitable for students. It is to say, the activities should be safe and easily to conduct.
Text 21(2023·陕西商洛·陕西省山阳中学校考一模)
When you visit London, one of the first things you would see is Big Ben. It is the famous clock what can be heard
all over a world on the BBC.It has always been the hottest attraction for travelers to visit it in London. If the
Houses of Parliament hadn’t caught fire and burned down in 1834, the great clock would never have built. Big Ben
took its name from Sir Benjamin Hall, which was in charge of make the clock when the new Houses of Parliament
was being built. Big Ben always goes very good. People who work in Greenwich Observatory have the clock check
twice a day. So, Big Ben has seldom went wrong.
Text 22(2023·河南信阳·统考二模)
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin , was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday He started
with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there was so many
kinds of living things on the planet a long time ago, Besides, he also showed how the disappear of some species
happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach
great importance to protect the environment, which decided that we would be able to continue to live on this planet
in the future. I was deeply impressed by her speech and I think of it is important to protect our only home.
Text 23(2023·江西九江·统考一模)
Recently our class have had a debate. Its topic focuses on if it is necessary to use high technology to beautify
the Palace Museum. As for this, different students hold different opinion.
Some are in favor of the creative idea because of the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace
Museum, thus make it more attractive to visitors. Therefore, those who are against the idea thinks that this
technology will destroy the original appearance of the Palace Museum. More important, it is extremely essential to
respect the history and tradition.
From me point of view, other measures can be taken attract more visitors. And it’s our duty to provide the
complete and genuine ancient palace for the world.
Text 24(2023·江西景德镇·统考二模)
I’m Li Hua, the reporter from our school English newspaper. First, Please allows me to congratulate you with
all my heart your being awarded the most beautiful foreign teacher of our city. I’m writing to ask you that whetheryou could meet me for an interview at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon in your office.
It is very important for we students to improve the ability to communicate in English. But some of us have
great trouble speak English, that is because we are always afraid of making mistakes. Therefore, we expect that you
can give us some useful advices on how to be confident to practice oral English and learn to communicate in
English fluent.
I’d appreciate it if you could spare some time and provided us with some good tips tomorrow.
Text 25(2023·四川成都·统考一模)
I believe that mastering a foreign language is important. Therefore, it takes time and practice to become fluent
in the foreign language. I think a good approach to learning about a foreign language is studying in a setting where
only that language was spoken. This can be done by neither living in a country where the target language is spoken
or attended a school where the target language is the primary medium of instruction. When you are involved in it,
you are forced to use it constant. You can’t rely on your native language to communicate with other. This type of
exposure to a foreign language help you learn the grammar and vocabulary much faster and effectively.
Text 26(2023·新疆·统考一模)
A fitness coach, Liu Keng-hung, is becoming popular public figure on social media because more and more
Chinese people, young or old, have been turned to him for exercise advice. The trainer, that ever had more than
20,000 viewers for his teaching program before the lock downs in some Chinese cities, now has up to 33.2 million
follower. Also, the number of fans continues to grow rapid. Liu, a Taiwanese singer, run a two-hour live stream
every day to guide his fans to work out effectively. In his teaching program, Liu brings a lot of humor to his lessons
but designs his program on purpose to help those viewers keep ft during the lock downs. “Forget your annoy.
Forget your sorrow. Enjoy it! Go! Go!” said the 50-year-old trainer when teach a set of gymnastics of his own.
Most of his fans are women, calling them “Liu Keng-hung girls” and showing great perseverance to the
gymnastics.
Text 27(2023·四川内江·统考一模)
This happened when I was in junior high school. Once, my parents went see my grandparents, and I was alone
at home. I went to bed early than usual. I suddenly woke up at two on the morning. I heard a noise. I got out of bed
and went slowly downstairs. I was sure that two men was speaking very quietly in the living room. “Thief!” I
thought. Running back upstairs, I immediate called the police. I was really frightening. Fortunately, the police
arrived quickly. After open the front door, and they went into the living room. Then they came upstairs to find me.
“Don’t worry, ” they explain. “We’ve turned the TV off for you!”Text 28(2023·四川南充·统考一模)
With the development of network, distance learning is gaining more popular. People’s opinions about it varies
from one to another. In my opinion, it won’t replace with traditional learning. Firstly, it isn’t suitably for students
who prefer direct communication with teachers. What’s bad, studying online too long will do harm to students’
eyes. However, it is its flexibility in time and place which benefits teaching and learning. Also, it releases teachers
from repeat the same contents since the video or audio materials can played repeatedly. So it is a effective addition
to traditional learning.
Briefly, the combination of distance learning and traditional learning can help students realize their potential
when putting into practice.
Text 29(2023·四川凉山·统考一模)
As is know to us, the 21st century is attached to knowledge economy and a learning-type society. However, a
lecture named “lifelong education” was held at my school last Thursday.
In the lecture, a university professor introduced that lifelong learning meant and was explained what benefits it
would bring us. For example, educational input will have a profound influence on their competitiveness, especially
when we need to cope with technologically development.
I was inspired by speech. For me, the most important thing is that we can feel a sense to achievement by finish
some challenging tasks when we are learning continuously. Lifelong learning will be one of the most rewarding
pursuit if we stick to it.
Text 30(2023·四川德阳·统考一模)
Last weekend, I went to the Happy Valley with my classmates. We were divided into eight group, with 5
people in each one. It took us an hour to get here by bus. On the way to the Wild Fjord, we were very exciting to
see beautiful trees or clear water. Then we went to the Lost Maya, which was a great shock to them. It appeared as
if we had transported to the ancient times. After that, we went to Shangrila, which beauty took away our breath. At
about 12: 00, we felt hunger and had lunch in a nearby restaurant. After a rest, we go to the small Roller Coaster
and the Frog Jumps, where we had a great fun. What an unforgettable experience!
Text 31.
32.(2023·四川绵阳·统考二模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以
下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起)不计分。
It generally believed that regular exercise keeps the body firm and strong. So I usually go jog as a form of
exercise. An hour’s physical exercise every day makes me to feel healthier and more energetic. Besides, I don’t
smoke or drink wine, so do I stay up late. Instead, I keep a balance diet and went to bed early. More importantly, I
always keep an optimistic attitude from life, holding the belief what a bright future and a peaceful world are ahead
of us human beings. To sum up, both of these practices guarantee a healthily body and a happy life.
Text1
(2022全国甲卷)My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his
medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become
distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too
late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or
hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
Text 2
(2022年全国乙卷)We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the
longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise.
Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air
pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives
in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
Text 3
(2020全国II卷)Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come
China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn
kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for
summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
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(2019全国I卷)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was
in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit
me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the
net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I
started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
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(2019全国III卷)I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may
appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.
I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in
the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a
chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
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(2017全国III卷)
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also
mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school
and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important
in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and
planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy
memories of your high school days.