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名校模拟练 04 短文改错
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（2022·河南新乡·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There will be a youth traditional art competition hold in our school next Friday. The
competition will help ourselves learn Chinese traditional art and enriches our school life. I
believe that it will be attract a lot of students. Here are the details what should be known.First,
you must sign up for the competition before this Thursday. Second, you are required submit
your entry before next Friday. Please do it on time, and you will not be allowed to participate
on the competition. Last but not least, you had better make a plan to express your artwork,I
hope all students can active take part in the competition. Wish you every successes.
（2022·河南洛阳·高三阶段练习）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你
修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅
涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, my dad and I took a bus to a village. Uncle Paul, my dad friend, picked us
up or drove us to his farm. We spent the night in a guest room, listen to the frogs and water
rolling down the river nearby. Very early on the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have
breakfasts. After that, I went to help Aunt Mary feed chickens. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle
Paul I could take a horse ride, and he said yes as my father would go with him. My father andI headed slowly towards the mountains at the first. Eventually, my father was impressing to
see me ride a horse free.
（2022·四川泸州·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My son is a great Chinese speaker which has also been learning English for years, just
like me. He doesn’t make use textbooks; instead, he watches a lot of videos with English. To
help him, I have paid a foreigner English teacher online to chat with him. What we have in
common in learn a language is a huge amount of necessary input. We main learn from video
programs. When necessary, we may be involve in output. We learn shadowing, speaking,
reading, writing, pronunciations or vocabulary as needed. Generally speaking, input come
before output. The outcomes are pretty impressive or even more magical.
（2022·四川绵阳·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不
计分。
It seems that my English teacher, Miss Smith, real loves both English or teaching the
subject. I think she influence me in two important way. Firstly, she makes me interesting in
English. Now I was used to reading English books and watching English TV programs in my
spare time. Secondly, she shows me how a teacher can use the students’ own creativity help
them learn. Instead of just being a kind of audience for lessons, we take a part in the decision
on which happens in the lessons. If I ever have to teach anything in the future, I’ll copy his
method.（2022·陕西·西北工业大学附属中学高三阶段练习）文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中
最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Fatima Madrigal of California recent gave birth to a boy and a girl. However, which
surprises us most is that twins have different birth dates and even birth years.Alfredo was
born on December 31st, 2021 at 11:45 p.m. About 15 minutes late, his sister Aylin was born
on January 1st, 2022. Fatima said her family, including her partner Robert and their three
others children, were happy to welcome the new babies. The babies were supposed to come
for two weeks, but their early arrive created a rare set of birth dates and years. Aylin weighing
2.66 kilograms and her brother 2.75 kilograms at birth. The medical center where the twins
were born says there are about 120,000 twins born in every year in the U.S. However, twins
with different birthdays are rare, and the chance of twins being born in different years is about
one in two millions.
（2022·河南·三门峡市实验高中高三阶段练习）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏洞符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分。
Many people say I looked like my sister Wei Li because all of us have brown eyes and
dark hair. However, with actual fact, we are quite different in character. She likes hanging
around with her friends, when I prefer staying at home alone. He always gets up late and do
not do her lessons. As for me, I am always full of energy and I enjoy finish all my homework
by myself. At school, our teachers say that I’m intelligent than her. Anyhow, in spite of the
difference between us, but we love each other very much.
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修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ﹨ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Richard is our foreign teacher, whom is from England. He has a interesting way to make
his classes attractive and lively. For example, in last Friday, when he explained the meaning
of “crawl” to us, he did not just tell us their definition from the dictionary. Instead, he lay on
his stomach and move forward on his hands and knee slowly. We watched him with interest,
laughed loudly. Thus the concept of the word rooted in our mind. Richard can speak some
Chinese, and his pronunciation is not well. He often asks us to correct his mistakes. Have you
heard of a teacher who learn from student? Richard does!
（2022·江西景德镇·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你
同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival, fallen on the Autumnal Equinox every year, is a
festival to express Chinese farmers’ good wishes for a better life and in the beauty of the
countryside. On September 24th, I, together with a friend of me, was very lucky to attend the
five Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival held in Gaoling, Fuliang. Not only we see many
agricultural exhibits there, and we also enjoyed a variety of wonderful performances.
However, what impressed me most were some agricultural products made of ceramics, which
colors and carvings were vivid, even if they were real. It was really fascinating and I full
enjoyed myself. Additionally, I witnessed the significant develop in rural areas in Jiangxi.
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处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Li Chen-was born into an ordinarily family, but he was raising to be a
hardworking and warm-hearted youth. During the fight against COVID-19, he become a
volunteer passing on disease prevention knowledges to the community and helping buy food.
Li Chen’s communication skills are excellent, and so is his computer and organizational
skills. For these reasons, he is in the charge of the student union’s website, that is a very
demanding role. However, Li Chen is capable of handle a number of tasks at ease, rm so
happy to have such an outstanding friend who inspires me be a better self.
（2022·江西省丰城中学模拟预测）
The other day, I discover I couldn’t move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a
flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I try acupuncture (针灸).
So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across
my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a
acute pain. Two weeks went by after I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month
for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how
magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out
to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health
to other .
（2022·陕西西安·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Learning to ride a bike is so a memorable thing that I not only master it but alsounderstand the love of my father’s. When I was a kid, I envied the friends who could ride a
adult bike. Considering the distance of her home to school after I attended junior school, my
father decided to teach me ride bikes during the summer vacation. At first, my father told me
the key point to ride a bike, and hold me to make the bike firmly and then I rode it. Though I
was afraid, I felt safely with my father around me. A few hours later, I could ride it under my
father’s help. I was so happy, but my father was covering with sweat. I never fell off the bike
under his protection. Watching my sweating father, I was too moved to tears.
（2022·河南·南阳中学三模）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改
你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及
一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a much younger brother who is a two-years old boy. Last week, my mother was
busy clean the house and asked me to take care of her. I agreed without the second thought,
because I assumed it would be very easy, but later it was turned out quite difficult. My brother
was causing trouble all the time. As he was too young to left alone, I needed to focus my
attention to him constantly. Once he was out of sight, something terribly might happen the
next moment. While my mother finished, I felt relieved. Now I understand being a mother of
two is not easy work as I thought.
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你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误
仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was staying in a small village in Turkey. The countryside around the village is very
beautiful so I decided to go for a walk. I had been walking for about a hour and a half whilesuddenly I slipped and fell down a riverbank. I hurted my ankle and I couldn’t stand up. I
didn’t know how I could get back the village. I hadn’t told anyone where I was going, but no
one would know where to look for me when they realized I was missed. I began to worry that
I might have to stay there all night. I had no water or food and no warm clothes. I was very
frighten. Lucky, a couple of hours later, a young boy came past on a horse. He lifted me onto
the animal and took me back to the village.
（2022·河南·济源市基础教育教学研究室三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写
出修改后的词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, I was filled with sadness after losing my grandpa. I awake early on the new
year's morning but yet couldn't go back to sleep. Then I got up and sleepy went to the drawer
where I used to store my boxed card. A tape was in the drawer! I had no idea that was on it.
So I put it on the player and soon heard my grandpa's voice say, “My dear Kyle! Your gifts
are already preparing.” His words on the tape were such heartfelt that I knew I could have
smile in my heart that morning.
（2022·陕西·宝鸡市渭滨区教研室模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错每句中最多有两处。每处
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentleman, Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at
No. 3 Senior High School. Firstly of all, I’d like to congratulate all the students who are here
today. I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school. You
were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge. And yes, some of you were a little difficultto deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future. I
hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you — your
parents, your teachers, your classmate and your friends. Please consider how they’ve done for
you and what they mean for you. Lastly, the end of junior high school is the beginning of a
new life. You’ll make mistake along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and
never give up. But along with difficulties, there will also be many excited things wait for you.
Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things, and you have the ability to
make your own choices. Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions.
Although you have to go your separate ways now, but I hope that in a few years’ time, you’ll
come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey, you shouldn’t forget where you came from. The
future is your. Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
（2022·安徽黄山·二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning, everyone. It is my honor to stand here and share with something about
traveling. Which I’d like to convey is that to travel is also to learn. Take my journey to Xi’an
for example. Previously, I do learn something about the city from books and TV programs.
Therefore, I didn’t know what wonderful it was until I was there in person. When traveling,
we can feel the surrounding with our own eyes, noses and so on, thus broaden our horizons.
The picture took on the Great Wall is good reminder of my happy days during my stay in
Xi’an. So everyone, seize every chance or you will start an amazing journey to learn.
