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专题14 短文改错（真题练）
2022全国乙卷
We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and
cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a
bicycle, you don't use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how
cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there
were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
2022全国甲卷
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments
was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was
unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was
too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations.
With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
2021全国一卷
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard
and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some
housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more
time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form
of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the
topic!
2020全国一卷
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be
easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I
broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off
the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan
together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had
wished.2019全国一卷
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in
primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but
almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising,
the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a
talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good
player now.
2018全国一卷
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change
there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last
winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small
pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily
that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but
he agreed.
2017全国一卷
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first
day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my
mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”
“Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few
minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle
on the road.
2016全国一卷
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in
our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells
me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using
for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that
our business will grow steady.2015全国一卷
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I
miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development
of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has
already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are
dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
2014全国一卷
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣
女果）in our back garden. Since then --- for all these year --- we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where
they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There
are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same
place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully
tomatoes at no cost!
2013全国一卷
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four
when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black
toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was
strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework
with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
2012全国一卷
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I
was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got
angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was
happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.” My
punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude
changed from then on.2021全国二卷
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are：Who will you go in times
of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the
same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little
choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept
very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
2020全国二卷
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung
fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was
seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.
Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with
yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
2019全国二卷
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform
looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher
too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two
reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after
seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
2018全国二卷
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all
sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching
them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I
unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high
school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
2017全国二卷
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a
half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that ison the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for
some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they
will invite their students pick the vegetables!
2016全国二卷
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can
chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend
money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and
gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I
thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
2015全国二卷
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a
toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at
the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and
begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony
saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised
her that this would never happen again.
2014全国二卷
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the
afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities.
For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom
buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and
helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
2013全国二卷
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have
tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at
night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there
was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
2012全国二卷
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I
was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got
angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was
happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.” My
punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude
changed from then on.
2020全国三卷
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are
in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of
egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if
we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided
by Mom with appreciation.
2019全国三卷
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it
required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe
have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical
environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes
in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
2018全国三卷
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called
upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others
were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger
group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and
that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well.” Immediate, I raised my hand.[来2017全国三卷
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also
mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school
and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important
in my life at that time; car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and
planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy
memories of your high school days.
2016全国三卷
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in
my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t
seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t
understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.
Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to
whenever need help.
