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读后续写:生活类 20 篇(亲情、友情等)
第1篇 圣诞节礼物.......................................................................................2
第2篇 特别的钢琴曲....................................................................................4
第3篇 与妈妈和解.......................................................................................6
第4篇 一把小提琴.......................................................................................9
第5篇 特殊的面试......................................................................................11
第6篇 一个玩具娃娃..................................................................................14
第7篇 姐弟重逢.........................................................................................17
第8篇 爸爸的梳子......................................................................................20
第9篇 祖母的回忆......................................................................................23
第10篇 一只加拿大鹅................................................................................26
第11篇 “我”被隔离了............................................................................28
第12篇 “我不是小偷”............................................................................31
第13篇 感恩的心.......................................................................................34
第14篇 礼物与友谊....................................................................................37
第15篇 团聚的一家....................................................................................39
第16篇 失而复得的狗................................................................................41
第17篇 忠诚的狗.......................................................................................43
第18篇 拯救口渴的鹿................................................................................45
第19篇 家庭最重要....................................................................................47
第20篇 一辈子的朋友................................................................................49第 1 篇 圣诞节礼物
Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never
got back home for Christmas . My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues
around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my
colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears . But this Christmas was
different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family
on Christmas Eve.
When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face.
“Dad, Merry Christmas !”was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing
against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got down stairs
just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had
left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in
the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first,their fingers went almost shyly over their toys.
When their inspection had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were
really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living
room.
Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to
myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many
Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with
my wife. I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives
and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages
constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their
desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with
my absence from their Christmas these years.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
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I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me.
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I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I
could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He
asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. He
said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I
thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.
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Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me
to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing
off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and
saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read.“We will never forget you. Merry
Christmas!”Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight.I was moved to tears.
第1段:
我不得不承认,我的失望正在增长。 我在想,当我的小儿子跑到我身边时,我是否
能得到一份礼物,他真的很善良,足以拯救我的脸。 他让我欣赏他的礼物,他深信这是圣
诞老人精心挑选的。 他高兴地说,他将分享他的一些礼物,并允许我从他们中选择一个。
我从心底感谢他,仍然感到失望。
第2款:
突然我妻子走到我面前。 似乎她已经猜到了我的感受。 她让我看看装饰着这么多盒
子的圣诞树。 我想她是在炫耀她在装饰上的努力,但她脱下了一个小盒子,微笑着递给
我,说这是给我的。 我打开它,看到一封信,上面写着:“我们永远不会忘记你。 “圣
诞快乐!”信下面是一只手表,它正高兴地咔嗒作响。 我感动得流泪。第 2 篇 特别的钢琴曲
“Where have you been?” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and
started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t
get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder.The message was clear, but Steve
hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life,
but that had been a long time ago.Was he still sharp enough to get them through this?
Brady pulled again,urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog
stopped to get his escape route . Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked
Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one
foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of
rushing water. The river ! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped
in cool, running water. “Brady,you did it!”
Many years earlier, my mother knew that she could not send me to college and pay
for it. She worked in a retail store and made just enough to pay the bills and take care of
the other children at home . If I wanted to go to college, it was up to me to find out how
to get there.
I found that I qualified for some grants because of the size of our family, my
mom’s income and my SAT scores. There was enough to cover school and books, but not
enough for room and board. I accepted a job as part of a work-study program . While not
attractive, it was one I could do. I washed dishes in the school cafeteria.
Just when I thought I was going to drop out of my college career, an angel appeared.
Well, one of those that are on earth, without wings. “I heard that you need some help,” he
said. “What do you mean?” I asked, trying to figure out which area of my life he
meant. "Financially, to stay in school.” “Well, I make it okay. I just have trouble working
all these hours and finding time to study.” “Well, I think I have a way to help you out.”
He went on to explain that his grandparents needed help on the weekends.All that
was required of me was cooking meals and helping them get in and out of bed in the
morning and evening. The job paid four hundred dollars a month, twice the money I was
making washing dishes . Now I would have time to study. I went to meet his grandparents
and accepted the job.
My first discovery was his grandmother’s great love of music. She spent hours
playing her old, off-key piano . One day, she told me I didn’t have enough fun in my lifeand took it upon herself to teach me the art.Grandma was impressed with my ability
and encouraged me to continue. Weekends in their house became more than just books
and cooking, they were filled with the wonderful sounds of the out-of-tune piano and two
very out-of-tune singers.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her.
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The envelope was from grandma who had just passed away.
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When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her. I
hadn’t been home since Labor Day, and my mother was anxious to see me. I agreed to come
home, but for two weeks instead of four, so I could return to Grandma and Grandpa. I said my
good-byes,arranged for their temporary care and return home. As I was loading my car to go back
to school, the phone rang. “Grandma died last night, I’m sorry.” I hung up the phone feeling like
my world had ended. I had lost my friend, and that was far worse than knowing I would have to
return to washing dishes.I went back at the end of four weeks, asking to begin the work-study
program again. The financial aid advisor looked at me as if I had lost my mind. I explained myposition, then he smiled and slid me an envelope. “This is for you,” he said.
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The envelope was from grandma. She had known how sick she was. In the envelope was
enough money to pay for the rest of my college year and a request that I take piano lessons in her
memory. Moved to tears, I determined to learn piano lesions by heart and my memory of grandma
motivated me to practice day and night. I don’t think the piano piece was even played with more
feeling than it was my second year in college. Now, years later, when I walk by a piano, I smile
and think of Grandma. She is playing the piano smilingly in heaven, I am sure.
第1段:
当圣诞假期来临时,奶奶胸口感冒了,我害怕离开她。 自从劳动节以来,我就没有回
家,我妈妈很想见我。 我同意回家,但两个星期而不是四个星期,所以我可以回到奶奶和
爷爷身边。 我说了我的道别,安排他们暂时照顾,然后回家。 当我正在装货回学校时,
电话响了。 “奶奶昨晚死了,对不起。”我挂了电话,感觉我的世界已经结束了。 我失
去了我的朋友,这比我知道我必须回去洗碗要糟糕得多。 我在四周结束时回去,要求重新
开始勤工俭学。 财政援助顾问看着我,好像我疯了似的。 我解释了我的立场,然后他笑
了笑,递给我一个信封。 “这是给你的,”他说。
第2段
那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支
付我大学剩下的时间,并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了,决心用心学习钢琴损伤,我对奶
奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年
后,当我走过钢琴时,我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信,她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。
第 3 篇 与妈妈和解
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that
afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully
when she thought of the scolding from her mother . Having wandered aimlessly in the
street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not
even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a
while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However,with no money
in hand, she sighed and had to leave.The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl,you want to
have the noodles?”
“Oh, yes... but I don’t have money on me…” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man, “come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive.As she was
eating, Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped
her tears, “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,
drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a
stranger!!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a
bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since
you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed
your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar
face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a
stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done
for me.”
On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for
her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
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1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.参考范文:
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Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she
found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of
the house.“Where could my mother be?”she wondered,“Was she still angry with me?”Again, the
scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing
that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about
her, she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar
face of her mother.“Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved.
Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s arms. “Mum, I’m so and thank you for all
you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this,her
mother smiled patting her back gently.
第1段:
走近门口,珍妮深吸了一口气。 当她敲门时,她发现门被锁着,她的母亲不在。 她
又累又伤心,坐在房子前面。“我妈妈在哪里?”她想,“她还在生我的气吗?”再次,
争吵的场景出现在她的脑海中。 她记得她对母亲的粗鲁。 意识到母亲所有的责骂都是因
为她母亲真的很关心她,她感到相当羞愧,眼泪开始从她的脸颊滚下来。
第2段:
她的头发上轻轻的一碰,使她的思想恢复了。 她抬起头,看到了她母亲熟悉的脸。
“你来了! 我一直在找你,“她说,累了,松了一口气。 珍妮忍不住把自己投入了她母
亲的怀里。 “妈妈,我很感激你为我所做的一切。”她表示真诚的道歉和极大的感激。
听到这话,妈妈笑着轻轻拍了拍她的背。第 4 篇 一把小提琴
“Wanted: Violin . Can’t pay much. Contact…”
I rarely read the classified advertisements , so why did I notice that one? I laid the
paper on my lap and closed my eyes, remembering what had happened many years
before, during the Great Depression when my family struggled to make a living on our
farm. I, too, had wanted a violin.
When my older twin sisters began showing an interest in music , Harriet Anne
learned to play Grandma’s piano, while Suzanne turned to Daddy’s violin. Simple tunes
became lovely melodies. My baby brother danced; Daddy hummed and Mother whistled.
I just listened.
When my arms grew long enough, I tried to play Suzanne’s violin. Oh, how I
wanted one! But I knew it was out of the question.
One evening as the twins played in the school orchestra . I closed my eyes tight to
capture the picture firmly in my mind. Someday, I’ll sit up there, I vowed silently.
It was not a good year. At harvest the crops didn’t bring as much as we had hoped.
Yet even though times were hard , I couldn’t wait any longer to ask, “Daddy, may I have a
violin of my own?”
“Can’t you use Suzanne’s?”
“I’d like to be in the orchestra too, and we can’t both use the same violin at the
same time.”
Daddy’s face looked sad. That night, and many following nights, I heard him
remind God in our family prayers , “… and Lord, Mary Lou wants her own violin.”
One evening we all sat round the table. The twins and I studied. Mother sewed and
Daddy wrote a letter to his friend, George Finkle, in Columbus, Ohio.Mr Finkle, Daddy
said, was a fine violinist.
When Daddy received a letter from Columbus a few weeks later, he asked me,“Mary
Lou, do you want to go with me to visit Mr Finkle?”
He drove us to Columbus and we came to a fine, old house. A tall man opened the
door. He and Daddy heartily shook hands, both talking at once.
“Mary Lou, I’ve been hearing things about you. Your Daddy has arranged
a surprise for you!” He picked up a case, opened it, lifted out a violin and started to play.
The melody surged and spoke like waterfalls.Oh, to play like him, I thought.
Finishing the piece, he turned to Daddy. “I found it in a pawnshop(当铺)for seven
dollars . It’s a good violin. Mary Lou should be able to make a beautiful music with it.”
Then he handed the violin to me.注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
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4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I noticed the tears in Daddy’s eyes as I finally comprehended. It was mine!
Paragraph 2
I forced my thoughts to the present and read again the advertisement.
参考范文:
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I noticed the tears in Daddy’s eyes as I finally comprehended. It was mine! “It’s beautiful.” I
said, barely breathing. I knew Daddy’s prayer, and been answered. Back home, I practiced daily,
feeling no tiredness. When I was ready to join the school orchestra, I trembled with excitement.
Daddy and Mother smiled proudly in the audience ar their little girl who held her cherished violin
for the whole world to admire. The years seemed to tun more Swift the. I packed my violin in its
case and stepped into the grown-up world. Nurse’s training, marriage, bring up four daughters
filled my years. Yet none of my children cared about the violin.
当我终于明白的时候,我注意到爸爸眼里的泪水。 是我的! “真漂亮。”我说,几
乎没有呼吸。 我知道爸爸的祈祷,并得到了回应。 回到家,我每天都练习,感觉没有疲
倦。 当我准备加入学校管弦乐队时,我激动得发抖。 爸爸和妈妈在观众席上骄傲地笑
了,他们的小女孩拿着她珍爱的小提琴,让全世界都钦佩。 岁月似乎更迅速。 我把小提
琴装在箱子里,走进了成人的世界。 护士的培训,婚姻,抚养四个女儿,充实了我的岁
月。 但我的孩子都不关心小提琴。
Paragraph 2I forced my thoughts to the present and read again the advertisement. Laying the paper aside,
I went to find my violin. And I dialed the number. Later that afternoon, an old car stopped in my
driveway. A man in his thirties with a young girl knocked on the door. “I’ve been praying someone
would answer my advertisement. My daughter wants a violin so badly. ” He said, “How much are
you asking?” “Seven dollars,” I said. I handed the case to the girl. She opened the case and
touched the violin lightly as it caught the glow of the late-afternoon sun. The she threw her arm
round her smiling father.
我强迫自己的想法到现在,并再次阅读广告。 把纸放在一边,我去找我的小提琴。
我拨了号码。 那天下午晚些时候,一辆旧车停在我的车道上。 一个三十多岁的男人和一
个年轻的女孩敲门。 “我一直在祈祷有人能回答我的广告。 我女儿非常想要小提琴。 ”
“七美元,”我说。 我把箱子交给了那个女孩。 她打开箱子,轻轻地摸了摸小提琴,因
为它捕捉到了下午晚些时候的阳光。 她用胳膊搂住她微笑的父亲。
第 5 篇 特殊的面试
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完畅的短文。
I was lucky to have an interview with a famous international bank after graduation. I really
appreciated this chance. So 1 spent a lot of time preparing very carefully I prepared for all the
possible questions ahead. As a result, 1 got the job. While my classmates were still struggling to
get a job, 1 had succeeded in getting one, which made me feel very proud of myself.
After one month of hard training, Today was my first day at work to show the results of the
training. I got up as usual, but I decided to skip doing exercise as I did not want to take the risk of
arriving at the office late on my first day. I went through my morning routine and spent a lot of
time deciding what to wear. I definitely wanted to make a great impression right from the start.
Finally, I settled on the white suit with a tie.
I waved to say goodbye to my mother and set off cheerfully towards the bus stop. But l Saw a
bus leaving the stop just as I turned around the corner. Now I would have to wait for another 15
minutes, even though time was very precious. I stood there patiently. 15 minutes passed and then
30 minutes, and there was no sign of the bus. Now what could 1 do? I had to reach the office on
time. I saw a motorcycle approaching, but as I tried to stop it, the driver sped on without even a
glance. It was then that a car stopped near me and a man waved to me. He said, “Aren’t you
working at the bank at Nariman Point? My office is in the same building. Can I give you a ride?”I was uncertain at first but then forced myself to get in as I was going to be late. Gradually, I
realized that we were not on the familiar route to my office. I asked the man to stop the car, but he
did not listen to me and told me to shut up.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1.
I had no other option but to keep my mouth shut.
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He told me that he was my boss.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1.
I had no other option but to keep my mouth shut. I was scared. I didn’t know what to do. I
forgot all I had learned from the training about measures to deal with an emergency. But to my
surprise, the man finally stopped the car in front of the bank building, after taking another shorter
route. I didn’t expect that I would be able to reach the bank safely and punctually. I asked the man
who he was.
我别无选择,只能闭上嘴。我很害怕。我不知道该怎么办。我忘记了我从培训中学到
的所有关于应对紧急情况的措施。但令我吃惊的是,这名男子在走了另一条较短的路线
后,终于把车停在了银行大楼前面。我没想到我能安全、准时地到达银行。我问那个人他
是谁。Paragraph 2.
He told me that he was my boss. All that had happened was just a test. Unfortunately, I didn’t pass
it. He said that if I was intelligent enough to be selected and employed by an international bank, I
should not have taken such a risk and trusted a stranger offering a ride. Although I had prepared
for everything, I still lost the precious chance to work. From this experience, I realized that the
thing that matters most is whether you can apply what you have learned to your job. Moreover,
success is not only in the interview, but also in the details of life.
他告诉我他是我的老板。所发生的一切都只是一个考验。不幸的是,我没有通过它。
他说,如果我足够聪明,可以被一家国际银行挑选和雇佣,我就不会冒这样的风险,信任
一个愿意搭车的陌生人。虽然我已经做好了准备,但我仍然失去了宝贵的工作机会。从这
次经验中,我意识到最重要的是你是否能把你所学到的东西应用到工作中。此外,成功不
仅在于采访,而且在于生活的细节。
【解析】
通过所给文章可知,作者毕业之后通过了一家著名银行的面试,之后又通过了培训。准备
正式上班的这天,作者精心地做好了准备,但是迟迟等不来公交车。这时,一辆私家车停
在作者面前,车主声称和作者在同一栋大楼上班,可以载作者一程。犹豫之下,作者最终
上了车。但是很快作者就发现车没有开在往常熟悉的上班路线,作者意识到了危险想要下
车,却得不到允许。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我没有其他选择只好闭嘴。”可知,第一段可描写作者意识到危险
之后的心理活动和事情出乎意料的发展。
②由第二段首句内容“他告诉我他是我的老板。”可知,第二段可描写作者在经历了有惊
无险的乘车之后发现,这只是老板对自己的入职考验,作者也因为轻易相信陌生人而没能
得到最后的工作机会。
2.续写线索:停车被拒——忐忑——出乎意料——考验——失去机会——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①学习:learn from/draw lessons from
②处理:deal with/cope with
③到达:reach/get to
情绪类①害怕:scared/frightened
②吃惊:surprised/shocked
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I forgot all I had learned from the training about measures to deal with an
emergency.(省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2]. I didn’t expect that I would be able to reach the bank safely and punctually.(that
引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. Although I had prepared for everything, I still lost the precious chance to work.
(although引导的让步状语从句)
第 6 篇 一个玩具娃娃
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shanti wanted the wooden doll in Ramu’s toy shop and told her best friend, Jodi about it. Jodi
wondered if she could afford it.
Shanti smiled. “I asked my mom if I could make jasmine garlands(花环) and sell them at
my aunt’s stand in the market.” Jodi thought it was a good idea.
Early the next morming, the girls met at the jasmine bushes outside Shanti’s house. Delicate
white flowers surrounded them with fresh scent. They picked blossoms with their fingers and then
sat under a mango tree, tying up the flowers into garlands. Shanti could already see herself
hugging that beautiful doll.
“If we sell enough garlands, we can each get a doll.” said Shanti.
Jodi shook her head. Her family was low on money that week. She had to use her money to
pay for Kiran’s medicine. Kiran was Jodi’s little brother. Then Jodi picked up her garlands.“My
mother is expecting me. I’ll meet you at the market.”
Shanti spent the afternoon selling garlands alone. By early evening, Shanti had sold all her
flowers.
On the way home, Shanti saw Jodi heading to the market with her garlands. She was late
because she had to watch Kiran while her mother was away.
“Why didn’t you take him with you?” Shanti said.Jodi shook her head. “He’s too sick to go out. He coughs and coughs.”
Shanti knew Jodi wouldn’t make enough money for the medicine now.The market would be
closing soon.
Shanti looked at the purse tightly held in her hand. It was supposed to be for the beautiful
doll she’d been dreaming of for long. Then she looked at her friend’s tired face. “Here. Keep this
for the medicine.”
That night Shanti cried, thinking about the doll. What if someone bought it before she’d
saved up enough again?
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next week, while Shanti and Jodi gathered blossoms, Kiran came, too.
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Mom comforted Shanti with hugs, and then handed her a filled package wrapped in paper.
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【答案】The next week, while Shanti and Jodi gathered blossoms, Kiran came, too. The medicine
had cured his cough, and he helped them sell out all the garlands. When parting, Jodi said,
“Shanti, we have prepared something for you.” But Shanti was so anxious that she didn’t seem to
have time to hear them out. She quickly ran to Ramu’s shop, only to find the dollhad been sold.
Broken-hearted, she ran back home and told Mom everything, tears flowing down in flood.
接下来的一个星期,当香蒂和乔迪一起开花时,基兰也来了。药已经治好了他的咳嗽,他
帮他们卖掉了所有的花环。分手时,乔迪说:“尚蒂,我们为你准备了什么。但是尚蒂非
常焦虑,似乎没有时间听他们的话。她很快跑到拉穆的商店,却发现玩具已经卖掉了。她
伤心,跑回家,把一切都告诉了妈妈,眼泪流下来。Mom comforted Shanti with hugs, and then handed her a filled package wrapped in paper.
“Jodi dropped this off for you, dear.” Shanti was surprised and unwrapped it. It was the doll! Also,
she found a note on the back of the doll: For our dearest friend, Shanti. Nothing can express our
deepest gratitude for your purest heart. Your sincere friendship will bethe most invaluable treasure
for our family. - From Jodi and Kiran. Shanti smiled. Hugging the doll, she felt so blessed about
everything that happened.
妈妈拥抱着安慰尚蒂,然后递给她一个用纸包装的填充包裹。“乔迪把你放下了,亲
爱的。香蒂很惊讶,把它打开了。那就是那个洋娃娃!此外,她在娃娃的背面发现了一张
纸条:给我们最亲爱的朋友香蒂。没有什么能表达我们对你最纯洁的心的最深切的感激。
您真诚的友谊将是我们家最宝贵的财富。-来自乔迪和基兰。香蒂笑了。她抱着娃娃,对发
生的一切感到很幸运。
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Shanti很喜欢Ramu商店的一个玩具娃娃,决定
和朋友Jodi一起编茉莉花环赚钱,Jodi家庭经济拮据,她要把赚的钱给生病的弟弟Kiran
买药。但是Jodi因为在家照顾生病的弟弟错过了时间,无法卖掉她的花环,Shandi便把自
己赚的钱给了Jodi。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第二个星期,当Shanti和Jodi在采花时,Kiran也来了。”可知,第
一段可描写Kiran病好了来帮助她们卖掉花环,Jodi打算送东西给Shandi,但是Shandi急
着赶往商店买玩具娃娃,结果却发现娃娃被卖掉了,Shandi很伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“妈妈给了Shanti一个拥抱来安慰她,然后递给她一个用纸包着的包
裹。”可知,第二段可描写Shandi收到了Jodi的礼物,打开后看到竟然是玩具娃娃,
Shandi感到很幸福。
2.续写线索:
Jodi准备东西给Shandi——Shandi很焦虑,没有听完Jodi说的话——Shandi匆忙赶往商店
——玩具娃娃被卖掉了——Shandi感到很伤心——Shandi打开包裹——感到惊讶——Jodi
表达感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
准备:prepare/make preparations for听完:hear sb. out/listen to the end
匆忙赶往:quickly run to/hurry to
卖掉:sell out/sell off
表达感激:express one’s gratitude/show appreciation
打开:unwrap/open up
情绪类
焦虑的:anxious/restless
伤心的:broken-hearted/sad
惊讶的:surprised/amazed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
She quickly ran to Ramu’s shop, only to find the doll had been sold.(动词不定式to find作结果
状语)
[高分句型2]
she ran back home and told Mom everything, tears flowing down in flood.(tears flowing down in
flood.为独立主格结构作状语)
第 7 篇 姐弟重逢
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old
letter. The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the
letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The
letter was written several decades ago.
Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I
showed her the letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man,
this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him verymuch. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him,
tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is
waiting for him to come back home.”
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building
recognized the wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to
Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.”
“I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his
face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also
Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? You know where she is? How is
she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly.
He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always
missed her.”
Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her.
“Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you
know the man?”
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word.
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About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word.Henry said softly,
almost in a whisper, “Beatrice, it’s Henry. Do you remember me? ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I
don’t believe it! Henry! It's you! My Henry! ” He walked slowly towards her and they hugged.The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.
比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜,看了一会儿,但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说,几乎是轻
声说,“比阿特丽斯,是亨利。你还记得我了吗?她兴奋地说,“亨利!”我不相信!亨
利!是你的名字!我的亨利先生!他慢慢地向她走去,他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开
了,眼泪流了下来。
Paragraph 2:
About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice.“Can you break away on
Sunday to attend a party? Henry and Beatrice are going to have a party in the home! ” It was a
beautiful party with all the people dressed up to join in the celebration. If you ever wanted to see a
woman and a man acting like two teenagers, you had to see this elder sister and younger brother. It
was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades.
大约三周后,我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。“你星期天可以参加聚会吗?”亨利和比阿
特丽斯将在家里举办一个聚会!“这是一个美丽的派对,所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如
果你想看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年,你必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持
续了近几十年的家庭感情的完美结局。
【解析】
本文以信封为线索展开,讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包,在里面发现一封破旧的信,
通过努力找到信主人的姐姐,通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人,最后,姐弟重逢的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜,看了一会儿,但没有说一句话。”可知,
第一段可描写姐弟两人重逢的温馨场景。
②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后,我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知,第二段
可描写作者对重逢事件的感慨。
2.续写线索:发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感
悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
接电话:get a call at/put sb on to/pick up the telephone/answer the phone抽出时间:break away on/take time off/spare one’s time
情绪类
兴奋:did excitedly/thrilled
泪流满面:tears bathe/stream down/one’s cheeks
【点睛】
[高分句型1]:The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.这句话运用了with的复合
结构。
[高分句型2]:It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades
这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。
第 8 篇 爸爸的梳子
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Some of my earliest memories involve silting with my dad in his study every night when he
came home from the office. I’d watch as he put his personal items away: his watch, wallet, comb
and car keys would always occupy the same spot on the table every time. It was as if he could see
invisible lines drawn specifically for these things, not a centimetre more or less.
Dad's comb was jade green. I heard he bought it when he married Mum, which made the
comb two years older than I was. Every night, he would smile, hand me the comb and say: “Be a
good girl and help Daddy clean it, OK?”
I was more than happy to do it. At age five this ordinary task brought me such joy. I would
excitedly tum the tap on, then brush the comb with a used toothbrush as hard as I could. Satisfied
that I’d done a good job, I would proudly return die comb to Dad. He would smile at me, and
place the comb on top of his wallet.
About two years later, Dad left his sales job and started his own wholesale business. I started
primary school. That was when things started to change. Dad's business wasn’t doing so well, and
our stable life started getting shaky. He didn’t come home as much as he used to - just a couple of
times a week. And when he did come home, it was always late and I'd already be in bed. I started
to get mad. Why didn't he listen to Mum and just stick to his old job? Why take the risk and place
the whole family in trouble? Over the years, I stopped waiting for him to come home, and stopped
going downstairs to check on him.Today, I'm no longer a kid. Now 28, I ’ve graduated from college and got a job. Dad’s
business has also started to get back on track. Things are better now. Yet the uncomfortable silence
between Dad and me continued.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early.
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When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes.
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【答案】Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. As usual, I helped him
carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me
clean my comb? It's been a while since I last cleaned.” It hit me then why, as a child, helping my
dad clean his comb was such a joy. That routine meant that my dad was home early to spend the
evening with Mum and I. It meant he would watch TV with us or play a few video games with me.
It meant a happy and loving family.
去年在我生日的前两天,爸爸早点回家了。像往常一样,我帮他把行李搬进了书房。当我
转身离开时,他说:“嘿,你想帮我打扫梳子吗?我已经有一段时间没打扫了。我觉得,
小时候帮爸爸打扫梳子是一种快乐。这意味着我爸爸早点回家和妈妈一起过夜。这意味着
他会和我们一起看电视,或者和我一起玩一些电子游戏。这意味着一个幸福和充满爱的家
庭。
When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. They are
more noticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as before. The smile of a
father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places his comb on top of his
wallet. After so many years, he still organizes his personal items in the same care fill way. I guess
some things never change. And for that. I'm glad.
当我把干净的梳子递给爸爸时,我注意到他眼睛旁边的皱纹。当他微笑的时候,它们
更明显,但他的微笑仍然像以前一样温暖人心。一个只是想要为家人过上美好生活的父亲的微笑。爸爸小心地把梳子放在钱包上。这么多年之后,他仍然以同样的护理填充方式组
织他的个人物品。我想有些事情永远不会改变。为此。我很高兴。
【解析】
本文以时间为线索,讲述了作者小时候很喜欢等父亲下班,帮父亲清理他的梳子。但是后
来父亲自己创业,初期艰难,便再也没有经常很早回家,和作者之间的亲子互动也少了很
多。作者对此心怀怨念。在作者28岁时,父亲和作者之间解开了心结。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“去年我生日的前两天,爸爸提早回家了。”可知,第一段可描写作
者父亲很早回到家,久违地让作者为他清理梳子,作者有很大的触动。
②由第二段首句内容“当我把干净的梳子递给爸爸时,我注意到他眼睛旁边的皱纹。”可
知,第二段可描写作者看到父亲的皱纹,理解了他的辛苦和对家的责任,并且发现一切都
没有变。
2.续写线索:要求清理梳子——引起触动——理解父亲——归置东西——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类①转身离开:turn to leave/turn away
②归还:pass back/return
情绪类
①暖心:heartwarming/warm
【点睛】
[高分句型1]When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb?
It's been a while since I last cleaned.” (when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places
his comb on top of his wallet.(who引导的定语从句)第 9 篇 祖母的回忆
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck
on “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.
My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial (宫
殿般的) estate that had belonged to his family through many generations. He told me stories of
gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent
gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.
From all these, I figured my grandmother must be rich. I had never met her before she came
from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to
live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so
she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon her return.
We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some
royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman
with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I vowed to be
attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.
To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed
making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends
and history as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her words
were a mix of the two languages, so I didn’t completely understand everything at first.
Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.
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No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
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My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
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No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle. But I was anxious to
commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage. “When you go
back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly. Though a bit surprised, she looked up
from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me. “No, I live here now. But why do you want
to leave?” So I told her about those stories. She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her
great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything. Now that grandfather
had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
没有人说她回去了,我就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁。但我急于开始日本奢侈的生活,所以
有一天晚上我鼓起了勇气。“奶奶,你回到日本后,能带我去吗?””我胆怯地问道。虽
然有点惊讶,但她从刺绣中抬起头来,眼睛深情地望着我。“不,我现在住在这里。但你
为什么要离开呢?”所以我告诉了她那些故事。她笑着,抚摸着我的头,解释道。她的曾
祖父确实有很多财富,但战争摧毁了一切。现在祖父去世了,她想和家人住在一起。
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken. At first so disappointed was I that I even
locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was
staying with us swept my sadness away. I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in
Japan. I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far
greater riches right here at home.
我对奢侈生活的梦想已经破灭了。一开始我很失望,甚至把自己锁在房间里,哭了好
一会儿。突然间,奶奶和我们住在一起的事实让我打消了我的悲伤。我曾试图让她爱我,
这样我就可以和她一起去日本了。我很快就明白了,我不需要日本的财富。我的祖母在家
里给了我更多的财富。
【解析】
本文以人物为线索为展开,作者的父亲小时候出生在日本,通过之前的照片作者推测祖母
的家庭肯定很富裕;作者想着讨好祖母,希望祖母带他去日本生活;祖母来了,但并不是
穿着和服来的,而是穿着一件普通的蓝色西装;作者主动和祖母接近,祖母跟他讲着日本的历史传说故事,祖母的英文水平进步了,作者对日本的理解也随之加深。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“没人说她要回去,“我”就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁。”可知,第一段
可描写作者急于去日本过奢侈的生活,所以主动向祖母询问归期,并希望祖母带自己一起
回日本,以及祖母的回应。
②由第二段首句内容“我奢华生活的梦想破灭了。”可知,第二段可描写作者梦想破裂后
的感受,以及最后作者意识到真正的财富是什么。
2.续写线索:焦虑担忧——鼓起勇气——解释说明——梦想破灭——驱散悲伤
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.鼓起勇气:work up my courage/take heart of grace /get up the courage
②.解释说明:explain/make clear/account for
③.梦想破灭:be broken/be shattered/fall through
④.驱散悲伤:sweep my sadness away/disperse the sad
情绪类
①.焦虑担忧:anxious/worried/alarming
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite
a while.(so+adj.位于句首时部分倒装)
[高分句型2].Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away.
(that引导同位语从句)
第 10 篇 一只加拿大鹅
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It's quite impressive to see Canada geese flying into the clouds. They live to be around 25
years old and are very loyal. They never forget their first home. No one knows this more than my
family.
In 2000, when I was seven, my parents and I came back from a T-ball game one late spring
afternoon. To our surprise, two adult geese and a baby goose were in our driveway (车库前的私
人车道).The adults were shocked by us and flew away, but their baby was too young to fly andcouldn't follow. We are no strangers to the ways of wildlife, so we knew to avoid contact with the
baby, hoping he could join his parents.
Hours passed, and night fell. The tiny little thing was wandering around our yard, unaware of
what could happen. It was clear that the baby needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to
the morning, so we brought him onto our back porch (门廊)and set up a wire fence to enclose
and protect him.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning. And then another morning. And
another. Each day, we tried eagerly to get the baby back to his parents, who kept coming to our
yard. He wouldn't go to them, though, and they wouldn't come close enough to claim him. The
baby goose had clearly decided we were his new family and we gave him a name - Peeper,
because he would follow us around the yard making a peeping (唧唧叫)noise, nonstop.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months, until almost a year passed. Peeper
slept on our back porch in typical goose fashion. Every day, my dad would clear his droppings
with water and throw him up into the air, so he could fly a loop around the house, coming back
again once the porch was clean.
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One evening, my uncle was over, and my dad wanted to show him Peeper's loop.
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It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to my yard.
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One evening, my uncle was over, and my dad wanted to show him Peeper's loop. But this
time, Peeper just flew off. Everyone was very, very sad. It was dark, and we were worried. We
looked for him for days calling his name, but he didn’t come back. We hoped he went off on his
natural way. Again, days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months, then years. I missed
Peeper. I would call for him every time I saw a group of geese flying by in V-formation. Twentyyears passed, and Peeper became a happy memory for family.
一天晚上,我叔叔结束了,我爸爸想给他看皮珀的环。但这一次,皮珀只是飞走了。
每个人都非常、非常难过。天很黑,我们很担心。我们找了好几天他在叫他的名字,但他
没有回来。我们希望他能很自然地走下去。天又变成了几周,几周变成了几个月,然后是
年。我错过了哭泣。每当我看到一群鹅以v形形飞过时,我会叫他。二十年过去了,皮珀
成了家庭快乐的回忆。
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It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to my yard.
At first, I thought it was just another goose. And yet, something about him seemed strangely
familiar to me. The goose came back repeatedly. He did all of the same things Peeper used to, like
trying to come in through the front door and sleeping in our back porch. Besides this goose
responded to the name Peeper. Much to my surprise my old friend returned, 20 years later.
20年后,一只年迈的成年鹅回到了我的院子里,这令人震惊。一开始,我还以为它只
是另一只鹅。然而,我似乎对他有一些奇怪的熟悉。那只鹅不停地回来了。他做了所有和
皮珀以前一样的事情,比如试着从前门进来,在我们的后门廊里睡觉。此外,这只鹅还回
应了皮珀这个名字。令我吃惊的是,20年后,我的老朋友回来了。
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了两个成年大雁和一个孩子停在作者家的车道上,成年大雁
飞走了,留下了小雁,后来经作者爸爸照顾,逗留了很久,直至作者叔叔来参观时才飞
走,20年后又飞回来的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一天晚上,我叔叔回来了,我爸爸想给他看Peeper的飞行。”可
知,第一段可描写小雁飞走后的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“20年后,当一只年老的成年大雁回到我的院子时,我大吃一惊。”
可知,第二段可描写作者后来发现是之前飞走的小雁的惊喜。
2.续写线索:飞走——寻找——等待——回家——惊喜
3.词汇激活行为类
①.回家:make one’s way back to/go back home/return home
②.有反应:respond/in response/reaction/to
情绪类
①.担心:worry/concern about/fell worried
②.令某人吃惊:surprise/astonishment/amazement。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]:I would call for him every time I saw a group of geese flying by in V-formation.这
句话运用了现在分词作宾语补足语。
[高分句型2]:It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to
my yard.这句话运用了关系副词when引导的定语从句。
[高分句型3]:He did all of the same things Peeper used to, like trying to come in through the
front door and sleeping in our back porch.这句话运用了省略关系代词的定语从句和动名词作
宾语。
第 11 篇 “我”被隔离了
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词数应为150左右。
My wife, Megan, and I went out to dinner with an old friend who we had not seen in a while.
There had been some talk of COVID-19 (新型冠状病毒)on the news, but it was early in the
outbreak and people were still going about their daily routines. Even though everyone in our group
felt perfectly fine, we took precautions(预防):We washed our hands with soap , did not share
food and had no significantly close contact.
A few days later, our friend called and told us that she had tested positive for the coronavirus.
She had felt some mild symptoms(症状)for a day or so after that dinner and was able to be
tested because she is a doctor. On the following day, started to feel a little tired and my head was a
bit cloudy. I decided to stay in the master bedroom away from the rest of my family. The next
morning. I woke up with a 39-degree fever. That was when we realized that I might have caught
the virus from our friend.
At once, Megan called our state's coronavirus hotline, who then called in our primary care
doctor and the head of our local hospital system's coronavirus team. We explained that we hadbeen in contact with someone who had been tested positive, and I was having symptoms. They
quickly approved me to receive a test at an urgent care center located five minutes' drive from my
house. The result made my heart sank — I was also tested positive, and the local hospital wasn't
equipped with the facilities to treat my disease. As a mild case, I was recommended to stay at
home and quarantine (隔离)myself.
Following the doctor's advice, Megan and I quarantined ourselves and our children. With my
developed symptoms , I started isolation in the bedroom, and the only interaction I had with
Megan was when she brought in food. Megan slept on a small couch in our home office away
from the kids' rooms. She also minimized her contact with our kids in case she was carrying the
virus.
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We decided to call everyone we had been in contact with over the course of the past week.
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Though worried about the seriousness of the virus ,I knew I had to be brave.
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【答案】We decided to call everyone we had been in contact with over the course of the past
week. Megan insisted that we should let them know that I had tested positive. Hard as it was to
inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus, it was the responsible thing to do.
To our pleasant surprise, all of our friends showed their understanding and support upon hearing
the news. To cheer us up, one of my wife's best friends even baked a cake with the letters "Stay
strong" on it and delivered it to our front door.
我们决定打电话给过去一周里我们联系过的每个人。梅根坚持认为我们应该让他们知道我
的检测结果呈阳性。虽然很难告知人们我们可能给了他们冠状病毒,但这是负责任的事
情。令我们惊喜的是,我们所有的朋友听到消息都表示了他们的理解和支持。为了让我们高兴起来,我妻子最好的一个朋友甚至烤了一个蛋糕,上面写着“保持坚强”,然后把它
送到了我们的前门。
Though worried about the seriousness of the virus. I knew I had to be brave. I made sure to
get plenty of rest and did some exercise to stay as healthy as I could. I also managed to ease the
worries of Megan and our kids during our quarantine by spending more time doing online video-
chats with them. Within the following week, my fever started to fade and I could feel my head
clearing. The next test showed a cheering result. It came back negative. Had it not been for the
love and care from those around me, I wouldn't have made it.
尽管我担心病毒的严重性。我知道我必须是勇敢的。我确保得到足够的休息,做一些
运动来保持健康。在我们被隔离期间,我还通过花更多的时间和孩子们进行在线视频聊
天,设法缓解了梅根和孩子们的担忧。在接下来的一周里,我的发烧开始消退,我能感觉
到我的头清醒了。下一次测试显示了一个欢呼的结果。结果是负的。如果不是因为我周围
人的爱和关心,我就不会成功了。
【解析】
本文以新冠病毒传染为线索展开,讲述了新冠病毒传播初期,作者和妻子因和老朋友共进
晚餐,被传染了病毒,他们尽力和孩子做到隔离,然后给过去一周联系过的每一个人打电
话,勇敢地面对病毒,并最终战胜疾病的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们决定给过去一周我们接触过的每一个人打电话”可知,第一段
可描写作者一家得到朋友的理解和支持。
②由第二段首句内容“虽然我很担心这种病毒的严重性,但我知道我必须要勇敢”可知,
第二段可描写作者勇敢面对病毒,隔离期间,互相联系,积极治疗到痊愈的过程。
2.续写线索:得到理解支持——惊喜——互相联系——痊愈——庆幸——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①得到理解支持:get understanding and support /get help/ be understood and supported
②.互相联系:connect with each other / contact with each other/ doing online video-chats with
them
③.痊愈:recovery/be cured
情绪类
①.惊喜:a pleasant surprise/be surprised/ be astonished②.庆幸:good fortune /be lucky
③.感谢showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Hard as it was to inform people that we might have given them the coronavirus, it
was the responsible thing to do.(as引导让步状语从句的倒装)
[高分句型2]. To cheer us up, one of my wife's best friends even baked a cake with the letters
"Stay strong" on it and delivered it to our front door.(不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型3]. Had it not been for the love and care from those around me, I wouldn't have made
it. (虚拟语气条件句中省略if的部分倒装)
第 12 篇 “我不是小偷”
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There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their house. So they went
shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to
maintain their level of standard so they didn’t mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed,
they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at their home. The porter who came was of an
old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even
able to meet his daily needs.
They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old
porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the
porter and finally settled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one time’s meal so he
needed anything he could earn.
The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid
him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their
home and one hour passed, and two hours passed, but the porter still didn’t deliver their stuff.
The wife started to get angry at her husband, “I always tell you not to trust such person, but
you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must havedisappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to
the police station to file the complaint against him.”
They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter.
They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in
his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our goods and he was
supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to sell
them.”
Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking.
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Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes,
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When the porter heard the angry wife asking, he turned back. The porter replied, “Madam,
please calm down. I’m not a thief. That poor old man was sick since last month. He couldn’t earn
enough to even have a single meal of the day. Therefore, he fell down and handed me $15, saying,
‘I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver the goods to the couple’s home.’
Madam, he was poor and hungry, but he was an honest man. I was just on the way to completing
the old man’s last delivery to your home.”
当搬运工听到愤怒的妻子问时,他转过身去。搬运工回答说:“夫人,请冷静下来。
我不是一个小偷。那个可怜的老人从上个月起就生病了。他挣到足够的钱,甚至不能一天
吃一顿饭。因此,他倒了下来,递给我$15,说:“我提前交货了,你把货物送到这对夫妇的家里。”夫人,他又穷又饿,但他是个诚实的人。我就在完成老人最后一次送你家的路
上。”
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Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt so ashamed that she
had no courage to look her husband in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed to the market. Half an hour
later, the wife came back with some food in her hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and
said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldn’t suspect them, and took them as thieves. At last,
the porter took the goods to their house, and the rich couple changed their attitude to the man like
the porter.
一听到这句话,丈夫的眼睛里就流满了眼泪,妻子感到非常羞愧,她没有勇气去看她
的丈夫的眼睛。突然,她冲向了市场。半小时后,妻子手里拿着一些食物回来了。她把食
物递给看门人,对看门人说了抱歉,说她不应该怀疑他们,就把他们当作小偷。最后,搬
运工把货物带到他们家里,这对有钱的夫妇像搬运工一样改变了对他的态度。
【解析】
通过阅读所给文章可知,一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物
品,然后雇佣了一个搬运工把这些物品运回家。搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人,他
要价$20低于市场价,而富人夫妇讨价还价后只给$15。富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物
品送来,却迟迟不见老人的身影。妻子认为上了老人的当,一定老人把他们的物品卖掉
了。回去找老人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:当搬运工听到生气的妻子问题时……,所以应该写他
讲述的实情,老人病了又吃不上饭,这次摔倒了,他把$15给了这个搬运工,请求他把物
品送到富人家。第二段开头是:丈夫听了,眼里含着泪水,……。下文应该写富人夫妇被
老人感动,行动和态度都发生了改变。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:calm down, taken an advance,
Upon hearing, felt ashamed, changed their attitude等高级词汇;Therefore, he fell down and
handed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver the goods to
the couple’s home.’和She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that
she shouldn’t suspect them, and took them as thieves.运用了非谓语动词;the wife felt soashamed that she had no courage to look her husband in the eyes.运用了so……that句型。等高
级句式。
第 13 篇 感恩的心
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The most delicious memories seem to happen during the holidays. And like a squirrel
preparing for winter, I put them away to enjoy slowly during the long winter months. Sometimes, I
enjoy them for years.
Among them are sweetest recollections: my little girls at the church play and the moment
they got their first angel wings; a pink dolly stroller(手推车) wheeled into the bedroom with a tiny
voice declaring, ''Look what Santa Claus brought me! ''; or New Year's snowmen wearing bright
scarves borrowed from a grandma's fragrant drawer.
But there is one memory that is a little bittersweet -- sort of like 80% dark chocolate, but still
good for you.
This story brings to mind a colorful candy dish and a very little boy. The occasion was
somewhere between Christmas and New Year's when a few candies in a dish remained behind, a
bright spot in dull winter gray.
Wrapped in December's chill, my then 3-year old grandson, Justin, and I had dashed from the
warmth of my parked car into the building where I planned to take care of a few work-related
tasks.
A smiling secretary greeted us as we brushed the snowflakes and rubbed our hands to chase
the cold. Then with my grandchild close to my side, I busied myself, finishing the items of
business that had brought us there. But while his hand remained in mine, his eyes fell on the candy
dish sitting nearby.
As we turned to leave, the thoughtful and very observant woman behind the desk asked the
question all children wait to hear.
''Honey, '' the kindly woman said, peering over her glasses at Justin. ''Would you like a candy
bar? '' she asked, her hand pushing the dish close for an easier reach.The boy looked up questioningly, his eyes meeting mine, permission hanging in the air. A
slight nod from me and then a hurried beeline to the candy dish followed. One candy bar was
already in his hand.
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''Justin!'' I said from the doorway. By this time his pudgy hands had grabbed one -- and only
one -- and he made his way back to me. My voice was somewhat serious as I realized manners had
been forgotten. ''What do you say? '' Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel, promptly
returning to the candy dish. ''Get Grandma one, too! '' I laughed. The secretary laughed. And even
little Justin innocently giggled at the fun we were having.
“贾斯汀!”我从门口说。这时,他那胖乎乎的手抓住了一只,回到我身边。当我意
识到举止有些严肃,因为我的声音被忘记了。“你说什么?‘’小男孩听到这话,转过身
来,立刻回到糖果盘旁。”“奶奶也买一个!‘’我笑了。秘书笑了起来。就连小贾斯汀
也天真地笑着。
In the humor of the moment, I felt something hard to swallow. There was a truth that lingered
long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared. What example had I set for this little one
while often in my care? Was he learning more about ''getting'' and less about gratitude -- that
heartfelt ''thank you''? In the years since, I've always loved to remember that moment. But one gift
I hope we all leave with our children is the importance of a grateful heart. Really, what could be
sweeter?在当时的幽默中,我感到有些东西难以接受。在草莓糖果的味道消失后,一个真相持
续了很久。我经常为这个孩子树立了什么榜样?他是不是更多地了解“得到”,更少地了
解感激——衷心的“感谢”?在此后的几年里,我一直很喜欢记得那一刻。但我希望我们
都带着孩子们留下的一份礼物是一颗感恩之心的重要性。真的,还有什么能是更甜的呢?
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了作者和孙子的一次经历带给她苦中带乐的回忆。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是:“Justin!”我在走廊上说。这时他的手上抓着一颗糖,
然后朝我走过来。我的声音有点严肃,我意识到自己当时失态了。“你说什么?”。听到
这话,小男孩转过身去,立刻跑到糖果盘那里。“给奶奶也拿一颗。”我笑了。秘书也笑
了。小Justin也咯咯的笑了。第二段的开头是:在这个幽默时刻,我觉得有些东西难以下
咽。在草莓味糖果的味道消失之后,有一个想法始种萦绕在我心头。我给小家伙树立了什
么榜样?他学到了更多关于得到,更少关于感激的东西吗(那种发自内心的感激)?从那
以后,我一直记得那一刻。我总是希望让孩子学会真正的感恩。没有什么比这更好了。
续写时应注意故事情节要符合逻辑,基础时态为一般过去时。
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑
关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达,例如:Hearing this, the little boy turned on his
heel, promptly returning to the candy dish.中使用了现在分词作状语;There was a truth that
lingered long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared.中that引导同位语从句;What
example had I set for this little one while often in my care?中what引导主语从句。这些表达的
使用不仅给文章增色添彩,也展示了作者扎实的语言功底。
第 14 篇 礼物与友谊
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As a sixth grader, I began noticing how other kids were separating into groups. I wasn't sure
where I belonged. I found it hard to fit in.
Our teacher had assigned "secret friends” for the coming week. She wrote each kid's name on
a piece of paper and threw them into a glass; then we each closed our eyes and drew the name of aclassmate who we were to secretly befriend and support over the next five school days. By the
middle of the week, everyone, including me, had turned this assignment into a contest to see
whose secret friend could leave the best gift. We left cards, pens and even money. It seemed that
everyone was getting cool presents from their friend except me.
On the last morning of our assignment, I walked into my classroom and noticed there was a
package. I opened the wrapping paper and inside was a box of powder(胭脂粉).The girls sitting
near me laughed the gift I had received. To make matters worse, the powder had already been
opened.
I tried to forget about the embarrassing gift, but when I was in the bathroom during the break,
the girls who had seen me open the powder started speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to
me. I quickly joined in "How terrible," I heard myself saying "What could my friend be thinking
by giving me such a stupid gift? My grandmother wouldn't even want it." The girls laughed at my
remarks and rushed out of the bathroom. I stayed to wash my hands and let the water run through
my fingers as I thought about what I had just said. It wasn't normal like me to say mean things like
that about someone.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间),tears streaming
down her face.
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间), tears streaming
down her face. She shouted at me with anger, “If you don’t want my gift you can just leave it
instead of laughing at it. This is the best powder from my mum! “Before I could say a word, Janet
dashed out, leaving me dumb with deep regret. But soon I clenched my fingers and made up my
mind to find Janet and say sorry to her. There she was, sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.
然后我看到我的同学珍妮特从浴室间(厕所隔间)出来,眼泪从她脸上流下来。她愤怒地
对我喊道:“如果你不想要我的礼物,你就离开它,而不是笑。这是我妈妈那里最好的药
粉!我还没来得及说话,珍妮特就冲了出去,让我哑口无言。但很快我握紧手指,决定找
珍妮特,向她说对不起。她就在那里,坐在树影里擦着眼睛。
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason. I was not a mean girl by judging people’s
presents. The reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in, having a
sense of belonging in the group. Hearing my sincere words, Janet calmed herself down after
constant sobs and said, “True friendship comes from genuine care and love for each other. I think
that’s our teacher’s intention of this ‘secret friend’ assignment”. That day, I learned to cherish real
friendship.
除了道歉,我还解释了原因。通过评判别人的礼物,我并不是一个卑鄙的女孩。我在女孩
们面前抱怨的原因是我想适应这个群体,有一种归属感。听到我真诚的话,珍妮特在不停
地啜泣后平静下来,她说:“真正的友谊来自于对彼此真正的关心和爱。我认为这就是我
们老师要做的这个“秘密朋友”任务的意图。那天,我学会了珍惜真正的友谊。
【解析】
1.精读文章,确定文章线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这有利于“顺藤摸
瓜”。本文以空间为线索,根据提示语可知,故事的发展由教室转向洗手间。
2.仔细审题,明确续写要求,如字数限制(150)、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“心中有
数”。本文需续写两个段落,每个段落均给出了段首句,可根据段首句完成续写。3.回扣原文,想象续写内容。快速回读短文,揣摩文章的思路,结合段首的提示语,确定
续写段落的内容。
4.拟写草稿,修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿,注意句子结构
的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的衔接。
本文写作做到了:与原文的主题保持一致;要与原文的体裁写作手法保持一致;与主要人
物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。文章写作中使用了if引导的状语从句(If you
don’t want my gift you can just leave it instead of laughing at it.);现在分词作伴随状语
(There she was, sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.);定语从句和表语从句(The
reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in, having a sense of
belonging in the group.)。
第 15 篇 团聚的一家
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词数应为150左右。
Five years after his two young sons got lost from the U.K. to Toronto,their father is really
excited to have them back in Manchester,England. On Aug.14,the Star broke the news to
Abdul Abubakar that his children had been found safe and well in Hamilton—5,600 km from their
home. “Oh my God,” he said when first told. “Is that true? Where are my children? Oh my
God. Oh my God. I’m absolutely shaking. I want to hug them. Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my
God. My children!” Since 2010 he’d had no idea where they were living on or if they were
even alive.
After years in the dark,his kids were found. Abubakar was finally reunited with his sons in
Toronto at the end of December. “I was very happy. It was a great moment. I can’t even describe
my feeling on that day. It was like a dream.” he said. “Even now we are together in Manchester,I
still feel this dream is not real.” A short time after they went missing,the Manchester police
called. Abubakar to say they had been found by mistake.
The moment he received the Star’s call,Abubakar began preparing to fly to Canada and hug
his sons,but the long separation and age of his sons meant it would not be a simple reunion.
Abubakar was given limited time to talk to his sons,who remained in Children’s Aid care in
Hamilton. He thanked Canadians for their support,especially Children’s Aid and the Missing
Kids Society of Canada,who helped him through the legal formalities.“Talking to the boys again did not even feel real. It was amazing,” he told the Star after
his first phone call with the children. His joy was mixed with sadness,because at that time,only
the older son had recognized his father. It broke his heart,he said,to learn they had been given
new names and did not recognize their birth names. “I can’t speak. I’m feeling so sad now,” he
said in September.
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For the boys,the early experience is fading. They have been to the doctor and dentist,are
scheduled to start school soon,and have joined a local swimming club. “The boys are happy in
their new home,” their father said. “They play outside freely;no one is hiding them indoors
anymore. They’re very excited to go out and play with other kids,and they go swimming in the
local pool.”.
对男孩们来说,早期的经历正在消退。他们去看了医生和牙医,计划很快开始上学,
并加入了当地的一个游泳俱乐部。“孩子们在新家很快乐,”他们的父亲说。“它们在外
面自由地玩耍;再也没有人把他们藏在室内了。他们很兴奋能出去和其他孩子一起玩,然
后去当地的游泳池游泳。”
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While he’s delighted to have them back,Abubakar is also still adjusting to the newsituation. “They did not remember me at all...They are aware that their new names were fake,
and they call each other their real name,and I call them on their real names. “Sometimes I forget
myself and call them the names used in Toronto and they tell me,‘Dad,don’t call me that
name,call us our real names.’” The happy father soon laughed for the mistake he made.
虽然阿布巴卡尔很高兴,但阿布巴卡尔仍在适应新形势。“他们根本不记得我了。。
他们知道他们的新名字是假的,他们互相称呼对方为真名,我也只称呼他们的真名。“有
时我忘记了自己,叫他们多伦多用的名字,他们告诉我,‘爸爸,别叫我,叫我们真
名。”快乐的父亲很快就因为他犯的错误而笑了。
第 16 篇 失而复得的狗
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词数应为150左右。
A Russian dog named Shavi was hit by a car and the driver left without offering help. She
was saved by a woman named Nina who took her in,nursed her back to health,and then found
her a home. But Shavi escaped from her new home and walked nearly 200 miles back to be with
her guardian angel after two weeks.
Last winter,Shavi had been trying to survive as a street dog during the cold Russian winter
when her life nearly ended. She was the victim of a hit & shy; and & shy; run,which resulted in
two badly broken legs,among other injuries. She nearly froze to death,but two cyclists found
her and brought her to a vet. They wanted to find Shavi a home to the public,and only one
person responded—Nina.
The woman brought the injured dog back to her home,and nursed her back to health. She
even taught Shavi how to walk again,and trained her to understand basic commands.
Shavi was a fighter,and on the first day after the surgery,wouldn’t even move herself on
the blanket set out for her. Rather,she tried to make it outside,and was found lying on the door
step. Nina looked after her and spent the next six months helping her recover. Some parts were
easy; Shavi was a smart student,and easily learned commands. But she was terrified of strangers
and cars,and it took a long time to get her accustomed to the outside world again.Though she would have loved to have kept her,obstacles prevented Nina from doing so.
Her apartment was too small,especially with three cats and two other rescue dogs,and her job
and family commitments kept her from giving the new one as much attention as she needed.
As much as it pained her to do it,she searched for someone to take her in,but the only
friends willing to do so lived 180 miles away. They lived out in the countryside,and Shavi would
have more room to walk around. Nina believed the new owner was truly the best choice for her.
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However,only days after arriving at her new home,Shavi went missing after she dug a hole
under the fence.
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However,only days after arriving at her new home,Shavi went missing after she dug a
hole under the fence. Worried,her new owners called Nina to tell her their sad news—Shavi
was once again living by herself out on the streets. Almost two weeks later,Nina was walking
down the road when she was surprised at something touching her leg. It was Shavi!Nina burst
into tears,hardly able to believe that this dog walked so far just to find her.
然而,就在到达新家几天后,沙维在篱笆下挖了一个洞就失踪了。她的新主人很担
心,打电话给尼娜,告诉她他们的悲伤消息——沙维再次独自住在街上。大约两周后,尼
娜走在路上,惊讶地发现有什么东西碰到了自己的腿。那是Shavi!妮娜哭了起来,简直不
敢相信这只狗走了这么远只是为了找到她。
What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family
had moved to a bigger apartment. “I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’ loyalty,but I never
imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now,I can hardly believe this dog
traveled such a long distance to find us,” said Nina,“I would never give this kind of friendaway again. I never grow tired of repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving
creatures. They need our love and care.”
这次团聚最迷人的是,沙维也感动了其他人。尼娜的家人已经搬到了一间更大的公寓里。
“我听说过关于狗忠诚的惊人故事,但我从来没有想过这种事情会发生在我身上。即使是
现在,我也简直不敢相信这只狗走了这么远的距离才能找到我们,”尼娜说,“我再也不
会放弃这种朋友了。我从不厌倦重复这些话,动物是最忠诚、最可爱的生物。他们需要我
们的爱和关心。”
第 17 篇 忠诚的狗
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A loyal dog has continued to show its loyalty,keeping watch on its owner’s grave six years
after he passed away.
Capitan,a German shepherd,reportedly ran away from home after its owner,Miguel
Guzman,died in 2006.A week later,the Guzman family found the dog sitting by his grave in
central Argentina.
Miguel Guzman adopted Capitan in 2005 as a gift for his teenage son,Damian. And for the
past six years,Capitan has continued to stand guard at Miguel’s grave. The family says the dog
rarely leaves the site.
“We searched for him,but in vain,” Mrs. Guzman told a reporter. “We thought he must
have got run over and died.”
“The following Sunday we went to the cemetery,and Damian recognized his pet. Capitan
came up to us,barking as if he were crying.”
Adding to the unusual circumstances,Mrs. Guzman says the family never brought Capitan
to the cemetery before he was discovered there.
“It is a mystery how he managed to find the place,” she said.
Cemetery director Hector Baccega says he and his staff have begun feeding and taking careof Capitan.
“He turned up here one day,all on his own,and started wandering all around the cemetery
until he eventually found the tomb of his master,” Baccega said.
“During the day he sometimes has a walk around the cemetery,but always rushes back to
the grave. And every day,at six o’clock sharp,he lies down on top of the grave,stays there all
night.”
But the Guzman family hasn’t abandoned Capitan. Damian says the family has tried to bring
Capitan home several times but that he always returns to the cemetery on his own.
“I think he’s going to be there until he dies,too. He’s looking after my dad,” he said.
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Several months passed and the dog kept waiting there with perseverance as if his owner were
bound to return from very distant place.
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The dog fell asleep in a daze on the grave during the night.
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【答案】Several months passed and the dog kept waiting there with perseverance as if his owner
were bound to return from very distant place.It was getting freezing cold.Capitan lay on the
cemetery just like playing with his owner Miguel Guzman.It’s more than a pleasure
accompanying his master and sometimes he barked as if he were crying.He was extremely eager
to make Guzman aware of his mind that he would rather keep his loneliness than leave.
几个月过去了,那只狗坚持不懈地在那里等着,好像它的主人一定要从非常遥远的地方回
来似的。天气变冷了。就像和他的主人米格尔·古兹曼一起玩一样。这不仅仅是一种陪伴主
人的乐趣,有时就像他在哭一样。他非常渴望让古兹曼意识到他的想法,他宁愿保持孤独
也不愿离开。The dog fell asleep in a daze on the grave during the night.The Guzman family found their
pet,Capitan died in happiness,enjoying his dream.It’s a mystery between Capitan and his
master Guzman.No other person could understand it.Capitan was buried beside his owner and the
family believe their loyal dog will surely live in heaven with Guzman.
狗在坟墓上睡着了。古兹曼一家发现了他们的宠物,卡皮坦幸福地死去,享受着他的
梦想。这是卡皮坦和他的主人古兹曼之间的关系。没有任何一个人能理解它。卡皮坦被葬
在他的主人旁边,家人相信这只皇室狗肯定会和古兹曼住在天堂。
第 18 篇 拯救口渴的鹿
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词数应为150左右。
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The
crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The creeks and streams were long gone back
into the earth. If we didn’t see some rain soon,we would lose everything. It was on this day that I
learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have ever seen in my life.
I was making lunch for the family when I saw my 6­year­old son,Billy,walking
toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking with his usual way. He was
obviously walking with great effort,trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared
into the woods,he came running out again toward the house. I went back to make sandwiches,
thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later,however,he was once
again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for an hour. Finally I
couldn’t take it any longer. I walked out of the house and followed him.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked,being very careful not to spill the
water he carried. I sneaked(偷偷地走) close as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns
slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much higher purpose,I
thought. As I came closer,I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer stood in front of him.
Billy walked right up to them,at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A
huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck did not threaten him nor even move as Billy
knelt down. And then I saw a tiny baby deer lying on the ground,obviously suffering from thirst
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When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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And now I knew what’s going on.
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When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to a
tap. Billy opened it with his small hand and a small trickle of water began to run out. He knelt
there,letting the drip slowly fill up his “cup”.Then he ran quickly to the thirsty animals.
水没了,比利跳起来跑回屋里。我跟着他回来敲门。比利用他的小手打开它,一点水开始
耗尽。他跪在那里,让滴水慢慢地填满他的“杯子”。然后,他迅速地跑到那些饥渴的动
物们面前。
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And now I knew what’s going on. The week before,he had made the same trouble with our
horses,which caused him a lecture from his father about the importance of not wasting water.
That should be the reason he didn’t ask me for help. It took much time for the drops to fill his
hands. His eyes were filled with tears,saying “I’m not wasting”.Now,I let him attend the
baby deer alone for it was his job while I just stood on the edge of the woods watching. All I can
say is that the rain that came that day saved our farm,just like the actions of one little boy saved
another.
现在我知道发生了什么了。一个星期前,他对我们的马惹了同样的麻烦,这使他父亲告诫
他不浪费水的重要性。这应该是他没有向我求助的原因。水滴花了很多时间才填满他的手。他的眼睛里充满了泪水,说着“我不是在浪费”。现在,我让他独自去看小鹿,因为
这是他的工作,而我只是站在树林边看着。我能说的是,那天的雨救了我们的农场,就像
一个小男孩的行动救了另一个小男孩一样。
第 19 篇 家庭最重要
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Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30
a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a single light in a ground
floor window.
I walked to the door and knocked, "Just a minute," answered a weak, elderly voice.
After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her
side was a small suitcase.
I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we
walked slowly towards the car.
She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her. "I just try to treat my
passengers the way I would want my mother treated."
"Oh, you're such a good man." She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address,
and then asked, "Could you drive through downtown?"
"It's not the shortest way," I answered quickly.
"Oh, I'm in no hurry," she said. "I'm on my way to a hospice? (临终医院). I don't have any
family left. The doctor says I don't have very long. "
I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (计价器). For the next two hours, we drove
through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the neighborhood
where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where she had gone
dancing as a girl.
Sometimes she'd ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring
into the darkness, saying nothing.
At dawn, she suddenly said, "I'm tired. Let's go now." We drove in silence Lo the address she
had given me.
"How much do I owe you?" she asked.
"Nothing." I said.
"You have to make a living," she answered. "Oh, there are other passengers," I answered. She
said thanks to me, but she looked so sad.注意:
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2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
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Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug.
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I was on my way to visit her.
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Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the
woman left , I said to her, “My mother treated everyone kindly, she is a great person, but she
passed away years ago. you are like my mother,” the woman said, “ thank you. If you want to visit
me, I’ll tell you my story.” Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go
home.
我几乎不假思索地,弯下腰给了她一个拥抱。她紧紧地抓住我。在那个女人离开之
前,我对她说:“我母亲对每个人都很好,她是一个伟大的人,但她几年前就去世了。你
就像我妈妈一样,”那女人说,“谢谢你。如果你想去看我,我会告诉你我的故事。然后
那个女人离开了。停了很久之后,我开着出租车回家了。
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The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old woman told me that she used to be a
millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular buildingwe saw last night. But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of cancer.
She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sad! At last, the old woman said to me, “Life
is short, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn money to make a living, always
remember that family is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.
第二天,我就在去看她的路上。老妇人告诉我,她曾经是个百万富翁。她开始于赚钱。她
是我们昨晚看到的一幢大楼的主人。但她忽视了她的家人。她唯一的儿子一年前死于癌
症。她卖掉了一切来救他,但都失败了。多么多的悲伤啊!最后,老妇人对我说:“生命
很短暂,但请不要着急。”虽然每个人都必须赚钱才能谋生,但你要永远记住,家庭对你
来说是最重要的事情。”我什么也没说,只是使劲地点了点头。
第 20 篇 一辈子的朋友
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“Friends are angels who leave miracles (奇迹) in your heart.”“Quilts sewn by friends are a
true comfort.”...Quilting took a lot of time. But the messages on it felt meaningful.
When I started my current project,_I woke up every day with new ideas and fresh
enthusiasm. I really believed the importance of what I wanted to create, and I had my husband,
Claudio,_cheer me on. But then, things got hard. I injured my shoulder and my recovery was slow.
In the middle of it, I lost Claudio to cancer. Then I was discouraged, lonely, and without Claudio's
support. Facing down the halffinished quilt in my sewing room one morning soon after his death, I
could hardly gather the energy to sew it.
The quilt was meant to be a way to keep my old nursing class together. We'd graduated from
Mercy College of Ohio over 40 years before and quickly worked all over the country. I always
tried to find ways to connect everyone together, but nothing ever seemed to work out. I knew I
needed to find a connection to share at a distance. I thought about a quilt.
I got in touch with as many of my old classmates as I could. Everyone who wanted to join
the project was sent a piece of fabric (织物). They could sign it or write a personal message. Once
I got the pieces back, I'd sew them on the finished piece.
I rubbed my painful shoulder and ran my hand over the unfinished quilt. There was still so
much to do. Our class's fortyfifth anniversary party was coming up, but my heart wasn't in this
project anymore. With Claudio's encouragement I'd kept at it despite my painful shoulder. But
Claudio was gone. Working on the quilt was impossible with my aches and pains. Why was I even
trying? I covered up my sewing_machine and left the quilt as it was.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Weeks passed but I didn't sew a thing. I thought of it one afternoon when I went into my
sewing room to dust. Quilting pieces covered the table. They were filled with colorful messages
from my old classmates. I picked one up:“Mercy sisters—friends forever!”The handwriting
was messy, but the statement was true. I could almost imagine my old friends right beside me,
whispering words of encouragement and love. Maybe I was not as alone as I thought. Suddenly
my project no longer felt so frightening. No time to waste. I uncovered my sewing_machine and
got to work.
几个星期过去了,但我什么也没缝。一天下午,我走进缝纫室掸去灰尘,想到了。绗
缝的碎片覆盖着桌子。里面充满了我老同学们丰富多彩的信息。我拿了一个:“仁爱姐
妹,永远的朋友!”笔迹很乱,但说法是真的。我几乎可以想象我的老朋友就在我身边,
低语着鼓励和爱。也许我并不像我想的那么孤单。突然间,我的项目不再感到那么可怕
了。不要浪费任何时间。我打开了我的缝纫机,开始工作了。
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I arrived at our fortyfifth anniversary party equipped with pictures of the finished
quilt. The ladies cheered as the photos went from hand to hand. I couldn't wait for them to hold the
real thing, for them to be covered in the comfort of old friends, just like I had been when I needed
it most. No matter how much the distance was, whether it was from heaven or Earth across the
country, Claudio and my friends would always be there for me in spirit.
我到达了我们的五十周年派对配备完成被子的照片。,女士们欢呼起来。我迫不及待
地让他们拿着真正的东西,让他们得到老朋友的安慰,就像我最需要它的时候一样。无论
距离有多远,无论是从天堂还是从大地出发,克劳迪奥和我的朋友们都将在精神上永远陪
伴着我。