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11 环境保护类
1 精选最新名校试题
2 话题故事背诵模板
3 分类话题情节分析
4 分类话题写作步骤
5 分类话题高分词汇
6 分类话题写作高分句型
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Melati and Isabel deeply love their home on the island, surrounded by tropical rain forests, green fields, and a
vast ocean. Enjoying a swim at their local beach was once a daily pleasure for them. But when Melati was fifteen,
and Isabel just ten, the sisters started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters near their borne. More
often than not, plastic bags would be around them as they swam and some were scattered on the beach. They got
really upset about that.
Melati didn’t think much about it until one day her teacher gave a lesson on some world heroes. Each of those
people had sparked movements of positive changes in the world. They believed in the impact they could have and
they did inspire more people to do something meaningful. After school, Melati walked home slowly in silence,
concerned about the vast amount of plastic rubbish on the beach. The heroes crossed her mind. If they could do it,
we could do it too, she thought. The idea lit her up. She couldn’t wait to share what she thought with Isabel and
quickened her pace.
“So many plastic bags around! The beach is dirty and messy! It’s so terrible! We have lost the clean and
beautiful beach. Can’t we do something to get it back?” Melati said heartily. Isabel felt a bit puzzled at what to do,
but she also had a strong desire to do something. Picturing a beach as fascinating as before in mind, the pair jumped
with joy.
They talked a lot, anxious to know how Dad and Mom would respond to their ideas. That night when the
family sat by the dinner table, the sisters eagerly got their ideas across. While Mom and Dad listened to the girls
carefully, their eyes shone. “How amazing that would be! We are so proud of you!” Dad exclaimed. Mom came up,
gave them a thumb up and hugged the sisters.
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Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.
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One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper.
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Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away. They took advantage of their spare time to
pick up rubbish on the beach. However, it was soon that they realized that they couldn't solve the problem on their
own for there was so much plastic. After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their
idea among youth, involving more youths in the movement, which proved to be a hit. More and more teenagers
took part. In a month, they altogether collected and recycled 2.5 tons of plastic, recovering the beautiful beach.
One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper. The two girls were invited to an interview
in which they were asked what inspired them to start the organization, what the biggest challenges are and what
advice they have for young people who want to make changes in this world. They said a team is what keeps them
going on the challenging days and added, “keeping our team engaged and motivated has been a challenge and we
are happy to have a positive influence.” Melati and Isabel are heroes who make a big difference to our world.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两个女孩非常喜欢在自己家附近的海边游泳，后来发现海滩上的塑料
垃圾太多了，再也不想去游泳了，心情很不好。后来课上老师讲到英雄人物，他们可以对世界起到正面影
响，并激励到身边的人，两个女孩想到自己也可以去做一些事情。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“梅拉蒂和伊莎贝尔决定立即产生积极的影响。”可知，第一段可描写两个女孩采取
行动去改善沙滩的状况，并发动身边的年轻人参与并创建组织，及他们的成果。
②由第二段首句内容“一个月后，梅拉蒂接到了当地一家报社的电话。”可知，第二段可描写他们的组织
规模不断扩大，在当地造成影响，接受报社采访。
2. 续写线索：去行动改变沙滩状况——创建组织——成果——接受采访——采访内容——谈感想
【高分词汇】
行为类
①利用：take advantage of/make use of/employ
②解决：solve/address/find a solution for
③参与： take apart/ get involved
情绪类
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】①受鼓舞的，激励的：motivated/inspired
②积极：positive /active
【高分句型1】
However, it was soon that they realized that they couldn't solve the problem on their own for there was so much
plastic. (运用了强调句型)
【高分句型2】
After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their idea among youth, involving more
youths in the movement, which proved to be a hit.(运用了现在分词involving作状语和which引导的非限制性
定语从句)
【高分句型3】
The two girls were invited to an interview in which they were asked what inspired them to start the organization,
what the biggest challenges are and what advice they have for young people who want to make changes in this
world.（运用了in which引导了定语从句，及并列的宾语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a lovely spring morning in the mountains of my home. Here was full of natural atmosphere. The sky
was blue, the sun was warm, and the air was fresh. As driving along the winding road, I could see thousands of wild
flowers in bloom. When I turned round, I slowed down as I saw some volunteers picking up garbage along the side
of the road. I just smiled as I saw them doing some cleaning in spring for Mother Earth and my mind suddenly
floated back in time to another spring morning long ago.
When my children were younger, I used to walk along a small route around the lake near my home. It was also
on a spring morning that I noticed much garbage lying along the route. The next day, I brought a big garbage bag
and started to slowly pick up the garbage along my way. All kinds of deserted objects lay all over the floor. There
were pop cans, plastic water bottles, wrappers for candy bars, empty chip bags, pieces of broken fishing line and
even an old shoe. Every time I stopped, I picked up a piece of garbage. And I even fished some garbage out of the
edge of the water. By the time I circled the lake, the garbage bag had been nearly full.
Tired but happy, I put the bag in an empty garbage can. I stopped before I headed home and took one last look
at the lake as the sun set. It looked more beautiful than ever and I felt like the angels were looking down upon it
with me and sharing my smiles.
I always think that at times this world’s problems can seem overwhelming and you may wonder what you can
do to make a difference. But the truth is that every good thing you do matters a lot! I do believe every time I stop to
pick up a single piece of garbage, I can make a difference. As my children are adults now, I decide to spend more
time protecting the environment.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness.
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Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot.
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I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness. I know that there is power in numbers,
and I want to get as many people involved as possible. I’ve convinced my children to take action with me like I did
before. We learn to make many cards to hand out to people, with some words about environment protection written
on them. We’ve also set up signs around the lake to remind people to pay attention to the environment. Other
members of my family also go to the lake to pick up garbage on weekends.
Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot. Thanks to our efforts, the lake has taken on
a new look. The surroundings are clearer and there is no more garbage floating on its water. There is little garbage
on either side of the road along the lake. It is surprising that many people take their garbage away. Few people drop
garbage here. I am pleased to note that more people actively volunteer to pick up the garbage. This gives us more
confidence to protect our nearby environment.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在山上散步时，注意到沿途有许多垃圾，于是作者第二天带了一
个大垃圾袋，开始慢慢地沿途捡垃圾。此后，作者决定花更多的时间来保护环境，并号召其他人的加入。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我开始鼓励其他人发展环保意识。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何鼓励其他人加
入自己的。
②由第二段首句内容“许多天过去了，周围环境有了很大的改善。”可知，第二段可描写作者他们的努力
对环境的影响。
2. 续写线索：鼓励其他人发展环保意识——分发卡片——周末捡垃圾——环境改善——获得信心
【高分词汇】
行为类
开始：begin/start
培养：develop/foster
注意：pay attention to / keep one's eyes open
情绪类
高兴：pleased /glad
惊人的：surprising /astonishing
【高分句型1】
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】I know that there is power in numbers, and I want to get as many people involved as possible. (运用了that引导
宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
It is surprising that many people take their garbage away. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
3．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a hot September afternoon, Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library. When they passed
by Tubman park, Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library. As they entered the park, the sight of the
swings (秋千) and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there. But now
everything looked so old, sad, and dirty. Litter lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin. There were still
young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the trash that littered the playground. A little boy told
them that the city took the other trash cans away and the remaining one never got emptied often.
As they headed toward the library, the two high school students wrinkled their forehead. In the library, they
encountered Mrs. Evans, their kind-hearted fifth-grade teacher, retired yet still passionate. Mrs. Evans listened as
Isabel and Peter eagerly explained what they’d seen. Finally, she recommended them to go to the City Hall to voice
their concerns.
The next day, Isabel and Peter went into the building of the City Hall but were met with an impatient officer.
They were informed that the city couldn’t help with their problem due to a tight budget. Discouraged, they left and
turned to Mrs. Evans for help.
Under her guidance, they decided to ask Go Green, a non-profit organization whose goal is to protect the
environment, for help. “This group is good at raising money for projects just like yours, ” said Mrs. Evans. She
promised to arrange them to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this, their face lit up.
Two main tasks remained ahead: researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing
presentation. As Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking, they cooperated quite
well. Isabel learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the trash down without being
emptied often, which saves time, money, and energy. Based on this, Peter practiced his presentation over and over
again.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.
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A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. Finally, it was time
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】for him to do the presentation. Standing in front of several experts from Go Green, Peter was nervous in fear of
screwing things up. But unbelievably, when he began to speak, everything went so smoothly. His voice was clear
and influential, and his speech was logical and well-organized. Peter ended his presentation with a deep bow and
went out to wait for Go Green’s decision.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Their ideas were approved and Go Green agreed
to provide the money they needed to purchase the trash bin. Peter smiled. It meant not only their efforts paid off,
but also Tubman park would restore its cleanness and tidiness. Peter and Isabel decided to tell Mrs. Evans this good
news first and then worked out the next step they needed to take.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Peter和Isabel经过儿时玩耍的Tubman公园，发现公园破败不堪，垃圾
满地，于是决定想办法改变其面貌。在埃文斯夫人的建议下，他们决定向环境保护组织Go Green寻求帮助。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一周后，彼得紧张地站在大厅的后面，环境保护组织Go Green正在那里开会”可知，
第一段可描写彼得向Go Green作报告的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“会后，伊莎贝尔兴奋地把这个好消息告诉了彼得”可知，第二段可描写得知Go
Green同意提供帮助后，Peter和Isabel接下来的打算。
2. 续写线索：感到紧张——顺利完成报告——得到好消息——与埃文斯夫人分享快乐
【高分词汇】
行为类
①弄糟：screw up/mess up
②开始：begin/start
③同意，赞成：approve/agree
情绪类
①难以置信地：unbelievably/incredibly
②兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
【高分句型1】
Standing in front of several experts from Go Green, Peter was nervous in fear of screwing things up.(运用了现在
分词作时间状语)
【高分句型2】
But unbelievably, when he began to speak, everything went so smoothly.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型3】
Their ideas were approved and Go Green agreed to provide the money they needed to purchase the trash bin.(运用
了省略连词的定语从句)
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Last week, I went back to my hometown, which used to be a beautiful place, with green trees all over the
mountains and a small river winding through the whole countryside in mind. I couldn’t wait to see my hometown,
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】which I had always been dreaming of. The mountains, the trees, the river and the people there have always been in
my mind these years.
While I was on the way to my hometown, I looked out of the bus window to enjoy the beautiful scenery at the
same time. My hometown came nearer and nearer. However, I couldn’t believe something strange came into my
eyes: all the trees along the road were gone and lots of sand was blowing in the wind! I wondered if I had taken a
wrong bus. In fact, I hadn’t.
The bus finally arrived. I quickly got off, looking around the place I used to live in. Everything had changed！
Trees were gone, leaving the bare mountains and a dry river. Seeing this, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. I rushed
onto a mountain, trying to find a single tree there, but I failed. There was nothing but sand. I stood still, lost in
thought. In the rest of that day, I could hardly talk. I was just wondering why people cut down all the trees and the
river dried up.
It was not until the next day that I had a chance to talk with my grandfather, who had lived there for over
eighty years. I expressed my puzzlement to him directly. “Well,” he said in a sad voice, “nobody here wants to cut
down trees and make the river dry up, if possible. But all of us have no choice！” My grandfather continued,
getting a little excited. “As the population grows larger and larger, people needed more food to feed themselves.
They had to cut down the trees to make room for growing rice to make a living. Besides, people had to channel
water into the fields. Day by day, trees were gone and the river dried up.”
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After I came back from my hometown, it took me a long time to calm down.
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After I came back from my hometown, it took me a long time to calm down. I still couldn’t believe
people in my hometown would do such foolish things! I decided to do something to raise awareness of protecting
the earth. From then on, I often went to the library to read newspapers or surf the Internet to look for some good
methods of improving living environment. I often talked to my classmates, friends and relatives about our earth,
exchanging my opinions with them. In fact, to my great joy, most of them feel the same way and realize the
importance of protection in mind.
Nowadays, science and technology is developing rapidly. People’s living conditions have been improved a
lot, but I do think people’s awareness of protecting environment should be enhanced at the same time. We must be
aware of the fact that our beautiful environment is being destroyed and if we don’t take effective measures to stop
it, all of us will lose the chance to live on the earth one day. We are all living under the same blue sky. Therefore, all
of us have a duty to protect our environment to make the world a better place.
【情节分析】
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】本文以作者的见闻为线索展开，讲述了作者重回故乡，发现故乡的环境发生了巨大变化，河流干枯，
树木被砍伐，通过跟爷爷聊天得知了原因：随着人口的不断增多，人们迫于生计，伐树开荒，久而久之对
环境产生了破坏。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我从家乡回来后，花了很长时间才平静下来。”可知，第一段可描写作者回来后想
到了什么，并准备要做什么来保护环境。
②由第二段首句内容“当今，科学技术发展迅速。”可知，第二段可写人们生活水平的进步不能以牺牲环
境为代价，要保护环境，人人有责。
2. 续写线索：寻找解决办法——交流沟通——身边人改变观念——阐述自己的看法
【高分词汇】
行为类
①. 决定做某事：decide to do sth./determine to do sth.
②. 寻找：look for/search
③. 交流：talk to/communicate with
情绪类
①. 使我感到高兴的是：to my great joy/to my great delight
②. 难以置信：couldn’t believe/be difficult to believe
【高分句型1】
I still couldn’t believe people in my hometown would do such foolish things! (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
We must be aware of the fact that our beautiful environment is being destroyed and if we don’t take effective
measures to stop it, all of us will lose the chance to live on the earth one day. (运用了that引导的同位语从句及if
引导的状语从句)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I came back home, my mother was having a conversation with my seven-year-old daughter Jane. They
were talking about how to fight against climate change in the holidays. I interrupted, saying we could do it by
eating leftovers (剩菜) this holiday season. Mom and I both smiled.
I said, “You know Americans throw away 25 percent more trash between Thanksgiving and New Year’s Day,
including things like plastic from old tech and gift wrap. Food waste, which accounts for 30 to 40 percent of year-
round waste entering landfills (垃圾填埋场), also rises sharply during the holidays. During Thanksgiving week
alone, Americans throw out roughly 200 million pounds of turkey meat, along with 30 million pounds of gravy (肉
汁) and 14 million pounds of dinner rolls.”
Jane was puzzled at the figures of food waste but she was interested in the consequences. I told her, “When
thrown-away food makes its way to landfills and rots, it produces methane, a kind of greenhouse gas. That’s not
friendly. It can destroy the ecosystem, threatening the survival of animals, plants and humans on the planet.”
Jane was nervous and asked what we could do to help the earth. “One of the most powerful tools we have is
just to directly decrease our own waste in our home,” my mom said. “It’s also really challenging because most of
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】our waste is happening in different ways. But individual action can also play a huge role in dealing with food waste,
particularly in the US.”
I remember that in my family, there are two traditions when it comes to holiday meals: there must be more
food on the table than everyone can eat, and everyone must take home a plate of food at the end of the meal to
make sure all the hard work that went into its preparation wasn’t wasted.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jane asked, “why prepare so much food for a holiday?”
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Jane answered “Sure” and hoped to help Grandmother to prepare for dinners.
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Jane asked, “why prepare so much food for a holiday?” My mom smiled saying it was to make sure there
was enough for everyone, not just to enjoy the meal but to enjoy leftovers for as long as they wanted. I explained
that not everyone had realized the importance of food and the bad effect of food waste. Eating leftovers could help
us reduce food waste and that planning would go a long way. I asked my daughter whether she would spend a
holiday without wasting food to fight against climate change.
Jane answered “Sure” and hoped to help Grandmother to prepare for dinners. My mom and I both smiled
again. We worked out how many people would attend the party and how much food would be bought. Jane was
happy to take part in the activities. I hope my mom’s method will help her realize the duty to do something for our
earth. It’s a small step, but if many other people take similar action, it’ll give the planet a breather at a time when
that’s badly needed.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者有一天回家发现母亲在和七岁的女儿简讨论如何在假期应对气候
变化，作者指出了美国的食物浪费问题，简感到困惑，问她们能做些什么来帮助地球，作者母亲表示可以
从自己、从小事做起，减少食物浪费，减少垃圾。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】①由第一段首句内容“简问：‘为什么假期要准备这么多食物？’”可知，第一段可描写作者母亲向简解
释原因，作者讲明吃剩饭的好处，问女儿是否愿意在假期不浪费食物以应对气候变化。
②由第二段首句内容“简回答说‘当然’，并希望帮助外婆准备晚餐。”可知，第二段可描写简和作者还
有外婆一起，在不浪费食物的原则下，按人数准备晚餐，作者希望女儿能明白此活动的意义。
2. 续写线索：简提问——外婆解释原因——作者讲明吃剩饭的好处——作者询问简是否愿意一起行动
——简高兴地付诸于行动——作者希望女儿明白个人力量的重要性
【高分词汇】
行为类
①意识到：realize/be aware of
②帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth./assist sb. to do sth.
③参加：attend/join in
情绪类
①微笑：smile/beam
②高兴的：happy/delighted/pleased
【高分句型1】
I explained that not everyone had realized the importance of food and the bad effect of food waste. (运用了that引
导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
It’s a small step, but if many other people take similar action, it’ll give the planet a breather at a time when that’s
badly needed. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a hot September afternoon, Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library. When they passed
by Tubman park, Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library. As they entered the park, the sight of the
swings and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there. But now
everything looked so old, sad, and dirty. Litter lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin. There were still
young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the trash that littered the playground. A little boy told
them that the city took the other trash cans away and the remaining one never got emptied often.
As they headed toward the library, the two high school students wrinkled their forehead. In the library, they
met Mrs. Evans, their kindhearted fifth-grade teacher, retired yet still passionate. Mrs. Evans listened as Isabel and
Peter eagerly explained what they’d seen. Finally, she recommended them to go to the Go Green, a nonprofit
organization whose goal is to protect the environment, for help. “This group is good at raising money for projects
just like yours,” said Mrs. Evans. She promised to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this, their face lit up.
Two main tasks remained ahead: researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing speech. As
Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking, they worked together quite well. Isabel
learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the trash down without being emptied
often, which saves time, money, and energy. Based on this, Peter practiced his speech over and over again.
注意：
1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
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A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.
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A week later, Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting. He could feel nothing
but his hands shaking and heart pounding. “You’ll be great, Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Just then, Peter heard
his name being announced. It was time to present! Peter took a deep breath and then went on the stage. “Tubman
Park needs a new kind of trash can,” Peter explained, pointing to a poster of a trash can. Then Peter explained the
working principle of the trash can in detail. The judges nodded as they listened, seeming interested in the project.
After the meeting, Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news. Go Green had agreed to buy the new trash cans
for the park! Hearing the inspiring news, they both leaped into the air with joy. Peter hardly had time to enjoy the
moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs. Evans and showing their gratitude to her. Learning of the
result, Mrs. Evans smiled through watery eyes. “I know you can do it! Tubman Park is sure to become one that is
clean and green again!” Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了彼得和他的朋友伊莎贝尔在去图书馆的路上看到小时候玩耍的公园非
常肮脏，于是两个高中生通过老师向环保组织求助。
【写作步骤】
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个星期后，彼得紧张地站在“绿Go”开会的大厅后面。”可知，第一段可描写彼
得演讲的过程和评委的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“会后，伊莎贝尔兴奋地告诉彼得这个好消息。”可知，第二段可描写好消息是什么
以及老师对此的反应。
1. 续写线索：发表演讲——评委认可——得到赞助——高兴——分享好消息——老师感动
【高分词汇】
行为类
颤抖：shake/tremble
购买：buy /purchase
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】项目：project /program
情绪类
感谢：showing their gratitude to /be grateful for
快乐：joy /happiness
【高分句型1】
The judges nodded as they listened, seeming interested in the project.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】
Peter hardly had time to enjoy the moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs. Evans and showing
their gratitude to her. (运用了before引导时间状语从句)
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi’s 20-member team
was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected
Areas’ International Ranger Awards.
Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our
global conservation efforts, helping to stem biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as
natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges".
Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich
biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win-win situation.
After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a
forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve.
Established in 1963, Wolong is the country’s earliest panda reserve. It experienced serious human-animal
conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s. In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the
country’s first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve.
In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with the World Wide Fund for Nature to establish the China
Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal.
At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers. With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective
jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life-threatening adventure. Plastic woven
bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases. For Shi, the real challenges are
natural disasters, which cannot be predicted.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over
a 400-meter-long mountain pass,
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He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over
a 400-meter-long mountain pass, about 5, 500 meters in altitude, which was the most dangerous place for us with
snow depth on the ground reaching up to two meters and the wind blowing heavily, ” Shi says. Suddenly Shi heard
thundering sounds and a mass of snow came tumbling down the mountain. Quickly throwing himself at the rock
and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. Shi
has a soft spot for giant pandas. Although he has patrolled the reserve for three decades, he has only met the pandas
twice. In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in
the forest, but didn’t spot one. When they were about to give up, there was a sound from the bamboo forest behind,
and they turned around and saw a fat panda about six meters away, hiding in the woods. It ran quickly. It was funny
to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild. The scene is just like hide-and-seek which will never be
forgotten.
【情节分析】
本文是以倒叙的形式展开，首先介绍了Shi与他的团队在世界自然保护联盟世界保护区委员会国际护
林员的在线颁奖典礼上获得了特别奖，然后开始叙述Shi从大学毕业以来，成为卧龙国家级自然保护区的
森林守护者，介绍护林员的生活艰难，没有合适的户外设备，而更大的挑战是无法预测的自然灾难。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他对2017年6月的一次例行检查时发生了雪崩，记忆犹新。“我们即将爬过一个
400米长的山口，”可知，第一段可描写Shi在这次灾难中的遭遇，以及他又是如何幸免于难的。
②由第二段首句内容“保护野生动物需要付出很多艰苦的工作，但这项工作也有一些惊喜。”可知，第二
段可描写Shi在保护野生动物工作中的惊喜是什么。
2. 续写线索：例行检查——遭遇雪崩——Shi自救幸免于难——野生动物保护——见到大熊猫——惊喜描
述
【高分词汇】
行为类
①. 滚动下来：tumbling down/rolling down
②.紧紧抓住：grab/seize/catch hold of
③.追逐：chase/go after/track down
情绪类
惊讶：surprise/shock/astonishment/amazement
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】滑稽可笑的：funny/amusing/fantastic
【高分句型1】
Quickly throwing himself at the rock and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.（运用了现在分词短语
作状语）
【高分句型2】
In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in the
forest, but didn’t spot one.（不定式作目的状语）
【高分句型3】
It ran quickly. It was funny to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild.（运用了it作形式主语，不定
式短语作真正主语）
8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I just want a normal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew what April meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born
on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.
“Remember when you turned seven?” said Bailey.
“How could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout?” said April.
“We helped out at your garage sales and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight...”
“It was a Tree Spree,” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to
recycle,” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint.” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I’d like to plan my own party this year.”
“Sure,” said Mom. “We could have a Composts Carnival.” “Great idea!” said Dad.
April cleared her throat. “I’d like to go to Maze Craze instead.” “Really?” said Dad, surprised.
“I guess we could do that. Dad and I can send you kids there.” said Mom.
April couldn’t wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn’t have to
think one bit about the earth.
At school the next day, April told her friends. “I’m having my birthday party at Maze Craze!”
“You are?” said Josie. “But we always do something earthy on your birthday.” “Remember that salamander we
found two years ago?” said Tyler. “Yeah,” said April. “This year, we’re not even going outside.”
“Oh!” said Tyler.
The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. “Thanks for coming,”
said April. “I’ve been so excited about my party. No shovels.
No collecting recyclables. Nothing earthy about it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I got here this morning and
saw this parking lot.”
April’s friends glanced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the ground. Newspapers and fast-food sacks
blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
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1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
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“What a mess!” April frowned.
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“What a mess!” April frowned. Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult
to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking the trash first?” Her
proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April’s mum grabbed some gloves from
the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags, April and Bailey
collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage. Many hands make
light work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for
the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something
for the earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone,” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday,
April!” shouted her friends. “I’m so lucky to have been born on Earth Day! ” (“Wow, another earthy
birthday,” )April thought to herself. “A Composts Carnival may be a good idea for next year.”
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了April过生日疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先
捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球
做点事的感觉真好。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘真是一团糟!’April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，
描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着收集的垃圾笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们
的反应。
2. 续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地球做点事真
好
【高分词汇】
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/ support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth./ take pains to do sth.
情绪类
困难：difficult / rough
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】良好：good / great
【高分句型1】
Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. (运
用了though引导让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】
How about picking the trash first? (运用了动名词作宾语)
9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the little village of Meadowbrook, surrounded with rolling hills, lived two curious and adventurous twins,
Sarah and Sam. At the age of twelve, the inseparable twins were always seeking new adventures.
One morning, Miss Harper, their favorite community service teacher, was introducing community volunteer
work. Sam suddenly caught sight of the hill behind the schoolyard and was instantly inspired with the idea of
climbing to the top.
“Sarah, ”whispered Sam, “Wouldn’t it be splendid if we climbed to the top of that hill today?It’s said to hold
breathtaking views of our beloved village. ”
Hearing that, Sarah’s face lit up with excitement, her heart filled with eagemess. “Oh, Sam, that sounds great!
But we promise Papa and Mama we will save our pocket money and not spend a single penny unnecessarily. ”With
determination in their hearts, the twins worked out a plan. They decided to bring homemade snacks and refreshing
drinks from their own kitchen, ensuring they wouldn’t spend a penny.
The twins set off on their journey, their backpacks filled with sandwiches, cookies, and bottles filled with cool,
clear water from the village well. As they walked along the path, they noticed colorful trash scattered (散落) about,
which ruined the natural beauty surrounding them.
A brilliant idea flashed into Sarah’s mind. “Why don’t we pick up the litter along the way?We could clean up
our beloved countryside and maybe even earn a few coins by recycling the materials. ”
Excited by the idea, the twins eagerly collected the scattered items. As they reached the foot of the hill, their
bags heavy with the collected waste, they came across a recycling center. With excitement, they exchanged their
findings for shiny coins. With newfound treasures in their pockets, they climbed up the hill.
When they reached the top, they were greeted by a breathtaking view of their village. “It’s so beautiful!”Sam
burst out,” We must share our adventure with Miss Harper and our classmates!”
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next morning, Sarah and Sam returned to school, eager to meet Miss Harper.
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The next morning, Sarah and Sam returned to school, eager to meet Miss Harper. The moment they saw Miss
Harper, they excitedly told her what they had done. Miss Harper listened carefully and praised them satisfiedly.
Then an idea hit her. Miss Harper gathered the class together and asked mysteriously, “Would you like to
experience an adventure and at the same time bring cleanliness to the village as a volunteer?” Each student was
excited with wide eyes, hands raising high, shouting, “Me! Me!”
The following weekend, the entire class started to clean up their beloved village. They happily ran up the hill
with bags of garbage in their hands and competed to see whose bag could be full first. Miss Harper reminded the
students to be safe from time to time. Soon they were down the hill, dragging their bags full of trash. Miss Harper
praised: “You are not only little adventurers but also little guardians of the environment!”
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述一对好奇又爱冒险的双胞胎，萨拉和萨姆爬上村庄后面的小山。当他们
沿着小路走的时候，他们注意到破坏环境的的五颜六色的垃圾。于是，他们清理了垃圾并通过回收它们赚
一些钱。然后，他们向哈珀老师和同学们分享了这次冒险经历。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，萨拉和萨姆回到学校，急切地想见到哈珀老师。”可知，本段可以写
他们告诉哈珀老师他们的冒险经历。哈珀老师决定带领全班同学一起进行这场能够为村庄带来美好的冒险。
②由第一段首句内容“接下来的周末，全班同学开始打扫他们心爱的村庄。”可知，本段可以写学生们打
扫村庄时的场景以及他们的收获。
2. 续写线索：萨拉和萨姆告诉老师他们的经历——老师表扬了他们——老师有了主意——老师号召同学们
一起加入——他们比赛——老师表扬同学们
【高分词汇】
行为类
①看见：see/catch sight of/glance at
②告诉：tell/inform
③突然想起：hit/strike/occur to
情绪类
①兴奋地：excitedly/thrillingly/feverishly
②满意地：satisfiedly/with satisfaction/approvingly
③高兴地：happily/joyfully/amusedly
【高分句型1】
The moment they saw Miss Harper, they excitedly told her what they had done. (运用了时间状语从句和what引
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
They happily ran up the hill with bags of garbage in their hands and competed to see whose bag could be full first.
(运用了whose引导的宾语从句)
10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为80
左右。
It was such a nice day and it’s Sunday. I left for the park with my skateboard. There were so many kids in the
central square. The parents chatted merrily in small groups, occasionally taking a glance at their kids. I skated for
about half an hour and took a break on the nearby bench. Early summer morning was always the best time, the bird
chirping in the trees and cool winds blowing in my face. How could I miss it? Dad said he was going to mow the
lawn in the yard on the weekend and asked whether I could help. I made an excuse and just ran away.
I took a look around the park before I stood up and spotted an old man on the far side of the park. He kept
bending forward and threw something into a plastic bag with him I watched for a while and realized what he was
doing. He was picking up the litter. At first, I thought he might be a cleaner working in the park but I had never
seen him before. “Who is he? It’s Sunday and he is not here for fun?” I talked to myself. I went on skating and
forgot about him.
Time went fast and the sun was already high up in the sky. It was getting hot and I was tired. I was ready to go
when I saw the old man again. The park was hall empty. He was still there, collecting the rubbish left on the
benches with much elfort. Time and time again, he stopped to straighten his body but he showed no sign of leaving
soon. Clearly, it was hard work for people of his a age.
“Not to leave? What if he has no water left in such hot weather?” I wondered.
With some hesitation, I walked toward him.
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With some hesitation, I walked toward him. “Would you please tell me why you pick up garbage on Sunday?”
I asked. The old man told me that there was too much garbage in the park, making the park look terrible. He just
did what he could to make the park tidy. I handed the old man a bottle of water and picked up garbage with him,
after which I went home hurriedly. Seeing my father mowing the lawn, I went to help him. Looking at the tidy
lawn, I felt very tired but happy.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了星期天，作者拒绝了父亲修剪草坪的请求，来到公园玩滑板。作者看
到一位老人在捡垃圾，当天气越来越热时，老人仍在忙着捡垃圾，作者为老人感到担心。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
由段落首句内容“有些犹豫，我向他走去。”可知，本段可描写作者询问老人在星期天捡垃圾的原因，之
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】后和老人一起捡垃圾。完成后作者急忙回家帮助父亲修剪草坪，看着整洁的草坪，作者感到累但是很快乐。
2. 续写线索：走向老人——询问原因——帮助老人使公园变整洁——帮助父亲使草坪变整洁——累但很
快乐
【高分词汇】
行为类
①告诉我：tell me/ let me know
②递给：hand/ pass
③帮助他：help him/ give him a hand/ do him a favor
情绪类
①匆忙地：hurriedly/ in a hurry
②快乐的：happy/ delighted
【高分句型1】
He just did what he could to make the park tidy. (运用了由连接词what引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
I handed the old man a bottle of water and picked up garbage with him, after which I went home hurriedly. (运用了
由“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)
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