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►读后续写重点话题突破
02 助人、善行、义举
1 精选最新名校试题
2 话题故事背诵模板
3 分类话题情节分析
4 分类话题写作步骤
5 分类话题高分词汇
6 分类话题写作高分句型
1．（2023·湖南师大附中校考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The chain of kindness
The rain was coming down so hard that each drop seemed to explode as it hit the roof of the car. Tom looked
out into the coal-black night, struggling desperately to keep his car on the road. The rain beatdown continuously
and the road was deserted except for Tom and his car.
Tom could see his wheelchair in the backseat from the rear-view mirror and quickly looked down at his thin,
broken legs. He could feel a familiar wave of despair start to wash over him. Suddenly, a loud noise shook him out
of his moment of hopelessness as the car began to bump down the road. “Great,” he thought, “a flat tyre.”
With a heavy sigh, Tom brought the car to a stop, resting his head on the steering wheel, defeated! After a few
seconds, he looked up and peered out of the window. In the distance, he could see a light twinkling in the
blackness.
When Tom approached the house, a young girl around ten years old was standing in the doorway. He pulled up
and rolled down the window. “Are your parents at home?” he shouted over the wind and rain. “I have a flat tyre and
I need help.”
“Wait a minute,” the girl replied and went into the house. A few minutes later, she returned with an old man.
The girl held his arm and smiled lovingly up at him.
Tom explained the problem to the old man and added, “I need help because my legs are paralyzed.” The words
came out flat. But he did not know how else he could convey the fact that he needed help from this weak old man
in the middle of the rainstorm. The old man simply nodded.
The old man and the little girl concentrated on their work and the rain was soaking them. Once again, Tom
couldn’t help but feel he was useless. Soon the old man stepped to the window. “You’re all set,” he said. Tom
handed some money to the old man, but he made no move to take it. Finally, the young girls aid, “Grandfather is
blind.”
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Tom did not know what to say.
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Inspired by the chance encounter, Tom started to see everything differently.
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Tom did not know what to say. He just gestured towards the girl and the old man helplessly as he stumbled
through an explanation that he would like to pay them for their help. The grandfather waved a hand and said,
“There is no need. Just be careful about getting home and continue the chain of kindness.” Tom got back on to the
road. The rain was now only a light mist, revealing the road ahead. A she drove through the night, he found himself
looking forward to the journey ahead.
Inspired by the chance encounter, Tom started to see everything differently. He contacted his doctor the next
day to see if he could do something to increase his mobility. Later, he pursued his long-lost dream of becoming a
teacher and reconnected with his family. Perhaps Tom was disabled in one way, but he decided that he would not let
this define who he was or what he could accomplish. Most importantly, he began to look forward to each new day
and view it as an opportunity to help others so that he could continue the chain of kindness.
【情节分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述一天夜里双腿残疾的Tom独自一人驾车行驶在倾盆大雨之中，突然他发
现他的车子爆胎了。Tom将车开到路边的一幢小屋求助。在那里，一个小女孩和她的爷爷冒雨为Tom修好
了车。当Tom准备给这对爷孙钱以示感谢时，他发现爷爷竟然是一位盲人。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①根据第一段首句“Tom吃惊得说不出话来”可知，下文可描写Tom付钱给老人，但被拒绝，老人告诉他
可以把这份传递下去。
②根据第二段首句“这件事让Tom大受鼓舞，他决定联系医生来改善自己的行动能力”可知，下文可描写
Tom不再颓废，重拾自己的梦想，并努力将这份信念转化为有益于他人的行动。
2. 续写线索：吃惊——付钱——拒绝并叮嘱将爱心传递下去——受到鼓舞——不再颓废，重拾梦想——
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【高分词汇】
行为类
①发现：find/feel/realize
②联系：contact/get in touch with
③决定：decide/determine/make up one’s mind
情绪类
①善良：kindness/goodness
②无助地：helplessly/hopelessly
【高分句型1】
A she drove through the night, he found himself looking forward to the journey ahead.（运用了as引导的时间状
语从句）
【高分句型2】
He contacted his doctor the next day to see if he could do something to increase his mobility.（运用了if引导的宾
语从句）
【高分句型3】
Most importantly, he began to look forward to each new day and view it as an opportunity to help others so that he
could continue the chain of kindness.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
2.（2023·湖北·开滦第二中学模拟预测）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完善的短文。
Mark grabbed his keys. He needed to get out of the house quickly. He had been trying to save as much money
as possible from the government assistance he received due to his disability, but it was harder and harder with
prices rising daily.
Unfortunately, he lost half his right arm in a car accident several years ago, and it was hard to find a new job in
his town in Tampa, Florida. He lost his previous job recently when the company went bankrupt (破产). For now, he
only had those government checks keeping him fed, but he was tapping into his savings for everything else, and
they were running out fast.
One of his friends had gotten him an interview and he was on his way. But after closing and locking his door,
Mark turned around and got the shock of his life. A pregnant (怀孕的) woman was lying on his lawn, and/he had no
idea how long she had been there.
He grabbed his phone and called 911 quickly, and suddenly, it started to rain. Finally, it came, and he
explained to the doctors that he had to move her because of the rain.
“Don’t worry, sir. She’s cold, so it was good that you moved her. Do you know this woman?” asked the doctor.
Mark shook his head.
“Can I give you my phone number? If you don’t find her family or anyone, can you call me? My name is
Mark Higgins.”
“I’ll see what I can do,” the doctor said, noting down his number and leaving with the woman.
Mark closed his door and sat down on his couch, hoping his heart would stop beating so fast. Suddenly, he
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】remembered his interview and looked at the clock. He was late for it. He dashed to his car, praying they would wait
for him.
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He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late.
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Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark.
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He got no calls, which meant his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to his being late. The following
day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t like him due to
his tardiness. But on the bright side, they hadn’t called from the hospital either, so they must have found the
pregnant woman’s family. He sat down at his kitchen table and started browsing his phone for possible job
openings when his doorbell rang. He opened the door and saw a man smiling widely at him. He is the husband of
the pregnant woman, David, and they live next door to Mark. He came over to express great gratitude to Mark for
what he had done and offered to repay him.
Seeing his lost right arm, David came up with an idea to reward Mark. David is a biomedical engineer. He has
been working in the hospital to make artificial limbs. He wants to provide Mark with a prosthetic limb for free as a
thank-you gift. They went back and forth for a while until David told him it would help him test these new designs
on someone. In the end, Mark agreed because it was a generous offer and could help him get a new job at some
point. Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview. But in
the end, it was the best decision of his life.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了马克因为救助自己院子中的一个孕妇，导致他面试迟到，但是孕妇的
丈夫是个生物医学工程师，作为感谢为他提供了一幅免费假肢，帮助孕妇成为了马克一生中最正确的决定。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他没有接到任何电话，这意味着面试官可能不喜欢他，因为他迟到了。”可知，第
一段可描写马克需要重新寻找工作，这时孕妇的丈夫大卫来感谢他。
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】②由第二段首句内容“看到自己失去的右臂，大卫想出了一个奖励马克的主意。”可知，第二段可描写大
卫免费为他提供了一幅假肢。
2. 续写线索：准备去面试——看到孕妇——帮助孕妇——面试迟到——大卫来感谢他——提供假肢作为感
谢
【高分词汇】
行为类
①浏览：browse/look through
②提供：offer/provide
③测试：test/examine
情绪类
①感谢：gratitude/appreciation/gratefulness
②无意识的：unconscious/comatose/senseless
【高分句型1】
The following day, Mark checked his phone and saw no calls, which meant that his interviewers probably didn’t
like him due to his tardiness.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Mark helped the unconscious woman in his yard, even though it made him late for his job interview.(even though
引导的状语从句)
3. （2023·河北保定·统考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Greatest Thanksgiving
“Are you going grocery shopping today?” my husband, Roy asked when I picked up the telephone.
“I plan to,” I answered.
Thanksgiving was only a couple days away. Everyone in our family would be coming to our house. My funds
were limited, therefore my box of coupons (优惠券) awaited me in the car. I knew I had to be creative in my
shopping that day. I had to stretch every dollar.
For a few seconds, Roy sat silently on the other end of the line. “Why do you ask?” I uttered, fearing what he
might say.
“Nancy, there’s a family with a half dozen kids that will not have anything to eat for Thanksgiving. The little
one is only five years old. While you’re at the store, could you possibly buy something for them?” Roy’s words
echoed in my heart. My head began to spin (眩晕)thinking about the fifty dollars I had reserved for our family’ s
Thanks giving dinner.
In the back of my mind I counted the hungry guests who would be coming to our house for dinner. I put my
head down on my desk, already feeling defeated.
There’s no way possible, I thought. But the sympathy I heard in my husband’s voice struck a nerve inside me.
“Sure.” I replied.
I finished my work and prayed all the way to the nearest grocery store.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】The turkeys were indeed on sale—29 cents a pound, but I discovered one big problem. When I read the sign
posted on the freezer door, my heart sank. “Limit one.”
“But I need two,” I uttered to myself, I decided to find the manager. I explained the problem. He made an
exception.
After tossing two turkeys in the cart, I began my shopping. It was amazing how many buy-one-get-one-free
items were being featured that day. In addition, I had all the right coupons to get exactly what both families needed
for a hearty Thanks giving dinner. I held my breath while the cashier rang up my groceries.
To my surprise, I had enough money. I was even able to purchase a package of cookies for the five-year-old
who had stolen my heart, even though I had never met her.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Later that afternoon, Roy and I made a special delivery to a home filled with children of all ages.
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On that Thanksgiving Day, my entire family also shared a hearty meal with us.
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Later that afternoon, Roy and I made a special delivery to a home filled with children of all ages. I will never
forget the smiles on the six kids’ faces, as they made several trips from my car carrying numerous bags of groceries
inside. Surprised and excited, they couldn’t wait to talk about their Thanksgiving dinner. Meanwhile,the little one
lit up at the sight of the cookies, jumping with great joy. The parents tightly held our hands with watery eyes,
“Thank you for making our day.”
On that Thanksgiving Day, my entire family also shared a hearty meal with us. We had plenty to eat. We even
had enough food left over for the evening meal. That afternoon, when I had time to think about what had happened,
I imagined a home, not far from where I lived, where there was a mother, a father and six children sitting around
the kitchen table, laughing and rejoicing. They enjoyed the same meal that our family had shared together that day.
Right then I realized that miracles happen when we step out in faith and all things are possible.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了在感恩节前几天，作者的丈夫打电话问她是否要去商店买感恩节
用的东西，作者回答是，丈夫告诉作者有个家庭有六个孩子他们感恩节什么吃的都没有，所以问作者能不
能给他们买点东西，虽然作者预留资金也不多，但是作者答应了。于是作者拿着预留资金和一堆优惠券去
了商店，给自己和那家人买了东西。幸运的是，作者带的钱足以支付买的东西。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天下午晚些时候，罗伊和我专程把东西送到一个满是各个年龄段孩子的家里。”
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】可知，第一段可描写作者和丈夫给这家人送东西，以及这家人的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“在那个感恩节，我们全家也一起吃了一顿丰盛的大餐。”可知，第二段可描写作者
一家有足够的吃的，以及作者对自己和丈夫给这一家人送东西的感受。
2. 续写线索：送东西——表现——感谢——全家吃大餐——作者感受
【高分词汇】
行为类
①高兴起来：light up/cheer up
②考虑：think about/consider
③发生：happen/take place
情绪类
①惊讶的：surprised/amazed
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【高分句型1】
I will never forget the smiles on the six kids’ faces, as they made several trips from my car carrying numerous bags
of groceries inside. （由as引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】
That afternoon, when I had time to think about what had happened, I imagined a home, not far from where I lived,
where there was a mother, a father and six children sitting around the kitchen table, laughing and rejoicing. （由
when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句，和where引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】
Right then I realized that miracles happen when we step out in faith and all things are possible.（运用了that引导
的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）
4.（2023·山东泰安·统考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mary’s husband died a few years ago from an accident. To make ends meet, she had to take on several jobs
and bring up her five children alone. Fortunately, her oldest children understood her and helped to look after the
younger kids. Mary always felt terrible about that, but there was nothing she could do. She dreamed of having a van
to transport goods for others so that she could have another source of income.
In the mornings, Mary cleaned the houses for some families, and worked as a cashier at a supermarket the rest
of the afternoon. At night, she worked at a gas station’s convenience store. Every night, she came home tired, and
most of the kids had been asleep by then.
One afternoon, Mary was walking to the supermarket to start her duty when she saw an old man staring at the
window of the bakery next door. The smell of fresh-baked bread permeated (弥漫) the air. However, the man
merely sighed and started walking away.
Mary felt awful for some unknown reason and stopped the man. “Hey, sir. I think I’ve seen you before at the
store, ”she said. “Yes. I’m Hector. Nice to see you,” the old man nodded at her and started to walk away.
“Wait, do you need anything?” Mary said, smiling kindly.
“Honestly, there was a leak in my roof this month, and I had to spend my entire month’s pension (退休金) on
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】it. I don’t have much money for desserts,” he said. “I don’t know when I’ll be able to buy some again.”
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2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Mary asked Hector to wait and she went into the bakery.
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One day, Mary saw a new van in the driveway with Hector standing next to it.
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Mary asked Hector to wait and she went into the bakery. She bought some bread for Hector. “Here you go,”
she said, handing him the bag when she exited the bakery. “I can’t accept this, ” he tried to reject, but Mary insisted.
“Please, let me do something for you today,” she continued. Hector thanked Mary and then walked away. In the
following days, Mary would see Hector daily and bring him something to eat. With time going by, they became
good friends. They even chatted about everything with each other.
One day, Mary saw a new van in the driveway with Hector standing next to it. “Surprise! This van is yours!”
Hector said. Mary couldn’t believe that. “Mary, you have helped me a lot. I can never repay that, but I had an old
watch. It was worth a pretty penny,” he said. “I can’t take this. You need money, too,” Mary refused. “Accept the
van, and you can quit one or two of your jobs to accompany your children,” Hector said. Mary was deeply moved
and she hugged Hector tightly, thanking him for his kindness.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Mary为了养家糊口，打了几份工，希望能有个送货的工作能节省出
时间照顾孩子，一天遇到了一位身处困境中的老人，这次偶然的善意使她圆了自己的梦想。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“玛丽让赫克托等一下，然后她走进面包店”可知，第一段可描写作者进到店里帮
Hector买了些面包，并经常去看望Hector，他们成为了好朋友。
②由第二段首句内容“一天，玛丽在车道上看到一辆新面包车，赫克托站在旁边”可知，第二段可描写
Hector帮助Mary买了一个货车，圆了她的梦想。Mary受到感动，感谢Hector的善良。
2. 续写线索：让Hector等待——Mary进店买面包——推辞——经常交流，成为好朋友——Mary看见新货
车——Hector卖掉名表——圆梦、感动——拥抱
【高分词汇】
行为类
①拒绝：reject/refuse
②购买：buy /purchase
③看望：see/visit/pay a visit to
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①感动的：moved/touched
②感谢某人：thank sb for/show appreciation for
【高分句型1】
With time going by, they became good friends.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】
Mary was deeply moved and she hugged Hector tightly, thanking him for his kindness.（现在分词短语作状语）
5.（2023·湖南常德·统考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That year I was ten years old and my father was away, leaving my mother and me behind. My mother was a
surgeon and worked at the local clinic a few blocks from where we lived. It was a noisy and cold winter, when 1
learned a valuable 1esson.
The bell rang and thoughts of Christmas were the only thing on my mind. I raced home from school. The
apartment was empty when I arrived and a note was attached to the refrigerator. My mother was working a double
shin and left me instructions for the day. I became angry and tore the note in several pieces. We had planned on
making Christmas biscuits together, but my mother spoiled it by working.
I suddenly realized my mother must have hidden the Christmas presents somewhere in her bedroom. I hunted
through mother’s closet, finding the gifts for Christmas wrapped but one, a model plane. At the thought of my
loneliness on such a night I couldn’t help but throw it onto the floor, its wings broken. I stood frozen with my eyes
and mouth wide open, staring down at the plane...
Then my mother came through the door and saw the plane.
“Danny?”
“Yeah, Mom?”
“I came home to take the toy plane to one of my patients, but...” she said, her eyes moving from the floor to
me. I stood sill, unable to come up with a good explanation for the toy’s ruin. The silence was terrible. I did not
hear my mother scold me. She just leaned against the wall with her tired body. A feeling of guilt floating into my
mind, I gathered my courage to tell her the horrible truth. She hugged me and asked me to put my coat on and
follow her.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We pulled up at a store, and Mother handed me 5 dollars.
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With me carrying the toy plane, we came to a bed in the clinic.
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We pulled up at a store, and Mother handed me 5 dollars. For a few moments I just felt confused. Mother
explained that her patient was a boy, who loved planes. His parents could not afford to buy him one, because he
was seriously ill, and they spent all they had. The words deeply touched me. Tears rolled down my face and I was
so guilty. I entered the store and chose a plane that cost the total 5 dollars for the boy, not for me. Strangely, now
thoughts of the boy instead of Christmas were the only thing on my mind.
With me carrying the toy plane, we came to a bed in the clinic. In the bed was the boy, who looked very sick.
Seeing the plane, the boy got excited. The arrival of us and the toy plane lit up his thin face and his tired gray eyes.
When we left, I could see tears welling up in the boy's and his parents' eyes. We got out of the clinic. Though it was
a little late, the holiday spirit was still in the air. I felt lucky that Mother gave me a special memory on that holiday.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了圣诞节时，作者放学回家搜寻妈妈买的圣诞礼物，发现圣诞节礼物包
得满满的，只有一件，一架飞机模型。作者很生气，忍不住把它扔到地板上，它的翅膀折断了。后来妈妈
告诉他，这个玩具是给一个身患重病的小男孩的。然后作者和妈妈一起为小男孩重新选圣诞礼物的故事。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们在一家商店停车，母亲递给我5美元。”可知，第一段可描写作者和妈妈买玩
具。
②由第二段首句内容“我提着玩具飞机，我们来到诊所的一张床前。”可知，第二段可描写作者和妈妈送
玩具。
2. 续写线索：拿钱——选购——送——激动—感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①流下：roll down /stream down
②进入：enter/go into
③走出：get out of/go out of
情绪类
①困惑：confused/puzzled/at a loss
②感动：touch/move
【高分句型1】
For a few moments I just felt confused. Mother explained that her patient was a boy, who loved planes.（运用了
who引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Seeing the plane, the boy got excited.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型3】
Though it was a little late, the holiday spirit was still in the air.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句）
6．（2023·江苏·校联考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Another term had started and I had to attend the first lecture of the new course. The lecturer told us to make
groups of two students for a project. I looked to the right and there was my classmate Jack sitting there. And I
decided myself that he would be my group member. On the left side, there was an older woman who was from an
open university. We talked about the project and decided to make a group of three. During the break, she told me
that, last year, she didn’t manage to pass the course, so she would try again.
Later we got an email from our lecturer saying it was not allowed to make groups of three students. The old
lady then tried to find some groups, but failed. I knew she wouldn’t find other groups, so I told her that we could do
the project together. I had to say good bye to Jack.
After many meetings, we finished the project. In the last meeting, I told her I had difficulty in finding a
summer job. I was living in a small town and there weren’t many jobs available and neither had I any previous
experience. She advised me to keep doing it, as one would finally answer someday. She then thanked me for
helping her and before leaving she said “see you”.
Two weeks later, I got an email from a company saying they had received my job application and decided to
call me for a job interview. I appeared for the interview and answered the questions interviewers raised. In the end,
they asked me where I had learned about the open job position. In fact, I had no idea so I told them I didn’t
remember well. They called me three days later and told me I could start in May. That would be the first time I
would be working as a software engineer and I couldn’t describe what I felt like.
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One day, I arrived at work and I noticed one familiar car.
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One day, I arrived at work and I noticed one familiar car. The registration number and color were somehow
known to me. I was certain I had seen this car before. Anyway, I went inside the building and opened my laptop. At
this moment, I heard someone saying “Hi, how is it going?”. That lady I had helped in university was in front of my
eyes. I said “Hi, wow, do you also work here?”, she replied “yes, I work here.” I was in shock.
She told me that she really understood me at that time. Because she had been in a similar situation when she
was young and that I had helped her so much, she tried to convince her manager to give me a chance. When I asked
her why didn’t she tell me, she said: “I actually said ‘see you’, didn’t you realize it?” That moment, I realized that
my attitude was right and I should keep it, as the lady said. We should always help other people in need.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加新课程的第一节课时，讲师让他们两人一组做一个项目，一
开始他和他的同学杰克组成一个小组，后来有一个上年纪的女人一直没有找到组，讲师还不允许他们组成
三人组，于是作者和这个女人组成小组，让杰克去另寻小组，最终他们完成了这个项目，女人给予了作者
鼓励的故事。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天，我去上班，注意到一辆熟悉的车。”可知，第一段可描写作者在上班的地方
又遇到他曾经帮助过的女人的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘她告诉我，那时她真的很理解我。”可知，第二段可描写那个女人为什么和如何
帮助作者的。
2. 续写线索：偶遇他曾经帮助过的女人——震惊——女人解释帮助作者的原因及经过——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②说服：convince/persuade
③保持：keep/maintain
情绪类
①确定的：certain/sure
②震惊的：be in shock/shocked
【高分句型1】
That lady I had helped in university was in front of my eyes. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
When I asked her why didn’t she tell me, she said: “I actually said ‘see you’, didn’t you realize it?”(运用了when
引导的时间状语从句和why引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】
That moment, I realized that my attitude was right and I should keep it, as the lady said.(运用了that引导的宾语从
句和as引导的方式状语从句)
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】7．（2023·河南·高三信阳高中阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Zero-waste is the latest trend among eco-friendly and sustainable-living circles. Concerned individuals are
taking a hard look at our wasteful habits, and finding creative and innovative ways to deal with the issue. Among
them is a restaurant owner in India.
Minu Pauline owns a restaurant in Kochi, southern India. The 28-year-old restaurant owner was upset that her
restaurant was throwing away a lot of food each day while many within the community were going hungry. Then
she came up with an idea after watching a woman digging through the restaurant’s rubbish bags for food late one
night.
“Just imagine being in the situation where you should be asleep but you feel too hungry and have to go out to
find food,” she said. “It was very sad.” The experience was an eye-opener for Pauline. She realized just how much
food we waste in society——including her own business, while so many people are going hungry. In response, she
decided to place a refrigerator in front of her restaurant.
Once the refrigerator was in place, she encouraged customers to put whatever food they didn’t finish within.
Pauline herself also put food in it. In addition, she wrote the date when the food was left in the refrigerator, so those
who took it knew how long it had been there. The refrigerator was left unlocked 24 hour a day, and the food was
available to anyone for free. Now the refrigerator feeds dozens of homeless people each day.
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At first, some people were afraid the refrigerator would affect Pauline’s business.
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Better still, some children in the community also joined Pauline.
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At first, some people were afraid the refrigerator would affect Pauline’s business. Fortunately, all the
customers were positive about the idea, willingly putting the food left into the refrigerator. Someone even bought
more food to put into it on purpose, wishing to feed more hungry people. And these hungry people were organized
to take the food out of the refrigerator, and they also handed it out to other hungry people in other community.
Better still, some children in the community also joined Pauline. They even took their toys out and put them
into the refrigerator, hoping that other children could get the same happiness from the toys. How cute they are! All
the kind behaviors caused by Pauline’s refrigerator had a chain reaction, with the community having no hungry
people and full of happy children. Pauline’s business became booming, for virtue and good deeds are the only
invincible investment.
【情节分析】
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】本文以餐厅主人Pauline提供的一个冰箱为线索，讲述了Pauline在她发现有很多人挨饿，她的饭厅里
有很多顾客剩下的饭菜后，她就在门口放了一个冰箱，将剩下的食物放在冰箱里供社区里那些挨饿的人吃。
起初，人们担心这会影响的Pauline生意，然而却让的Pauline生意变得火爆起来，就连小孩也加入了
Pauline的队伍里，将自己的玩具放在冰箱里，想分享给其他小朋友。这就世界因为这些友善的行为而变得
更美好。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“起初，人们还担心这个冰箱会影响Pauline的生意”可知，本段可以写这个冰箱不但
没影响的生意，反而让她的餐厅火爆起来，很多人都来她的饭店吃饭，目的是为了给那些挨饿的人尽一份
力。
②由第二段首句内容“更好的是，社区的一些小孩也加入了Pauline的队伍”可知，本段可以写那些小孩将
自己的玩具放进了冰箱里，想要这些玩具给其他小朋友带来快乐和幸福。因为Pauline的冰箱，社区到处都
充满了爱。
2. 续写线索：担心会影响其生意→人们都积极地去餐厅吃饭，为了尽自己的一份力→小孩也加入了→将
自己的玩具放进冰箱里→社区充满了爱。
【高分词汇】
行为类：
希望：wish/hope/expect
分发：hand out/distribute/dispense
购买：buy/purchase
情绪类：
积极的：positive/active
友善的：kind/friendly/genial
开心：happiness/pleasure/delight
【高分句型1】
Fortunately, all the customers were positive about the idea, willingly putting the food left into the refrigerator.(运用
了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
All the kind behaviors caused by Pauline’s refrigerator had a chain reaction, with the community having no hungry
people and full of happy children. (运用了过去分词作后置定语和with的复合结构)
8．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a beautiful Thursday this April, Amy and Alan Green took their daughter Abbey out for a walk in the
neighborhood. On their way back, Amy picked up a kite for Abbey from the Dollar Tree, blue with rainbows—there
are a lot of rainbows decorating homes around the region these days, which helps make life less dull during the
coronavirus pandemic.
In the afternoon, Abbey took the kite out for its first flight. At first, the wind was perfect. It took the kite high
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】in the sky. However, suddenly, the wind became much stronger and pulled the kite out of Abbey’s hands in a
moment. It flew farther and farther and finally got stuck on the power lines next to a big tree, wrapping itself over
and over again around the wires. Since the kite was too high for them to reach, the Greens could do nothing about
it. Worried less about the kite than the danger it might present to the lines, Amy called National Grid (国家电网) to
report the incident.
About one hour later, Mike, a worker from the power company arrived. He carefully removed the kite line
from the wires. After about 10 minutes’ effort, he successfully freed it. But unfortunately, as the kite was wrapped
so tightly, there was some unpreventable damage. Still, he gave it back to Alan Green. As he was leaving, he
noticed Abbey taking the kite to the backyard. Out of curiosity, he stood there for a while to see how the girl would
deal with it. Surprisingly, she dug a hole and buried the kite in a shoebox. Even though he could not see the girl’s
face clearly, he knew exactly how sad Abbey was. He really felt bad for her. And it was at that moment that he
decided to do something.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
The next day, Alan went out to get the mail as usual and found a box.
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Deeply moved by this act of kindness, Alan posted the whole story on the Internet.
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The next day, Alan went out to get the mail as usual and found a box. He opened the box gingerly and looked
inside. To his surprise, there was a new kite-a cute robin with beautiful feathers along with a note written on the
National Grid’s notepaper. “I felt bad for your daughter, so I hope this new kite will make her smile,” it read. “Stay
safe and healthy!” The note was unsigned, but Alan was convinced that the lovable gift was from the worker who
came to help yesterday. He took the kite inside and gave it to Abbey. When she saw the kite, her eyes gleamed with
excitement.
Deeply moved by this act of kindness, Alan posted the whole story on the Internet. Soon, word got back to
National Grid, and the company quickly identified Mike as the worker. When interviewed about it, he explained
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】that as he saw Abbey burying a kite, he knew exactly how the girl felt, which pushed him to do something for her.
After leaving the Greens’ house, he stopped by a shop to buy the new kite and then laid the box quietly at their
door. He didn’t expect to be recognized, but Alan’s post led to his identity being revealed, which resulted in the
story being shared and liked by millions of people across the Internet.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩Abbey的风筝缠在了电线上，电力公司的工人Mike取下损坏
的风筝还给了Abbey，当看到Abbey伤心的模样时，Mike非常不忍，于是他悄悄送给Abbey一个新的风筝。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，Alan像往常一样出去取信，发现了一个盒子。”以及第二段首句“Alan被
这一善举深深感动，他把整个故事发到了网上。”可知，第一段可描写Mike为小女孩准备了惊喜。
②由第二段首句内容“Alan被这一善举深深感动，他把整个故事发到了网上。”可知，第二段可描写网友
们被Mike的善举所感动。
2. 续写线索：买风筝——缠在电线上——担心并打电话——取下风筝，但已毁坏——决定做些什么——
新买风筝——感动——称赞
【高分词汇】
行为类
①希望：wish/hope/expect
②相信：be convinced/be sure
③导致：lead to/contribute to/result in/cause
情绪类
①惊讶：surprise/amazement/astonishment
②兴奋：excitement/thrill
【高分句型1】
The note was unsigned, but Alan was convinced that the lovable gift was from the worker who came to help
yesterday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】
When interviewed about it, he explained that as he saw Abbey burying a kite, he knew exactly how the girl felt,
which pushed him to do something for her.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、as引导的状语从句、how引导的宾
语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023·辽宁·校联考二模）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The weather was extremely hot as the midday sun shone with all its might. 23-year-old Richard had just gotten
down from a truck he hitchhiked(搭便车)and could barely stand on the hot road. His feet were getting baked in his
smelly sneakers. He panted heavily, looking around for a drink. But as far as his sunken eyes could see, there was
not a drop of water.
Since Richard’s band in Los Angeles broke up several weeks ago, he had to come to reunite with his parents.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Just as he finished a two-mile hike on the deserted highway, he stopped on the roadside. Suddenly, he noticed a
little bike lying there.
When he approached near, he saw a water bottle and a small helmet lying nearby. He leaned closer and noticed
fresh little muddy footsteps disappearing into the woods. Richard’s brows shot up in terror as he hurried toward the
entrance of the dense forest. It seemed very unusual for a little kid to be all alone there.
Imagine a little kid out there alone! Richard’s instincts(直觉)told him something was wrong, so he cupped his
hands around his mouth and called out to the child. Suddenly, he heard a faint cry from the heart of the woods. It
was a little girl’s cry for help.
“Don’t give up! I’m coming!” Richard ran quickly after noticing a little girl and her dog holding onto a log(原
木)and floating on the river.
The current was washing away almost everything on its course, and the girl was lucky that the log was stuck
onto something under the surface. But that would not hold on for long as the current grew faster and stronger.
Richard wanted to pull the two out to the shore before they were washed toward the edge of the waterfall,
which was just meters away. However, he couldn’t think of anything immediately. Just then, his mind acted fast,
and he ran back to get something.
“Hold on…I’ll be right back,” he assured her.
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Moments later, Richard returned with a long vine(藤).
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“Thank you so much!" the girl cried as she finally fell on the muddy shore.
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Moments later, Richard returned with a long vine(藤). He tied one end of the vine around his waist and the
other end around a big tree. He dived into the river and swam toward the girl and her dog. Since the water was
muddy, Richard couldn’t see clearly, and it choked his breath. However, he kept going. “Give me your hand,” he
told the girl. Although the girl was terrified, she threw her hands and legs into the water and tried to get close to
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Richard and grab his hand. Richard used all his might and pulled the girl and her dog toward him.
“Thank you so much!” the girl cried as she finally fell on the muddy shore. After the girl calmed down, she
told Richard the reason why she was there. It turned out that her dog ran away after hearing the sound of
firecrackers. She was scared that he would go missing, so she followed him on her bike to catch him. The girl was
grateful that Richard had saved them. Learning the girl was from his hometown, Richard decided to leave her at her
house first before going to see his parents.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Richard在回家的路上发现了一个小自行车，后来察觉应该是一个孩
子遇到了麻烦，并成功解救了孩子的故事。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“过了一会儿，Richard带着一根长藤回来了。”以及第二段首句““非常感谢！”女
孩终于落在泥泞的岸边时哭了起来。”可知，第一段可描写Richard如何奋力救下女孩。
②由第二段首句““非常感谢！”女孩终于落在泥泞的岸边时哭了起来。”可知，第二段可描写女孩在获
救之后告知Richard事情的缘由以及对Richard的感激之情。
2. 续写线索：Richard注意到一辆小自行车——觉得事情不太寻常————走到树林里——发现了一个小
女孩和狗漂浮在河上——救下了小女孩和她的狗——小女孩非常感激Richard
【高分词汇】
行为类
①努力：try/make efforts to
②镇静：calm down/settle down
③决定：decide/determine
情绪类
①害怕的：terrified/frightened/scared
②感激：thankful/grateful
【高分句型1】
Since the water was muddy, Richard couldn’t see clearly, and it choked his breath.（运用了since引导的原因状语
从句）
【高分句型2】
Although the girl was terrified, she threw her hands and legs into the water and tried to get close to Richard and
grab his hand.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）
10．（2023·浙江嘉兴·统考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完 整的短文。
I’m not going to say storms are good, because I know what they’ve stolen from people. But my story is of a
storm that gave me more than I’d thought to ask for.
The tornado(龙卷风)blew through on a Sunday. We were visiting grandparents in Raleigh then, unaware that
seventy miles away the big tree in our front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】When we returned, we saw Rosica’s father and brothers in our yard, gathering debris(碎片)and using a chain
saw to cut the thickest branches of the fallen tree, though we barely knew them then. They were covered in sweat
and dirt.
My mom didn’t seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was “Oh, you
don’t need to be doing all that work!” Mr. Flores laughed.“Claro! Of course, we don’t. But more importantly, you
cannot sleep in that house tonight. Come and speak to my wife. She’ll help you figure out what to do.” My mom
doesn’t usually let people tell her what to do, but she sighed(叹气)deeply as she took in the sight of our home in the
failing light, reached for my hand, and followed our neighbor to their house.
The Flores family lived across the street. Their home was the same size as ours but housed three generations.
Rosica was my age. I knew her name and face, but since she was new to our school, and had a different teacher
than I did, we had never spoken. It was she who answered the door.“Mama is changing the sheets on the bed for
you, and there’s some lemon cheesecake on the table.”
“Please don’t trouble yourself. I think I’d call a hotel and see about a room,” my mom said, more uneasy than
usual. Mrs. Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly, “Y our room is ready. I know it’s more
encouraged to give than receive, but allow yourself to receive a place to stay, and allow us the chance to give you
something you need!”
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2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began.
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【范文模板】
Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. In the beginning, my mom was very uneasy and thought that living
here could be a trouble for the family. She would help them with the housework as much as possible. The family
were very friendly to us. They always said to us that, “Be at home!” They not only prepared everything we needed
for us, but also cooked us delicious food, trying their best to make us feel at home. Gradually, we became familiar
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】with each other just like a family. With Thanksgiving Day coming, our house was still under repair, which meant
that we had to celebrate the festival with the family.
Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. On Thanksgiving Day, we together made a big
dinner. My mom roasted the turkey which was popular with everyone. During the dinner, my mom extended her
thanks to the family. “Thank you! I really don’t know what to say, but really thank you!” “Friends need no thanks!”
said Mrs. Flores. We all laughed and enjoyed the dinner with joy and gratitude.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了龙卷风将作者家的房子毁坏，邻居Flores先生和他的孩子们不仅帮助整理
作者家的院子，还邀请作者一家去他家住宿。Flores夫人热情地款待作者一家。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们住在Flores家的两个星期开始了。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家住在Flores
家的情景。
②由第二段首句内容“在我们住在他们家之后，一个美好的传统开始了。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家
Flores一家一起过节日的情景。
2. 续写线索：开始住在Flores——感到拘束——热情款待——互相熟悉——美好的传统开始了——一起庆
祝——表达感谢
【高分词汇】
行为类
①帮助某人做家务：help sb. with the housework/help sb. do the housework
②到来：come/approach
③庆祝：celebrate/observe
情绪类
①高兴：with joy/happily
②感谢：with gratitude/gratefully
【高分句型1】
In the beginning, my mom was very uneasy and thought that living here could be a trouble for the family. （由连
接词that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
With Thanksgiving Day coming, our house was still under repair, which meant that we had to celebrate the festival
with the family.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】
My mom roasted the turkey which was popular with everyone.（运用了which引导限制性定语从句）
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