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06 成长、感悟类
1 精选最新名校试题
2 话题故事背诵模板
3 分类话题情节分析
4 分类话题写作步骤
5 分类话题高分词汇
6 分类话题写作高分句型
1．（2023·山东临沂·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Palm trees seemed to speed by the car window. Eight-year-old Katrina began to get nervous, the way she
always did in new surroundings. She felt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the car’s cool air. “The
aquarium won’t be crowded, I bet, and people are gonna notice me. I hate wearing this prosthesis leg (假肢).” She
felt tears pinprick behind her eyes. “Not being normal is the worst.”
Entering the Clearwater Marine Aquarium, around a comer of a tank, she noticed an animal that looked
unusual. “Is that a dolphin with stump (假肢) instead of a tail?” she asked an aquarium staff. He nodded. “Yes,
that’s Winter. She’s a very special dolphin.” “What happened to her?” “This girl dolphin was found off the coast of
Florida, caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap cut off the blood circulation to her tail. So she lost her tail,”
Katrina caught her breath. “She’s just like me. She’s just like me.” “But she struggled to survive. Now she wears a
prosthetic tail part of the day to help her swim like a dolphin’s supposed to swim.” the staff continued, “Every day,
Winter shows us anything is possible if we believe.”
Katrina felt her heartstring was touched. She waved at Winter. Looking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper
(鳍), came to her and lifted her head. “She’s swimming right into my arms,” Katrina said tearfully. They made eye
contact. She seemed to be speaking to Katrina: We’re the same.
Back home, all Katrina talked about was Winter. For two weeks, she cried and begged her mother to take her
back to Clearwater.
Unfortunately, another blow hit Katrina. She fell on the hardwood floor at home and broke her other leg.
Katrina was in constant leg nerve pain. After a through examination, the doctor explained bad news that she would
need another surgery on her leg. Years of a living hell came back to her.
She started fearing surgery again and refused to take any.
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Katrina’s mom decided to take her back to Clearwater. On arriving at Clearwater, Katrina couldn’t wait to see
Winter, the lovely dolphin that comforted her and boosted her mood. As Katrina’s mother pushed the wheelchair to
Winter, she raised her flipper, came to her and lifted her head. Katrina couldn’t hold back her excitement. Looking
at the girl, Winter seemed to say “Go and take the surgery.” Katrina absolutely knew what that caring eyes were
conveying, so she decided to keep a more optimistic state of mind.
Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hospital again. Though feeling nervous and afraid of the pain
the surgery might bring, Katrina would face it bravely. The operation was a success. Her mother took her to
Clearwater the day she was discharged from hospital. Inspired by Winter’s swimming like a normal dolphin,
Katrina practiced hard to walk. Her confidence has been improved as she gradually recovered. Katrina has no idea
what the future holds but she will do anything to have a better look at this wonderful world.
【情节分析】
文章以故事情节发展为线索展开，讲述了一只腿装了假肢的女孩Katrina因为害怕别人异样的目光而容
易感到紧张和自卑。有一次去了Clearwater 海洋水族馆，发现了一只尾巴也是假肢的海豚。工作人员告诉
她，这只海豚叫Winter，它被捕蟹器捕获，陷阱上的绳子切断了它尾巴的血液循环，所以她失去了尾巴。
但是她仍然努力地像其他有尾巴的海豚一样游泳。Winter每天努力向人们证明“只要相信，任何事都有可
能”。Winter来到Katrina身边，抬起头，乎在对是对她说：“我们是一样的。”回家后的Katrina心里一
直想着Winter，央求妈妈再带她去一次Clearwater 海洋水族馆，但不幸的是，她再次摔倒，不得不在另一
只腿上做手术。可是Katrina拒绝再一次手术。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“Katrina的妈妈决定带她回Clearwater 海洋水族馆。”可知，第一段描写Katrina的
妈妈想要为了鼓励女儿，带她去海洋馆看看Winter。并且Katrina受到了鼓舞，决定接受手术。
②由第二段首句内容“终于有一天Katrina又住进了医院。”可知，第二段描写Katrina勇敢的进了手术室。
在手术成功后，Katrina在家人的鼓励和Winter的启发下，勇敢自信的面对生活，发现世界变得更加美好了。
2. 续写线索
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】妈妈带女儿去水族馆——Winter的亲切和眼神交流鼓舞了Katrina ——Katrina决定去医院接受手术——出
院后的Katrina开始积极面对生活——Katrina发现世界很美好
【高分词汇】
行为类
①表达：convey/express
②控制：hod back/ resist/ contain
情绪类
①勇敢面对：face it bravely/face it courageously
②乐观的：optimistic/positive/upbeat
【高分句型1】
On arriving at Clearwater, Katrina can’t wait to see Winter, the lovely dolphin that comforted her and boosted her
mood.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Katrina has no idea what the future holds but she will do anything to have a better look at this wonderful world.
（运用了what引导的同位语从句）
2.（2023·重庆·西南大学附中校考三模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a very cold morning as it had been raining very heavily the previous night. As my mother was feeling a
little uncomfortable, my sister volunteered to drive me to school. I overslept and as a result, was a bit late for
school. We got into the car hurriedly. The roads were already jammed with traffic. It appeared that everyone was
late as well.
My sister was a careful driver and despite the fact that I was late, she refused to drive fast on the slippery road.
I was lucky she was such a determined and careful person because a few hundred meters away from the school, we
witnessed an accident.
It all happened in an instant, as most accidents do. A car took a left turning without signaling and a school bus
crashed into it heavily. A few cars behind the school bus hit the bus as they could not stop in time and soon it
became a pile-up. The car was damaged badly while the school bus also had some damage. And the already
crowded road became more jammed with vehicles, which came to a mess. We wanted to help the victims. My sister
drove to a stop at the roadside not too far from the accident spot.
The scene that greeted us was terrible. I first rushed to the car. The driver, a lady, lay trapped behind the wheel,
unable to move. Three schoolchildren were in the back seat, their faces white with fear. Two of them were seriously
hurt and bleeding from the head and hands. They were conscious although too weak and frightened to realize what
had happened. We called an ambulance and while waiting, we tried as much as possible to help the victims. As a
result of our joint efforts, the driver and the children were moved to safety and taken care of.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then, I rushed to the bus filled with children’s cries.
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Then I rushed to the school bus filled with children’s cries. Inside were the frightened schoolchildren. Many of
them appeared to suffer from minor cuts and bruises on their arms and bodies in the crash. The children were crying
and screaming for their parents. It was really fortunate that nobody was badly hurt. By then a few adults entered the
bus and together we instructed the children to come out of the bus slowly. We managed to calm them down. Soon,
the doctors in an ambulance came to the scene.
After the ambulance had left, two policemen asked me about the accident. They were taking statements from
eyewitnesses. My sister and I gave a full account to the police of what had happened. As a matter of fact, it could
have been prevented if the drivers had been more careful. Of course I was late for school, but I knew what I should
do to avoid that was set off earlier. The accident also taught us an important lesson we should always obey the
traffic rules and keep safety in mind.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和姐姐去学校的路上目睹了一起交通事故，一辆小汽车没有打信
号就左转了，一辆校车重重地撞上了它。尽可能地帮助受害者，在他们的共同努力下，司机和孩子们被转
移到安全的地方并得到照顾。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后我冲到充满了孩子们哭声的校车上。”可知，第一段可描写现场孩子的受伤情
况，作者和其他好心人的善举。
②由第二段首句内容“救护车离开后，两个警察问我事故的情况。”可知，第二段可描写作者他们向警察
诉说事故的经过以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：查看校车——查看学生情况——疏散学生——救护车到达——描述事故经过——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①叫喊：scream/yell
②指示：instruct/guide
③知道：know/realize
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】情绪类
①害怕的：frightened scared
②冷静：calm down/cool down
【高分句型1】
It was really fortunate that nobody was badly hurt. (运用了it作形式主语句型，that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】
My sister and I gave a full account to the police of what had happened. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
3. （2023·广东佛山·统考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Standing outside the cave entrance, Grandfather admired the green-carpeted hills, but Lin hated the cave. He
had come here today only because of Grandfather.
Grandfather preferred to use guano, the waste matter of bats, to fertilize (施肥) his crops. But he was too weak
to do the whole job. He could gather the guano and bring it out of the cave in the basket, but he needed Lin to carry
it home in the wooden cart.
Grandfather took a shovel (铲子) and flashlight from the cart. “Change your mind and come inside with me?”
he asked Lin. “It won’t happen again, Lin,” Grandfather promised. “Last time it was my mistake. We shouldn’t
have waited until nearly dusk (黄昏) to go inside. I know that the bats fly out of the cave at dusk.” That was exactly
what had happened on the Terrible Day of the Bats. As Lin had stood at the cave entrance, a crowd of black bats
had erupted from it. Lin had been terrified.
“Bats hurt no one,” Grandfather had said. “Besides, you scared them as much as they did you.”
But nothing could make Lin forget the horror he had felt in that black cloud of bats. “I can’t go in there,” he
told Grandfather now.
“OK,” Grandfather said. As he started into the cave, he called over his shoulder, “I’ll be out in no time.” Lin
parked the cart and glanced at the shovel and flashlight inside it. His shovel and flashlight. He had used them
before. Now they only reminded him of his fear.
Lin turned his back on the cart and walked down to the river. Grandfather would call when he was finished.
Until then, Lin would put as much distance as possible between himself and the cave.
Lin watched two little birds splashing about at the edge of the river. He enjoyed the peaceful view over the
vast river surface. Then Lin realized that Grandfather’s “no time” had turned into a long time.
Lin hurried up the hill toward the cave. The cart was still there. Grandfather was still inside. Something had
gone wrong.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lin looked around but found no one he could turn to for help.
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In the dark cave, Lin gathered his courage and yelled again, “Grandfather!”
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Lin looked around but found no one he could turn to for help. Panic set in as he realized that something
terrible might have happened to Grandfather. He called out his name, but there was no response. Lin’s mind raced
with fear and worry. He knew he had to go into the cave, but the thought of facing his fear was almost paralyzing.
After taking a few deep breaths, he summoned all his courage and stepped towards the entrance.
In the dark cave, Lin gathered his courage and yelled again, “Grandfather!” This time, the response was
louder. Lin followed the sound until he reached a narrow passage. His flashlight beam revealed that Grandfather
was trapped between two large rocks. Lin’s heart sank as he realized the situation was more serious than he had
thought. Grandfather’s leg was pinned, and he was in obvious pain. Lin knew that he had to act fast to free him.
Finally, Lin heard the sound of approaching footsteps. The rescue team had arrived. They quickly assessed the
situation and worked to free Grandfather.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了林和爷爷的故事，林陪爷爷去运鸟粪，但是林不敢进蝙蝠洞，所以爷
爷只能自己进蝙蝠洞。但是，爷爷进去很久都没有出来，林只有鼓起勇气进入洞中救出了爷爷。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“林环顾四周，却找不到可以求助的人。”以及第二段首句内容“在黑暗的山洞里，
林鼓足勇气，又喊了一声：“爷爷!””可知，第一段可描写林找不到人帮忙，只有自己鼓起勇气进入蝙蝠洞。
②由第二段首句内容“在黑暗的山洞里，林鼓足勇气，又喊了一声：“爷爷!””可知，第二段可描写林进入
蝙蝠洞，发现了爷爷，并救出了爷爷。
2.续写线索：林陪爷爷来到蝙蝠洞装一些鸟粪——林害怕进入蝙蝠洞，爷爷只有自己进入蝙蝠洞——很长
时间后，林突然发现爷爷还没有出来——林意识到出了问题，但是他找不到人帮忙，只有鼓起勇气进入蝙
蝠洞——林在洞里发现了受伤的爷爷，想办法救出爷爷
【高分词汇】
行为类
①抓到：summon courage/ muster up courage
②到达：reach/get to/arrive at
③陷入：be trapped /be stuck /be caught
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】情绪类
①害怕：fear/fright
②担忧：worry/anxiety
【高分句型1】
He knew he had to go into the cave, but the thought of facing his fear was almost paralyzing.（运用了省略that的
宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
Lin’s heart sank as he realized the situation was more serious than he had thought.（运用了as引导的状语从句和
省略that的宾语从句）
4. （2023·重庆·重庆八中校考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150
左右。
Last year, during the summer break, my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest. The forest had
paths, and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later. The
whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours. I had a
lighter,a partially charged phone, and a bottle of water. We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the
forest until we were far from any recognizable trail. After two hours, we were in the deepest part of the forest, and
we could not trace our other friends.
All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path, and we all run in different directions. After running for
about five minutes,I stood alone in a bush. I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been.there before.I
shouted at my friends’ names loudly, but all was in vain:there was no reply, and the whole place was silent. I was
confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to
trace the part where I had come from, but all was useless:l was lost.
As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends, I realized that I was tired, and nothing was looking
familiar. I was out of food, water, and barely had any battery in my phone. I decided to walk through the bushes as
the trees had grown so close together. I squeezed myself between the little trees. After some thirty minutes, it
started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing,I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and
praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest.
注意;
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
With darkness approaching,I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.
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With darkness approaching,I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.After many
vain trials, it occurred to me that I had a lighter with me. I was wild with joy and decided to build a signal fire by
collecting leaves and lighting them up for my friends to see the fire.Although it had been rained on,I was finally
successful to light it. Everything in silence, only the howling of the winds and the cracking of twigs kept me
company. I couldn’t help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of
experience.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise. As the sounds got closer, I
realized that those were my friends. I jumped with a lot of joy as tears filled my eyes because I knew I was safe.
They shouted my name, and I replied very loudly knowing in my mind that I was saved. It showed me the
importance of the use of the markings and of course the quality-calmness while adventuring in the forest. I also
thought to myself that my being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all
my life.
【情节分析】
本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友去年在森林徒步旅行时，走到森林深处遇到熊，狂奔后迷路，
如何利用手头的工具脱险的故事。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“随着夜幕降临，我试着想出各种方法向同事们发出信号。”可知，第一段可描写作
者利用自己手边的工具寻求方法自救。
②由第二段首句内容“当我坐下来围着篝火取暖时，我听到远处传来一些噪音。”可知，第二段可描写同
事们寻了过来，作者得救了。
2.续写线索：尝试各种方法——利用火机点燃篝火——等待救援——同事寻来——得救——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①我突然想到：it occurred to me that / it struck to me that
②.意识到：realize/be aware of
③.记住：remember/keep in mind
情绪类
①. 欣喜若狂：wild with joy/ jump with a lot of joy/overjoyed
②.冷静：calmness/phlegm
【高分句型1】
I couldn’t help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of experience.（运用了
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】what引导的宾语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】
I also thought to myself that my being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would
remember all my life.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的定语从句）
5. （2023·山西阳泉·统考三模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Surfing is a thrilling sport that requires a great deal of skill, strength, calm and determination. For teenagers,
riding the waves can make their blood racing and is an addictive experience. This is the story of one teenager’s
unforgettable adventure while surfing. Alex is a 16-year-old boy who grew up in a small coastal town. He is an
enthusiastic surfer and spent most of his free time riding the waves. One sunny morning, he headed out to the beach
to catch some waves.
As he arrived at the beach, the sun was shining, and the waves were perfect. He grabbed his surfboard and
paddled (用桨划) out into the water. He spent the next few hours surfing, and as the sun began to set, he decided to
catch one more wave before heading back to shore.
Alex spotted a huge wave on the horizon and knew he had to ride it. He paddled as fast as he could, feeling the
water beneath him push him forward. As he reached the top of the wave, he stood up on his board and felt the wind
rush past him. The wave was huge, and Alex felt a rush of excitement as he rode it towards the shore.
But as he approached the shore, he noticed something unusual. The water was moving violently, and he could
hear a strange noise coming from beneath him. Suddenly, the wave crashed down on him, and he was thrown from
his board. He hit the water hard and was pulled under by the current.
Alex struggled to reach the surface but found himself trapped in a powerful current. The current was pulling
him out to sea, and he could feel himself getting further and further away from the shore. Panic set in, and he began
to fear for his life.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But Alex was determined not to give up.
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The boat noticed him and headed towards him.
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But Alex was determined not to give up. He attempted to swim towards the shore. But it didn’t work. The
force of the wave was too great, continuing to drag him further and deeper into the sea. He struggled to the surface
and took a breath, but was covered again. After what seemed like hours, the sea finally calmed down. But it was
darker and Alex had no idea where he was or which direction to swim in. Luckily, he saw light in the distance and
guessed it was a fishing boat. He swam hard towards the boat and shouted for help.
The boat noticed him and came towards him. With the help of several fishermen, Alex was rescued.
Exhausted, he sank on the deck. Recalling what had happened, he couldn’t help feeling scared. If it hadn’t been for
the boat, he would have been killed. It dawned on him that safety should not be disregarded for the sake of
momentary thrill.
【情节分析】
文章以冲浪的过程为线索展开，讲述16岁的冲浪爱好者Alex去海边冲浪，那天天气晴好，他一直玩
到傍晚。就在这时，Alex发现了一个巨浪，他非常想体验在这种情况下冲浪的感觉。但他刚走到水边，就
被大浪卷入了大海，这使他恐慌。
【写作步骤】
段落续写：
①根据第一段首句“但Alex 决定不放弃”可知，下文可描写他努力向海岸游，但无济于事。等到海面平
静时天色已晚。幸运的是他看到了渔船。
②根据第二段首句“船注意到了他，向他驶来”可知，下文可描写Alex被救起，以及经过此事的感悟。
2．续写线索：
决定不放弃——努力挣扎——被拖网更深处——海面平静但天色已晚——看见渔船上的光——呼救——被
渔船发现——被救起——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①试图：attempt/make an attempt/try
②看见：see/spot
③救：rescue/save
情绪类
①精疲力竭的：exhausted/tired/worn out
②恐惧的：scared/frightened
【高分句型1】
The force of the wave was too great, continuing to drag him further and deeper into the sea. （运用了现在分词作
状语）
【高分句型2】
But it was darker and Alex had no idea where he was or which direction to swim in.（运用了where引导的同位语
从句）
【高分句型3】
It dawned on him that safety should not be disregarded for the sake of momentary thrill.（运用了that引导的主语
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】从句，it为形式主语）
6. （2023·福建厦门·厦门一中校考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was terrified of heights. Of course, it was not really a fear of being in a high place. Rather, it was the view of
a long way to fall, of rocks far below me and no firm wall between me and the edge. My sense of security was
screamingly absent.I could rely only on my own sure-footedness.
Despite my fear, two summers ago I somehow found myself climbing to a high place, while quaking inside
and out. Most of our high school had come along on a day trip to the Boquerón, a beautiful and pleasant spot in the
foothills of Peru. Its chief attraction is the main waterfall, about 100 feet high, that thunders into a crystal clear pool
feeding the Aguaytia River. All around the pool and on down to the rushing river are rocks large and small. The
beach is strewn (布满) with rocks. On both sides of the fall, the jungle stretches to meet it, rising parallel to it on a
gentler slope.
After eating our lunches, many of us wanted to make the climb to an area above it. We knew others had done
so on previous trips. A few guys went first to make sure they were on the right path. But after they left, my group of
seven decided to go ahead without waiting for them to return. I suspected we were going the wrong way, but I kept
silent, figuring that the others knew better. We went along the base of the hill until we reached the climb. It stopped
me in my tracks.
The climb rose steeply above us. Along the right edge, the jungle hugged the rocks; passage through its trees
seemed unlikely to be achieved. The majority of my view was filled with rocks. Peering back down toward the
river, I saw a steep slope of rocks all the way to the water. All I could think about was how far it would be to fall.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My tense thoughts were interrupted by the realization that my friends were already beginning to climb!
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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】My tense thoughts were interrupted by the realization that my friends were already beginning to climb! My
anxiety increased as I watched them. “Do I turn back? My whole being shouted,” “Yes!” “Will I regret it later? I
really want to get to the top, but...” I voiced my uncertainties to my friends. They dismissed my fears and
encouraged me to stick it out. Questioning my own ability, I decided at least to attempt the climb. I chose a path
that seemed easiest with my friends ahead of me. When the “path” led up to an extremely narrow area, the
difficulties increased, with scary spots one after another. My breathing sped up, and my heart pounded even faster,
growing loud in my ears.
My friends kept right on climbing but they did not forget me. Someone was always behind me to help hold my
feet steady when necessary, while someone else was ahead to offer a hand up. I trusted them more than myself.
With friends supporting me by words and actions, I slowly gained ground. Finally we came to the toughest place.
Once again I shrank when I peered back at the steep slope of rocks. “You can make it! We won’t let you fall.” My
friends’ assurances gave me the strength to go on. When my feet made contact with the solid rock on the top, I
heaved a huge sigh of relief. I could feel all the fear draining out of me. I never felt so alive, and so thankful for my
friends and that life.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者有恐高症，但在一次去山里旅游的时候，在朋友们的鼓励和帮助
下，作者最终登上了山顶克服了自己的恐高症。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我意识到我的朋友们已经开始攀登时，我紧张的思绪被打断了!”可知，第一段可
描写作者在朋友的鼓励下，决定尝试去攀登山峰。
②由第二段首句内容“我的朋友们继续攀爬，但他们没有忘记我。”可知，第二段可描写作者在朋友们的
帮助下成功登上了山顶。
2. 续写线索：决定去爬山——到达山脚下——犹豫——朋友们鼓励——开始攀登——朋友们帮助——成功
登上山顶。
【高分词汇】
行为类
①提高：increase/grow/enhance
②表达：voice/express/put into words
③鼓励：encourage/inspire/inspirit
情绪类
①焦虑：anxiety/worry/disquiet
②恐惧：fear/panic/scare
【高分句型1】
When the “path” led up to an extremely narrow area, the difficulties increased, with scary spots one after another.
(when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型1】
Someone was always behind me to help hold my feet steady when necessary, while someone else was ahead to
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】offer a hand up.(while引导的时间状语从句)
7．（2023·安徽马鞍山·统考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During the past two years, I felt down from time to time, especially when I stayed indoors. To get out of the
house, I decided to teach myself how to skate again even though it had been more than 30 years since I had been on
the ice. Little did I know, I would also be teaching myself how to rise to the challenges I’d soon face in life, too.
I dug out my old figure skates, but they didn’t work. So I ordered a new pair of skates and found a place to get
them sharpened. I assumed it would be easy to pick up from where I had left off, so I reserved our ice time. Armed
and ready, I was awake before the online reservation system opened to secure spots at my neighborhood rink (滑冰
场). I even convinced my son to join me for my first go.
Filled with fear, I estimated there was a five-centimeter drop down from the walking ledge (台子) to the ice
and nothing nearby to grab onto in order to keep my balance. My son was already circling around but skated over to
offer his arm for support.
I climbed down, one skate at a time and my leg shook slightly when both feet landed on the ice.
“Can I hang onto you for the first few minutes?” I asked my son nervously. I took baby steps but I had
forgotten how to glide (滑行). Eager to see how far I could go, I let go of my son’s arm.
With great efforts, I began to do slow laps, inching ahead with my skates and staying close to the rink boards.
I avoided falling on my first attempt but as I walked home silently with my son, I wondered whether I should
quit. Fear had held me back and I hadn’t given it my all.
“You used to skate so well, what happened?” asked my son.
“Life got in the way.”
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But I did not cancel my future reserved ice times.
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But I did not cancel my future reserved ice times. I believed that through continuous practice, I could skate very
well, just like before. In the following days, I practiced at the ice rink every day. I experienced countless falls. I felt
frustrated and wanted to give up. But in the end, I convinced myself and persisted. My son always encouraged me.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】He believed that I could do it. And he said that I was his pride. As time went by, I got better and better at skating.
After some progress was made, I decided to sign up for adult learn-to skate lessons the following winter. I
wanted to continue challenging myself. I wanted to enrich my life. I wanted to skate freely and made my mind and
soul active. The same goes for facing challenges in life. I’d soon face many challenges in life. But I should not feel
discouraged and afraid. I should actively and bravely face it. I believe that as long as I take the first step and make
continuous efforts, I will eventually overcome all difficulties.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者在过去的两年里不时感到沮丧，尤其是待在室内的时候，她为自
己生活中即将面临的挑战担忧，于是，她决定重拾以前滑冰的爱好。但由于很久没有滑冰，她的技术生疏，
滑的并不好，为此作者感到沮丧和恐惧，不知道自己是否应该放弃。最终，作者选择坚持下去。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但我并没有取消我预定的未来的冰上时间。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何克服
困难，练习滑冰的。
②由第二段首句内容“在取得一些进展后，我决定在第二年冬天报名参加成人滑冰学习课程。”可知，第
二段可描写作者在滑冰取得进步后，心态上的变化和感悟。
2.续写线索：不断失败——继续坚持——取得进步——心态变化——作者的感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①相信：believe/trust
②说服：convince/persuade
③克服：overcome/get over
情绪类
①沮丧的：frustrated/upset
②害怕的：afraid/frightened
【高分句型1】
I believed that through continuous practice, I could skate very well, just like before. （由that引导的宾语从句作
believed的宾语）
【高分句型2】
I believe that as long as I take the first step and make continuous efforts, I will eventually overcome all difficulties.
（由that引导的宾语从句作believe的宾语；由as long as引导的条件状语从句）
8．（2023·吉林·东北师大附中校考二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A little girl whose parents had died lived with her grandmother and slept in an upstairs bedroom.
One night there was a fire in the house and the grandmother died while trying to rescue the child. The fire
spread quickly, and the first floor of the house was soon engulfed(吞没) in flames.
Neighbors called the fire department, then stood helplessly by, unable to enter the house because flames
blocked all the entrances. The little girl appeared at an upstairs window, crying for help, just as word spread among
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】the crowd that the firefighters would be delayed a few minutes because they were all at another fire.
Suddenly, a man appeared with a ladder, put it up against the side of the house and disappeared inside. His
actions showed no sign of hesitation or fear. When he reappeared, he had the little girl in his arms. He delivered the
child to the waiting arms below, then disappeared into the night without leaving a trace behind.
An investigation revealed that the child had no living relatives, and weeks later a meeting was held in the town
hall to determine who would take the child into their home and bring her up.
A teacher said she would like to raise the child. She pointed out that she could ensure her a good education. A
farmer offered her an upbringing on his farm. He pointed out that living on a farm was healthy and satisfying.
Others spoke, giving their reasons why it was to the child’s advantage to live with them.
Finally, the town’s richest resident rose and said, ”I can give this child all the advantages that you have
mentioned here, plus money and everything that money can buy.“
Throughout all this, the child remained silent, her eyes on the floor. It seemed that nothing could stir her from
grief and loss of all those loved ones. ”Does anyone else want to speak?“ asked the meeting chairman.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式作答。
A strange man came forward from the back of the hall.
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A strange man came forward from the back of the hall. He walked slowly and appeared to be in great pain.
When he got to the front of the room, he stood directly in front of the little girl. Standing there for long enough, he
said nothing but just held out his arms. His hands and arms were terribly scarred. The crowd uttered various
opinions. Whereas no one spoke for the scarred man. The meeting chairman quieted everybody down and asked,
“Tell us, little girl, will you go with this man and be his daughter?”
All eyes turned to the girl in disapproval. She looks up at him, her eyes brilliant with unwept tears. She rubbed
her face and cried out, “This is the man who rescued me!” With a leap, she threw her arms around the man’s neck
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】burying her face in his shoulder. She sobbed for a few moments, and then determinedly nodded a very big “yes” to
the meeting chairman with a wide smile. All the people sincerely congratulated the girl’s choice, for they all
understand that actions speak louder than words.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个与祖母相依为命的女孩在大火中失去了祖母，在消防队员到来之
前一个男人从大火里面将小女孩救了出来。一项调查显示，这个孩子没有在世的亲属。几周后，在市政厅
举行了一次会议，决定由谁来收养这个孩子并抚养她。在人们纷纷讲述自己领养女孩的优势时，一个陌生
男人出现了。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个陌生人从大厅后面走过来。”接下来应该是描述这个陌生人，同时会议主席询
问小姑娘是否愿意让这个人抚养。
②由第二段首句内容“所有的目光都不赞成地转向那个女孩。”可知，第二段叙述的应该是小女孩认出他
就是从大火里救她出来的恩人，她愿意和他生活在一起。
2. 续写线索：
神秘人出现——站在女孩面前——询问——大家看向女孩——认出救命恩人——接受——给出理由
【高分词汇2】
行为类
步行：walk/step/move
伸出，展开：hold out/stretch/unfold
哭泣：sob/weep/cry
情绪类
径直地：directly/straight
严重地：terribly/severely/badly
【高分句型1】
Standing there for long enough, he said nothing but just held out his arms. （运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
When he got to the front of the room, he stood directly in front of the little girl. （运用了时间状语从句）
9．（2023秋·湖南长沙·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was backpacking and planned to climb a volcano called Volcan Baru. At 3,474m, it is the highest peak in the
country and one of the only places on Earth from where you can see the Atlantic and the Pacific Oceans at the same
time. It is an active volcano, but last erupted around 1550.
I set off before sunrise. It was a little cold, so I had pulled on tights under my trousers. I intended to reach the
top by midday, and then return before dark to get a lift to my hotel.I’ve always felt safe travelling as a woman on
my own, which I’ve done since my 20s. I love the freedom. When I got to the base of the volcano at 7 in the
morning，the ranger disagreed to let me go alone, but said OK because an American couple were behind me.
The first part of the climb was beautiful. It was not dry as you might imagine a volcano might be — there were
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】trees and flowers all around, and a dirt road for the farmers who worked around there.I walked for an hour and
reached a fair height. The views were impressive, so I stopped to take a photograph.
Suddenly I heard violent barking behind me. I turned and saw two dogs running aggressively (挑衅) towards
me. I expected them to stop, but they didn’t. As they got closer, I could see their teeth looked sharp, and that they
looked angry. There was nowhere for me to run. I tried to keep calm, but my heart was racing. I’d never been bitten
by a dog, and I couldn’t help but fear what would happen. They stopped a dozen feet from where I stood and kept
barking. I knew they could move fast, so I didn’t want to try to outrun them.
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Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying, “Come on, good dogs!”
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Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying, “Come on, good dogs!” Suddenly, one dog dashed up towards me,
sinking his teeth into my leg. “Oh, my God, I’m in a dog’s mouth and he’s trying to swallow me,” I thought to
myself, with the pain taking my breath away as I felt his teeth in my flesh. I picked up a rock to fight him off, but
was nervous that he would go for my neck or that the other one would come to attack me together. Facing these two
aggressive dogs,I desperately felt at a loss. Hardly could I step out of the trouble on my own.
Just at this critical moment, a pickup appeared, driven by the ranger: Seeing the state I was in, he
immediately stopped his pickup, opened the door, and signaled to me to get in. When we reached the base, he
helped me bandage the leg up, earnestly reminding me that safety comes first while travelling. I felt relieved and
grateful. And from then on, I travel carefully as well as cautiously. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者背包旅行时，计划爬一座叫巴鲁火山的火山。结果在爬山途中，
遇到了两只凶猛狗，被咬伤了腿。幸亏得到了护林员的帮助，把作者带回了基地，进行了包扎。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我吓坏了，慢慢地走着，说：‘来吧，好狗!’”可知，第一段可描写作者被狗咬伤的
经过。
②由第二段首句内容“就在这个关键时刻，一辆皮卡出现了，是护林员开的。”可知，第二段可描写作者
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】得救的经过。
2.续写线索：被咬——绝望——皮卡出现——得救——回基地——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
猛冲：dash up/rush to
到达：reach/arrive at
出现：appear/emerge
情绪类
茫然：feel at a loss / be lost
宝贵：precious /valuable
【高分句型1】
Hardly could I step out of the trouble on my own. (运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型2】
Facing these two aggressive dogs, I desperately felt at a loss. (运用了现在分词作状语)
10．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考三模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My cousin Allen was the coolest person in all of Minneapolis. By the age of 19, he was a star football player at
the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be just like him. So when Allen asked me to join him on a spring fishing
trip in northern Minnesota, I said yes!
After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies and then set off on our adventure. We reached the
Superior National Forest by early evening. On the way to our campsite, Allen pointed to a small house faraway in
one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station (护林站) where the foresters worked.
Allen knew all the tricks of an experienced camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest floor, he
started the campfire using only stone and steel, no matches. After a day of travelling, we were very hungry. We ate
beef and rice and some soup as well.
Exhausted, we crawled into our sleeping bags early. Allen was still talking about his past camping adventures
when a sudden wind picked up from the north. The temperature dropped and it began to snow. Allen knew of a way
to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log from the woods, wrapped aluminum foil (铝箔) around
the log and then placed it near the campfire. The heat from the fire reflected into the tent. Soon the tent was warm
again and thoughts of lake fish filled my dreams.
I was still dreaming when Allen woke me up in a panic. Our tent was on fire! The snow had stopped during the
night, but the wind had fanned the flames of the fire towards our tent. Frightened by the flames, I ran out of the tent
immediately. The tent collapsed with Allen inside. Without any hesitation, I reached into the burning tent, grabbed
him, and dragged him to the icy lake. We checked each other to make sure neither of us was hurt.
续写要求:
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Our campsite was in
the deep of the forest, really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only
underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes, including our cellphones. Even Allen was unsure what to do next.
The only thing we could do was just sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.
Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared.
A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and
the forester drove us to the ranger station, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. Allen and
I had many more camping adventures from then on, but it was on this trip that Allen began to treat me more like a
friend rather than a younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和堂兄Allen 去明尼苏达州北部的苏必利尔国家森林营地里露营，
准备第二天去钓鱼。但是由于夜里刮起了大风，导致帐篷着火了。幸运的是，作者从着火的帐篷里把Allen
拉出来了，二人都没怎么受伤。
【写作步骤】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“后来，当我们站在燃烧着的帐篷旁取暖时，我们考虑到我们的困难处境。”可知，
第一段可描写作者和Allen当时的处境以及考虑如何走出森林。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，我们听到森林里有响声。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Allen如何获救以及
之后Allen对待作者的态度的转变。
2.续写线索：所有用品烧成灰烬——不知所措——想着如何走出森林——感到焦虑——听见声音——看到
亮光——得救——友谊持续
【高分词汇】
行为类
①烧成灰烬：burn into ashes/burn to a cinder
②想知道：wonder/want to know
③持续：continue/last
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】情绪类
①不确定的：unsure/uncertain
②焦虑地：Anxiously /Worriedly
【高分句型1】
Our campsite was in the deep of the forest, really far away from the highway. （运用了形容词短语far away from
充当伴随状语）
【高分句型2】
We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station, where we were given clothes and
were able to call our parents.（运用了where引导非限制性定语从句）
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】
